Ariya FF:Rab ne banaaya jodi-2 Pg 85 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Superb update di!! 😃
I can't stop blushing after reading it! 😳


Arjun is soo romantic in this one! 😳
Maa ka phone hai aur aisi baatein.. šŸ˜‰
Poor Riya šŸ˜† Uski shopping toh reh hi gayi.. šŸ˜†

Waiting for the next part! 😳

Thanks for the pm. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
I loved the drama and emotions... but somehow when u mentioned that u have broken the suspense that Riya's sister was in love with Arjun and Arjun is angry with Sameer... I had guessed that Sameer must hv done this ... but the story built up is good... šŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
so sorry for the late comment😳
the update was superb...!!!
loved how shree was trying to talk with sam to see whats bothering him...!!! glad sam could talk to shree about what he is feeling and wow shree trying to find if reshma is alive or not...!!!
hope they find her soon...!!!
ariya part was lovely...!!!ā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļø hehe arjun kinna naughty hai...!!! koi bahana nai chodta SR manane kašŸ˜Ž
continue soon...!!! eagerly waiting for the next part...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
I'm completely involved in this story... I just had a thought when I read it again...
Shree is Riya's friend so its fine if he calls her sis as Reshu Di... but now when he knows that Sameer has secretly married her... he can call her Reshu Bhabhi now ... isn't it šŸ˜‰ ...
Also, I'm looking forward to Riya - Sameer confrontation ... u haven't mentioned what exactly Shree told Riya... I mean did he tell her that Sameer was held captive by goons and was tortured... he was not in contact with the family too? šŸ˜•
Along with this, I'm curious to know how will Reshu react to the truth Though the man she loved, loved her back... but the it remains the fact that he had kept his real identity, his real name hidden from her.
How will she cope with this when he comes in front of her with his real identity and real name? ... will she keep loving him? Or will she hate him? or will she compromise just for her daughter's happiness... Ashmita is already missing her father... she needs him...She would be definitely happy to meet her father...
Looking at Badi maa's sweet nature, I hope she would happily accept Reshu and Ashmita ... As she would be a dadi to Ashmita šŸ˜‰ ... this would raise her expectations from Arjun - Riya to make her dadi again 😃
Am I thinking too much ? ... šŸ˜Ž
Also, once Reshu is found and with Riya-Arjun and Sameer-Reshu are settled... How Shree gets badi maa to help him get Gouri... I'm sure she would do something there too šŸ˜‰
Edited by bgargate - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
thanks for such a superb comment and analysis...
I was just going to post the next part when i saw this comment...thanks!

yeah Shree will start calling Reshu as bhabhi when she comes back

yes all will settle down pretty soon...šŸ˜‰
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

Hello Ariyans….back with the next part...hope u like it...….

pls excuse errors...

pls read and comment...ur comments are my motivation...

thanks for all the prev comments and likes

Episode 21A: chalte chalte….

Riya escapes his clutches screaming "no way….. Mujhe shopping pe jaana hai..thats final!"

Arjun: tum ladkiyon ka kuch nahi ho saktha…..honeymoon pe bhi shopping….!

Riya: [panting] aapke bas chalet oh aap harr din har pal honeymoon manaayenge….

Arjun: not a bad idea darling! [he jumps across the bed and grabs her hand tightly]

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Finally, Arjun and Riya were out for some sight seeing and shopping……

Hands entwined, they were walking through the green lawn of a huge garden….but they weren't speaking much…..

Arjun was unusually silent and Riya had been noticing it for a while now…..

"Zabardasti sight seeing pe laayi, isiliye naaraaz hai aap?"

Riya slowly spoke up to know what was wrong with him…..

Arjun looked lost and didn't reply to her…so Riya added patting him on his shoulders "aapko accha nahi laga toh waapas chalthe hai…."

Arjun looked at her with a sweet smile "nahi nahi…aisi koyi baat nahi…"

Riya: phir kya baat hai??….aap itni chup kyun ho?

Arjun stopped and turned to her side….He takes her to a nearby bench and settled there for a talk….

He speaks up after a few moments of hesitation "Riya, mujhe tumse kuch serious baatein karni hai….par confused hoom….i don't know what or how to start…..

Riya smiled and replied "mujhse baat karne mein starting trouble, huh???

Arjun smiled and spoke up "kya tum Sam se milne keliye ready ho?"

Riya's calm face shrinked a bit……he could sense her disturbance…maybe she didn't expect this question now…but she spoke up soon "aise kyun pooch rahe hai?? unnone kuch jaan boochke nahi kiya na? Reshu di ke kismat ko hi dhosh deh sakthi hoom…nobody is at fault Arjun…"

Arjun: haan Sam ki galathi nahi thi par phir bhi Reshu tumaari behen hai….aur usske haalath ka zimmedhaar Sam hai…..so usse face karne aur accept karne mein thodi bohat problem hogi na?

Riya silently nods while Arjun continues "tum dono hi mere liye khaas ho Riya…..I don't want both of you to get hurt! Sam ko maine already bohat hurt kiya hai….usse apne life se hi baahar kar diya tha….par ab main sab kuch samajh gaya hoom aur chahtha hoom ke tum bhi usse samjho aur"

Riya: [pressing his hand as if assuring him] aapko kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai….main aisa kuch bhi nahi karungi jisske wajeh se aapke aur unnke beech mein koyi problem ho….aap dono ke dhosti mere wajeh se koyi problem nahi hogi….i wont ask u to choose between us Arjun! Don't worry!

Arjun smiled hearing her words….she had grown up in a matter of few days…the impulsive, childish Riya was gone…..

Riya saw him gazing at her with a smile "kya hua?? aise kya dekh rahe ho?"

Arjun snapped out and patted her cheeks "kuch nahi….bas dekh raha hoom ke tum kitni bathal gayi ho Riya…"

Riya smiled and lowered her gaze….he leaned forward and pecked her forehead "kal subah ke flight book kiya hai…..mumbai waapas chalenge…"

Riya was all excited…..she leaned and rested her head on his hest and corrected him "humaare ghar waapas jaayenge…"

Arjun warmly embraced her and nodded with a smile!

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Mumbai….

Meanwhile, Shree had launched his search using various names….Reshu, Reshma, Shona….

He also created a page on the social networking site which had Sameer asking for apology to the girl of his life and a message pleading her to come back to his life…..

It had the full story without any direct details which would reveal identity….…..especially her name wasn't mentioned so that her privacy wasn't tampered in any way and she wouldn't get offended….

Shree and now even Sameer had high hopes that if she ever happened to read that, she would definitely understand that it's a message for her and she would come back whenever she was ready to accept him back!

A special blog was also created by Shree and he sent invites for followers from all his known domains……He tried his maximum to spread the wings of the message on all directions…..

Now it was only a matter of time when Reshu would chance upon either of this and recognize that Sameer wasn't at fault…..and come back!

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Darjeeling…

Arjun and Riya retire to their room after an early dinner mainly because of their early flight next morning and also the chill climate was making it unbearable for them to stay out till late…..

Riya had done a whole lot for shopping for the entire family…..Arjun's parents, Shree, Shree's parents and she didn't miss Sameer too……

Arjun was happy to see that Riya was trying her maximum to behave casual when it came to matters relating to Sameer…..She had the maturity to take things in the right spirit and Arjun was relieved seeing that…..else it would have been real tough for him choosing between his best friend and his loving wife!

Riya had freshened up first and was repacking her things…..and also trying to fit in her shopping bags into her luggage…..

Arjun couldn't stop laughing seeing her struggles to pack the extra luggage…..he had warned her a lot of times while she was mindlessly shopping…..but she was on a shopping spree and asked him to chill…..She had told him that her mantra was "Shop till you drop dead!"

And that's exactly what she did too…..she hadn't stopped till she was damn tired and couldn't do more of it…..

"Aise hasiye matth….yahaan aakhar meri help kijiye…..warna raat barr yahi karthi rahungi…"

Riya told him when she got irritated by his laughter……that was indeed an alarm for him….He quickly came forward and helped her pack…..

Once that was done, they retired to the bed…..

He caressed her hair gently…Pecking her hair, he spoke up "tumhe kal raat se pareshaan kar raha hoom….you look tired……ab aaraam se so jaao!"

Riya smiled and encircled his neck and pulled him closer to her "accha ji…..agar main kahum ke mujhe yeh pareshaani manzoor hai toh?"

Arjun grinned and naughtily replied back after pecking her nose tip "phir se soch lo….aise kehke bohat badi museebat ko gale laga rahi ho?"

tauba tumhare yeh ishare, ham toh divane hai tumhare

raj yeh kaise khol rahee ho, tum aankho se bol rahee ho

jadu aate hai tumko sare

tauba tumhare yeh ishare, ham toh divane hai tumhare

chhu lete ho tar jo dil ke, tum hee batao tum se milke

janu dil koyee kyon naa hare, tauba tumhare yeh ishare...

Riya: [giggling] haan woh toh hai…par kya karein?? [Gliding her finger tip gently down his face] Iss museebat se toh hi hum pyar kar beite na?? ab peeche hattna naa mumkin hai!

[Her eyes had a glint of mischief and were enough to invite him to her….though he had asked her to rest, he wasn't fully willing to let go of those moments……

His hands were already around her and his hold tightened as she said that…..]

jism damakta jadu jadu, julf ghaneri khushbu khushbu

sase hamaree mehkee mehkee, najre tumharee behkee behkee

tumhara badan hai jaise chaman, hosh uda dey yeh najare

tauba tumhare yeh ishare, ham toh divane hai tumhare

raj yeh kaise khol rahee ho, tum aankho se bol rahee ho

jadu aate hai tumko sare, tauba tumhare yeh ishare...

He smiled and snuggles into her nook of her neck, kissing her passionately…whispers into ears, "ab mere liye bhi peeche hattna……"

His words trailed off as he switched off the table lamp and drowned into her…..

koyee nasha hai chalka chalka, hosh bacha hai halka halka

ham hai jaise khoye khoye, jage lekin soye soye

machalti raho pigalti raho, baho key ghere me humare

tauba tumhare yeh ishare, ham toh divane hai tumhare

chhu lete ho tar jo dil key, tum hee batao tum se milke

janu dil koyee kyon naa hare, tauba tumhare yeh ishare

tauba tumhare yeh ishare, ham toh divane hai tumhare

raj yeh kaise khol rahee ho, tum aankho se bol rahee ho

jadu aate hai tumko sare, tauba tumhare yeh ishare...

[To be continued]

so how was it??? haan devil aagaya beech mein...par ab kitne SR likhungi...

pls do reply...

Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
though a small one... but interesting ... 😊
Shop till u drop dead...and then struggle to pack ur bag ... hee hee hee ... ROFL ... 🤣
Hmmm... so she knows the complete truth ... though is not angry with Sameer, but definitely it will take some time for her to accept it... 😵 ... lets hope things get better soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Great update. I loved it. Riya is just like mešŸ˜› , shop till you drop.--------šŸ˜‰-------------

I hope everything turns out good in Reshma and Sameer's case. Shree is so adorable in the ways he is helping Sameer. Glad to see Riya understands Arjun much better now.

P.S. I am not adding how I smiled and blushed at the end. I always do that while reading all your updates.šŸ˜›šŸ˜‰šŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
@bgargate: yeah this FF will have smaller updates hereafter...now that its reaching its climax, i want to have the last chapter as 25...šŸ˜‰
yes Riya knows the entire truth...and i guess i had mentioned it in her POV at that point!

thanks!

@Hermione1234: thanks...awww i make u blush with my updates..lol me too blush and smile when i write them ā˜ŗļø

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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
wow
it ws awsm
u gave each character space in this update
thnx
update soon

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