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abditory.

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On the next page reserve the first spot den i will reserve mine😃

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rockstar_kajen

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Haan toh...besides being a writer I'm ur friend as well na? :P
Toh u can do atleast THIS MUCH right? :P

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I feel like crying seeing ur dabba 😭

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Yahh i can do dat much lol U WANT the same thing in ur dabba??

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rockstar_kajen

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PART 1: I MISS YOU

She hears someone calling out her name disturbing her sleep at which she whines and pulls up the duvet over her head. "Enough riddhi, it's 7:00 am. I'm trying to wake you up since last half an hour" Abhimanyu speaks with clear exasperation in his voice. "Bhai, just five more minutes." she turns her position inside the quilt. "Fine, don't get up. I've another way to wake you up." he smirks and shouts, "mooommm" which makes her jolt her eyes open and shove the blanket off herself. She sits up, glares at abhimanyu placing her feet on the floor making him grin, she wallops the pillow at him . Grabbing a towel from the wardrobe, she runs in the washroom before he gets hold of her.
"You don't love me anymore bhai" she scowls from inside at which abhimanyu replies, "I've never loved you sweetheart." He smirks and walks out of the room rubbing his nose. This always works, not that she's scared of her mom but she always avoids being lectured in the mornings, that always ruins her day she says.

She turns on the knob of the shower. Standing under it's drizzle she inhales a deep breath, feeling the gush of water flowing down her body. Slowly she cranes her neck backwards to look up, she closes her eyes as the cascade of water hits her face. Sensation of tremulousness grips her nerves. It's her first day as a post graduate student. She's been waiting for this day since long. And now when the day was finally here she cannot help but get nervous. Still she reminisces the day when the results of AIPG were out. Her ecstasy knew no bounds that day. That's was she's always wanted, to do something which makes her parents proud. She'd topped in India, what more could her parents ask for. More than them she always wanted to make her sister proud, where ever she is, she's sure she would be proud of her li'l sister. Though she was just one year younger, she always considered her sister as her god father, walking on her foot steps. Closing her eyes she lets the tears evade out of her eyes. Today, she misses her the most. "I miss you yashi" she mumbles to herself.
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"Armaan, buddy, listen to me once please." Rahul pants as he tries catching up his speed. Armaan's walking through the corridors of the hospital like an upcoming storm. To Rahul it seems as if he is running to catch some train.

"Rahul, I'm seriously busy. Will you stop bothering me for heaven's sake? And now stop following me or you might be eligible to replace that pup in the vodafone ad" he speaks with exasperation in his voice. This has become a routine since last three years with rahul trying to make his best friend get normal and Armaan paying no heed to those talks. His behavior had been eerie since that night. He not only stopped conjecturing in love, but has even started detaching himself from the outside world. He's just too scared to fall in love yet again. He never before had fallen for a girl so badly. All his life he'd dated girls, but those were just mere tifflers, he was never into a serious relationship before she entered his life. Not even allowing him to feel the enchantment of love, she'd left him impetuously. He'd tried searching her for months but she was no where to be found. Even her family'd got relocated to some other city, leaving him with no option other than to infer that he was abandoned by her. If something matters to him now, it's his patients and his carrier. He desists himself from getting attached to people.
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Getting ready she grabs her purse, stuffing in the necessities and looks at herself in the mirror. She apacely climbs down the stairs. Mumbling a quick good morning to her mom-dad with a light hug, she gulps down a glass of milk in one breath, not wanting to get late on the first day. Pulling out an apple from the fruit basket, she sets off while munching it.
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Rahul lightly pats his shoulder snapping him out of his thoughts. They'd reached library with rahul blabbering while chasing him. Armaan is absent mindedly searching for some random book in the shelves. Feeling a pat on his shoulder he rolls his eye, "What is it rahul? Why don't you ever stop talking about that topic? When you know I always avoid talking about her, why do u still keep pestering me? I've already told you that she's a past, I don't care about her or things related to her anymore. Now would you please let me work in peace? I've better things to do than to talk about her." he berates Rahul and briskly walks off. He goes to the reception asking for his appointments that are scheduled today. Just when he opens his mouth to speak, he hears, "excuse me".

Here's the part...I didnot like much :( but hope u guys enjoy :D

Flood in the comments plzz :D

Love
-Aparna ❤️

Edited by rockstar_kajen - 12 years ago

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abditory.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#96

i M phirstt WEE!!!

Ok your writing have improved greatly. Salwa is saying this 😎.At first i thiught ABHI is Riddhima's BF🤣but lol he is the brother

OK so she is Riddima's sister *shock* AMAZINGGG MAN!!!

Poor ARMAAN!! Always lost his love lol. I cant wait for their meeting and the love story.

Update soon^^

Edited by salmeh. - 12 years ago

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rockstar_kajen

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thanks salwa for completing 13 pages 😳

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mehak arora

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I wanted to be the first one :|
Res. Yayayaya update coming up. Ohshit! I too have to write it now 🤣
edited. YOU MISS MEE? :O aww you are such a fatso ;;) :P and you also wrote PLEASE in the PM? :O for me? aww :'D 🤣 on a serious note, it was a small part le kamini want a bigg one next time. :| and you don't have to say please next time, I am very sweet imma comment otherwise too :P and since you asked for a longgg comment last time I'll make sure I annoy you by the end of this comment bwahaha 😈

Okay so the update, amazing as always, improving my vocab :P oh wow now that is interesting Ridhima is Yashika's sister :O I am really intrigued about how the story will unfold now. I wonder where she gooo? Sad Armaan :( all cuz of that ladki who is making me super curious wese :p but Ridhima will surely make him happy.

Okay pretend like you didn't read that I actually going to compliment you, I mean ya you are a great writer, and I have fallen for your work. But mind you your WORK. Not the writer. =) Btw I waits for the other FF too, update that one jaldi jaldi. And you know you didn't have to update just cuz you were dying to read the next part of my ff 😎 :P

Okay LIAR FATSO KAMINII idk what else to say :P so imma take your leave and update jaldi or imma annoy you so much.
Ily. Xx <--- I didn't write that, otherwise I totally hate you and your fatso tummy 🤣

Edited by Mojo. - 12 years ago

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Jinal3patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#99

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**EDITED** *UNRES*

the most annoying thing happened to me, i wrote a big comment , n before i could post it i accidently pressed backspace,n it all went away!😡😡

sorry jst had to let it out, here i go with my comment...again😆

*sigh* so how did i start?! it's good to be back! :D n i m back with a bang (comment, for now :P)
So i ll start from the beginning...
n here it goes :)
dude, it's jst 7! hw can someone get up at 7, isn't tht early? :O
omg, i can so relate to riddhima here u knw! on every weekend, this "wake jinal up early" mission takes place,by my own family! :O :'( n thentoavoid lectures i finally hv to get up...aarrgghhh! i feel u riddhima, i feel u man! n Abhi! wow i would love to c tom n jerry fights between this bro-sis jodi* hint hint*! :P I ll get popcorns too so we can enjoy! 😉😛😆Riddhima is smart man! Topped in India, amzing! *claps* aawww Riddhima misses her sis! but wait wht!??!! Yashika is Riddhima's sister, Armaan loved Yashika...n o-m-g this is gonna be so so so damn interesting! yeeekkss i m excited, bt sad as well for armaan!😭My 😳n Riddima's poor baby! he is so hurt, how can yashika leave him like tht! :O bt well everything happens for a reason n i m sure we ll find out soon...i hope😛 n now tht Riddhma is here, shee ll take care ofher Armaan!😃 :P RAhul, man u r the best! u r a true frnd buddy, being there for Armaan! i m proud of ya!😃Armaan will be his normal self reallyyy sooon because Riddima is jst on her way ;) right?
Tht ws riddhima right? the one who said excuse me, i hv a feeling tht it ws her...jt saying! :P
Overall, the part was great but shooorrttt! 😡Doc, yar, kitna wait kiya, n itna short part mila! :( tch! lagta hai ab to kuch jyada hi spamming karni padegi!
You ARE A GREAT WRITER! keep up the good work di :)
much love
Jinal (Jinu) <33

Edited by Jinal3patel - 12 years ago