poem on shiv gauri feelings

hi sweeties

i just write a poem and i guess it some how sumerize gauri's feelings for shiv dont u think the same !😳

Wo ik baat teri dil pe kuch essa aser kergai

Mujey jitni thi nafrat tujh se us ko zayal ker gai

No socha main ne agye ho ga kiya

bas ik tamna dil main hai

tujh se keh sakoon ik bar

nahi koi armaan ab dil main hai

jo khawab they poorey howey

jo manzil thi wo mil gai

ab tu ashna mehfil main hai

tumhey dekh ker main sochti hoon

insaan ya phir koi farishta nazar main hai

teri her ik baat ka dhang kuch ajab sa hai

kabhi tanhai kabhi mehfil sa hai

kahin aag kahin pe pani hai

daastaan kabhi nasar main tu kabhi ghazal main hai

tum insaan kis kisam ke ho

sab se alag kyun lagtey ho

kabhi tanha kabhi mehfil se ho !

if some one's urdu is damn good plz forgve m not very good in that 😕

amna😳

Its beautiful ! Really... very beautiful... aapki urdu tho bahut acchi Aamna...
Jus one query... what is the meaning of zayal ? or is it ghaayal?
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zayal means ...waste hona ..here its mean ....that ur good habits .......make me forget or waste thoes bad feelings abt u

Very well written.. 👏 It's too good..

Originally posted by: cute_face86

zayal means ...waste hona ..here its mean ....that ur good habits .......make me forget or waste thoes bad feelings abt u

Hey, thanks for explaining the meaning..I was about to ask the same thing..😊

haiiiiiiiiiii kya baat hai amna.... 😳 👏

Hey thank you Amna for letting us know the meaning. Chalo ek aur word added to my urdu vocab.... Hmmmm.....
Zayal... must remember that one.... 😊

Awwright, now one request from me, keep those poems coming in, they are a pleasure to read! Really.... 😊

wow very sweet poem keep it up nice working 👏

Love Leena 😊

WOW!

beautiful.. made my eyes moisT! 😭

it was wonderful!

please do keep on writing beautiful poetry!

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