Kasamh se fan-fiction FINAL PART PG 33

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All characters, places events depicted in this fanfiction are purely fictitious and resemblance to the living or dead is purely co-incidental. 😆LOL don't be angry to find your name in this fanfiction...

Dining hall:

Rano is eating breakfast with everyone, Sahil is late for breakfast... The only place empty is near Rano. Rano is angry when Sahil sits near her, she says "Thank you for the breakfast Bani didi, now I have to go to my college." Sahil says "I am not very hungry, i will go to college too." Jigyasa is irritated. Jai the suggests they should go together to college in Jai's car, he is going in the same direction where their college is. Bani gives a small smile.

IN THE CAR:

Jai sit's in the front with Roshni! OMG I HATE HER! She say's " Jai kya tum mujhe shopping ke liye le jaoge?" " But we had a meeting..." " No it is cancelled." "Ok then lets go." Sahil and Rano are uncomfortable that Jai is going to luch with Roshni. Rano says in low voice to Sahil "Mr. Walia Roshniko kaise jaante hain." Sahil feels disturbed. "Mujhe nahin pata, kisiko nahin pata, siwai uncle ko aur Roshni ko." Jai looks from the mirror at Rano. "Rano kal hamare ghar mein ek party hai, aur if you don't mind i would like to buy sari for you and Bani..." "Mr. Walia humein aapka diya huva toofa nahin chahiye, hum apne koi puraana sa sari pehnenge." "But i insist." "Ok mr. Walia." Roshni if in fire of jealousy."

Now they drop Sahil and Rano to college.

SHOP:

"Roshni, i want to buy you a sari ok?" "Yes no problem.." Jai buys her a orange sari. She hates the color and Jai know's it very well. Roshni is angry. Then he goes and buy's Bani a nice black sari. And Rano a light blue.

WALIA HOUSE:

The door ring bells. Bani thinks it is Jai and runs to open the door. It is Jai, and Roshni! She is unhappy that Roshni is with her husband. "Bani maine tumhare liye ek sari kharidke laya." " But Jai sir." Jai insist's her to wear it in the party this evening. And gives her Rano's sari too "When Rano comes, please give this gift to her.

Bani is prepairing everything for the party, then Jai comes... "Ab bas! Tum apne aapko dress up karne jao, yeh sab kaam Tony samhale ga.!" Bani goes to dress up. She likes very much Jai's gift. Then Rano comes, Bani gives her the gift. Rano loves her sari. " Kya Jai sir aapse pyaar karne lag gaye...Aapko gift dena aapse mithi mithi baat karna...." Bani is thinking that is Rano right, no Jai cannot love her.

Jai in the party with everyone and with the bitch Roshni! Then Bani is walking down the stairs... Everyone look at her, she is so beautiful. Jai goes and takes Bani's hand " Main tumko apne guests se milwaunga." Jai is so amazed at Bani's beauty, when Bani is talking to the guests he only stares at her. He is so in love with her.

BEDROOM:

Bani is taking Jai's sleepwear from the closet. Jai comes, " Hope you liked the party, everyone liked you." "Yes! It was a nice party." They go to the bed. Both cannot get sleep. Jai asks her. "Kya tumne kabhi kisise pyaar kiya..." "Haan ek baar, leykin main usko bhula chuki hoon." "Kya pata hai Bani, mujhe pyaar ho gaya." Bani thinks about Roshni. Jai is probhably drunk and says what is in his heart. "Bani, I love you, don't never leave me I need you! I love you. Bani is shoked.!

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Edited by Kritika. - 18 years ago

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Posted: 19 years ago
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bless kritika!! that was fab!!

please continue soon!
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thats excellent... plzz do continue...

luv,
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plz continue yaar!
excellent fanfic!
luv sweetu 😃
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plz continue with this as soon as possible this is great work do keep it up 👏 👏
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really awesome dear
do continue it soon 😃
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omg!!!
wow!!! LOVED it!! please please please cont soon 😳
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PART TWO!

"Yes i love you Bani!" Bani is mum... Then Jai falls asleep...Bani starts crying "Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai, kya Jai mujhe pyaar karte hain, ya did he mean that he loves Pia. Aur Roshni???Jai ka Roshni se kya rishta hai?" She goes to bed. But she can't get any sleep.

MORNING IN DINING ROOM:

"Bani didi, kya Jai sir office ja chuke hain?" "Nahin woh abhi bhi soraha hai." "Toh aaj mujhe Sahil ke saath jana hoga." "Ofcourse Rano, I will take you to the college." Everyone keep eating. Then Rano and Sahil go to the college, soon everyone besides Bani has gone.

Bani hears footsteps, it is Jai. Jai doesen't look very happy,Bani does her head down... "Bani, why are u here still..." "Hun aapka intezaar kar rehe the, aapka fauvorite dish pakaya hain Maine...Hope you like it!" Jai eats the breakfast silently. Bani thinks that Jai has forgotten the thing that he said yesturday... When Bani is getting up from the table, Jai takes her hand... "Kal jo hua use tum bhooljao..." Bani cries and goes to her room, she starts pakking... She is going to leave the house and Jai is little unhappy. Just when Bani is stepping out of the house she remembers her wedding...The memories try to stop her, but she goes...Then someone catches her hand...


WHO CAN IT BE?=
Edited by Kritika. - 19 years ago
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aww dame good dear 👏 👏
plzz do let us know who he/she is gonna hold bani's hand 😕
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I will let you know soon! HOPE U CAN WAIT!

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