Kasamh se fan-fiction FINAL PART PG 33 - Page 17

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Posted: 18 years ago
I won't post anymore parts....please read my new fanfic chupke se My fanfic.
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Posted: 18 years ago
it's running better than this one....
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Posted: 18 years ago
o00h i c ..no probzz..
will read that as well..
thnksxx babee.. 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
Final Part!!!!!!!


Ok here it goes........


After 5 years....

Bani is living alone in a house... Then a girl runs towards her, she screams "Mama!!!" Bani hugs her and says, "Krishna... Today is your Bday, you will turn 4!"

Then someone knocks the door... Bani opens the door! And is shocked to see Jai, after 5 years!!!! Bani closes the door, she is thinking, How did he remember me, after 5 years.... I don't have anything to talk to him!

Then Jai forcefully opens the door... He hugs Bani.... Both are lost in each other...

Then the girl, Krishna runs and screams "Mama!!!" Jai is shocked, He moves away from Bani and says "Kya Bani???? You have a child...???"

Then Jai says "So you have moved on.... Where is your husband???" Bani says "No!!! I don't have a husband, I never moved on after we broke up...." Jai realises that the child is his....

He screams "Bani, is this my child???" Bani says "Yes!!!" They hug and Jai says to Krishna... "Come here my child... Main tumhara papa hoon..."

They all hug when Bani asks... "But Roshni????" Jai says "Ohh!!! Don't remind me of her!!! It was all a lie, I wasn't the father of her child!!! She just wanted to create problems between us, I came to know about it just few weeks ago, when I read her diary!!! But we never were like a husband and wife... She just sometimes came to our house..."

Bani feels relieved, and hugs Jai!!! Jai then shows a ring, he asks "Bani, will you marry me, again????" Bani is feeling so happy, and screams "Yes!!!" All three hug!


THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 👏 awwu ending it???? that was nice!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Why are you ending it so suddenly?

-Rimpy
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Posted: 18 years ago
Can I ask why for the sudden ending???
Anyway, it least it ended on a happy note.
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
SORRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just noticed that I have too many FFs so ended 3 FFs today, with a sudden ending, but please read my other FFs!!!!!!!! 😃


Mujhe maaf kardo dooston! 😉

Take care

luv, kritu! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
finally caught up with it wooow at cna a say its just GREAT 😊 👏

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