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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..
loved it..
bechari riya arjun always scolds him..
OMG...riya in danger..
update soon...
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srry 4 late dr it is awesme prt i w8 4 nxt update thanx 4 pm nd update soon
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thanx dr 4 lvly nd awesme part
riya in danger
oh w8 4 arjun kya krga
sorry 4 late cmmnt dr
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
nice case..
so Riya is in danger...hope Arjun or Aisha saves her on time

cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update!!!!!
hailaaa riya in danger...!!!!
Arjun where are u save her😊
just hoping aisha and arjun reach in time and save our Riya!!!!:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
a big big thanks for all those likes, i'm really very happy that people are enjoying my story😳

and thanks for all those lovely comments, and sorry for updating so late, but had been very busy lately😳
so without eating up your heads too much, here's next chapter😳

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Chapter 8

Riya murmured a simple yes and left before she really broke down in tears. No matter how much she did, he always found flaws in her work. She took her bag and left the office. She didnt even bother to tell anyone she was going away, because she was too emotionally unstable to face anyone.

She got into a cab, and told him to take her to the nearest beach, she just wanted some time alone, and what was best than going to her favourite place, that is the beach. After some time she reached her destination and went to sit at her favourite place, hidden by trees and small boats. Noone could see her there. Little did she know that she had been followed since she got out of the office. She was completely lost in her thoughts.

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One hour earlier

Aisha, Shree and Chotu had just completed their work, and were getting ready to go home, when suddenly they realised that Riya and her bag wasn't here. They all were slightly worried, but guessed maybe she had gone home earlier.

"But bata ke jaati nah," Aisha said angrily, and called Riya on her mobile. After a few rings, Riya took her call, "Kahan ho tum? And why didnt you inform us?" Aisha shouted.

"Aisha, mein theek hoon, mein cab mein hoon ab, dont worry raat ko ghar mein milte hein," Riya said and cut the call.

"Yeh ladki bhi nah? What happened now?" Aisha said looking at her mobile. But just hearing Riya's voice was enough to calm her. "Shit!" Aisha said to herself, she had completely forgotten to tell Riya that she'd be late. She had to meet an informer of hers, and tonight probably she'd finally know who killed her sister. She bid Shree and Chotu goodbye and went to the place her informer had called her.

After a few minutes, she reached that place, because it was a disco quite new the office. She went in, and ordered a whisky so as not to raise anyone's attention, and went to sit in one dark corner and waited for her informer. Soon a big man came to join her, and he offered her a drink, to which she agreed. This was their code word whenever they met.

She waited for sometime before asking him any questions.

"So what did you find?" Aisha asked.

"I have bad news for you. A rumour has been circulating since yesterday that some man is back to kill someone close to you. I'm sorry i dont know who that guy is, nor who is doing all this, but we only got the information that he's after you!" he said looking at a shocked Aisha. He knew what he was doing here could prove very dangerous for his life, but at one point of his life, Aisha had greatly helped him and he was greatly indebted to her. That's why risking everything he had come to tell her what he had learnt.

"I have to go now," he said and disappeared before Aisha could ask him anything more. She didnt think her life was in danger, but then after the way they killed Reema and sent her the mms, she was sure that they were after someone else. But who? She was alone in this world now, all her family were dead. Suddenly Riya's face flashed in her eyes. How could she forget something so important. Since one month, Riya was the closest person in her life. She rushed out of the disco, and tried calling Riya, but unfortunately her phone kept on ringing and Riya never answered. She was very worried, she immediately called Rathore, but his mobile was also busy. She called Arjun next, and thankfully Arjun answered on the first ring.

'Kya hein?" Arjun asked irritatedly. He had just been leaving office,when Aisha called him.

Aisha didnt waste anytime in telling him what she had found out, and that she was getting afraid for Riya, because Riya wasn't picking up her phone.

"Dekho, dont panic, Shree is still here, i had given him some work to do, i'll go and ask him to track her as long as her mobile is still on," Arjun said and rushed to see Shree. He told Shree what Aisha had found out, and Shree tried to locate Riya through her mobile. After a few seconds, Shree told him the exact location. Both Shree and Arjun rushed out of the office, and took their SUV and drove as fast as they could to reach Riya before anything could happen. Before leaving the office, Arjun had already informed Aisha about Riya's location. All were going to meet there now.

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Riya was sitting all alone on the beach, hidden by the trees and some small boats...

He had been following her since a long time, he didnt believe he would get an opportunity so soon. He never believed in killing his victims with objects or other things, he liked killing them using his hands only. However it was too early to kill her, he'd wait till after the sunset to kill her, when it would be dark to attack.

Finally after some half of an hour, it was completely dark, and where Riya was sitting, there wasn't even any street lighting. He decided to get out of his hiding, and approached Riya as silently as possible. He was a bit shocked that despite being an ETF officer, Riya's was so careless and hadn't even realised that he was nearing her. But what the heck? He just needed to do his job and go, he was a bit disappointed at how easy it had been to kill her. He was almost about two meters from her, behind a small boat, when he heard people shouting, "Riya! Riya? Kahan ho tum?" He analysed the situation and thought if he would get time to finish her before that man with the voice came near, but the voice was sounding nearer and nearer with each second, so he just decided to retire away. He'd get another opportunity to kill her. Today was her day. So he went to hide in the darkness of the trees and went in the opposite direction of the voice.

"Riya, Riya?" Shree continued shouting at top of his voice.

"Shree, you go this way, and i'll go this way!" Arjun said, and both separated.

Both kept shouting Riya's name and finally Arjun found Riya sitting alone in the darkness. She still was so lost in her thoughts that she hadn't even heard them shouting for her.

Arjun had never felt so angry in his life, he strode near her, and grabbed her by her arms making her stand up. He was so angry that he shook her violently.

Riya emerged from her thoughts when she felt herself being grabbed. She was going to shout, when she recognised the touch. She didnt understand why Arjun was so angry with her, and she felt herself being shaken violently. She could almost feel her neck breaking.

"Sir, kya kar rahein ho aap," Riya shouted in an attempt to stop Arjun.

"Bewakuf? Where were you? Why weren't you picking up your phone?" Arjun barked at her, though he stopped shaking her. He released her with force, almost making her fall down. He was going to continue scold her, when suddenly they heard someone shouting. It was Aisha's voice. He left Riya and ran in that direction of Aisha's shout.

Precap

Why was Aisha shouting?

Will Arjun be in time to save her or not?

Well you have to wait for next update for that


so how was it?😳

sorry for any spelling mistakes😳

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome part...
thank god Riya is ok but i would have liked that killer to have got caught
because now, she isnt fully safe!

and whats about the precap?? what happ to Aisha??

cont soon!
Edited by vidya.anand - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
now that was quick😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
riya bar bar bach gaye... hmmm bach toh gaye us killer se.. arjun se kaise bachega ye poor ladki..

hope ayesha is fine...

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