My FanFic: Prt 34-pg 12

Recap:Mukti:Choti Maa
Prerna heard this voice and runs down stairs
Prerna:Muktiiiiiiiiii

Part 20

Mukti:choti Maa a..aap..aap to theek hain yaad hai 5 saal pehle
Prerna:Mukti Beta Tu wapas kaab ayi
Mukti hugs Prerna
Mukti:choti maa mere beta ko cancer hai
Prerna:Kya Beta konsa beta(prerna remember prem telling her that mukti was pregnant then left her all alone)
Prerna:uska naam kya hai?
Mukti:twins the lardki aur ladka
Mukti:Kiran aur Manoj
Prerna:Kya mein mil sakti hoon
Mukti:nahi voh hospital mein hain
Prerna:Prem voh kahan hain?
Mukti:prem voh he still does not want to meet with you hum yahan aye to mein yahan
Prerna:Manoj kaisa hain
Mukti:voh...(just then her cell phone rings)..Prem?

Prem:hello Mukti Were are you tell me we have to go see manoj so ill pick u up
Mukti:um...Prem mein bhi vahan ja rahi hoon to tum vahan mere intazaar karo
Prem:theek hai

Prem(thinks):mujhe aise kyon lag raha hain ke Mukti Mujse jhoot bhol rahi hain


Hospital

Prem was waiting for mukti but when he was about to call her again she enters
Prem:Mukti why is ur face so pale?... were u crying?
Mukti:um...noo noo im fine
Prem:okay
Mukti:doctor ne kya kaha?

okay well i have to go hope u liked it

hmmmmmmmmmmm nice...realii nice...do continue soon...its great... and prem's son's name is manoj..lolz... anywayz.... do contiunue soon...

great hun...can i have the link to the first part though 😃

its really good,continue sn!although could i also have the links for the other parts!thanks!!

do contiunue soon...
sirjana 😃

Part 21

Prem:voh kaal uksa operation karengay
Mukti:oh acha Prem hum yahan hain toh hum choti maa se kya mil saktein hein?
Prem remembers calling prerna ma for the first time
Mukti:prem...prem kya hum mil saktein hein?
Prem:nahi tum mil sakti ho lakin mein nahi
Mukti:Prem ek baar to mil choti maa tumhe yaad kar rahi..
Prem:tumhe kaise pata hain ke maa mere yaad kar rahi thi
Mukti just turns around then starts to leave when someone grabs her it was Prerna.

5 YEAR LEAP(lol)(hehehehe)

Prem:Maa Aap Kahan Hein Mujhe Kaam Kilye Thayaar hona hain
Prerna:Prem beta mukti ek hafte kilye chaali gai aur tum apne adat ko tod nahi sakte
Prem:maa ab mein kya kahoon Mukti ki adat jo pargayi
Prerna laughs acha mein tumhara kana banathi hoon aur tu bacho ko utao
Prem:okay

Prem yells at the children to wake up:MANOJ, KIRAN, K.T, WAKE UP TIME FOR SCHOOL
K.T: dad im already awake unlike those to losers
Prem:ur my good girl
K.T:dad im not 5 ne more im 16
then a boy comes out looks like hes 10 he has ear peirces and his hair is all messed up from the night befor
Prem:Manoj go wake up ur sister...OMG jasper what r u doing(if u dont remember jasper he's there dog)

We see jasper peeing in a vase

Manoj and K.T.:ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Kiran:papa whats going on
Prem:Everybody get ready for school

1 hour later

Prem:soo ready
now we hear something like a roar coming from the back of the car going like YES

hope u liked it ill continue soon if people liked it

lol great update... 😆 i just realised...i love doing leaps... 😆

lol.... like wat jasper did!!!! cont soon!!!! 👏

dont plz it make me feel that it is gonna be truu lol continu very soon

lol 😆 her sons boys name is manoj lol funny 😳