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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

wow inka oka exam ee enjoy mari.


ya adi kuda na darling subject happy ga chaduvutha
darling iam gng nw to hav dinner
and take care of urself darling n be strong:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
ok all the best, do well and good night..
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Sorry for late friends, updating in an hour
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Waitng di
hope aap teek ho..
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Part 45




P.S. This FF is not ending, still 20-30 parts are there, so enjoy the story and leave feedback. 😃 and a note to other writers, please dont remove me from your buddy list as you are not finding my likes and comments. I am busy in travelling to home and hospital, whenever i get time i am updating. So once i am free i will read and comment.



On the news channels:


"Breaking news, business tycoon Mohinder Handa's wife Mrs. Rupa Handa is arrested. The strange thing is her husband Mr. Mohinder Handa filed a case against her for trying to kill his daughter Ms. Geet Handa" announced the reporter. All the news channels rounded Handa Mansion and waiting for Mohinder to come out so that they can attack him with their questions. Till today he never talked about his children in any of the interview and all of a sudden today he himself arrested his wife on the basis of attempt murder of his daughter Geet. This news came like a shocker to everyone and everyone is waiting to get the glimpse of mohinder but he is nowhere to come out.


In the Handa Mansion:


Mohinder is in his room leaned on the best post, his eyes are closed, news channel is on but he is in deep thought. "Today, from today my geet will be safe. No tension nothing. Rupa, you will suffer for what you did. I thought to expose you when geet comes here but no you are crossing your limits and is trying to kill geet again by hiring some people but least you know that my men are following you everywhere you go and record everything. With the help of those recordings you are arrested today and I will make sure that you wont come out of bars in your life time" thought mohinder, today he is all alone in his life with no one around. But he is happy to know his geet will be safe.


In beach:


Maan and geet are still stitting on the rock, enjoying the sun set holding each other tight, they don't need any words, silence is what they needed. His geet, his mishty suffered enough in her life, her life is not less than a roller coaster ride, but still today she is strong and is ready to fight. Its true that maan is worried for her because he want to see his geet happy without any preasure any tension any sufferings. But whenever he thinks his geet is happy something or the other happens which brings pain and tears in her life.

The mere thought of seeing geet in pain shaked maan and his hold on her tightened as if he is making sure geet is with him. Geet snuggled close to him placing her head on his chest. "Maan" called geet still her eyes closed. "Hmmm" answered maan. "We should go, everyone will be waiting for us" told geet. "Yeah we will, first you should eat something" told maan. Geet looked at him for a second and told "I am hungry too" "Hmm I know about my mishty" told maan and kissed her cheek, geet looked here and there, though people are busy in their own work but geet felt shy as they are sitting close to each other in a public place. Geet got up hurriedly and maan too as he sensed what she is feeling right now.

They both walked to the car and drove towards the restaurant as none had their lunch in the noon. Once they reached hotel, maan parked the car and made theirway inside. They choose the lone corner so that no one can disturb them, a soft music is playing which is peaceful. Looking at geet, maan can easily say that she is ok now, back to normal. And that is enough to maan, he just cant see her in tears. Their food arrived, maan fed geet lovingly, he is so loving pampering her. He is ready to do anything just to see the smile on her face, it's a bliss for him to see her smile. And within 2 days geet will be maan's. She will be GMSK, the mere thought made maan excited and happy that his will be with him forever.

After finishing their food maan and geet drove to their favorite place where they would love to spend, it will be lonely and pleasant. They sat on the bench, their fingers entwined, a small smile playing on their lips. Today everything in geet's life changed except her maan. she don't know what might be happened to her if maan is not there with her today. Her life depends on maan and vice versa. They don't know how they spent these 6 years away from each other. But there is a saying "dooriya bhi jaroori hai" and this separation and this distance made their relation and love more strong. Their eyes speaks volumes, when they are together no words are needed. They understand each others unsaid words. Maan and geet are made for each other, they are soul mates may be god knows this from before so that he made geet ask maan to marry her when she don't know what is life. But after that he played his own games which made them separate but today they are together again dreaming about their future and their life with each other.

Geet placed her head on his shoulder and closed her eyes. "Maan" called geet. "Yes jaan" replied maan. "Can I ask you something?" asked geet. Maan looked at her weirdly, from when she is asking permission. "Is there any need to ask permission jaan and if I say no then you will stop asking me" teased maan. Geet made a baby face and slapped on his check playfully. "Tum seedha jawab nahi de sakte" chided geet. "Acha baba pucho kya puchna hai" told maan. "Why do you love me so much" asked geet out of blue. She don't know why she is asking that, but want to know the answer. Maan looked at geet for a second deeply, "Do you really want to know the answer" asked maan. Geet nodded her head vigourously. "I don't know why I love my devil so much, but one thing is clear I cant live without my devil" told maan with so much love in his eyes. First geet pouted for calling her devil again but is happy to hear his answer.

Geet just hugged maan tight and whispered "I don't know what might have happened to me if you are not there, I might have die'" before she completes maan broke the hug and stared at her with anger filled eyes. "Geet, its true that I love to listen all your non-sense but that doesn't mean that you will talk whatever comes in your mind. And if you talk about dying once again I will only kill you" told maan angrily. His eyes are spiltting fire. Geet made a baby face and made him look at her. But maan turned his face away. Geet tried to kiss him on his cheek but maan avoided her and stood up. "Lets go home" told maan and geet looked up and cursing her self for her big mouth.

Maan and geet sat in the car, geet is trying different ways to talk to maan but maan is adamant and naughty maan is fully enjoying his mishty's pleading which is very rare. "Huh!!! Attitude kahika, let me see how much tim he will be angry on me. Hahaha his geet has her own plans. Oh no its already very late, mama and papa will be worried" thought geet and is thinking different ways to accomplish the mission manao maan.

She knows everyone will be worried for her but she found peace near maan and he is the only one who can take out all her pain and worry. Least does she knows that some good news is waiting for her. Pooja and raghu are ever so eagerly waiting for maan and geet to tell about rupa's arrest. They are even trying to talk with mohinder to know why he did so? They still not able to trust him for what he did? They just want to confirm he is not playing any new game now to trap geet.

On the other hand mohinder is still in dark, still alone not facing world and not facing their questions. It became very tough for police to control the reporters who are waiting for mohinder's one glimpse. This news became a hot topic now. Everyone are waiting for mohinder, all are waiting for his answers eagerly even raghu and pooja.

In india, dadimaa who is watching news guessed what might have happened there. And she thought its high time to reveal mohinder's truth so that no one can think bad about him again and accuse him for what he did. "No, because of his promise I kept mum, but now its high time. I should tell the truth to everyone mainly geet. Her sufferings and her pain should end now" thought dadimaa. "Mohinder beta, I am sorry. You need your daughter and your daughter needs you, all your sufferings should end now. Yes it should end. I have to go to London. Last time I accused him for killing geet and came back to india, now I am going to London to save the same man which I accused" thought dadi sadly. What is this fate? Why it is playing with innocent people who don't deserve any pain or sufferings? May be this truth brings change in everyones life for better. A mother gets her daughter back, a father gets his daughter back, may be their life will be again filled with happiness, smile and laughter. And mainly they will be at peace without any worry and misunderstanding.

Dadimaa booked London tickets for Vicky and annie too, they will be also be happy seeing their friend after a long time. Soon the information passed to Vicky and annie, they are on cloud 9 hearing this news and dadi even told them not to reveal this news to anyone not even to their parents and bro. though Vicky is confused with this condition of hers but nodded thinking there might be something important. Annie is too much happy that she didn't give any heed to dadi's words, she ran to her room and started packing her things as she don't want to waste a single minute. And their flight is tomorrow early morning.


In London:


Raghu is waiting for maan and geet so as pooja. Suddenly pooja remembered something and called raghu. "Ji suniye" "Ha pooja" replied raghu. "I want to talk to you something important" told pooja. "Ha bolo pooja" told raghu. "Wo actually, main chati hu ki maan aur geet shaadi karle" told pooja.

Precap: Mission Manao Maan

Raghu's reaction.



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Edited by chinni10 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww I lived the update
Rupa is in jail for her deeds
Nd geet is safe
Maaneet enjoying their moments
Maan is angry wid geet ir I say becoming naughty
Dadi going London aling with vicky and anie
Precap waiting

Dear what happened???
U r going hospital
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely maaneet moments..waiting for geet to get back her father..hopefully she learn the fathers innocence soon..pls cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
finally everything is falling in its right place
after a long of suffering crying nd accusing one another
now everyone will be happy
maaneet love is blossom nd blossom with time
love maan fake anger
waiting for geet to manaonig her maan
waiting dadi enetr's
after a long time will see dai
was missing her
nd want to know about vicky when he got to know that maan was being shoot why he was so calm
there must be some strong reason behind that
waiting for more nd more update

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Posted: 12 years ago
How does dadima knows about mohinder's innocence. Will geet accept it
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally Mohinder has done it.. Hope Geet will forgive her daddy.. & Maneet shaadi..😳 Waiting for it.. But Dadi knew the truth.. How??😕

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