SwaRon OS- the first valentine [Replies added]

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Awww Soo Sweet and Cute.
This situational OS was soo cute..dramatic and light at the same time!
Really nicee how you took a simple situation for revealing sharon's asthma...not loudd drama sequence!
Romantic in its own way :)

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Ajit sahu

@sw1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

beautiful yar mindblowing yar.kya likha hai yar i just loved the flying kiss part.

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

This was a very nice and romantic OS. You merged the asthma revelation with their confession on Valentine's day. Woah. Way to go👍🏼 The way you unfolded everything was very good. And your writing is toh amazing that toh u know only. So good work!

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago

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Megha

@megsy

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Mast mast storyy !!
And beautifully told... I wish koi mere room ke khidki se bhi kudd kar aata... but damn the grills 😆

I love whn swayam kuddi marros nd enters sharons room...sharons reaction is to die for 😛

Love the way u have emoted sharons dilematic state..and how u merged ur story with the original sceenplay 👏

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Beautiful OS...Swayam came through the window...that is so Sharon's loverboy 😳 Loved the fact that Sharon told Swayam about her illness...Sharon felt she is the luckiest girl to have Swayam in her life 😳 that's so true...Loved this OS to the core ❤️ ❤️

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: 1D_D3-Crazy
Sweet os :-)

Thanks😳

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: -Marium-
So, you are finally and officially back! Woah.. i am hell excited for Ishq wala love!

Well, ti was a comeback gift from you for all of us and thanks for that! 🤗

I really loved the entire plot and the way you penned it down so beautifully! Gosh, i really love you as a writer! ❤️

It was an awesome OS. It was sort of intense in SwaRon way at the same time so simple and beautiful!

Lots of love.

-Marium

Aww.. Thanks a lot for the comment marium! For being so genuine! 😳

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
wow..mine😳

i read the OS..its beautiful...welcome back swthrt..as i always say..ur writing is like a breath of fresh air..i like the way u describe both cute and intense emotions in a single sentence...in a single expression...I LOVE UR STYLE OF WRITING...

I wanna give a longer comment...so i will edit this SOON..give me sometime..life is messed up

WELCOME BACK 😳...I missed u 😊

Okay di. I'll wait for your comment and if you forget, I'll remind you too. 😆

Missed you too di. 😳