MAANEET OS-Pehle Pyaar ka pehla gum!!! Sequel's link-pg 142.

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kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

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Posted: 12 years ago

#801

please i want epilogue dear

i want to see them together happy

thanx for the pm

cont soon dear

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preeti.1

@preeti.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

plz maan POV k saath happy ending b hi chahiye

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 12 years ago

#803

part 23
last part
lovely...
he called...
nice...

PS - of course i demand Maan's POV too...looking forward for the new thread and the sequel...

PPS - 23 parts and is an OS? lol...

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: spvd
part 23
last part
lovely...
he called...
nice...

PS - of course i demand Maan's POV too...looking forward for the new thread and the sequel...

PPS - 23 parts and is an OS? lol...

😆 yaar..it was supposed to be an OS! No. Pe mat joa..see the lenths of the parts!😉

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aashi14

@aashi14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#805

nice part!!!!!! bt m nt able to understand d end of d story its like incomplete..

sorry dat's my point of view as m reading it frm d first part...

no offence

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chhavi

@Shonameet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: aashi14
nice part!!!!!! bt m nt able to understand d end of d story its like incomplete..
sorry dat's my point of view as m reading it frm d first part...
no offence

no offence taken..😊
u r right!! Its not a compelet story! As it was not meant to be one at the first place!
Let me clear few things..
1. It was suppose to be a sad ONE SHOT..where geet remembers her past!
2. It was totaly geets Pov.. Maans side was not the part of it! And i hav already told it many time that there will be no maans side in this story!
3. The story was suppose to end at the point.. When maan was gone without meeting her at the last day of their exam! And with the sence of prolog where geet is still crying for him!
4. As everyone wanted to know maans side of story...so i am ready to write it as a connecting OS..again it will be based on a song.
5. Thats why i took that leap of 5days and that phone call..
..so that i can continue it as a sequel with maan's Pov!
6. So the story will be continued with maans side now!
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hope i was able to clear ur doubts.. So..do u want another OS???

Edited by Shonameet - 12 years ago

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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#807

loved it a lot Shona...

chalo chalo now write Maan's POV

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Vani

@BeautifulBee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#808

Yes please write Maan's side of story as well!!! Really want to know what his feelings are too.

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

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Posted: 12 years ago

#809

want other with happy scene

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 12 years ago

#810

hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Well written! emotional Geet! Maan calls! Seems like an abrupt end !Is der an epilogue! Will defn like to know Maan;s side! Thanks