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Thank u so much guys fr ur lovely wishes🤗 & updating nw!
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Forty Seven

babaji main kitni acchi hu

aapki pyaari bacchi hu

aapne har khushi hai mere liye banaayi

par kyu jab iss

dusht danav maan aur mujh main se ek ki

khawahish puri karne ki baat hai aayi

toh aap ne hamesha inki hi challayi

main jaanti hu

dil se maanti hu

yeh aapko karam hai

jo aaj maan mera hum kadam hai

par kya yeh ,zaruri hai

ki har baar inki hi jeet jaruri hai

yeh har pal sataate hai mujhe

mana pyaar bhi jatate hai

par agle hi pal ,

mera saara khoon pee jaate hai

mere chehre par ik khushi ke liye

ek pal toh yeh chaand bhi le aayege

par main hasu inke bina ,

usse ek pal yeh saari duniya hi mitaa aayege

jab koi saath nahi hota mere

tab bhi inka saya saath chalta hai

kai baar

mujhe khud par yaki nahi rahta

par inka pyaar mere chalte rahne ki wajah hota hai

lekin in sab

aachaiyo ke baad bhi

kabhi toh

kabhi bhi ik din aisa dena

jab inke saare prank fail ho jaaye

aur inke face par woh shocking expression

aur ,

mere face par jitne ki smile aa jaaye

lagat hai ,

mera yeh sapna

raat main suraj nikle itna mushkil hai

kyoki aap ki aur iss dusht danav ki toh

setting hi ,dusre level ki hai

please rashmi ji

meri bhi maan lo

kuch ek prank

meri bhi jhooli main daal do

main bhi aapki story ki heroine hu

chalo maan jitni handsome na sahi

par har raat blue moon ho

yeh kaam itna bhi toh mushkil nahi

(by 9n9i9s9h9u9)




Thanks you so much dear & I really loved the poem😳. It actuaaly describes the story aptly & not o forget I specially lubbed the last stranza🤣



Khurana Mansion

"Main kaun hoon...I mean...main kahan hoon??!" Geet looked around her the next morning.


"Your hostel room is renovated! Kaisa laga?"

The sarcastic voice made her jump off the bed. Geet was shocked seeing Maan leaning against the wall with a smirk plastered on his handsome face as usual.

"What are you doing over here...I mean...what am I doing over here?!!!!"

"Woh kya hai na, your Babaji bribed me to carry you here!"

Maan winked mischievously walking upto her.

"Aap hamesha mazak karte rehte ho!!!" she whined & looked away.

"Okay, lets talk something serious for a change."

He yanked her extremely close by her waist & her startled hazels met his intense ones. He stared at her keenly & she could nothing much, except guessing his intentions...Maan was intoxicated by her morning beauty. He sensually trailed his lips from her temple & stopped to make patterns on her crimson cheeks while she squirmed with her eyes closed...Her hands moved across his back as a reflex & he shook her even closer...Their breaths intertwined when he naughtily caressed her nose with his. Her lips quivered when his hot breaths snarled across them. Her heart skipped dangerously when he seductively brushed his lips past hers leaving her to crave for a kiss.

"Maan..."

She moaned as his lips glided across her shoulders playing with her senses. She squirmed & tilted sideways as he nipped & bit her neck passionately. He was completely drowned her... She arched her head backwards to give his lips full access to her throat. Her paralyzed hands shook him closer as he planted wet kisses on her collarbone...

Then he pinned her to the wall. She was breathing heavily & her eyes were hooded & dazed...He slowly brought his lips closer to hers...

"So where were we...?"


She squirmed against him not hearing anything. The thought of kissing him roamed her mind but she didn't possess the great guts to do that. Geet was very much disheartened when his lips moved to her ears...

"Those three words are pending Mishty..."

His voice was deadly husky & equally serious. She snapped her eyes open to meet his intense ones. A dark hue of red invaded her face.

"W-Which...three...words?" she asked sheepishly.

"Those three words which I first told you in Shimla."

"E-Even...I...will tell you...in Shimla..." she glanced sideways monitoring her beats.

"Mumbai is not a bad place. Mujhe abhi sunna hai, samjhi tum?!!!!!!!" he said ardently.


He made look at him & she saw the passion & desperation in his eyes.

"Woh'main...main...aapko...aapko nahi bol sakti..." she tightly shut her eyes.

"Why???!!!!" he asked sharply leaning against her. She gulped her saliva in fear.

"Because...because..."

"Tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti ho?!!!!"

She snapped her eyes open in shock.

"Nahi...aise koi baat nahi hai..." she shook her head vigorously. She didn't want to hurt him.

"Toh phir kaho!!!!!"


His orbs were dark with passion & filled with love. Her heart throbbed & he could feel the vibrations as well. Geet felt short of guts required for confession. She bit her lips, foolishly hoping that would help...Her eyes turned dreamy as they locked with his...

"Woh...woh main kehna chahti thi ki...ki...main kehna chahti thi ki...I...I...I"

His eyes turned more desperate.

"I...I...I love...I love rainbows which mostly come after it has rained heavily & what a co-incidence rainy season has already arrived but pata hai kya Mumbai mostly gets flooded with rains & this time I am keeping my fingers crossed hoping that it won't flood this time but I want to enjoy Mumbai rains but frankly speaking I don't like rains I mean at first it's feels nice but after it becomes boring To tell you the truth, I enjoy rains by watching them sitting besides the window pane because by doing that my feet don't get muddy, hai na? And the fact is I even like the poetry Rain Rain Go Away, Come Again--- "

"Chup!! Bilkul Chup!!"

Geet shrieked & that was the end of her blabbering. She was scared seeing his brows notched up in anger!

"I am neither a weather man nor a nursery school teacher, samjhi tum??!!!!!"

"But Maan meri baat toh---"

He staged a walk-out.

"Babaji...aapne dekha Maan naraaz ho gaye...ab main kya karu...you know what doing two courses at a time seems much easier than confessing those three magical words to Maan Singh Khurana... "

She cribbed.

Everyone had gathered for breakfast. Now the Khurana family were very well aware of Maan & Geet's relationship and they were elated about it. So the atmosphere around the table was kinda colorful. Dadima & Niharika indirectly teased Maan. Even Vikrant joined a little. Annie chuckled. Geet was trying hard to control her blushes but Maan seemed unperturbed. Infact Geet was sad that he didn't look at her once!

"Babaji...Maan is not even stealing glances to look at me."

Then Maan & Vikrant went to office. Geet sauntered across the corridors, cribbing.

"Babaji...Maan ne mujhe thik se bye bhi nahi bola...& forget that! He hasn't looked at me even once since morning...mujhe avoid kar rahe hain..."

She passed by the kitchen where she saw Niharika speaking to Nakul.

"Maan has forgotten to take his lunch box."

"Koi baat nahi, I will go to office & give it to him right now!" spoke Nakul.

"Can I go instead?" Geet just blurted out.

Surprised, Niharika looked at her.

"Will you go??" she asked delighted!

Geet's eyes turned downcast. She nodded shyly. Niharika smiled.

Geet reached KC & knocked the door of Maan's cabin.

"Come in."

Maan said busying himself in a file & not looking up at her. Geet was sad seeing him again ignoring her.

"Woh...I brought your lunch box..."

He did not reply. She kept the box on the desk & stared at him.

"Woh'aapke lunch main aaloo ki sabzi aur dessert mein apple fruit hai."

She bit her tongue hard after saying.

"I did not ask but thank you for the menu." He still did not look at her.

"Aur kuch?"

"Uh...the furniture of this cabin is really nice. The carpenter did a good job. "

She bit her tongue once again.

"Geet!!! Tera kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!!"

"Aur kuch?"

"Haan...mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai..."

"What?" he raised his eyes & looked at her expectantly.

"N-Nahi...kuch bhi toh nahi...I was wondering whether refrigerator is cooler than an air-conditioner."

She smacked her head mentally.

"When you find the answer, share it with me on facebook." he snorted sarcastically & looked aback in the file.


"Okay..."

"Geet!!!! You are mad!!!! Ab Maan aur naraaz ho gaye!"

Dejected, she went to college. Her Complan ad was still required to be finished by adding background score, editing, special effects, sound & animation before she could finally send her ad for the competition. The whole day went in that & even the next day. Geet tried very hard to confess to Maan but all her attempts were in vain. Also her academic exams were a week away, so Maan discussed with her only studies & nothing else & Geet obviously didn't like that!

And one day she got so frustrated with herself that she just blurted out in anger.


"If I am not able to confess to Maan tonight, then I will murder someone!!!!!!!!!!!"

"Wow! I am scared!" Annie said sarcastically!

Geet frowned.

"Waise I actually prefer a bold girlfriend for Bhai instead of someone chui-mui like you!"

"Just shut up okay! Maan is mine & I am bold!!!!!!!" she shot back.

Annie smirked.

"Fine! Show him your boldness!"

Geet was shocked. "What...what do you mean...?"


Annie whispered in her ears & Geet shuddered in shyness.

"For your kind information, I tried that once but he turned the tables on me!"

"Achcha?? Try kar liya?" Annie taunted, "But you didn't have the required equipments!"

Saying that Annie opened the cupboard & handed her a shopping bag. Geet was stunned looking at the contents.

"This dress is too short & perhaps revealing!!!!!!"

"Mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha!" she replied sarcastically.

"And...and...and...this red lipstick is very dark!!!!"

"Yeah! It's apple flavored because Bhai loves apple!And you know you have got to do now!"


Annie said shamelessly & Geet just gaped at her blankly...

"It's not that difficult! Maan Bhai is very shy!"

"Very Good Joke!"

"Listen! I know my Bhai better than you okay!!" she snorted.

And Geet pensively stared at the dress in her hand...




And Maan is clueless of what's cooking up😉😆


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Edited by _Rashmi - 12 years ago
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Geet jhalli iska kuch nahi ho sakata.. Maan first time angry on his mishty.. OMG!! Poor Maan.. Both, his sis & his Mishty is going to give him shock.. Annie & her sarcastic comments.. God..😆 Nice update Rashmi.. It's gonna be fun.. Mishty seducing Maan...
Edited by CutieTeju - 12 years ago
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"Main kaun hoon...I mean...main kahan hoon??!

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


Yaar geet bhi dialoguebazi kar rahi hai...

hmmm Maan ka asar hai😆😆


😳MAANEET is so passionate 😳


Poor Maan craving for those 3 words...😉😉😉


"Those three words which I first told you in Shimla."

"E-Even...I...will tell you...in Shimla..." she glanced sideways monitoring her beats.


But Geet toh smart ho gayi hai😆


""I...I...I love...I love rainbows which mostly come after it has rained heavily & what a co-incidence rainy season has already arrived but pata hai kya Mumbai mostly gets flooded with rains & this time I am keeping my fingers crossed hoping that it won't flood this time but I want to enjoy Mumbai rains but frankly speaking I don't like rains I mean at first it's feels nice but after it becomes boring To tell you the truth, I enjoy rains by watching them sitting besides the window pane because by doing that my feet don't get muddy, hai na? And the fact is I even like the poetry Rain Rain Go Away, Come Again--- ""


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


Yaar yeh geet toh real me chalta phirta disaster hai ...😆

bechara maan ruth gaya...😆😆


I loved how geet tries to convince him...😆😆

Annie toh bahut bold nikli😉


"Just shut up okay! Maan is mine & I am bold!!!!!!!"

Possessive Geet😉😉


Now maan k dialogue...


1."Woh kya hai na, your Babaji bribed me to carry you here!"

2."I am neither a weather man nor a nursery school teacher, samjhi tum??!!!!!"

3."When you find the answer, share it with me on facebook."

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


But award toh iss baar geet k dialogue ko jata hai...😉😉


"N-Nahi...kuch bhi toh nahi...I was wondering whether refrigerator is cooler than an air-conditioner."


🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Geet ans mile toh mujhe bhi batana🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣


Lovedthe update so much...

continue soon...

Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...superb update..
waiting fo geets n Annie's plan
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Posted: 12 years ago
wooow now maan babu ready to witness a bold geet
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three magical words ...not so easily Maan ...hahaha
What can we expect from our jhalli adorable Geet


Cute update
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Posted: 12 years ago
woh
maan angry dear
and do geet want to express her love
or seduce him
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Posted: 12 years ago
This Geet she speaks all things but cant say tat she loves him

poor maan but good going dont talk to her

and annie did she tell her to seduce him
Edited by sdlife19 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
what they r planning
waiting to know
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear

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