SwaRon OS- the first valentine [Replies added] - Page 2

Awww Soo Sweet and Cute.
This situational OS was soo cute..dramatic and light at the same time!
Really nicee how you took a simple situation for revealing sharon's asthma...not loudd drama sequence!
Romantic in its own way :)

beautiful yar mindblowing yar.kya likha hai yar i just loved the flying kiss part.

Mast mast storyy !!
And beautifully told... I wish koi mere room ke khidki se bhi kudd kar aata... but damn the grills 😆

I love whn swayam kuddi marros nd enters sharons room...sharons reaction is to die for 😛

Love the way u have emoted sharons dilematic state..and how u merged ur story with the original sceenplay 👏

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy

Sweet os :-)

Originally posted by: -Marium-

So, you are finally and officially back! Woah.. i am hell excited for Ishq wala love!

Well, ti was a comeback gift from you for all of us and thanks for that! 🤗

I really loved the entire plot and the way you penned it down so beautifully! Gosh, i really love you as a writer! ❤️

It was an awesome OS. It was sort of intense in SwaRon way at the same time so simple and beautiful!

Lots of love.



-Marium

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

wow..mine😳

i read the OS..its beautiful...welcome back swthrt..as i always say..ur writing is like a breath of fresh air..i like the way u describe both cute and intense emotions in a single sentence...in a single expression...I LOVE UR STYLE OF WRITING...


I wanna give a longer comment...so i will edit this SOON..give me sometime..life is messed up

WELCOME BACK 😳...I missed u 😊

Originally posted by: spongy

it was a sweet os... really liked it... 😊

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

well that was awsome... swayam and sharon.. valentine day celebration.. its a dream only... keep writing