smritiz thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I was feeling very frustrated with RK 's attitude and so decided to vent it all out...


THE FACE OFF

The back drop is where Rk drags back Madhu to Rk mansion after holi...he forces her to stay with him and does not allow her to talk to aryan or even her own mother...This is Madhu's reaction to him...


Sikky and Deepali got up in shock ,so did Radhaji seeing RK carrying a yelling Madhu in his arms...
Madhu-"Put me down RK now what the hell do you think you are doing...?"
RK-"What the hell were u doing with that Sultan ?How dare he touch you? U are mine dammit..."
Madhu-"YOURS? .have you forgotten that we have no more relation between us?"

Rk-"You listen here Madhu,no matter what you are mine and you are going to stay here as my wife from now on"...Saying he turned to walk away
Madhu-"You mean stay as your wife or should i say your mistress..."

Rk froze in his tracks and looked at her with a shock etched on his face...
Madhu-"It is fine with me because i dont think it makes any difference as u let me go one time and pick me up another time...I am just a doll to you amn't I?But you listen to me I would love to belong to anyone other than you ,that is because not everyone would be like you right...You say millions of people love you right ,that is because they do not know the real you...this unfeeling,dead,unwothy RK for real...do they?"
Rk tried to talk but Madhu continued...
M-"You know RK you were right You do not have a heart ...even if u did you would remain the same...I really wish I died in the hands of my so called father rather than being saved by you..."Rk felt a huge slap on his heart and tears began clouding his eyes...
M-"I ..I wish I never lived to this..." Madhu was panting badly and all sweaty as she spoke...she clutched her head as it began to spin and darkness she once feared began clouding her and she fell to the floor...
"Madhu" many voices shouted for her which broke Rk's reprive. He rushed towards her only to be pushed back by Radhaji...

Hours later as Rk watched Madhu's unconcious form in the bed ...He sat there looking at the empty space when he felt a hand on him.. he looked up to see his Maa ...she sat near him and rufulled his hairs as he laid his head on her lap...
Radhaji-"you know you were 5 when you got a gold medal in the 200 m rellay your dad was very proud... He reached the sky when you gave the money you got as scholarship to a poor student a few years later...But today hw would be really hurt to see you like this ... IT is my fault ...I should have never married at all...I guess my thought process was wrong...All i wanted to give was a father's love to you "
RK-"Maa ..."
R-"Nahin Rishu I am the only one to be blamed for this state of Madhu...I have crushed a beuatiful flower like her and this guilt will never leave me..."

Radha got up to leave saying this and walked away with a heavy heart...
Rk turned to look at deepali who stood near the door but as his eyes meet hers she turned to walk away as if she felt disgusted...talking away the arrogant and superstar Rk with her...He stood as Rishab and only that ...


so anyone wants a cont do let me know
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.Shree. thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice..😊
plz continue
MrsSSO thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Nice !
I was also thinking of him taking her to his mansion yesterday after watching the precap 😆
And do continue soon ...
Will love to read it !
Thanks for the PM !

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Posted: 12 years ago
#4
it was too good ... pls continue... update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Awesome chapter! Please continue! 😊
charu.smrithi thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
nice one powerful lines...👏 especially d mistress prt nd radha's lines👏

cont soon
saijahnavi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#7
plz continue soon.luking for ur next update eagerly...
thanks for pm.😊
Vsoujanya thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
A countinuation would be nice. Its great so far. Liked madhus reaction.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the start...
awesome work...
n yesss u should continue...
m waiting to read moreee.
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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DO CONTINUE
IT WAS GREAT
RK IS REPENTING

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