THE LOCKET (2) MG FF, thread 3 link pg 1 COMPLETED - Page 63

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update =) but no Maaneet =(
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anmirza

Nice update =) but no Maaneet =(

I will be giving alternate updates on each couple so Maaneet will not be in every update.
That's just the way my story is. There are several couples and I will be going thru' it randomly and spending some updates on each couple.
Glad you liked the update.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

Heading out the door, I wonder why "Taare hain baarati" had entered my mind. There was no Tara in it, there were taare and it did not suit her at all. My brow crinkles as I wonder why I remember seeing her with her hair curly and loose wearing the sweetest smile on her face. I just met her today and I am pretty sure I have not met her before.


WHY DOES DEV REMEMBER SEEING HER WITH A SMILE
SHE WAS ALSO HAPPY ONCE UPON A TIME
NAINTARA = I STAR
WHAT A NAME
DEV WANTED TO DISPEL THAT SCARED LOOK FROM HER FACE - HE IS SMITTEN BY HER FROM THE FIRST SLAP😉

AND MORE THAN THE UPDATE I LOVED THE SONG
IT IS ONE OF MY FAV TOO

Thanks Punam! Glad you liked the song.
Meri update ki burai karr-ing?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: heytal

Flawless update

absolutely prompt and precise
😃

Naintara's introspection for various pros and cons
regarding
the zor ke tamaacha😆

Gaal Dev ka laal ho gaya
aur jhatka Tara ko lag raha hai😕

Jokes apart Tara fearing of the worse
her financial position really bad and plus loosing a job
that too such a prestigious one.
Poor Girl is struggling to stand up and zor ka jatka toh lagega na if she lost her job.

Dev teasing her was so cute
Haathi😆
Dev ke chashme change karne ka waqt aa gaya hai
Tara kis angle se elephant dikhi
ya phir thappad ka asar hai

'Taming the shrew'
Ahaa 🤔
I guess who gonna tame whom
only time will say😉

I know...😆Dev is going to be kaafi naughty and obviously I am totally all for that. Abhi toh aur naam aayege..😉


I-star is superb name
absolutely suiting her image
Tu tu tu tutu tara🤣

Avi absolutely amazing chapter yaara
Loved Dev in this chapter
his witty replies, his nicknames to her and the song😆
very well thought of👏

Their scene came out superb
very well penned down
And the song is so amazing
apt for a dreamy wedding😳

Thanks so much Heytal. I am terribly conscious that I don't do dialogues well so I am glad you liked the scene.


Continue soon
Waiting already
😃

Thanks so much Heytal...
Experiencing this in IF with all of you has been so much fun...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks so much Heytal...
Experiencing this in IF with all of you has been so much fun...


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Posted: 12 years ago
Haaye, Avi Dev Fell for ur Dev , yew r succeeded 😉 😆
Avi, chapter's name is wat held my curiosity , I-Star, seriously 😆
I so love this lovely nick to not so lovely employee for Dev 😆
The love story here wud b of wierd match, The girl who's strong-headed, utterly professional, Principled, high at self-respect n morals 😃 whereas the guy... 😆 Such carefree natured, easy-going n fun-loving 😆
Avi, I can certainly imagine how much papad Dev must have made in order to propose his I-Star 😆 n then he must have expected a slap also, as an answer 😆
The character of Naina, lovingly as I-Star, is an idol 😊 , I wish I cud attempt some high-headed qualities she has, such as Confidence , so strong in views n actions 😊
Loved her thinking, she knew wat she did was right, the need of having a job didnt falter her in her views 👏
Thank yew behna for building such strong character, n love yew more if the same qualities r owned by yew too 😳
I sincerely wish I cud get myself to b lyk her 😊
Dev is such a sweetheart, not the one to hold grudges, never taking the slap serious, in fact, trying n finding ways to tease his I-Star 😆
He was all the way so much adorable ❤️ N when came the word professional, he was perfect to b listed under the list of professionals 😃
Tu tu tu tu Tara 😆
I so loved the chapter Avi 😃
Have heard Taare hain baraati, its melodious 😊
N bear it if em being repetative, but em waiting for Dev n his I-Star's love story as much as Maaneet's, in fact in love wid the chatpata couple already, individually too 😉 😳
Shayad, they've met before, but surely the first meeting wasn't interesting enough to remember, as the slap was 😆
All this electricity depart here , conspired against us, not letting me post my views on the chapter, at right tym 😭
Em seriously honored n speechless Avi, wid such affection yew have showered n I cant offer anything but the same 😳 When I joined IF, I never knew I wud b hanging out here wid the gang who's being a part of chotu sa heart I have 🤗
Main shayad xyada emotional hogai but kya karun, em way too emo than this 😳 Huggzzz for being there 🤗
Em seriously missing Aashu these dayz 😭
Khair ! above's ur comment n my bak-bak 😆
Ye xyada pakaau tha toh abhi se maafi 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
inke pe kuch bolti ja...
Naureen...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


inke pe kuch bolti ja...

Naureen...



Suno ! Baat Sidhi Hai Mujhe Jeena Nahi Tumhare Baghair..!!
Ab Kon Si Tafseel Ki Gunjaish Baqi Hai..???
❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Haiyeee!!!
Itna badhiya comment
upar se shair...
too bad Mari ka shayar nahi hai...😆
Jal jal ke dhuan ho raha hoga...
😭
Shukriya Naureen!!!!
🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update dear.👏
loved dev's livley character



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