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AroraN thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Good start😃
Do continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
omg!!luved it..plzzz continue.. awesome..plz continue..👏..hope aisa hi ho.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13

FACE OFF(LAST PART)

It had been a week now ,Madhu was back in the chawl with her mom and Didu hovering like mother cats..."so annoying"...she thought back to what had happend ,she regained consciousness and was picked up in the most delicate manner ever and had been brought back to the chawl... Both had stayed num throughout the journey...He avoided looking into her eyes directly... and was too lost

Now it had been two days and he was missing...no one knew where he was and hoe he was...his mobile was at home..one car missing as he took...no one had seen when ,where,how he left but he had totally disappeared...

On the third day she recived a letter...with no from address ...she opened it to read the contents

Madhu;

I dont think i have the right anymore to even call you...only when i utter your name does it give me a small will to live...You may wonder why i wrote to you of all...wasn't i supposed to hate you to the core for the four.no five slaps you gave me?I wish i could but it is not even possible...I wish I had seen you in pain earlier...probably would have realized my love for you...not realize I mean i already loved you but was unaware of the extent to which you held my life...and now that i do i really wish i had the watch of Mr .India ...Sorry as some one says is not the end of anything but the start of commiting more mistakes especially with your loved ones...I have always taken you for granted...but hum aapno si he apna haq dilwa sakta hai...U were mine no matter what but now if this is what is the reasons for all your pain then lets not have it...Just know this Madhu it kills me to even think of letting you go...but if this is what is good for you...I am ready to let you go because you deserve the best...and i am definately not the best...I would have one last wish to ask the almighty...keep yourself happy... If you can remember me...but in case it hurts forget me...

From one who can love only you...

the biggest fool

RK...(Wrong Kameena)

Madhu had tears in her eyes coming down as a waterfall when she felt something cold at the end of the letter...Her eyes widend in fear as she saw blood drops on the letter... She immediatly started running down ignoring her mother's calls ...Sultan's call evrything as she ran for her life...

He sat there looking at the clouds in the sky as the sun began setting and the various shades of orange,yellow,blue began to play with each other''''

He looked at the blood tripling from his thumb...he tried his best to stop it as it was his Madhu's blood and it was to precious''.

His hand was suddenly snatched with a great force and to his real shock saw Madhu who was busy sucking his blood with her mouth''..

No words were needed as their eyes spoke it all'''.anger, apology, happiness, agony and of all love, the most beautiful feeling in their hearts which united them now'''...

Even as Madhu looked at him ,Rk swiftly picked her up and began carrying her to a familiar room''As he laid her down and was about to kiss her, a voice interrupted them

"OYE RAJESH KUMAR"'''''''''''

The sound of giggles filled the night sky''''''..

THE END

A last part was never intended but gave it my best hope its upto ur expectations...
Edited by smritiz - 12 years ago
saijahnavi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
really awsome update...
i luved it..👏
atlast madhu forgiven him 😊

thank u so much for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Awesome yaar...loved this part...especially the last few lines...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Love it
😊
Nice update 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Nice end... Loved it...!
Thanx for the PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Beautiful Update 😳
RoshiniManeet thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Awesome👏
Edited by RoshiniManeet - 12 years ago
Meenah thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
awesome
love rajesh kumar😆

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