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Posted: 12 years ago
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I think if CVs want people to accept the replacement, they themselves should first accept it and not focus on replacement only but make it seemless...
It is CVs who have failed viewers big time.
It is not like that they did not know about the marriage. That it self was dragged for so long and they had months to come up with fututre tracks. It is very disheratening to feel that they give no thought as to what direction story will take after marriage and how they will manage five distinctive families - Khazan, Badi Haveli, Gauri, Ansh and Shekhars.
If they were simply dragging by slowly laying the foundations of the new story, I could ahve still understood. I would have accepted if replacement would have led to some more drag. But what I see is a clear lack of direction and hence these conflicting charecterisations and bloopers.
They seem to now know what they want Anandi to do after marriage, they don't seem to know how to proceed with Jagya relationship with Anandi, Gauri, Ganga or Sanchi, what is role of Sanchi because now once she is out of Jaitser how will she even be in Jagya's vicinity so what's the point of even showing Sanchi's attarction towards Jagya. Sanchi herself is sometime curt, sometime kiddish and sometime very happy with her bhabhi...
Singhs have no idea what to do any more in the story and why did they introduce Gehna's IVF stroyline
They have forgotten Jagya's life story, his past deeds and Gauri along with her pregnancy too with him.
Shekhar's don't lend any layers of characterisation and hence no addition to the story. CM's intial reservations were better to see then now Ira's concerns and then sorries...
I would have preffered if they had gone for -
Anadi adjusting in her new life in Udaipur witha clear idea about what she will do in her career or stay back in jaitser and get into politics
Singhs thinking about Jagya's life. Talking to Gauri and giving a proper closure and then just one either gauri or Ganga track
Shekhar's fighting for their dignity and showing the society that second marriage is not wrong. Maybe some maritial problems between Ira and her husband. A love track of Mahi with Anandi helping him
Sanchi and how Anandi gels with her
Khazan's demise or spending some time with Anandi or even Anandi talking to him on phone
Gehna's IVF, DS non agreement and Jagya trying to convince DS (would have been a good growth of character for him)
and so many thing...
anything but this directionless, headless ship they are running and crap they are showing under the pretext of story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
even i thought as da same wid some of ur points...anandi should take care of her school's future n a day wid her students could have been better...n ohh god dis bidai...is it twice? for prats one time n Toral anoder time...peaks🤣🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very good post Anzy!! Coming back from Airport(business trip) I went to pickup some Roti from one of my ex-housekeeper's house where she was watching BV in her TV so naturally I also saw some of it and felt more disconnected with Anandi. Director has completely lost his mind by repeating scenes with new Anandi. If BV team are thinking that this way viewers will accept and feel connected with new face of Ahandi then sorry to say that at least I felt more disconnected with Anandi. Anandi talking to Jagya... sorry whispering to Jagya was what...??😕 Why cvs are making her look more odd awkward and... She had no expression... Please stop giving her scenes where she has to usd her eye expressions this actor has -100000... skills to do that. CVs failed to bring her acting skills out to fit in this role and I think they know about it and that was the reason when she was running to look for Jagya they were showing Avika's FBs too.. For me they forced me to compare acting skills and Current Anandi looks desperate looking for lost love than young Anandi was calling his best friend in very natural way.

CVs, PH and dear Director Saheb if you will force your viewer(s) to accept the replaced face of Anandi like this way then sorry to say you are not only make your viewer(s) to feel disconnected (out of place)
with Anandi only, Shiv is also lost and looks out of place. I love Shiv but why you are challenging yourself by brutalizing his character too. You have an excellent actress who is playing Ganga, why you are not using her great acting skills by showing her becoming a nurse than making her a female version of Makhan working at Singhs. What a waste of Talent.

I will stop now otherwise I can go on for another 10 pages,,, so Please if you want your viewers back then start some sense in the story and character(s) otherwise end this serial gracefully nahee toh Kekta mai wala haal main nahee chahti.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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After watching the Friday episode I thought I would add a few more things.

The scene where A found J sitting in the dark store room was a very well conceived scene executed well too with both the actors coming up with very convincing performances.In this scene T really convinced that she had been J's Anandi at one time.It worked because of the good writing competent execution by the director and the actors.

It would be much better if the director and the writer spent their efforts at creating such scenes to tell their story instead of making attempts at connecting T's A with Avika's A re enacting Shadi bidai and grih pravesh scenes.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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too much focus on trying to connect physically Toral as Anandi rather than connecting her emotionally..BV disappointing not only for people like me who are not ready to accept Toral as Anandi but also for people like my granny who will watch BV no matter what!..Ansh was so intense and now whenever I even take a glimpse of them,they have no chemistry of a newly wed husband-wife who are supposedly eager to take the next step in their relationship..storywise so much drama for Ansh leaving Jaitsar for professional reasons is too over the top,not required..and than Sanch-Jagya-Ganga traingle//really what has gotten into CVs minds!!instead of Jagya-Ganga-Gauri we get Sanchi ,..the way too modern girl falling for a two time divorcee villager!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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anjana, ur post shud be made a sticky and kept on the first page, so tht when the CVs read the views they know tht we are all irritated supremely wid all the discrepancies in the show..all ur points are valid and the makers, instead of trying to shove the connection between toral and avika down our throats, shud concentrate on the storyline which is becoming a dragfest beyond tolerance..jagya-anandi-ganga-sachi story is out of control, shiv and anandi behave like a 60 yr old couple and the concept of transfer seems to only includ food and drama..where is the logic?where are the practical aspects of the show??? we as viewers are tired of the dances for one..i have been seeing dances and functions for the past 1 month..its so stupid..move on already..
PS: @aparnauma, i LOVE ur avatar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@All - thank you for your thoughtful posts. Glad to know am not the only one irritated by absence of STORY.

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