SS: I'll stand by you! ~part 13 page 142~

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Guys this is the first part of my story..will continue soon and please give your view on it! as its my 2nd story on virika... Thank you!! Love all my friends for bearing my posts,coz of all lovely comments you give I was motivated to write this...love you all my humbum gang!!!🤗🤗

So here it goes...

I'll stand by you
forever and ever!

Viren gets arrested and in jail! And the whole family is in
the house discussing about what all happened and here goes the story..



Maanvi says the complete story to the family about how and
when she saw viren with riya! Inder asked her if she was trying to tell the
family that Viren was having an affair with riya? Unknown to all,jeevika was
standing behind and was waiting for the answer her beloved sister manvi would
give.


Manvi was all silent. She couldn't get words out of her
mouth. Inder asked,"Manvi does this silence mean,yes?" Manvi,"Who chachu,I don't
know if I am right or wrong but my eyes cant cheat me twice?" "Pehlia mat
bhijao manvi,tum kehna kya chahte ho?""Chachu,who mein mein,'"


Jeevika who was listening to all this got the shock of her
life. Her mannu is accusing her virenji that he had an affair,unable to control
the rage she went to manvi and gave her oone tight slap. And all the vadheras
were shocked. Jeevika spoke," Samaj gayi manvi,sorry devrani tum apni JETJI ke
bare mein kya sochthe ho! Par tumse yeh ummeed nahi that. Ok so you feel my
virenji who doesn't even look at others has an extra marital affair! Bolo
manvi,yehi na,this is what you feel na,tell me!"


Manvi was extremely shocked that her di slapped her,but she
knew she made a grave mistake by not defending her jiju, but kya kare her heart
is not ready to accept the fact that viren was not having an affair! She stood
shocked for a while and spoke up," Di,mujhe galat mat samjho,lekin ek baat
bataiye,how can my eyes cheat me so many times,Ive seen jiju very comfortable
with her and giving roses. Di I wish yeh sab ek galat fayme ho jai par Im
concerned about you di,not anyone else! "


Jeevika,-"Bas manvi bas.I know how concerned you are.Sharam
ani chahiye apni jiju sorry JETJI ke bare mein aisa bol rahe ho. "


Dadaji interfered their conversation and said,"Jeevika this is not the time to get
emotional,as even I feel what manvi and virat have said is true. Even I feel
viren'" Dadaji was unable to complete looking at the shocked face of Jeevika. Jeevika
was badly hurt but composed herself and asked the family,"Aur kis ko lagta
hai,mera pati ko riya ke saath affair chal raha tha?" No one answered and all
fears of jeevika were coming true! She asked them,"so this silence means no one
is ready to believe my virenji,right? She asked in such a tone that everyone
where shocked as they have never seen jeevika in this anger. But that made
dadaji mad, " Yes jeevika,we wont believe that viren has done no crime. I have
not expected such a behavior from him. And yaad rakhna,since we come from a
truthful and loyal lawyer family,no one of this family will support viren!"
Jeevika was shocked and spoke up in anger,"Wah dadaji wah,when you knew virat
killed karan,ok took the blame on himself which you didn't know and believed
that he killed karan,you were ready to bring him out just because virat was
your parivaar. Kya virenji usi parivaar ka hissa nahi hai?" Swamini,"Jeevika
are you out your senses? How dare you speak to bauji like that? When you know
your pati is a criminal.."


Jeevika yelled"Mera pati criminal nahi hai! Samjhe aap log?
Aur mein yeh prove karungi,voh bhi bohat jaldi! Till then I wont step into this
house and she left to her room. Everyone were shocked at jeevika's reaction and
vanshika spoke," I know viren is my beta but a murder from him,im asahamed.he
is no longer my son!" Swamini spoke,"Ha bhabi,aap teek bol rahi hai! " Dadaji
spoke," I am ordering all of you people not to go and meet viren or jeevika no
matter what happens. Aaj ke baad voh iss ghar ka hissa nahi hai.especially you
manvi!" Manvi spoke,"Nahi dadaji aaj ke baad mein apni jethji aur jethani ke bare
mein sochunga nahi,jisko mein bhagwan jaise dekha,woh mujhe tappad mardiya,who bhi
ek criminal ki vajah se,iss liye jaise aap kahe waisa hi karenge hum sab log! "
Jeevika was heartbroken to listen to all of this but was very much determined
to prove all these false accusations on her husband wrong! And hence she packed
her clothes which viren brought from his own money and left the house!



To be continued'.



All the feedbacks are welcomed.well even chappal and
tomatoes! Coz this is my 2nd story on virika,4th in all!
So any comment would be appreciated'

Index:
Part 1- Page 1
Part 2- Page 8
Teaser for Part 3- Page 17
Part 3- Page 18
Teaser for Part 4- Page 26
Part 4- Page 33
Teaser for Part 5- Page 41
Part 5- Page 47
Teaser for Part 6- Page 53
Part 6- Page 62
Teaser for Part 7- Page 67
Part 7- Page 71
Teaser for Part 8- Page 77
Part 8- Page 85
Part 9- Page 92
Part 10-Page 100
Part 11- Page 114
ME teaser for Part 12-Page 123
Part 12- Page 127
Teaser for Part 13- Page 137
Part 13-Page 142
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Res!
UnRes!! I m know its too early but still! 😆
Firstly,let me enjoy my victory for being first for the first time in life! [:D/]
The SS is so interesting,the concept is brilliant.
Every virikians wants to see this jeevika in the show who proves viren innocent without anyone's help.
Amazingly written!
Superb idea!
The dialogues and plot are fab!
Way to go Madhu!
Loved it!!!!!
Update sooon!!!!! 😊
Edited by Sweety1234556 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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UnRes😎


Awesome update madhu👏
good start,such beautifully written.
I just hate all d family members😡 arggg der behaviour is just...
Bt luvd jeevika's confidence n im sure she will bring her virenji back sooon
gr8 work👍🏼
do continue soon n thanx 4 d pm
Edited by Virika-luv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awsome Behna😊
Love Jeevika to see in Such n anger ..
but i think in serial she should reply the family memmbers like this 👏
N manvi
O God ! how can a person be so mean 😡
hate her she blamed my viren 😡
But madhu seriously loved it 👍🏼
Edited by --Amna-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update madhu...1st part & so well written...awesome dear...i luvd this angry & strong jeevs who can get to extent to bring her husband bck 4m that jail...superb...update soon
Edited by amritaluvskryan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good Start Madhu. Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice start. Do conti.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome start Madhu... Keep it up 👏
MADHU.BARUN thumbnail
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Originally posted by: Deepikz

Good Start Madhu. Continue soon<div></div>



Wow deepz thanks a ton yaar!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -GiNa-

awesome start Madhu... Keep it up 👏



Thanks a lot sherry 🤗

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