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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updt
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Posted: 12 years ago
firstly sry fir being too late... :(
well part was amazing,it will be amazing to see their parent's reaction on their daughter...
update soon...
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Nyc story n nyc thread!!!!😊
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I'll Updtae today

sorry for delay..
got busy with some work
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MyInspirationz

Lovely update Shaffy 😊



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shafyyy plzzz update...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry Foe Delay...
Gotta busy with

College work...



Here is my next Part...
and yes...
My new..ff

that Update will also be delayed as my exams are approaching...

hope you can understand
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Posted: 12 years ago


Love Never Looses

Part 42


"Meet..Shriya'Shriya Sharma'.My daughter'"

Everyone except Nupur stood shockingly ..wondering what does Mayank meant by saying this'seeing their expression even Shriya got a bit nervous and in that nervousness she held her father's collor tightly'

Mayank said to her:Shona'ye hain aapke Nana-Nani aur aapke Dadu-DaDi..and looking towards him he said ye hain meri nahi I mean humari beti Shriya''!!

Mr.Sharma:Mayank ye tum kya keh rahe ho'!!

Mayank:Yehi Dad'she is my Daughter'ye aapki poti hain'

Mrs.Sharma:Mayank hosh mein to ho'

Mayank'didn't understood what happened to them:Mom'aap aisa kyu keh rahi hain'

Mr.Bhushan:Galat hii' kya hain Mayank..Ye tumhari beti kese ho sakti hain'.

This time Nupur stood up at her place shockingly..but somewhere she knew it'this would happen..she moved towards Mayank..conveying him through her eyes tat she knew this would happen'

Mayank..making them explain:Dekhiye'ye aap logo ko manna hoga ye meri beti hain'

Mrs.Bhushan:Mayank'beta sach batao'.

Mayank:Aunty..mein sach keh raha hoon'

Mr.Bhushan:Kisi aur k paap ko apna naam mat do Mayank'

Now this was limit for Nupur and for Mayank'how could they a sin to their daughter..

Mayank contolling himself:Ye kisi ka paap nahi hain'meri beti hain'
Mr.Sharma:Mayank..-Nupur'dekho..hum har cheez accept kar sakte hain..but please kam se kam humse jhoot mat bolo'

By the time Nupur was silently crying..standing beside him..holding his hand tightly..and somewhere Shriya has sensed that they aren't good people as they were making her mother cry'she hid herself in his shoulder..while Mayank held her tightly and said:Please..aap log kesi baat kar rahe hain..ye kisi ka bhi Paap nahi hain..meri beti hai..samjhe aap log'!!! Ye meri aur Nupur ki pyar ki nishani hain..

Mrs.Bhushan:Tum yakeen se kese keh sakte ho'Mayank'sachai chupaane se nahi chup sakti'.hum sach ko accept kar sakte hain..humari chinta naa karo'sach bata do'

Mayank:Uncle yahi sach hain'

Mrs.Bhushan:Mayank..tum bahut ache ho'.tum Nupur se bahut pyar karte ho'hum jaante hain..but acha rahega agar tum humein sachai bata do Mayank'.

Mr.Bhushan:Haan..Mayank'

Mayank..getting more confuse..:Kesi sachai..kya sunna chate hain aap sab mere kuch samjh mein nahi aa raha hain'sach yahi hain..ye meri aur Nupur ki beti hain'mujhe maloom hain aap log kya soch rahe hain..but jesa aap soch rahe hain..vesa kuch nahi hain'.uss janwar ka khoon nahi hain..ye 'iski rago mein mere aur Nupur ki pyar ki takat hain..meri beti hain ye..

Mrs.Sharma:Kya ye sach mein'.

Mayank..:haan Mom mein sach kh raha hoon aap logo ko yakeen hona chahiye..kam se kam mein aap logo se jhoot kyu bolunga'


Mr.Bhushan:Mayank beta sach sach bata do..kya ye Dhruv ki'

Mayank cut him in between and said in a little anger yet in low tone as they were elders:Nahi Uncle..mene kahan na..ye meri beti hain..Aur main iska Dada..shaadi se pehle mere aur Nupur k beech hua aisa Rishta..jiski nishaani mere saamne..hain'jeene ki wajah hain..mere aur Nupur k liye'aur aap log'meri beti ko paap nahi keh sakte'Mere aur Nupur ki pyar ki nishaani hain ye'.

Mr.Sharma:Matlab..tumhare aur Nupur k bech shaadi se pehle aisa rishta kayam hua..jiska phal humare saamne hain'

His voice was a having a tone of sarcastic..which shook Mayank from inside'
He thought they will lovingly accept his daughter..but here the whole situtaion is different'.they were questioning him'.It was complete shock for them..

Nupur was having silent tears and holding his arm tightly in order to prevent herself from breaking down'.

Mrs.Sharma:Mayank..!! Tum jaante bhi ho tum kya keh rahe ho'..tum ne..apni maryada ka khayal bhi nahi ayaa'

Mayank in a more shocking way:Maa'

Mrs.Bhushan:Galti Mayank ki nahi hain Shilpa'galti to mere sanskaro mein hain'..varna Nupur aisa hone nahi deti'.Aaj sharam aati kehte hue..ki ye meri beti hain'

Mr.Bhushan:Ek baar ko agar ye Dhruv ki bacchi hoti..to shayad hum maan bhi lete'.But..

Mr. Sharma:But..yahan to kahani hi doosri hain'tumne humne yahan ye khushkhabri dene bulaya tha..ya fir'humre gardan sharam se jhukaane k liye'.

Mayank:Ye aap sab kya keh rahe hain'

Mr.Bhushan:Vohi jo sach hain'

Mr.Sharma:Mayank..ye bhi nahi socha..kese society mein tum apna sir utha reh paaoge'

Mrs..Sharma:Hume ye ummed nahi thi'.

It seems that'all is happening opposite to what Mayank has thought'.He didn't expect this from his parent's..from Nupur's parent's that their reaction would like this'He thought they would support him and will accept his daughter wholeheartedly'But here the situation is completely different'He was completely Shock'..where Nupur was equally shock too..but more than that she was hurt 'their parent's are supporting them..when they actually need the love of family'she wondered what's wrong..!!! Did they had a relation before marriage or was it due to it..they had their daughter'as the result of it'.

The more shocking was for Mayank when they said that he may be confronting Nupur and they could accept the reality that she could be Nupur's and Dhruv's daughter..how could they think so'didn't have that trust on him'

Both were shock and hurt seeing their reaction'it was completely unexpected'.what they had thought and what had turned out'

But they unaware that someone else..also'listening to their and their parent's convo..a little girl..of whom they were talking who was haolding her father's collor very tightly as in a fear that someone will snatch..her from him..and was silently..tearing out water from her eyes'hiding herself in the brad and protective shoulder of her father'listening so much about her..and about her father and mother..she had concluded that these people are certainly not good and had started imagining them as the bad man type people'she started fearing them..and didn't pulled her courage to even looked towards them'her fear increases and she couldn't able to hold it more and a cry moan ..a sob escaped from her mouth while she grabbed her father's shirt very very tightly'.

Mayank realised that Shriya is very much frightened'and he gave her to Nupur and asked her take her to the room'.without arguing she took her and both of them made their way out from the living room escaping themseleves from the gazes of people standing and cursing them in the living room'

Mayank:Mene kabhi nahi socha tha..that you all will react like this'

Mr.Sharma:Humne bhi kabhi nahi socha tha..ki ..tum aisi harkaten karoge..

Mayank:Mene jo bhi kiya..mujh kisi bhi baat ka koi bhi regret nahi hain Dad'.

Mrs.Sharma in a bit louder tone..:Mayank..!!! Tammez se baat karo..vo tumahre pita hain..

Mayank:Aur Shriya meri beti hain Mom..!! aap logo ko ek bhi baar khayal.. nahi aayaa..that..uske saamne aap uss insaan ka naam liya'jisse vo bachpan se darti aa rahi hain'aapne usko kitna kuch kahan'Maa..Dad'vo meri beti hain..bahut muhkilo.. se apne daarr ko jeet kar aage badh rahi thi'lekin aap logo ne'nahi Dad'mujhe nahi laga aap sab aise react karenge'.

Mrs.Sharma:Tumne Humara trust toda hain Mayank'hume bhi umeed nahi thi'

Mrs.Bhushan:Humare sanskaro ki kadar bhi nahi ki'tum dono ne'.

Mr.Bhushan:Mere khayala ab hume chalna chahiye'

Mr.Sharma:Yahan ruk kar apni aur insult nahi karwaani hain hume..chalo Shilpa..chaliye Bhaisaab..

Mr.Bhushan:Haan Ji..!! Chaliye'

They left out without having dinner'.spoiling the evening of the happiest Day of Mayank when his daughter has finally called him "Dadaaa.."


Hope you Like it
Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago

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