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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smitar



posted part 17, sec 2.

smita


hehehhehe kya bat haineee...🤗

abhi jakar readwa karat hainee...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG... day by day Arnav Babua ka PDA is getting bolder and bolder... ☺️☺️


Khushi preferring flue over PREM ROGGG...🤣🤣

aurr yehhh kaa yeh toh bahottt hi chotaa update thaa... 😔
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Posted: 12 years ago
OS 2: Finding Khushi

Part 17

Sec 2


It was the day of Akash & Payal's haldi.

"O Titliyaa!", Buaji called. "Take this set of clothes to Arnav Babua's house and give it to Akash Bitwaa."

"Uughh..?", asked Khushi, not very bright in the morning, having been woken up at an ungodly hour by her Buaji's soothing voice & dulcet tone as she screamed orders at the boys who had come to decorate the house.

Buaji sighed. "Sanka Devi! Akash Bitwaa has to wear this for his haldi. Go & give it to him."

Khushi nodded slowly.

"Or do you want him to do haldi without clothes because you are too lazy to go there on time, Hai Re Nandkisore?", Buaji teased.

"I will go. I will go.."Khushi jumped out of bed as Payal giggled, hiding her laugh behind her fingers.



Khushi stood at the door to RM, feeling her heart work overtime. Why did she feel feverish whenever she thought about Arnavji? Was love a disease? A contagious one? Then flu was better!

She clutched the packet of clothes closer to her chest, the memory of his kiss making her lips tremble and her hands sweat.

Maybe she wouldn't see him, she comforted herself... Maybe he would be working... She peeked into the house, taking care not to attract attention.

"Khushiji, aap? Why are you standing outside? Shall I call Arnav Bhaiyya?", Hari Prakash's cheerful face came into focus.

"NO!", Khushi almost yelled. "Don't call him. I mean, Hari Prakashji, don't call anyone...", she smiled bravely. "Why should you disturb anyone? Just give this packet to Akash Jiju. It is his clothes for haldi."

If he came before her... What could she do? The way in which he had touched her face with the rose, and then...

She blushed.

"Ji.", said Hari Prakash reluctantly. He didn't think Arnav Bhaiyya would be too pleased to have missed Khushiji's lightning visit. "Are you sure you won't come in?"

"Ji. I have work at home. I am very busy...", she paused. "...very busy applying haldi on Jiji...", she concluded weakly.

How could she look at him after his kiss?

"Ji." Hari Prakash took the packet from her, and turned to leave. Khushi turned and almost ran away, trying to miss her nemesis.

"Khushiji...", came the dreaded call.

Nanheji was smiling at her.

"Nanheji! How..how are you?", she asked.

"I am great, bilkul tandoori.", NK flexed his muscles.

"Tandurust (healthy), Nanheji!", Anjali corrected as she, Nani, & Mami came to join him.


Arnav was standing behind them, watching Khushi, a smile on his sinful lips.


All laughed.

"Ji.. I .. I... I came with Jiju's clothes for haldi...", Khushi stammered the explanation for being there.

"Why didn't you come in?", Anjali asked, hugging her.

"Why did you stop at the door, Khussi Bitiyaa?", asked Nani.

"Andar aao... Belcome, belcome!", said Mami.

"Ji.. I have work at home.. Buaji.. Amma.. Jiji...", Khushi tried to leave.

"Come in.. atleast for a moment!", Anjali said, and holding Khushi's arm, towed her into the house.

She looked at Arnav watching them & said with a smirk, "Chotey, see who has come to see us!"



"Khushi", he murmured, walking towards her slowly, smirking his famous smirk.

Khushi looked away.

"Have you come to play haldi with us?", he asked, his voice all seduction.

Di, Mami, Nani, & NK watched the lovebirds with close attention, finding Arnav the lover very hard to digest.

Khushi could not find her voice to reply.

He did not wait for one. Arnav walked up to her and hugged her tight.

The family watched the long hug with open mouths.

NK whispered, "Di, I have to take notes. How to patao a lakdi in a few steps!"

Khushi tried to struggle out of his arms, but they were firm around her, and she was pressed against him as close as close could be.

"Arnavji, chodiye hamein!", Khushi whispered.

"You didn't tell me if you liked it?", he whispered, his naughty murmur sending a tingle down her spine.

"Arnavji!"

"Khushi!" He pulled her closer still.

"All are watching us.", she said, frantic.

"Let them. Give me my answer." He caressed her waist.

Khushi jerked.

"Yes. Yes...", she muttered.

"Yes, what?", he asked, a laugh in his husky voice.

"I... I l..liked it..", she whispered, trying to push him away.

Arnav chuckled. She could feel the rise & fall of his chest against hers.



"Good. You can have many more of them.", he promised in her ear.

Part 17:Section 1: 79907029 Part 17:Section 3:80167090
Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Smita,😊

Here is the interpretation to Section 2 of Part 17.


It was the day of Akash and Payal's Haldi.

Buaji boomed O Titaliya! asking her to take the set of clothes to Arnav Babua's house to be given to Akash Bitwaa. Khushi was the general dogsbody in the house as she was the only one youngster able to do the chore, the other being Payal the bride. Khushi who was still groggy having been woken up at an ungodly hour by Buaji's stentorian voice, issuing instructions to the boys who had come to decorate the house, was reluctant to do it. She said Uughh..? in a soto voce, but Buaji heard it and sighed, telling her Sanka Devi that Akash Bitwaa had to wear that for Haldi and to make it fast. Khushi gave a slow nod and seeing her reluctance to get up from her bed, Buaji asked her with a teasing smile invoking her diety Nandkisore name, whether she wanted her Jiju to have his Haldi in his birth suit as she was too lazy to give him the clothes on time. Hearing such talk coming out of her Buaji's mouth, Khushi jumped out of the bed and hurried along while stressing that she would go. Payal who was a silent spectator to this side show giggled, hiding her mirth behind her cupped hand.

Khushi went to RM and stood at the door with rapid heart beat making her feverish. The temperature outside though quite pleasant she felt it was quite hot and her limbs were going feeble. She wondered why just thinking about Arnavji would induce such symptoms in her. Was love a disease? A contagious disease? If so, then she thought coming down with a flu was a better option. She held the packet of clothes tighter and closer to her chest, the memory of his kiss, her first kiss still lingering on her lips making her insides quiver. Just the thought of his lips on hers had her lips tremble and she felt her hands sweat with nervousness. Mustering her courage with the thought that maybe she would not see him, maybe he would be engrossed in his work, she peeked into the house with utter care as not to invite anybody's attention. As soon as she entered she heard a cheerful Hari Prakash call out to her Khushiji Aap? Why was she standing outside? Would she like him to call Arnav Bhaiyya for her? Such was the greeting she received and even Hari Prakash was hell bent on letting Arnav know of her presence. Khushi uttered a rapid NO in response nearly shouting it out. Showing pseudo bravery with a smile plastered on her lips, she told him not to call anyone as she did not want to disturb them on a busy day. She had come to give the parcel to her Akash Jiju as it held his clothes for haldi.

Though she was talking to Hari Prakash her mind was dwelling on Arnav only. She kept wondering what was she to do if he came before her. The way he had touched her face with the rose and following it up with his lips when she was quite in the sensual trance that he had led her into, had her in unwitting anticipation on one side and wanting to escape on the other as she found them beyond her control. With just this thought she blushed. Meanwhile Hari Prakash who was not privy to her thoughts gave in to her request reluctantly. He didn't think Arnav Bhaiyya would take it kindly to have missed Khushiji's whirlwind visit and asked her whether she was sure that she wouldn't come in? She told him that she was positive as she was extremely busy with the preparations at home and ended with a lame excuse of having to apply haldi on her sister.

But in her mind, how could she look at him after his kiss was swirling and sucking her rapidly into the memory of it.

Taking the packet from her Hari Prakash turned to leave. Khushi turned and almost rushed down the steps congratulating herself for having escaped the torture of having to meet his eyes. She thought that it was her lucky day and for once her Devi Maiyya who had left her to fend for herself for the past few days was beside her. But all these thoughts were short- lived. She heard a loud Khushiji boom out. It was Nanheji who was calling her with an ear to ear smile. Knowing that her luck to escape was only limited to that much she acknowledged him and asked how he was. Showing off his flexous muscles he said that he was great and was a perfect roast. As usual he had goofed up with the words. Instead of tandurust meaning healthy he had used the word tandoori meaning roasted. Anjali who had heard NK speaking, corrected him saying that it was tandurust while she, Nani and Mami joined him. Arnav too was right behind them watching Khushi with a smile lurking on his lips. All Khushi could see was the smile on his lips. Listening to NK's goof up there was a burst of laughter as usual. Khushi who became nervous with Arnav smiling at her, told them haltingly that she had come over to give Jiju's clothes for haldi by way of explanation. Anjali came forward and hugged her while asking why didn't she come in? Nani too joined her by asking why did she stop at the door. And the last of The Trio, Mami completed with a heartfelt welcome to enter in. Khushi tried to excuse herself saying that she had work at home, Buaji, Amma and Jiji were waiting for her. Anjali holding her arm told her to atleast come inside for a few moments and tugged her along into the house. Anjali saw Arnav gazing at them and said with a smirk lurking on her face, Chotey, see who has come on a visit.

He called out Khushi and in an easy gait he moved towards her with his famous lopsided grin adorning his face. Khushi was not able to hold her gaze. He with a voice oozing with charm, making her nerves go haywire asked whether she has graced to be with them to play haldi? Di, Mami, Nani and NK watched the two closely, finding romantic Arnav skilled in the art of seduction very hard to digest. Khushi was left tongue-tied at his blatant wooing. But he was not waiting for her reply. Arnav walking upto her hugged her tight unabashedly.The family was left agape with his open display of affection. They just couldn't believe that their Chotey/Arnav Bitwaa/Nannav who never believed in love and was sneering at it as Fools' Paradise was openly wooing Khushi and now his voice and demeanour was emanating charm and love. Watching the long hug NK whispered to Anjali, that he had needed to take lessons from Nannav as to how to entice a girl in a few steps! Again NK had goofed up with lakdi(stick) for ladki(girl) but no one bothered to correct as all were busy watching the unfolding of the techniques of the dark-horse, Arnav Singh Raizada in the art of seduction. Khushi squirmed and tried to wriggle out of his arms. But his hold was firm and she was pressed close against him. He had pulled her and fitted her close to his body with her head tucked under the nook of his chin. When Khushi whispered to Arnav to let go of her, he whispered back with mischief trickling out through every pore in his body, that she hadn't answered whether she had liked it. He had once again asked the very question she had wanted to avoid answering and had occupied her thoughts all the time sending a whirlpool of emotions flitting across her being. She called out Arnavji in admonition and he reciprocated it with a loving Khushi, pulling her closer and expecting an answer from her.

To her frantic effort to get released by saying that they were being watched he told her that to let them watch but he needed her reply. While saying so he caressed her waist with his splayed fingers making Khushi jerk and loose her sense of bearing. She muttered a quick Yes, yes unable to think properly as all her senses seemed to have concentrated along his fingers. With a laugh laced husky voice he asked what she meant by yes? She whispered with a slight stammer trying her best to come out of his embrace, that she meant that she liked it. Arnav chuckled. She could feel the vibrations of the rumble of laughter that he was suppressing. Bending down to her ears giving it a soft playful nibble he murmured that was a welcome sign and she could have many more of them. It was a promise that was meant to be kept all through their lives.

This update is about AQUIESCENCE.

In the beginning we see Khushi Kumari Gupta agreeing tactically with her Buaji to do her bidding lest her aunt hollers at her with an imagination running riot.

"Logic will get you from A to Z; imagination will get you everywhere"

~ Albert Einstein

We see Khushi standing at the door thinking about how to face Arnav after his droolworthy kiss which introduced her to the world of wild fantasy! She makes herself agree to tactically give her Jiju's clothes for the haldi ceremony and get away without drawing anyody's attention.

"But they say if you dream a thing more than once, it's sure to come true"

~ Walt Disney Company, 12 Princess Stories

When she sees Hari Prakash she tactically makes him agree to her wish to get away quickly after making him take the clothes to Akash Jiju.

"To wish was to hope, and to hope was to expect"

~ Jane Austen, Sense and Sensibility

When NK sees her he tactically informs the rest that Khushi has come by calling out Khushiji loudly.

Then it's the turn of The Trio to tactically make her agree to get inside the house to give in a free rein to Arnav to woo his Lady Love.

We see, Anjali tactically informing Arnav that Khushi has come and consent silently to let him court her.

When Arnav goes and hugs her unabashedly his family member tactically keep silent but watch in awe his prowess.

NK voiced out that they agree that Arnav was a master tactician and anybody who needed to court a girl needed to be tutored by Arnav for he had stumped the rest with his quick work.

"The master of the garden is the one who waters it, trims the branches, plants the seeds, and pulls the weeds. If you merely stroll through the garden, you are but an acolyte"

~ Vera Nazarian, The Perpetual Calendar of Inspiration

When Khushi tries to pull away from his hug he tightens his hug and pulling her more closely and asks her for an answer to his question whether she liked his kiss.

"Never close your lips to those whom you have already opened your heart"

~ Charles Dickens

Making her senses reel by his proximity and his caress she is made to acquiesce that she liked his kiss very much.

"It's hard not to respond when a master of the art of kissing is laying one on you"

~ Charlaine Harris, Living Dead in Dallas

By making her acknowledge that she likes him kissing her he promises to her that her acquiescence will not go futile and she could expect in future to be plied with it aplenty.

"You and I, it's as though we have been taught to kiss in heaven and sent down to earth together, to see if we know what we were taught"

~ Boris Pasternak, Doctor Zhivago

It is AQUIESCENCE. Is it not?

That's it from me. Hope you enjoy it!

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d update
beautifully written
pls update soon
Thanx for pm
Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
2nd to comment! Not bad at all... Still down with fever though! 😭 i hate it... 🤢

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The updatewa was AWESOME as usual Smita!!! 👏 🤗

Poor Sanka Devi.. She is is always sent to face her Laad Governor by her own family members! 😆 Darne ki kaunu zaroorat naahi! Humare Arnav Babua bohote achhe hain! 😳

Par Arnav babua getting naughtier by the day.. He hugging Khushi infront of the whole Raizada pariwaar! *Kya Baat Hai!* Keep it up Arnav! 😉 👍🏼


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"Khushi", he murmured, walking towards her slowly, smirking his famous smirk.

Khushi looked away.

"Have you come to play haldi with us?", he asked, his voice all seduction.

Di, Mami, Nani, & NK watched the lovebirds with close attention, finding Arnav the lover very hard to digest.

Khushi could not find her voice to reply.

He did not wait for one. Arnav walked up to her and hugged her tight.

Khushi tried to struggle out of his arms, but they were firm around her, and she was pressed against him as close as close could be.

"Arnavji, chodiye hamein!", Khushi whispered.

"You didn't tell me if you liked it?", he whispered, his naughty murmur sending a tingle down her spine.

"Arnavji!"

"Khushi!" He pulled her closer still.

"All are watching us.", she said, frantic.

"Let them. Give me my answer." He caressed her waist.

Khushi jerked.

"Yes. Yes..", she muttered.

"Yes, what?", he asked, a laugh in his husky voice.

"I... I l..liked it..", she whispered, trying to push him away.

Arnav chuckled. She could feel the rise & fall of his chest against hers.

"Good. You can have many more of them.", he promised in her ear.

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The dialogues above ^^^.. I fell in love with the way Arnav initiated the whole thing and hugged her in front of the family!
That shows the pure love! ❤️

THE FIRST HUG WAS ADORABLE... 🤗

@Arnav - Ofcourse... She can have a lot more of every firsts that you're giving her! 😉 ☺️

@Smita - Love you sooo much for the update... 🤗

Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss Blow Kiss

@Rashmi - Commented before the PM! But I still love you! 🤗

Continue soon!

Loads of love, ❤️

Mrina 😊
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


sorry for late comments di...

for part 16 section 3...

the decision for waiting for 6 months to marry came as a shock to Raizada...they hav dreamed for their choty to marry soon after getting a perfect girl...but seems like their Devi Maiyya wanna hav another exam for them...and their chhote...to show tht he really hav regret over the things he thought for the sacred relation-ship like marriage...

NK is really funny...😆😆...wht he think khushi will run away scared frm nanav's gussa😉 but wht abt his poor hindi.....the girl will die due to the shocks frm his poor hindi...😆😆😆

lovely ...she received her first flowlers frm him...first time and that feeling was itself overwhelming for her...but her thoughts that it may be not his first or giving the floewrs to girls was common for him may hav pained her...

nice description smita di...
just loved it...

thnks for the PM rashmi di...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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un-res-ed😊

mazedaar update Smita di...👏👏

Raizada need haajmola to digest this lover boy arnav...😆😆😆...

And also besharam boy...😳😳...hugging-sugging in public...Raizada army gonna hav digestion problem...u know.😆... after arnav's open public affection demonstration...🤣🤣...

poor khushi...these roses...hugs and kisses gonna make her mad...😆😆...

continue soon di...
lovely part...
thnks for the PM Rashmi di...
Edited by manikka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ohhh thts gr8...i may be late for other part but fast for current one...
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Awww this was SUCH a cute chapter. Omg, i can totally imagine the Raizada's reaction over the lover boy Arnav. Must have shocked them out of their minds. NK's line was the perfect punch, he should definitely take lessons from Arnav if he wants to woo a lady😉
Edited by aaaziiz - 12 years ago

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