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Posted: 12 years ago
hmmm...so Mayur parents r coming.
Mayank ne oneh inform kiya.
Mayank k parents ki baat tu smaj aati hai bt Nupur k parents.Oneh tu at least apney khoon pe kuch tu trust krna chaye tha.
Nupur k liye bohat mushkil hoga oneh maaf krna.
Bt Mayur k marriage and khas kr Shriya k liye yeh zaroori hai.

Finally that moment had come When shriya called him Dadda.
How beautifuuly described thrie emotions.I really had tears in my eyes while reading that.q k hum sb ko bhi is pal ka intezar tha.

it will lead to many more beautiful Maya's moment.
jese school admission,Mayank ka best school search krna.Mayur k wedding mein Shriya k liye shopping.shriya ka story suntey suntey apney Dadda ki lap main so jana.Shriya ka subha khud ooth kr Mayank ko Good morning hug dena and Mayank ka ose forehead pr kiss.KItchen mein Mayank ki help and baap or beti ki masti etc etc...

Thnx for update and Pm🤗
Edited by Irum. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


Thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Irum.

hmmm...so Mayur parents r coming.

Mayank ne oneh inform kiya.
Mayank k parents ki baat tu smaj aati hai bt Nupur k parents.Oneh tu at least apney khoon pe kuch tu trust krna chaye tha.
Nupur k liye bohat mushkil hoga oneh maaf krna.
Bt Mayur k marriage and khas kr Shriya k liye yeh zaroori hai.

Finally that moment had come When shriya called him Dadda.
How beautifuuly described thrie emotions.I really had tears in my eyes while reading that.q k hum sb ko bhi is pal ka intezar tha.

it will lead to many more beautiful Maya's moment.
jese school admission,Mayank ka best school search krna.Mayur k wedding mein Shriya k liye shopping.shriya ka story suntey suntey apney Dadda ki lap main so jana.Shriya ka subha khud ooth kr Mayank ko Good morning hug dena and Mayank ka ose forehead pr kiss.KItchen mein Mayank ki help and baap or beti ki masti etc etc...

Thnx for update and Pm🤗




Well Dear...frankly speaking mene aisa such kuch socha nahi tha...
but now since..you were describing it...I will surely include them in the upcoming parts


Thank you for liking it
Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shafyyy janiii

it was fantastic part
mayur was just fabulous
i loved the way MAYANK make nupus understand that her parents still loved it.

and the most waited part- hayeee shreya called him Dadda
GOSH it was golden moment for mayank- i can imagine how much he was happy when shreya called him Dadda
beautifully written yaar
loveee u sooo much for ur update
keep it up

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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
loved it
thanx for the pm
cont soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Faria.

Shafyyy janiii

it was fantastic part
mayur was just fabulous
i loved the way MAYANK make nupus understand that her parents still loved it.

and the most waited part- hayeee shreya called him Dadda
GOSH it was golden moment for mayank- i can imagine how much he was happy when shreya called him Dadda
beautifully written yaar
loveee u sooo much for ur update
keep it up




Thank you so much for liking it yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Here is my next part hope you like it


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN




Thank you so much for liking it yaar


u replied in one line
next time i'll comment in one line
:D :D :D
a tit for tat
btw where is my OS??????


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Posted: 12 years ago

Love Never Looses

Part 41

The day seems to be one of the wonderfull day for the Sharma family'.

Mayank put her down ..made her stand on ground while his hands were still around her'shoulder..and his eyes were reflecting tears of happiness'.which trickle down from his cheek'she instantly pulled her tiny hands and wiped up his tears'his lips curved into a broader smile'..

Mayank:Ek Bir se kaho'

She gave him a question look when he said again:Fir se kaho jo tumne kaha'

She understood what he wants her to say'she felt so shy..she ran away from him and hid herself in her mother's embrace'he walked towards her..bend down on his knees and said again:Please ek baar'

She negatly nodded her head..and hugged her mother knees..again'Nupur bend down on her knees..and said to her,"Shona'aapke Dada..aapse kuch keh rahe hain..apne Dada ki baat nahi manogi'.vo aapke Dada..hain'.Shona'please..ek baar'"

Now could she refuse this look of her mother..she never had disobeyed anything of her mother..slowly'she turned herself towards him..only to see a person having teary eyes..expecting something from her'..she took a breath..and closed her eyes..and said directly into his eyes,"Dadaa.."

Mayank was over wehlemed that he couldn't able to control himself and hugged her tightly..she too reciprocate the feelings..he felt to the top of the world..he caled him.."Dadaa.." finally she accepted him'his family is complete'

Nupur said while wiping her own tears :I am feeling left out'

Mayank:How could we missed you'without you our family can't be complete'

Shriya amusingly looked at him..she so wanted a family..she with her Dadaa and with her Mammaa'her cute small family and when Mayank addressed themseleves as family'she felt that she finally got it..the void which was there has been filled today..today she got her family'she was really very happy today'

She forwaded her hand and asked her to join them'.she willingly'went towards him..and higged them'letting all their miseries away'hugging her family tightly..she could able to give her daughter a family'

Shriya wiped both their mother and father tears and in return they cleared tears lingered on her cheeks'.and Nupur kissed her..on her cheek..though Mayank also wanted but he thought to go..in a slow way..since now she had called him'Dadaa..soon the little awkwardness could also vanish between them'

They trio went towards back to their home after enjoying a lot..this time without an hesitation Shriya hold their finger' and walked down towards their home..

On reaching home'they settle for a time being when Nupur called out Shriya and hold her from her shoulders and said,"Shona'aap Mamma ke ache bacche ho na'"

Shriya:Haan Mamma'

Nupur:To beta aaj humare ghar mein kuch guest aa rahe hain'

Shriya..gave a tensed look..:Guest'.!!!

Mayank..came to her and said:Darr kyu rahe ho'mein hoon na aur Mamma bhi tumhare pass..aur fir humara promise vo to yaad hain na'.

She nodded her head and said:Kon aa raha hain Mamma..

Taking abreath she said:Mere Mammuy-papa'aur aapke Dadaa k mummy papa aa rahe hain..

Shriya:ooohh'iska matlab mere Nana 'Nani aur Dadu-Dadi aa rahe hain'.

Mayank:Haan doll'!!!

Shriya hesitantly:Kya vo..

Mayank:Don't worry'vo bhi aapko bilkul vese hi pyar karenge'jese hum karte hain..

Shriya:Sachii..!!!

Mayank:Han'

Nupur too asked him:Sachii'!!

He gave her his assuring smile and said:Don't worry'sab thik ho jaayega'.


They impatiently..waiting for their arrival'where Nupur was getting little bit nervous and was biting her nails'Mayank held her hand and assured her everything to be fine'

The bell ring jumping them on their feet..Mayank proceed towards the door and opened and greet his parent's and than Nupur's'..

Mr.Bhushan:Khush rahiye beta'

Mr. Sharma'.hugging him:Kesa hai tu..

Mayank:Fine Dad'aaye ander aayi na sab..

He made everyone settle down on the couch'.there was sudden silence'an awkward type of silence'may be they want to meet her 'he excused himself to the kitchen'

As soon as he entered their he saw her standing leaning to the wall nervously..'while Shriya was sittling on the chair and was just staring the roof of kitchen'he took Nupur's hand made her drag towards the living room..though she was neglectling it..but getting a sense of assurance..she moved with him..tightly holding his hand..

When they reached their

Called them:Mom..Dad'Uncle ..Aunty'

All of them'stood at their place..while Nupur's gaze was down and she was holding Mayank's hand very tightly'They moved towards them'.

When Nupur's Mom approached her and said carressing her head:Kesi hain'.

Sensing her motherly voice..she looked towards her..no more words to be needed'and instantly she hugged her..all her anger all her fear just went out seeing her mother..she so wanted this love of her mother..but couldn't get'she so wanted her warmth..but couldn't get'

Wiping her tears she said:Mein achi hoon..aap aur bauji kese ho'

Mr.Bhushan :Thik hain beta'

She moved forward touched her father's feet while he hugged her'today she realised how much pain her daughter would be suffering from when she was away from her father'

She too touched Mayank's parent's feet while Mrs.Sharma hugged her and sai:We really missed you beta'ab rone k din gaye now it's time for happiness'tum chali gayi thi..jese ki Mayank ki zindagi chali gayi thi'

A pinch of guilt added in her that she didn't thought how much Mayank would have suffered '..he also missed her that much..like she did'.

Breaking the environment Mayank said:Well..!!! agar aap sab ka..rona dhona kahtam ho gaya ho to'We have a surprise for you'

Nupur instantly looked at Mayank nervously as if conveying..that whether it is right or not'

Mayank just assured her and said:Aap sab log betho Nupur k saath mein abhi aata hoon'

He went inside and said to her:Chale'

Shriya nervously said:Hmm'

Mayank:Can I carry you'

Shriya with an impulse reaction:Please'.haan'.

He instantly picked her up..and went towards living area where everyone and while he said:Here everyone'

"Meet..Shriya'Shriya Sharma'.My daughter'"



Hope you like it


Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

Here is my next part hope you like it




yup i liked ur balk update so much

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