ArHi OS: First date. First kiss. First love

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Yes, They were perfect and always special. Loved it so much! It really made my night. Thanks for it and the PM too.Awesome OS!😊

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riafna

@riafna

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

hey Roshni it was quiet different way the way you describe the story but never lose its intense its perfect portrate everything.Feel it.Superb attempt.Thanks for pm.Happy new year

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

really good..
First date, first kiss is always special..

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Thanks for the PM. So sweet and cute.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

cheesy nah it was beautiful
aww thats so adorable
happy new year to ya

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nadiaben

@nadiaben

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

well i like cheesy stories😃

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roshnidiya-pm

@roshnidiya-pm

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

I'm happy with the response!

You all know difficult it is for me to send pm's and I send over 300 pm's ...
Now seeing that makes me lazy.

Not everyone reads my stories and I don't want to be a pain for them nor for my fingers. And many have also left the forum.

So If you read my stories and wish to read further, only then buddy THIS pm' account of mine!

FOR PM'S BUDDY ME!

Or ask me to do so I will happily add you.
But that doesn't mean that you would be spared for not commenting 😛.

Okay, I'm mean, Right?

Don't worry I welcome even the silent readers.

But please LIKE at least and let me know you are reading or else how will I know, you are reading it or not?

Love you all.

Bye

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 14

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

OS Copied is from - http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2387715/1/Moonlight

Original Writer is Lady Riss

Her hair was straightened with a barrette of pink crystals tucked neatly in place. His hair was ruffled and messy.

Her outfit was cute. A denim skirt, a pink camisole and black flip-flops. It contrasted deeply with his tight jeans, Vans shoes and Element t-shirt.

Her skin was olive, slightly tanned and flawless. His skin was paler. His lips were a sharp pink and inviting her in. His skin was flawless as well and in the moonlight, he looked beautiful.

Her eyes were blue, his green. But as he stood on her front porch, the teddy bear he had won for her in his hand, he couldn't help but stare. They were gorgeous, an endless ocean of beauty. His eyes. She could get lost in his eyes, his forest. And perhaps they had become lost.

Both were contrasting and both belonged on different sides of the tracks and yet… here they were. Smiling awkwardly and staring. He hadn't even noticed it, but he had grabbed her hand. Her petite tiny hand was in his. And he loved the feeling.

She began to swing the hand back and forth, a gentle move. "I had fun Jason." She spoke, her voice silky.

"I did too." He smiled at her again. She looked beautiful. Her hair was soft and shining lightly from the moonlight.

The moment felt so right, so good… perfect. That was why, when their lips crashed, neither protested.

That was why when they resurfaced for air, they both looked slightly saddened that the night was over. She tucked her hair behind her ear and kissed his cheek one more time. "Good night." She breathed.

"Good night, Rachel." When the door closed his hand traveled back to where her lips had been. They still tingled.

First dates. First kisses. First loves. They were perfect.

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

superb one...! 👍🏼
loved it ❤️

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minuu

@minuu

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

This OS have been copied/plagiarized from an OS called "Moonlight" - https://www.fictionpress.com/s/2387715/1/Moonlight

Read and Refer to the rules: IMP: Severe Penalty for Plagiarizing!

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