My FanFic: Prt 34-pg 12 - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31
gr8 stuff!!! KT iz bak... cont soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
wow KT is still alive...awsum cntinu sn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 28

K.T:Papa
Prem:Tum Kaise?
K.T:some how when i gave me blood to mama i went into coma.T was in come for 4 months i just got better but they said that they told u i died so how could i come back.
Prem:OMG! they also lied to us
K.T:What?
Prem:come home ill tell u everything

Bajaj House

Prem:Maa, dekho kaun aya hai
Prerna comes down stairs:OMG Krishna Tulsi tu wapas agayi
K.T:haan Dadi
Prerna:Lekin Kaise?
K.T:mein apko baad mein baatha deti hoon.Lekin pehle mujhe bathao ke voh Mama ke bare mein.
Prerna:tells K.T.everything about Mukti and the doctor
K.T:OMG yeh kaise hua Mama kahan hai?
Prerna:voh so rahi hain
K.T:oh
Prem:K.T. aao so jao

Prem and K.T. walk back to K.T's room.

Prem:tumhara kamra vaise hi hai jaise tumne use choda tha
K.T:awwww dad(she hugs him)
Prem:ok ab jao so jao.
K.T:ok bye...i mean goodnight.

Next Morning

Mukti had such a great sleep but didn't know why she was soo happy. She went to take a shower and came out in a red sari. She felt something pulling her to go back to K.T's room so she went there. She saw the bed messed as if someone had slept in it. Then someone came out of the bathroom.

Mukti:OMG K.T.
K.T:Mama
K.T and Mukti hug
Mukti:meri beti...tumhe nahi pata...ek minute tu wapas kaise ayi?
K.T. tells Mukti the whole story about the coma
Mukti:OMG toh tu zinda thi
K.T:haan Ma
Mukti:aaj ke baad tu kahin nahi jaogi theek hai
K.T:ok mama

That AfterNoon:

K.T:hey bro hey sis
Manoj:kiran did u just hear K.T di's voice
Kiran:yea but how?
K.T:hello
Manoj and Kiran:OMG K.T di ur alive?
K.T:yea
Manoj and Kiran:how?
K.T:how? again...ok hold on...everyone come here dadi,Aunty...Mama Papa..aur mere pyaare Bhai Behen aya yahan
Everyone whats wrong?
K.T: im going to tell everyonewhat had happened to me(she tell everyone what happened to her during these 4 months)

then Manoj and Kiran both run upto K.T. and hug her. They r crying like crazy saying "Di u came back yeah"
Prem and Mukti smile.
K.T. lets go of Manoj and Kiran and goes and hugs Prem and Mukti.

Kasak:okay no more hugging lets have a paryty
Prem:okay

Party

Everybody's there Reporters, Buisness Men, alot of other people and the Basu Family

We see Mukti come down in this

Her hair is tied up in a Bun..She is looking Stuning. Mukti goes up to K.T. K.T is wearing


Kiran:Mom ive put Jasper out now what do i wear?
Mukit:yeh lo(she gives a package to kiran)
Kiran:OMG WOW!mein yeh abhi pehen ke athi hoon

now we see Kiran come down in


Then we see Father-Son come down dressed in a sherwani


thats were ill end it today buhbye hpe u liked it
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34
good update i likke it!!! plz continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
awww so sweat! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 29

Mukti goes up to Prem

Mukti(looks around):K.T. i cant seem to find ur dad can u see him?
K.T:no i cant
Prem:stop koing around
Mukti:ur looking good
Prem:mope im looking hot but my wife does not seem hot today
Mukti:WHAT?
Prem opens her Hair:now you look hot!!
Mukti:Premmm
Prem:Muktiiii
Perena:Premmmmm
Prem:Muktiii
Mukti:meine nahi Choti Maa Tumhe bola rahi hain
Prem:OMG

Prem:yess Maa
Prerna:Inse millo Mr.Kelly O'Conner.
Prem:(thinks):Kelly O'conner hahahaha
Prerna:kuch bola?
Prem:Nahi Toh...
Kelly:Hi im Kelly
Prem:Hi im Prem

(Kelly is Played by Johnny Depp)(LOL)

Prem:Soo why have u come here?
Kelly:for a buisness meeting.
Prem:ok u go and have ur meeting ill brb.
Kelly:o...k

Prem runs towards to Mukti laughing

Kelly:Weird Man hes laughing and running towards a girl

Prem:guess what?
Mukti:What?
Prem:that man over there his name is....hehehehehehe....his name is Kelly O'Conner
Mukti:Prem dont laugh soo hard u'll hurt his feelings
Prem:okay

thats were ill end it today ill update tom or the next day hope u enjoyed it buhbye


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Posted: 18 years ago
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haha prem is too much! what is so funny about kelly o'conner? beacuse kelly is a girls name 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
hahaah..LIL premmmmmmm 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
gr8 stuff!!!!! plz cont soon!!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 30

Mukti:ok Prem ill be right back
Prem:okay

Mukti goes to her room and goes to the bathroom

Kelly is talking on the phone with someone

Kelly:yes i know what i have to do stop phoning or ill get caught
Person:but remember in their bedroom ok
Kelly:yes...yes i know bye
Person:Bye

Kelly goes upstairs with a bottle of oil and goes up to PM's bedroom he throws it all over and the takes out matches and sets the room on fire

everyone thatwas upstairs runs down stairs yelling:FIRE FIRE FIRE

Kelly goes to Prem

Kelly:Prem...Prem theres a fire in ur room
Prem:WHAT is neone in there?
Kelly:yes i saw that lady the was with u go there
Prem:WHAT Mukti

Prem runs upstairs yelling:MUKTI
Mukti hears his voice and looks at the bathroom door and there was fire there:omg PREM PREM BACHAO
Prem:MUKTI

there goes to the bedroomand that dor also has fire there. Prem breaks down the door and comes in there was fire on the bed and all over the ground in there room and soon Kelly put more oil out side the room and in the living room the fire had gotten huge!

Prem also breaks down the bathroom door and Mukti runs out and hugs him cring

Mukti:Prem mujhe bohot dar lag raha tha
Prem:daro math ab main hoon na
Mukti:voh theek hai Prem ab hum yahan se bahar kaise jainge?
Prem:kya matlab?
Mukti:dekho
Prem:OMG ab toh Aag bar gayi
Prem:aao
Mukti follows him downstiars
Prem:aao hum..
just then something falls from the roof
Mukti screams
Prem:Mukti its ok Main Hoon Na
Mukti:phir bhi mujhe dar lag raha hai
Prem and Mukti hold hands and people r running around when one person bumps into Mukti
Mukti screams
Prem:hey cant u look where ur going
Prem:Mukti r u okay
Mukti:yea
Prem:everybody is outside
Mukti:but how why can we find a way out?
Prem:i dont know
Mukti:Prem over there

Prem and Mukti run there but when they get there, there was fire there
Mukti once agian was feeling a headache
MUkti:Prem phirse sar dar ho raha hai kuch..kuch karo
Prem:tum yahan beto
Mukti:theek hai

Prem leaves and tries to find a way out
While Mukti is just sitting there Kelly comes
Mukti:Kelly go go and help Prem find a way out
Kelly:no Prem can find out himself
Mukti:how can u just stand here
Kelly:i can cause i already know the way out
Mukti:What?
Kelly:yes and im not going to tell u
and kelly leaves
Mukti gets up:KELLY KELLY TELL US WE NEEd TO KNOW HELP U..(once again she had fainted)

Prem:Mukti Mukti tum kahan ho(he couldn't find the way back
hes walking when he trips over something he saw it was Mukti
Prem;Mukti Mukti utho Mukti
Prem picks up mukti but notices the her sari pallo(i dont know how to spell it) was on fire
Prem:OMG
the fire was getting big and also almost getting upto Mukti's arm
Prem tried to get it out but couldn't it had already burnt part off her arm but at that moment a really cold and hard breeze of air had came in and blew the pallo and it fell over Prem's arm
Prem was about to let go of Mukti:but didn't and walked to the door and tried to get out but he couldn't so he tried to break down the door and did and finally got out

Prem lied Mukti down on the ground and shock her but she didn't wake up so he tried to find some water he found some and droped some on Mukti she blinked and the got up
Mukti:Prem
Prem:Mukti
they hug

well thats were ill end today im so soz for the long wait but hope u liked it bye
Edited by Umam_Paracha_13 - 18 years ago

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