Smitar's OS 2:FindingKhushi#4 Part18(1)Pg130(10/4)

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@SuperstarSanaya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Arnav sent her bouquet without throwns.. that particular line just stole my heart. I am in love with this Arnav.

when he was that akdu.. he was extreme in it.. but when he is this sweet.. he is absolutely sweetheart. No one can come any close to our hero.

so, 6 months.. but without Contract.. 😆 I am in for it. 😃

and, Khushi's firsts started already.. 😉

That wiping out water from her neck.. 😳😳 Kiss was goosebumpy.. I loved it.

wonder what Arnav has in the list of Firsts next... 😃

Smita.. brilliant brilliant job. love the way you write.

Rulama.. thanks so much for the PMs.

update soon.. 😊

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Wow just wow, the update was mind blowing and outstanding, it was so beautiful from start to finish. Loved the bathroom part it was so intimate and sensual, especially Arnav drying a wet khushi with the towel. Awww the first kiss was so breath taking and beautiful, loved the lead up to it when Arnav moved the rose over her lips it was awesome. Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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sujata5

@sujata5

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Goosebumps galore!!!!

Too beautiful and sooo romantic.. Swooning... Awww☺️

Loved the update and waiting for more of the romance..

Too good Smita... I can really imagine the scene between Arnav and Khushi.. And love it ..

Thanks for the PM Rashmi...

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GunM

@GunM

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#484

the update was really beautiful...the firsts are getting better and better

Smita ur writing is too good...I LOVE IT

cant wait for more romance😊

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#485

Ahhh.. you're killing me with mushiness! :)

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#486

Hey dear I did not receive a pm.😭

I checked the ff today morning as to why its not updated and then I came to know that its already updated.😭

Please dear check why I m not receiving pms?😭

The part was good chap 17 part 1

First Kiss 😉 Wow

Please send me pms