My FanFic: Prt 34-pg 12 - Page 7

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Its gr8t update soon plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks for the commments i well update soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 34

P+M go to a Coffe Shop

Prem:kya logi?
Mukti:chai Prem:okay ill go order
Mukti:okay
Prem:mein abhi aya

Mukti is waiting and waiting until she hears some Guys barg into the Coffe shop

Guy:ladki ko doondo
Guy2:eh(he points at Mukti)idhar ao
Mukti just sits there
The Guy run to Mukti and grabs her and takes her outside

Restraunt

Prem:yeh lo tumhari...Mukti?
Prem goes to a Guy
Prem:excuse me but did u c my wife?
The guy looks at Prem weirdly:no i haven't but some guys just took a girl out side.
Prem:ok my god thank u

Prem runs out side and c's the guys keep pulling her into a truck

Guy:eh tum kahan thi hum tumhe doond doond ke thak gaye
Mukti:tum log kaun ho
Guy:tumhari mtlab tum voh ladki nahi ho?
Mukti:nahi
Guy:ise humari sachai patha chal gayi
Guy2: goli maro
The guy takes out a gun

Prem:MUKTI!!!
Mukti:Prem!

When the guy shoots the gun Mukti had already ran to Prem

Mukti:Prem(she hugs him)
Mukti:mujhe bohot dar laga tha
Prem:dont worry mein hoon na
Mukti just keeps hugging him

Guy:eh ladki idhar aa
Mukti:nahi
Guy:jao use yahan lao
Guy2:ok

The guy goes running to them
and starts grabbing Mukti's hand but Prem stops them
Prem:khabar dar tumne Mukti ko haath lagaya 😡
Guy:tu kya karega?
Prem:mein tumhare haath per thod dunga
Guy:kya?...agar meine yeh kiya to?(she grabs Mukti's hand)

Prem punches the Guy in the Face
Guy:u.....u...punched me..,.why u 😡

He runs after Prem. Prem c's a bat on the ground and picks it up. The Guy also c's a bat and The Guy and Prem start a fight

Mukti:PREM PREM ROKO PREM(she runs to were they r fighting)

Prem smacks the bat right in the guys face. The Guy get super madand he calls all the gunde there. Prem runs and grabs Mukti's hand and runs.

P+M get far enough but just as the get farther the guys get closer.

Prem stops andtells Mukti to go and hide in the trees that r around

Prem comes out and c's the gunde right in front of him.
They start punching him and kicking him. They also have chains and start whipping him(poor Prem 😭 😭 )

Mukti:PREM.....PREM

Mukti runs out and goes for him
Guy:eh rokh tune bhi mar khani hai?
Muktiplzzz mere Prem ko nahi marye isne kya kiya ke tum..
Guy:eh rona baandh kar varna...he puts his hand up to punch her when someones bloody hand stops him.
We c its Prem

Mukti:Prem tumhara haath...OMG
Prem:Mukti ko nahi maro jo kuch bhi karna hai mere saath
hoga.
Guy:tu toh marne wale the
Prem:nahi mein thab hi maroonga jab...(he falls unconcous)
Mukti drops down beside him
Mukti:Prem... Prem utho PREM

it starts raining and the guys just leave.
Mukti takes Prem to a shelter and gets him warm.
It's late night and Mukti can't fall asleep.
She was awake all night.

Next Day

Prem was moving
Mukti:Prem PREM
Prem coughs a little and slowly opens his eyes.
Prem:Mukti
Mukti hugs Prem:Prem tum theek ho...thank god
Mukti:tumhara haath dekhao
Prem shows Mukti his hand.
Mukti:OMG ur still bleeding...ek minute

Mukti tears some cloth off of her sari and ties it on Prems hand.

Prem:Mukti tumhe toh kuch nahi hua
Mukti:nahi
Prem:ao hum ghar chalte hain

Mukti gets up but goes down again and holds her stomach.

Mukti:ah
Prem:Mukti?
Mukti:prem dard
Prem:ah ok ek minute
Mukti;ah
Prem:dont worry...idhar ao

Prem picks Mukti up and takes her to the hospital


thats were ill eb ending my fan fic today

Love, Umam
Edited by Umam_Paracha_13 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#64
thats really good plz update soon
😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
it was AWSOME
plz continue soon
Love
Aisha
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Posted: 18 years ago
#66
Hey Umam! I just started to read your fanfic 😃 ( i did'nt even know you wrote one , should have told me! 😭 ) and it's AWESOME! i loved it! Continue soon please! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
just started reading and you haven't updated sister. why not?
cont soon

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