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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing update😛

Story pace is little fast but i think it is need of the story😃

OMG!!! Meeshti made him agree and Maan becomes so docile in love (Pyar insaan ko kya se kya bana deta hai)😆

Rashmi is not getting boring but pace is bothering me that's why i feel even Maaneet scene is not getting proper space😔

Bada wala SORRY if i said anything wrong😭
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _MGArti_

Amazing update😛

Story pace is little fast but i think it is need of the story😃

OMG!!! Meeshti made him agree and Maan becomes so docile in love (Pyar insaan ko kya se kya bana deta hai)😆

Rashmi is not getting boring but pace is bothering me that's why i feel even Maaneet scene is not getting proper space😔

Bada wala SORRY if i said anything wrong😭



no re, I need honest critics & m glau u spoke ur mind out😳. Everything vil be properly set aftr next update!😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _Rashmi




i think tomorrow!

is the story getting boring?

eagerly waiting yar.
boring?Nooo not atall yar..loved this story a lot😃
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Posted: 12 years ago




(Shruthe love you for the banner🤗)


Thanks to all fr ur lovely likes & comments😳





Forty Three






"Babaji...I know it's very much impossible but...I want to be with Maan right now..."

And at that precise moment, there was a soft yet firm knock on her room door...Her heart skipped violent beats, knowing who it was...

"N-Nahi Geet...aise kaise ho sakta hai...how can Maan be here, hai na...?" She assured herself & gingerly opened the door to find no one. She grew a bit sad.

"Jhalli kahin ki! See, you were dreaming...Maan is not there...Now go to sleep, it's very late."

She blushed when her phone rang. But she was shocked, hearing him speak.

"But...M-Maan...woh...Daarji...main...kaise---"

"We are going for a night walk. Come downstairs." His voice was firm.

"But...why do you want to go...for a night walk with me?" she purred shyly.

"Aree don't you know, a walk after dinner helps to digest food properly!" he said with mischief!

Geet frowned.

"Inka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!!!...I thought he will say something romantic par nahi'.he cares about his digestion process!!!!!"

"Bring a jacket/shawl with you as it's little cold outside because I am not going to lend you my coat." Maan smirked hearing her angry blabbers.

She frowned harder.

So Maan was waiting for her outside her bungalow & he had a firm belief that she would come even after their not-so-good phone convo. And true enough! He saw her running towards him! He welcomed her in his arms & they hugged tightly! He kissed her shoulders with fervor & she was feeling him to her heart's content.

"You hate showbiz... still you're okay with me learning ad films?"


"Kya karoon Mishty, Aaashiq hoon tumhara." He caressed her hair lovingly. "Aur waise bhi, I will get to play a lot of pranks on you while you do this course."

His mischief words made her frown & they parted.

"Chaddo!! Mujhe aapse baat hi nahi karni!! I'm not coming for a walk with you!!"

She prepared to leave but he held her hand &approached her from behind.

"Don't go na..." he crooned huskily in her ears & her breaths turned rigorous feeling his torso against her back. "because a night walk is really good for health!"

"He will never say anything romantic!!!!"

She stood there with crossed arms, pouting angrily while he smirked.

"Aree jab tu bhadakti hai, dil pe chale goliyaaan!"

The manner in which he hummed the line in her ears made her blush!

They went to Marine Drive (South Mumbai). The air was very pleasant & refreshing well suited for a romantic walk on the beautiful boulevard. Geet held his arm & both of them walked.

"Is your Daarji a huge fan of Sherlock Holmes?"

"Nahi toh! I never saw him with a magnifying glass!"

"No because he always has a gut feeling that I'm after you & I guess he is okay with it!"

She giggled shyly. Maan smirked recollecting the dozen times he tricked Daarji.

"Achcha tell me one thing, how will you do two courses together?" he asked mischievously.

"I don't know...but I will surely do it."

"Don't worry! I will always be there to trouble you!" he said roguishly which made her frown!

"Aap toh rehne hi dijiye!!!!" she walked ahead of him, "Babaji...maine aapse kaha tha na to remove prank wala clause from the contract, but you didn't listen to me...Geet, you seriously need to do a course that will teach you how to deal with his mischief'.because Babaji is always on Maan's side, hai na?..."

As usual, she was going on & on & on ranting. Maan followed her ardently.

"Don't keep on talking to yourself. Talk to me also!"

"Main apni favourite hoon, samjhe aap?" she snapped.

And he pulled her towards him with force. She shrieked with his rugged hot breath fell on her face & his hands circled her waist, yanking her closer. Their eyes locked. Her nerves shivered as he fixed her lose strands behind her ears...

"Remain your favourite always to cross every hurdle in life."

His words echoed in his mind, affecting her. His eyes were sharply piercing into hers.

"Well, I think I will be generous enough to help you out with share market (finance) studies."

"You will?" her hazels were delighted.


"Yeah because if I do that I will get to sip coffee with you." His voice was husky.

Dreamy-eyed, She slowly moved her hand to hold his face & drop a soft peck on his cheeks. The feel of her lips was enough to heighten his passion to a new level.

They sat inside his car & he locked his lips with hers. He nibbled her lips desirously while she struggled to strike a balance between her moans & gasps of breathlessness. They canoodled for a while after which he reluctantly dropped her home!

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Narration by Geet

To tell you the truth, our relationship hasn't changed a bit. Maan's romantic dialogues always end in a mischievous note which makes me frown everytime but at the end of it, I want us to be that way itself! And I'm glad Babaji has designed our love in that manner. He will never held me straight forward, he has his own crooked ways which leaves me in a fix whether to be annoyed with him or encourage his mischiefs! Maan bhi na!Uff!.

Soon my film course commenced & I was surprised discovering that my batch mates were not that funky as I had thought. Achcha hai, hamein kaunsa camera ke saamne dramebaazi karni hai, hai na? But mind it! Doing two courses at a time was not a fairy walk at all. First we were taught the basics of film direction as in theory. At first, it was a bit boring, but very soon I began to love it. We were taught about camera lenses, camera angles, lights, formatting of scripts & other technical aspects. And we were also taught about human body language. I found it so interesting that I just called up Maan to tell him.

"Maan! Do you know there are 1000 different human postures & expressions?!" I chirped.


"And do you know which two expressions are you expert in?"

His husky voice still sky rockets my heart beats.

"Hmm..." I was already blushing!

"Your frowns & angry pouts make my day!"

His roguish voice made me frown! Babaji, Maan is just impossible!!!!!

"Chaddo!! I don't want to talk to you!!!"

Even though I was angry that time, but then later on, I blushed! he he!

As far as finance studies were concerned, I wasn't able to attend lectures. So Annie supplied me with all the notes & explanations but she taunted me in return! As if that was something new! Gosh! She was hell bent on making me enter Top 10 so that I get to go to Singapore so that she could continue taunting me there!! I mean..Excuse me???But nevertheless, in a way she was helping to fulfill Daarji's & Papa's dream.

So basically, my days were very very hectic. The whole day kept me busy in ad films & I got evening & nights for academics. Maan helped me in that but not without his pranks!!Babaji, save meee!!! Atleast once you can take my side & not his!

At times, the atmosphere used to turn very serious when I took a hell lot of time to understand concepts on phone! And Maan used to get very irritated explaining it to me crores of times as it tested his patience & he shouted at me! And then I used to not talk to him & show my puffed & angry face & then he was back to manaofying me! Blush Blush!

All in all it was very much tiring but I was happy that I'm dong something that interested me. Papa & Daarji stuck to their guns & were still against my doing film course. Maan urged me to try & speak to them openly as if I was good at it! Though they did not show or say anything, I could make out they were very upset...Mamma was supportive. She saw to it I didn't compromise with my health. Frankly, even she didn't like my doing ad films. All these facts sometimes bugged me & made me to think whether I am doing anything wrong...I irritated Maan with my cribbing but he was, by this time, very experienced in handling my low confidence bouts.

"Dare you leave the film course!!!" he exclaimed dramatically, "You promised me that you will launch me in Close-up toothpaste ad opposite a sexy heroine!!!!"

Hwww!!! When did I make such a promise!!!! My nose turned red hot with anger hearing his mischievous voice but that was his special way of encouraging me & the worst part, I indeed get motivated!!

So in this way, days flew by & so did the months. Soon my family went back to Chandigarh & I shifted back to my hostel. I went to the air-port to see them off. They did not say much except to take care of myself. I actually had tears in my eyes but I controlled it. I firmly decided I will not disappoint them of whatever little faith they have in me...I will fulfill both mine & their dreams, come what may!

One fine day, there was a notice in college which attracted my keen attention. There was soon gonna be an inter-college ad film festival & best three ads will be chosen from St Mark to compete with other colleges. I saw my opportunity & was elated! But...sawaal yeh uthta hai, which ad should I make? Panteen shampoo or Samsung Galaxy Tab...sochna padhega!

End Of Narration


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Edited by _Rashmi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: _Rashmi




i think tomorrow!

is the story getting boring?

r u joking??
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Posted: 12 years ago

jab tum badkti ho dil pe chale goliean...lov maans style

daarji ne to sherlok ko peeshe shor dia hein😉,i lov my mneet bt in dis stry alwys eger 4 maan daarji encountr nd watng 4 maan manofying daarji session.
remain ur fvrt 2 cross evry hurdle in life...like maans encrgmnt in tsng way.rshmi again a rocking prt making me desperate 4 mr.tumhara kasur hein aisa likhne ke liye.aaj aur milega kya??😆
waise me dreming maan in closeup ad...😳😉😆
Edited by LILY111144 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
This part was excellent and i really enjoyed Maaneet scenes😳 Thanx Rashmi🤗

OMG!!! Maan's style to romance with his Meeshti is too☺️ He understands her more then herself😃

Meeshti always expect some typical romance and he always come up with his ever unique antics

Rolf!!! Maan in close up ad and i am imagining him in this ad but after that Geet will definitly wash his teeth with washing powder😆

cant wait for next part
Edited by _MGArti_ - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update

poor geet kitni stress leti hain but maan is there with her
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
geet trying her best to do good in the two courses.
waiting for the next part
Edited by valli30 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update. geet is sad but maan hai na uss ko lift up karne k liye. maan is always there for u so chill baby

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