abhiya os.. come home to me.updated last part pg6

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Sh_Abhiya

@Sh_Abhiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

great update
sid capture mathali in silver chain all time & torture him feeling bad fr mathali but atlast she save abhay from sid & give her life for abhay
good to see abhiya daughter name is mathali ,she is naughty just like abhay
thanks for pm me

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

wow great ending to an amazing story
i really hope u are going to do some ff or os again i would love to read them
thanks for the pm

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BabyHimavari

@BabyHimavari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

beautiful eding samba dr.kya story hain!!darun!!sorry,i'm in hurry .so inshort just amazing!!😊

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Kakoli

@MistiAbhiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

wowww superb...lovely imagine ..I never imagine Mathili as a good vampire but here really ur imagination touched my heart...lovely😊

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: koli97
wowww superb...lovely imagine ..I never imagine Mathili as a good vampire but here really ur imagination touched my heart...lovely😊

thnk u

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

woooh sam u surprised us... omg itna bada twist sid ki entry kara ka tumne story ka direction hi change kar diya... its too too... short of word but u mesmerised me with ur skill... nice update...

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

great update
so maithili is not evil that was sid
sid and abhay fighting scene too gud
awww baby girl so sweet
lovely story

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kirti

@Andromeda001

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Beautiful update n ending. Finally Abhiya united n had a baby too. So sweet! They named her Maithili. Maithili was sorry 4 her sins, dat was her greatest deed.

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Sona (Samwllms)

@AVELINA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987
Beautiful update n ending. Finally Abhiya united n had a baby too. So sweet! They named her Maithili. Maithili was sorry 4 her sins, dat was her greatest deed.

yeah...i thought about giving metz a good side at ending...i dnt like her bad side...she was a very kind princess in human life...i liked her human self