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rockstar_kajen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello people. Most of you must be knowing me. Yes I am here with a new fanfic yet again. 😳
Donot bash me, if my ongoing ff is already torturing you 🤣
I hope it's not 😛
Anyways, let me first introduce myself to the people who doesn't know me.

Hello people, I am Aparna, a crazy kajenian and an ARian. I have been writing ffs and OSs on AR since few months. OSs on Asya as well. And I don't know if I write good, but people say I write good 😳 which I mostly ignore coz I am NEVER fully satisfied with my writing...the day I get satisfied I will consider myself as a writer, which I doubt would ever happen 🤣

Coming to the point, I m starting one more ff...
People who want me to p.m them wen I update are requested to PLEASE SEND ME A BUDDY reqst...
This fanfic is somewhere little..like really little is inspired by my real life...

I hope you guys would like it..
Please drop in your comments if you read it. Like, dislike, or criticize.

Credits:-

Castle aka aditi for beautifull banner of impassioned

aanya (Thank you sooo much for your help aanya...u made me become a better writer)

All my friends for encouraging me. Payal, shru, aaisha, salwa, ana, shikha, mehak, aditi :D

LOVE ❤️
-APARNA

Edited by rockstar_kajen - 11 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

INDEX
Prologue
PART 1: I MISS YOU
PART 2: AND WE MET
PART 3:Mr SADU MALLIK

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rockstar_kajen

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Posted: 12 years ago

PROLOGUE
It is the last day of their internship. From tomorrow everyone is gonna be dispersed to different parts of the country. Tonight is the farewell, and he knows the atmosphere will be emotional. Last five years they had almost lived their lives together. He isn't even sure if he's going to be able to keep in touch with anyone other than the people closest to him. Atleast he has been serendipitous enough to have done in his own college with same group of friends. But everyone has plans of their own. Few of them won't even be in the country owing to their post graduation abroad. Some of them were getting married in a few months and everyone will be busy in their own life.
Everything in the college life had been perfect for him except his love life which has always been in a mess. He had been so reluctant to except his love for her initially, and when he did, it was a task discerning her feelings for him. When he was almost sure, that she loves him too, he decides to propose her, but then she started giving him a cold shoulder since last four goddamn months, without even letting him propose her.
They had become acquaintances since the first day of college. Most people weren't so happy that day, the reason being most of them couldn't make it to MBBS and they ended up getting admission in BDS like him. The happiest person that day was Yashika Sharma. The smile adoring her lips had said it all. She's always said, "I love to see people smile, and if I can make their smile look beautiful, what else is better than that." She was different, nothing made her deviate from her aims. Her smile was infectious always reaching her eyes with small wrinkles forming in the corner of her eyes along with a tiny dimple on her chin just below the depression of the lower lip.
"Armaan" he hears her voice, breaching his train of thoughts. He looks at her lifting his eyes from downward stare. There's a hope in his eyes. But she droops her eye lids as soon as he looks at her, eluding his gaze. That's what she had been doing since last four months.

"There's a patient with grade two mobility in upper left posterior. Here's the case paper. There's no one out there, and it's my OPD duty. So Dr Amit has asked you to handle the case" she says in a small voice, and turns around not even sparing him a look. Before she walks away, he tightly grabs her wrist and spins her to make her look at him. For a split second she looks up at him and averts her gaze, looking everywhere but him. "Enough yashika, enough!! I am tired of trying to make you talk to me. Atleast once have the guts to confront me, damn it." he says with a clear peevishness in his voice. She keeps mum but all of a sudden shoves away his hand and runs away. He stands rooted on the spot with sheer stupefiedness, as he watches her retreating figure and rolls his eyes in frustration, runs his fingers in his jet black hair. Inhaling a deep breath he promises himself to make her divulge tonight in the farewell.
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He chooses to sit on a bench which is placed in a relatively deserted area of the ground and keeps his eyes glued on the entrance. He's been unusually taciturn tonight.

"Armaan, is everything fine? I know you are really gonna miss everyone, but you very well know, we will always be in contact" Rahul speaks settling besides him

"Nothing of that sort rahul." he replies

"okay then...up for a drink?"

"Erm, not now, you carry on, I'll catch you in sometime."

Rahul nods and leaves. He knows that something's wrong with his best friend, but he even knows he is not going to let it out now and so he lets him be.
It's been last four hours that he's waiting for her to come. The farewell's about to consummate. He takes a quick gander at the faces in the ground, hoping to spot her. There might just be a possibility that he had not seen her coming inside. People are hugging each other, most of them, specifically girls are shedding tears. Acquaintances and friends come to hug him, shake hands and he feigns smile at them. Slowly the place starts getting deserted but she's no where to be seen. He just stands there waiting for her, but she doesn't turn up.

Edited by rockstar_kajen - 12 years ago

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rockstar_kajen

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Posted: 12 years ago

Four is lucky...so one more reserve 🤣

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Posted: 12 years ago

oye ye bus Ka tha jen kaha h

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abditory.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Congo on your new FF dearo!!!

Ok i loved the prolougue. Its a perfect mixture of anxious and a tension feeling. The emotions we have when we depart from our friends your potrayed them beautifully.

"He takes a quick gander at the faces in the ground"

I recently came across this word and i fell in love with the word. And i m glad you are going to got inspired by your own life and gonna write this story. I cant wait to read the story ahead. Your words and way you have framed the sentences is just perfect. I guess this is better than your first FF. I like the title "IMPASSIONED LOVE"

P.S update this fast.Keep up the good work:-)

Edited by Salwa_Mehrin - 12 years ago