SwaRon OS- the first valentine [Replies added] - Page 4

Originally posted by: Neeti96

Res😆

Originally posted by: megsy

Mast mast storyy !!
And beautifully told... I wish koi mere room ke khidki se bhi kudd kar aata... but damn the grills 😆

I love whn swayam kuddi marros nd enters sharons room...sharons reaction is to die for 😛

Love the way u have emoted sharons dilematic state..and how u merged ur story with the original sceenplay 👏

Originally posted by: sweetsimi123

Beautiful OS...Swayam came through the window...that is so Sharon's loverboy 😳 Loved the fact that Sharon told Swayam about her illness...Sharon felt she is the luckiest girl to have Swayam in her life 😳 that's so true...Loved this OS to the core ❤️ ❤️

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Don't complain me about size because I have to unres 3 more comments..:p

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Res
So finally after soo many threatning scraps from you,I m unresing my comment.I told you I m a good girl
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I liked the idea of this rose day.Eventually we get swaron rose day like-love confession.Reyam convo was nice.Seems like Mr. shekhawat was trying to be romantic even though he is expert at this romantic n chessy stuffs..:p
It was beautifull,intense and soo swaronish os.
My fav part when sharon gave swayam a flying kiss when he was sleeping.That part was really adorable.
Loved the os

Originally posted by: Neeti96

This was a very nice and romantic OS. You merged the asthma revelation with their confession on Valentine's day. Woah. Way to go👍🏼 The way you unfolded everything was very good. And your writing is toh amazing that toh u know only. So good work!