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heyy friends..for the first time i am writing os..the story is not that great but I wanted to write on one particular situation...so here it iz...
Ghai house:
It was not a normal day for every one present there...the atmosphere was something different..something hard to digest...after rejecting more than 70 proposals in last 2 years, 2 days back kriya only told her father that she will take her marriage thing seriously now...they can restart their search...yes 2 months back, they stopped all this finding right proposal thing on seeing kriyas happiness...she was very happy 1 whole month, after 2 years of all rejecting proposals blindly...in those 2 years she just concentrated on her carrier nothing else...no fun no friends no parties nothing...she became a serious girl from a fun loving girl...reason, no one knew...or may be they knew but couldn't realize it...
In those 2 years she hardly went to her favorite house...that's Singhania house...their neighbour...since childhood she spent most of her time in singhania house only...with her bestie Reyansh and her other part sharon, reyansh's sister...Sharon n kriya used to share a very special bond...they were inseparable always...partners in crime...the great pranksters...2 years back sharon got married and settled in different city with her hubby swayam n his family...every one thought that was the reason for kriyas silence and seriousness...but that was not the reason...
kriya and Sharon always used to play pranks against reyansh...n he was also not less...he alone used to handle bothh of them very nicely...he was also a great prankster, flirt and fun loving guy...his target was always kriya...rey and kriya used to fight all the time but end of the day without saying good night to each other, they never used to get sleep...there were incidents when because of their fights n ego they dropped the idea of saying good night to one another but late night one of them used to enter the others room through window to just wish good night...the time never mattered to them when it comes to saying good night or sharing something...be it a late night or early morning...this was the reason they both never used to close their room's Window during night ...
Well 2 years back not only kriya got separated from Sharon but also with her rey..yes reyansh went to abroad for higher studies for 2 years...it is not like they never spoke to each other in those 2 years..they always used to speak to each other but kriya kept distance from rey...she always used to speak in very sad tone..reyansh tried many times to know the reason behind it but in return he only got more irritated kriya and her response...so he stoped trying n he too bacame serious...no masti majak..no fun ...and most importantly no flirting...but kriya did not have the idea about this...
Just two months back reyansh came back to India...n it was rebirth for both reyansh and kriya...they were so happy...though they never fought like before...they never played pranks against each other...they are behaving more matured...every now and then went out for dinner..they spent holidays sharing most of the things happened in their life in those two years...except how much they missed each other...how many times they cried missing badly...how many time they cursed for staying away from each other...
1 whole month after reyansh's return, kriya was very happy...but no one knows why after a month she slowly started feeling low...and she also started avoiding rey and started keeping a distance between them...which highly distrbed reyansh...he doesn't know the reason...but he was also hurt because of kriyas behavior with him...most importantly he is very angry with kriya because of the scene infront him...
He stood exactly opposite to kriya crossing his hands so that no can notice his tightly closed fists...he was gritting his teeth so badly...
Kriya was stting their looking at floor infront of some unknown random family who were asking all typical questions...
Kaam kya karte ho? (As if they didn't enquire about it before coming)
Free time mein kya karte ho?
Khana banana aata hai?
Etc etc ...
Kriya was answering them very politely...still looking down...
Reyansh thought " wow miss baatcutter itni patience? What the hell do you think you are doing? Ye sab drama jaroori tha? U didn't even discussed this proposal thing with me...ek bar baat karti mujse iss barein mein...I would've never let you sit like this..with your head down...you are not like this kriya...why are you hurting yourself ? N your self respect?" His chain of thoughts were broken when Gotham, kriyas father said
Gotham : I think hume undono ko thodi der akele mein baat karne dena chahie...
Rey z fuming inside...n thinks " just let this finish today...I will take a lesson for you miss smarty ghai...samajte kya ho tum apne aap ko haan? U need to explain me why are you doing all this crap after all? "
The boy and kriya were about to get up to go outside in garden to have a private talk,
Boys uncle : no no...(looking at watch) you (to boy) cant speak to her now...itz not a right time...(looking at boy's parents) isilie maine kaha tha toda jaldi chalte hai...dekha raahu kaal agaya...he cant speak to her today now...
Rey : what do you mean? Baat karne ke lie bhi muhorath dekhna padta hai kya?
All just turn towards rey...all were expecting this outburst of rey since he can't see his kriya sitting head down infront of anyone...he always likes her in her bold n fighter avtaar...he always protected from all scoldings or punishments from people...be it her professors or her own parents...then how can he see her helpless state infront of totally unknown people ?
Boys uncle was not happy with reys this behavior...boys parents looks at kriya's parents to ask who is he(rey) ?
Gotham was about to say something,
Kriya : glaring at rey - yeh ranvijay uncle ke beta hai(pointing at ranvijay who was also present there) ...our neighbour...
Rey self talk : what the hell...ab main neighbour ban gaya...? Atleast dost tho bol sakti thi...itni attitude? Just wait n watch miss attitude aaj tumhe mujse koi nahi bacha sakta...
Boys mom : oh ...so your friend?
Kriya: nahi..(looks at rey...hurt and anger was clearly visible in his eyes) clearing her throat - I mean ab padosi hai tho thoda bahot dosti tho hogi hi na? Ranvijay uncle n papa are very good friends...so dono families bhi friends jaise hi hai...
All are shocked to listen something like this from kriya that too about her rey...they understood something is wrong...they all looks at rey who was hurt...highly frustrated...
Boys uncle : I think we should leave now...2 mins late hogaye tho dono families ke lie ashubh hoga...
Boys family left saying they will call and discuss the other things if everything goes well..as soon as they left,
Rey : what was that?
Kriya : proposal tha...marriage proposal...(in a normal tone)
Rey : that I also understand...but why all of sudden this marriage proposal thing again?
Kriya : obviously to get married n settle in life...
Rey : ohhh...tho pasand aaya ladka...?
Kriya: mmm...ladka tho accha hai...lets see what's their decision...
Rey : matlab agar unlogo ne haan kardiya tho you will marry him?(he still cant believe whatever kriya was saying...he was shocked)
Kriya: nope (rey thought " I knew it")...agar mom and dad ko pasand aye rishta tho main shadi karungi...
Rey : what about you? Tumhe pasand aaye ya na aaye that doesn't matter right?
Kriya : I trust mom n dad...they will select a perfect life partner for me(this time she avoids looking at rey...her tone was also very low)
Rey : (he couldn't control his anger n starts shouting at kriya...the singhania n ghai family just enjoying the scene...) wow...tho you will leave me ?
Kriya : (understood what he meant...) abb shadi hogi tho sabko chod ke jana hi padega na rey..mom dad friends...sabko...(avoids eye contact completely)
Rey : you mean tum puri life muje bhoolkar kisi aur ke sath rahoge?
Kriya :rey shut up...and btw why do you care anyway? 2 years jab chod ke chale gaye the tab tumhe ye bat realize nahi hui?
Rey : what? Ye tum keh rahe hai ho? I thought you will understand me...my dreams...you knew it before only that I wanted to do my higher studies in abroad..I thought you will be happy for me...
Kriya : I am...I am happy for you...
Rey : then wait kyun nahi ki tumne kriya? Kyun ye sab marriage proposal and all? What do you want to prove?
Kriya : nothing...and why do I wait for you?
Rey : because you love me...(he realised what he said...)
Kriya : because i..what? When did I say that I love you..?
Reyansh: tumhe kehnee ki jaroorat nahi I can understand...
Kriya : she was expecting him to confess his feelings but instead he said she loves him...which made her more angry...
Kriya : after complete a min of silence (looking straightly in reys eyes) dad kal kitne baje jana hai muje uss ladke se milne?
Rey : tum fir kisi se Milne ja rahe ho?
Kriya : dad tell them that I said yess..(still looking at rey)
Rey : huh ...lagta hai confess karna padega abb...
All became curious...they expected this long back...
Rey : makes her sit on a couch...he sits infront of her on the floor...- kriya you know in abroad I met so many sexy and hot girls...few proposed me also...let me tell you in detail..the first one had lovely eyes...the second one had sexy figure...the third one had killing smile...and the fourth one had...you know he signals making both hands in cup shape n holding them infront of chest...
(All others were really shocked at his shameless statements)
Kriya : dad call them and say them I said yes...(still looking at rey)right now...
Rey : arre let me complete first ..tho kahan tha main? Han so the fourth one had...forget it...so the thing is itne sare variety of girls ko maine reject kia...you know why? Because I already had one girl who has all those things...not only those things, she also has smart brain and attitude which can kill any boy...but still she is very simple and down to earth girl...in short...all in one...
Kriya : dad call kiya aapne? (Shouts )
Rey : arre abhi bhi you want to meet that boy...? Mere propose karne ke bad bhi?
Kriya: propose? Haa...ye jo abhi tumne kaha usse propose karna kehte hai?
Rey: okay... relax...I know I am not good in proposing...habbit nahi hai na..aaj tak kabhi kia nai kisi ko..huh...okay I agree usse propose karna nahi kehte hai but confession tho keh sakte ho na? I atleast confessed right?
Kriya : confessed? What did you confess mr jerk singhania...?
Rey : arre...itna sab kuch tho kaha...
Kriya : huh..rey kya kaha tumne? Did you express how do you feel about that girl? No...did you say I love you? No...arre tumne tho uska naam tak nahi lia..forget it rey...
Rey: but I love you tho main daily bolta hoon na? Aur naam lene ki jarurat nahI hai...because there is only one girl in my life...
Kriya : daily bolne main aur confess karte waqt bolne mein difference hota hai rey..daily tum ek dost ki tarah i love you bolte ho...why are you like this reyansh...I waited for this moment from past more than 2 years...
Rey : ab jaisa bhi hoon, hoon tho tumhara hi na...? Adjust karlona plz...(making innocent face)
Kriya : no...dont try to convince me by making such innocent face...I know you are not that innocent...
Rey : laughs...plz yaar baatcutter...maanjao na? Plz
Kriya : I ...I just hate you rey...you know all my weaknesses...I hate you...I just hate you...(saying this she hugs him)
Rey: (hugging her)I love you too...(smiles)
plz let me know howz it...I know its not that good but still...
my other works
ss kriyaansh swaron
ss kriyaansh tani kriyam swaron krisha
ss last benchers(kriyansh)
kr ss : maine pyaar kiya
Ghai house:
It was not a normal day for every one present there...the atmosphere was something different..something hard to digest...after rejecting more than 70 proposals in last 2 years, 2 days back kriya only told her father that she will take her marriage thing seriously now...they can restart their search...yes 2 months back, they stopped all this finding right proposal thing on seeing kriyas happiness...she was very happy 1 whole month, after 2 years of all rejecting proposals blindly...in those 2 years she just concentrated on her carrier nothing else...no fun no friends no parties nothing...she became a serious girl from a fun loving girl...reason, no one knew...or may be they knew but couldn't realize it...
In those 2 years she hardly went to her favorite house...that's Singhania house...their neighbour...since childhood she spent most of her time in singhania house only...with her bestie Reyansh and her other part sharon, reyansh's sister...Sharon n kriya used to share a very special bond...they were inseparable always...partners in crime...the great pranksters...2 years back sharon got married and settled in different city with her hubby swayam n his family...every one thought that was the reason for kriyas silence and seriousness...but that was not the reason...
kriya and Sharon always used to play pranks against reyansh...n he was also not less...he alone used to handle bothh of them very nicely...he was also a great prankster, flirt and fun loving guy...his target was always kriya...rey and kriya used to fight all the time but end of the day without saying good night to each other, they never used to get sleep...there were incidents when because of their fights n ego they dropped the idea of saying good night to one another but late night one of them used to enter the others room through window to just wish good night...the time never mattered to them when it comes to saying good night or sharing something...be it a late night or early morning...this was the reason they both never used to close their room's Window during night ...
Well 2 years back not only kriya got separated from Sharon but also with her rey..yes reyansh went to abroad for higher studies for 2 years...it is not like they never spoke to each other in those 2 years..they always used to speak to each other but kriya kept distance from rey...she always used to speak in very sad tone..reyansh tried many times to know the reason behind it but in return he only got more irritated kriya and her response...so he stoped trying n he too bacame serious...no masti majak..no fun ...and most importantly no flirting...but kriya did not have the idea about this...
Just two months back reyansh came back to India...n it was rebirth for both reyansh and kriya...they were so happy...though they never fought like before...they never played pranks against each other...they are behaving more matured...every now and then went out for dinner..they spent holidays sharing most of the things happened in their life in those two years...except how much they missed each other...how many times they cried missing badly...how many time they cursed for staying away from each other...
1 whole month after reyansh's return, kriya was very happy...but no one knows why after a month she slowly started feeling low...and she also started avoiding rey and started keeping a distance between them...which highly distrbed reyansh...he doesn't know the reason...but he was also hurt because of kriyas behavior with him...most importantly he is very angry with kriya because of the scene infront him...
He stood exactly opposite to kriya crossing his hands so that no can notice his tightly closed fists...he was gritting his teeth so badly...
Kriya was stting their looking at floor infront of some unknown random family who were asking all typical questions...
Kaam kya karte ho? (As if they didn't enquire about it before coming)
Free time mein kya karte ho?
Khana banana aata hai?
Etc etc ...
Kriya was answering them very politely...still looking down...
Reyansh thought " wow miss baatcutter itni patience? What the hell do you think you are doing? Ye sab drama jaroori tha? U didn't even discussed this proposal thing with me...ek bar baat karti mujse iss barein mein...I would've never let you sit like this..with your head down...you are not like this kriya...why are you hurting yourself ? N your self respect?" His chain of thoughts were broken when Gotham, kriyas father said
Gotham : I think hume undono ko thodi der akele mein baat karne dena chahie...
Rey z fuming inside...n thinks " just let this finish today...I will take a lesson for you miss smarty ghai...samajte kya ho tum apne aap ko haan? U need to explain me why are you doing all this crap after all? "
The boy and kriya were about to get up to go outside in garden to have a private talk,
Boys uncle : no no...(looking at watch) you (to boy) cant speak to her now...itz not a right time...(looking at boy's parents) isilie maine kaha tha toda jaldi chalte hai...dekha raahu kaal agaya...he cant speak to her today now...
Rey : what do you mean? Baat karne ke lie bhi muhorath dekhna padta hai kya?
All just turn towards rey...all were expecting this outburst of rey since he can't see his kriya sitting head down infront of anyone...he always likes her in her bold n fighter avtaar...he always protected from all scoldings or punishments from people...be it her professors or her own parents...then how can he see her helpless state infront of totally unknown people ?
Boys uncle was not happy with reys this behavior...boys parents looks at kriya's parents to ask who is he(rey) ?
Gotham was about to say something,
Kriya : glaring at rey - yeh ranvijay uncle ke beta hai(pointing at ranvijay who was also present there) ...our neighbour...
Rey self talk : what the hell...ab main neighbour ban gaya...? Atleast dost tho bol sakti thi...itni attitude? Just wait n watch miss attitude aaj tumhe mujse koi nahi bacha sakta...
Boys mom : oh ...so your friend?
Kriya: nahi..(looks at rey...hurt and anger was clearly visible in his eyes) clearing her throat - I mean ab padosi hai tho thoda bahot dosti tho hogi hi na? Ranvijay uncle n papa are very good friends...so dono families bhi friends jaise hi hai...
All are shocked to listen something like this from kriya that too about her rey...they understood something is wrong...they all looks at rey who was hurt...highly frustrated...
Boys uncle : I think we should leave now...2 mins late hogaye tho dono families ke lie ashubh hoga...
Boys family left saying they will call and discuss the other things if everything goes well..as soon as they left,
Rey : what was that?
Kriya : proposal tha...marriage proposal...(in a normal tone)
Rey : that I also understand...but why all of sudden this marriage proposal thing again?
Kriya : obviously to get married n settle in life...
Rey : ohhh...tho pasand aaya ladka...?
Kriya: mmm...ladka tho accha hai...lets see what's their decision...
Rey : matlab agar unlogo ne haan kardiya tho you will marry him?(he still cant believe whatever kriya was saying...he was shocked)
Kriya: nope (rey thought " I knew it")...agar mom and dad ko pasand aye rishta tho main shadi karungi...
Rey : what about you? Tumhe pasand aaye ya na aaye that doesn't matter right?
Kriya : I trust mom n dad...they will select a perfect life partner for me(this time she avoids looking at rey...her tone was also very low)
Rey : (he couldn't control his anger n starts shouting at kriya...the singhania n ghai family just enjoying the scene...) wow...tho you will leave me ?
Kriya : (understood what he meant...) abb shadi hogi tho sabko chod ke jana hi padega na rey..mom dad friends...sabko...(avoids eye contact completely)
Rey : you mean tum puri life muje bhoolkar kisi aur ke sath rahoge?
Kriya :rey shut up...and btw why do you care anyway? 2 years jab chod ke chale gaye the tab tumhe ye bat realize nahi hui?
Rey : what? Ye tum keh rahe hai ho? I thought you will understand me...my dreams...you knew it before only that I wanted to do my higher studies in abroad..I thought you will be happy for me...
Kriya : I am...I am happy for you...
Rey : then wait kyun nahi ki tumne kriya? Kyun ye sab marriage proposal and all? What do you want to prove?
Kriya : nothing...and why do I wait for you?
Rey : because you love me...(he realised what he said...)
Kriya : because i..what? When did I say that I love you..?
Reyansh: tumhe kehnee ki jaroorat nahi I can understand...
Kriya : she was expecting him to confess his feelings but instead he said she loves him...which made her more angry...
Kriya : after complete a min of silence (looking straightly in reys eyes) dad kal kitne baje jana hai muje uss ladke se milne?
Rey : tum fir kisi se Milne ja rahe ho?
Kriya : dad tell them that I said yess..(still looking at rey)
Rey : huh ...lagta hai confess karna padega abb...
All became curious...they expected this long back...
Rey : makes her sit on a couch...he sits infront of her on the floor...- kriya you know in abroad I met so many sexy and hot girls...few proposed me also...let me tell you in detail..the first one had lovely eyes...the second one had sexy figure...the third one had killing smile...and the fourth one had...you know he signals making both hands in cup shape n holding them infront of chest...
(All others were really shocked at his shameless statements)
Kriya : dad call them and say them I said yes...(still looking at rey)right now...
Rey : arre let me complete first ..tho kahan tha main? Han so the fourth one had...forget it...so the thing is itne sare variety of girls ko maine reject kia...you know why? Because I already had one girl who has all those things...not only those things, she also has smart brain and attitude which can kill any boy...but still she is very simple and down to earth girl...in short...all in one...
Kriya : dad call kiya aapne? (Shouts )
Rey : arre abhi bhi you want to meet that boy...? Mere propose karne ke bad bhi?
Kriya: propose? Haa...ye jo abhi tumne kaha usse propose karna kehte hai?
Rey: okay... relax...I know I am not good in proposing...habbit nahi hai na..aaj tak kabhi kia nai kisi ko..huh...okay I agree usse propose karna nahi kehte hai but confession tho keh sakte ho na? I atleast confessed right?
Kriya : confessed? What did you confess mr jerk singhania...?
Rey : arre...itna sab kuch tho kaha...
Kriya : huh..rey kya kaha tumne? Did you express how do you feel about that girl? No...did you say I love you? No...arre tumne tho uska naam tak nahi lia..forget it rey...
Rey: but I love you tho main daily bolta hoon na? Aur naam lene ki jarurat nahI hai...because there is only one girl in my life...
Kriya : daily bolne main aur confess karte waqt bolne mein difference hota hai rey..daily tum ek dost ki tarah i love you bolte ho...why are you like this reyansh...I waited for this moment from past more than 2 years...
Rey : ab jaisa bhi hoon, hoon tho tumhara hi na...? Adjust karlona plz...(making innocent face)
Kriya : no...dont try to convince me by making such innocent face...I know you are not that innocent...
Rey : laughs...plz yaar baatcutter...maanjao na? Plz
Kriya : I ...I just hate you rey...you know all my weaknesses...I hate you...I just hate you...(saying this she hugs him)
Rey: (hugging her)I love you too...(smiles)
plz let me know howz it...I know its not that good but still...
my other works
ss kriyaansh swaron
ss kriyaansh tani kriyam swaron krisha
ss last benchers(kriyansh)
kr ss : maine pyaar kiya
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