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lovely...luv d bond between mayank n shriya..!!!!😃
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Originally posted by: sonuluvsmayur

lovely...luv d bond between mayank n shriya..!!!!😃



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Lover Never Looses


Part 40

After having their lunch..Shriya'was there in the living room'drawing something'while Mayank-Nupur were having a warm discussion'

Nupur:Mayank'ab unhe itni parwah kese hone lagi meri'.

Mayank:Nupur they don't know the reality that time..

Nupur:Ab bhi to puri nahi pata hain unko'..

Mayank:Nupur'agar bache galti karte hain..to Maa-Baap unhe maaf kar dete hain..kyunki vo apne bacho se bahut pyaar karte hain'.to kya jab kabhi maa-baap se galti ho jaaye..to bacho ko bhi to unko maaf kar dena chahiye'Vo tumse bahut pyaar karte hain Nupur'

Nupur:Fir Mayank jab mujhe unki sabse zaayeda zarrorat thi..tab unhone mera haath kyu chodh diya'.

Mayank:Mein jaanta hoon unke iss behaviour se'.you are very hurt'but think as a parent Nupur..afterall..You are also a mother'.

Nupur:I don't know'Uss..din k baad'.pata nahi mein unka saamna kese karoongi..I mean'.

Mayank:I know..it's very difficult..isliye..mene unhe zaayeda kuch nahi bataya'kyunki..jo baat aamse-saamne beth kar discuss karke'solve ho sakti hain..vo phone per nahi..unhe bas itna pata hain..ki Dhruv ne tumhe kidnap kiya tha..that's it'I didn't tell them about Shriya'because..I know'these are very delicate issues'.these should to tell face to face'.

Nupur:Vo meri bachi..ko accept to karenge na'.

Mayank:Of Course'Nupur'You still doubt about it..dekhna..when they knew that she our daughter..than they will surely..accept her'

Nupur:You're Sure'

Mayank:Trust me'.I am 100% sure..

Nupur:But acahanak itne time..baad unhe meri yaad kese aayi..

Mayank:Kyunki unhe mene bataya'.samjhaya..Nupur..

Nupur:Kyu Mayank'

Mayank:Kyunki'it's your right to have your parent's love and trust in your life back'tumhe kesa lagega..agar Shriya tumse naraaz rahe..

Nupur:Please Mayank aisa mat bolo..vo meri jaan..hain..

Mayank:Aur tumhare parent's k liye tum Nupur'.

Nupur:I guess..You are right..I have to give a chance to them'

Mayank:That's like a good girl..chalo ab achi si..smile de do..

Nupur:But Mayank what about Your parent's'kahin na kahin..they also need to know about Shriya'

Mayank:Mene unko bhi bata diya..

Nupur..a little tense:Kya vo..I mean shaadi se pehle jesa humara rishta'I ean Shriya'ka birth..I am afraid if they will accept her or not..

Mayank:OfCourse Nupur don't worry'Sab thik ho jaayega..koi ho na ho tumhare saath I'll Be there'

Nupur:I know that'.that's why I feared a least'


Mayank..giving her assured smile:Good''both the families are coming to meet us'.and my daughter Shriya'

She gave her..a soft..and small..smile to him..and asked him,"Acha kab aa rahe hain vo.."

Mayank:"Aaj dinner per aa rah hain'"

Nupur..Still not convinced..:Okay'

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Shriya:Mammaaa...kahan ho'.

Nupur..coming down:AA rahi hoon''

Shriya:Hum late ho rahe hain Mammaa'.

Nupur:Mujhe pata hain..but bahar bahut thand ho rahi hain..meri princess'.ko thand na lage isliye'Mamma..jacket lene gayi thi'.

Shriya:Oooh'.okay'.chalo..chalo'

Holding Nupur's hand she dragged her towards the door..when suddenly stops at her tracks'and looks behind to see'Mayank was standing on his'place..when she approached to him'held his finger and without saying anything drag him too..towards the door'he was very touched with her this act'feeling her soft touch around his little finger was just a bliss'.trio move towards the park'.where Shriya was holding her parent's finger's repectively..and smiling broadly'

On reaching the park'the played around the swing..and enjoyed a lot'while moving towards the another swing'.Nupur spotted'slider'she called her out,"Shriya..chalo aaj hum slider per chalte hain'"

She saw slider..how everyone goes..and slide to downwards'what of she couldn't able to reach down..and hit herself'.she was litll bit scared'and said her,"Mamma..tum bhi chalo na mere saath'"

Nupur:Okay'.holding her hand'made her climb up the stairs''.and asked Mayank,"Mayank'mein Shriya ko yahan se push karti hoon..tum use neeche se catch kar lena'"

Shriya'in a fearing tone:Mamma..mein gil jaongi'.

Nupur:Kesi giregi..meri jaan..neeche aapke Dadda..aapko pakad lenge'.shouting to Mayank'Mayank tum pakad loge na'

Mayank:Haan'.mein pakad loonga'don't worry'.about it'.

Shriya'intently looking into eyes'as if asking his assurance'and she got it..when he affirmed her..by blinking his eyes..and gesture her to come down'.

With a slow and swift movement..Nupur slid..Shriya'making her slide'down'and before her legs could touch the ground..Mayank held..her'For a moment she closed her eyes'it was amazing feeling'she felt so awesome..when the cold air touches her face..and she was sliding down from..up to down..it so awesome'.

Mayank:Maza aayaa'

She just nodded her head and smilingly..again..climbed up the slider'Mayank took his position..while Nupur was standing aside..watching her'and encouraging her'.

Nupur:Shriya'ab dheere dhere..slid karo..chalo'araam se..I know you can do it'

Getting encouragement from her mother' 'but still she was feeling scared..so Nupur again approached her..and pushed her slightly' she slid down closing her eyes in a bit fear..but soon it gone away..when she found pair of arms around her..indeed without saying her Dadda..catched her another time..she felt so happy'Nupur came and asked her:Mazaa..ayaa..meri shona..ko.."

Shriya..excitedly:Haan'.Mamma'mujhe bahut Mazaa ayaa'iss baar mein akele jaongi'"

Mayank:That's like good girl..Don't worry I'll be there'.come on'

She again climbed up..and slowly and steadly..slid down'and again she knew..same pair of hands..will caught her..and it happenes'this time she smiled broadly'and excitedly said,"Wow'mene'.Kar dikhaya'Mene kar dikhaya'and in excitement she hugged him'.it was a sudden shock for him'a sweet pleasurely'shock'but much great shock..and biggest surprise of his life was..on it's way'.as she said those words..for which he was longing for every day..Mene kar diya...mene kar diya..aapne mujhe gilne nahi diya..Thank you sho Much'Dadda'."

The time stopped there'for Nupur..for Mayank..and when Shriya realised what she has done..for her too..the time..the earth'everything stood still'

She called him...finally'she called him for which he waiting for so long'not only she called him..but also..hugged him..and is still hugging him'finally he heard..the most beautifull..word..from her mouth..she accepted him as her Dadda..she called him..for the first time..she spoke Dadda'and she called Him..Dadaa'finally..she called him Dadda..It seems world stop there'

He got his ultimate happiness'.He thought yesterday when she held his finger..was one of the best Day'but he didn't have any idea..that this day'would turned out to be so shocking..surprising'so pleasant..and bestest..from the yesterday's one'

He was thanking his stars..as in Morning he wished this..and in evening it come true'true..not only she hugged him..but she called him Dadda in real'he engulfed his arms..around her tiny..body..enclosing her close to him..she too..held him tightly..as finally she spoke'

Nevertheless..no one knows that she always practise to call him.Daddaa...infront of mirror..while brushing her teeth'even Nupur also..didn't knew it'and somewhere she was happy that finally she said it..she said'.finally..she was wanting to say him..that she meant him her..Dadda'.she has accepted him as her Dadda..whom she was waiting for so many years'.she knew..he is not a bad man..but a good man..a very good man'who loves her very much'she felt so much relaxed from inside'.as if a long heavy wheight has been'taken from her heart..she felt..light..floating in air'

And she was floating in air..as Mayank has picked her up from ground and was holding..her embracing her..in his warmth'.enclosing her within himself..he want to absorb..every moment..every second'


Hope you like it...


Edited by shafy_MN - 12 years ago
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YaY!! I'm first again 😃

Di, loved this update.. Truly loved it to the core..

MayUrs' parents are ready to forget the past and start fresh life.. I'm sure they're gonna love Shriya, cuz no one can resist this cute little Shona 😳

Aww..Shriya has been practicing calling Mayank "Dada" while brushing her teeth.. That's so cute..

Shriya hugged Mayank and also called him "Dada" for the first time 😲 Mayank is so happy and so am I..

Continue soon and thanks for the pm..
Looovvveee you*hugs*, muuuah !!
Edited by Humayra - 12 years ago

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