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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
From Richa Kapoor
Author :-Richa Kapoor
Story:-Maaneet
Title:-Love:-Bless or Burden


Love:bless or burden


She felt finished the moment he betrayed. She lost faith in everyone. Broken and dead indeed. He turn her into a lifeless body,who can breath yes but not sensing anything. Smiles was stolen. She forgot how to smile. Her lips forgot to curve in that mode. Even her eyes turn dry. He broke like some one broke his toy after his play is over.

Today she get married with a boy choosen by her parents. She silently fulfilled thier wish because they wants her to get married and settled in her life. Like all other brides neither she felt shy nor have any enthusiasm or excitement for her future life. She just make up her mind that the coming one,for whom she is waiting on wedding bed,is her husband and she have to surrender her body to him whenever he needs to satisfy his needs desires. She looks really an epitome of beauty today but her gloomed face is just like bad mark. She has been waiting for him soo long,but he was busy with his guests and friends. She dont even look at him properly how he looks like,as it hardly matters for her.

In mid-night a very handsome boy with very sharp features,having a smile on his perfect m-shaped lips came indside. He was her husband. He came near to bed and found her sleeping. Her head is leaned on bed's back. He came near her and caress his fingers tips on the edge of her face tenderly,feeling her smooth and creamy skin

He adored her natural beauty and feels fall for her. He raised himself and kissed her tenderly on her forehead. He grinned and maid her laid comfortably and tugged her under soft duvet. He went to change and come to slept. He glance once again to her angelic face before he turn off the lights. Both slept peacefully.

Next morning her silent sleep broken with the continuous patting sound on their door. She get up jerkly and found him sleeping peacefully besides her. She look around and all things are placed on their proper place. She get up from the bed in order to open the door. Dadima of her husband is waiting for her. She touched her feet and she blessed her.

'good morning Dadima.',she wished meekly.

'good morning Geet beta. Maan abi tak so rae hai kya?',dadima asked softly.

She simply nodded.

'aap ek kaam keejiye fresh hoke neeche aa jaiye.apko pata hai na kitchen ki pooja krwani hai apse?',Dadima reminds her about the rituals and she shook her head like a robot and followed her instruction. Dadima smiles and left from there. Geet feed her every instruction and changed her heavy bridal sari to simple emroided one. She come out and dried her drenched hairs in front of mirror. She do it carelessly and unwillingly the drops splash on his face,which broke his sleep. Slowly 2 he opened up his dizzy eyes and glance her fresh face in gleam of sun light in which it brightens more than last night. He gazed her lovingly but it doesnt effects her. First she doesnt notice but when she switch to other side hairs,she found him gazing her continuously. He gave a sweet smile to her and wants her to gave back. Geet who alredy forgot how to smile only gave apanic look to him.

'aap kab uthe?',her voice fluffred dreadfully.

Maan assume her panic of newly wedded so he dont over react and ans softly,'just abhi jab apne jaagya.'

her lips droodle and the drops which hung on her lucious lips,lignite fire in his whole body. She looks more desirable. He wants to love her right now,but panic of her eyes stops him and forced to control his desires. Geet made an escape from there. She went to dadima and follwed whatever she told her to do. One by one many rituals take place and she only obeyong Dadima. She dont even complaints of tiredness. But Maan sensed from her dizzy eyes. Whole day she doesnt eat much,but to entertain the guests only. Maan doesnt like much and talked to Dadima.

'dadima what is this? Subah se ye rasm wo rasam or kitni rasme baki hai?',he said frustratingly. It was almost 11pm,and still she havnt take her meal. Geet not bother this but Maan do. Geet only knows that now this is her home and she have to do all the thing they desired for. For herself she needs nothing,so not even sences her hunger.

'beta achha to hume b nai lag raha. Lekin kafi sare guest out of town se hai isliye wo chahye hai jitni rasme jaldi se jaldi puri ho taki wo b participate kar ske.',Dadima told her problem.

This reason is not enough to make his mouth shut. He saw how all guests rounded her and enjoyed,and she looks pale and tired. He straight went in between the guest and clenched her wrist.

'chalo Geet.',he orderd.

She glance in his dark brown eyes,which glaring every guest there. She get confused to whom she followed now. Listen to Maan or Dadima. She stood at her place.

'Maan beta abi rasme...',one of guest wants her to stay,but Maan's deadly glare enough to shut all mouth.

'rasme insano bhale k liye hai na ki unki jaan lene k liye. Subah se aap log ise robot ki tarah nachwa rae hai. Kisi ne jaruri nai samjha ki dekhe isne kuchh khaya hai b ya nai. Lekin aap logo ko kya farak padta hai?,he fumed more. He wait her to step forward but inorder to gave respect to her elders she rooted to her place. Maan's frustration roses. He scooped her in front of all and moved to his room. Reaching upstairs she screamed loud. 'Nakul Geet ka dinner leke aao quick.'

nakul nodded yes and quickly ran in kitchen. He moved to his room. Although guest making gossips about his behaviou but Dadima chuckled at his actions. She is cool and calmed and monify all the guests. Maan made her sat on bed comfortably. She squeezed more in herself. Maan sence her shivering and step back. She sitting silently lowering her down. Meanwhile Nakul knocked and entered with a trolly of food items. Maan signled hin and he leave from there. He himself made plate for her and sat near her.

'Geet i know u havnt take ur lunch also and now dinner is also on a row. Pls eat somthing.',he passed a spoon of rice to her. Geet,who doenst want to attach herself to anyone demands for a plate.

'aap fikar mat keejiye main khud kha lungi.',she said in alow voice and aksed for a plate. Maan wants to feed her but passed her without asking much. Geet take 2 3 bites and leave the plate but Maan not allowed her.

'Geet finish it.'

'lekin Maan,'

'its an order.',he said bossily.

She now stop arguing and finished her meal. Maan have a relief smile on his face...

Maan felt peace seeing her eating. Geet was thinking other way. She thought now he wants her thats why he act desperately. She making her mind set for his coming actions. Maan went inside washroom and change his clothes after that he commands her to change and wear night clothes. Geet mutely do it. When she come out Maan was half laid and so much indulge in his laptop. She shivered badly with the thought,is gonna happened next. She sat at the corner.

'feeling light now?'he asked calmly.

She gave a small shook as a ans.

'then come and take some rest. I know you are tired since morning. So laid and sleep.',he said while working on his laptop. He dont even glance her.

'aap...?',she had many doubts,about his words so she wants to confirm the meaning of his words.

'i have to finish this.so i slept later. Dont worry i wont make any noise,so just relax and take ur sleep.',He cleared her all doubts at once.

She felt hesitation but laid and soon went in her sleep mode. Maan doing his work for next 2 more hours. When he finished he also slept with her. Next morning she found herself in his arms. She slept cuddling him. She saw his content face and their proximity. She took him wrong for once but then she realize as there nothing is happened between them. She is the one who slipped to his side and laid on his arm. She slid back and moved from there. Maan wakes up to due to lack of her warmth. He scanned and hear shower sound is coming from washroom. He again laid and closed his eyes in her wait. When she come out and combing her hairs. A pair of arms grabbed her from back side. She gasped. Maan leaned over her shoulder and brushed his lips on her bare skin.

'good mrng.',he wished her in husky tone.

Geet calmed herself.'he is ur husband Geet dont over react and let him do what he want.'she rooted mutly to her place. No reaction from her side. Maan caress her bare arms with his rough palms and buried his face in corck of her neck. Geet clenched his fists harder that her own nails tored the soft flesh of her palms. His touch and kisses made her vulnerable and forced her to respond but she dont want made herself fool again. Maan turned her to him and glance her face. She was blank completely. He try to read her face but there was nothing. He cupped her wet face and leaned over her plum lips to taste them. He gave a soft peck,still she remain like a stone. Maan tilted his head back as she dont responded to him. His hands fell of off her as her rock behavior shocked him. Her eyes looked away as he felt ashamed for this.

'i m sorry',he whispered. Though he wasn't,he was sorry for hurting her but not for being with her. She hurried off and walked swiftly to washroom. She splashed her face with water,looking up in the mirror. She looked up her neck where the love bite had started to form and craved to feel his lips on her again. She doesnt want to feel this all again then why his kisses sparked something in her,which she buried long ago.

She was struggling with herself daily. Maan's pace is increasing coming closer to her. He was unaware of her forbidden past. Unknowingly he hurts her every time he try to get intimate with her. He craved for her love. His longing is quite natural. Though he never showed his desperation but he is indeed desperate to love her and to be loved by her. Two weeks passed and she perfectly fitted with the atmosphere of KM. She proved herself a perfect DIL. But Maan is still longing for their relation to proceed next step. Dadima send them on HM. So they get comfortable with each other. Everything is just perfect like some fairy tale. The room,decorations, preparations made by him to please her. His heart wrenched when his all efforts are proved to bring even a slight smile on her lips. He never saw anything bring gleam in her almond restless eyes. He sensed her dullness towrds their relationship. Now he start doubted that there is something whish she is hiding from him.

This time when he started his foreplay to made her mood,again he only receives cold vibes from her she neither stops him nor reciprocate. He started with a kisses and she laid like a dead body. Seeing the same responce everytime he now felt annoying,but not shout on him. Geet too felt strange that every time he only started but not proceeding further. Today when he parted and making a move Geet clenched his arms and stops him.

'y u stopped? Go ahead and grabb what u want.i m ready and wont stop u anyhow.',she said coldly. Her eyes were blank and only stuck to roof.

This is really a frustrated and insulting of his love. He grasped her both arms and made her glance at him.

'what's wrong with you ha? From the day one i noticed your cold behavior towards me? If u as much dislike me then why you said yes for a marriage?',his patience give up and now he only needs explanation.

'i dont hate you and i m very happy with this marriage. Pls proceed yai hota hai.Lets finish it today',she said meekly while dropping a tear.

He angered more for hurting her. But her words needled him most.

'Geet i want to love u and wants equally love from ur side. Main tumhe khareed kr nai laya hu,jo tume use karo. For god sake pls tell me what is ur problem. Do u love someone else?',he shaked her body and his que shakes her whole word badly. The word Love is the one she hate most. Suddenly a new expression rather than gloominess is occurred in her eyes. She glared him and gave a jerk to his hands.

'no i dont love anyone. Nafrat hai mujhe is shabd se. Is ehsaas se. Pyar jaisi koi cheez nai hoti hai. Sirf dusro k emotions k sath khelne ka ek hathiyar hai bas.',she yelled on his and pouring her buried frustration out.

Maan was astonished seeing her this side. Coz he always experienced her silence and giving up behavior. He never even imagined that she can burst like this. It was like he pinned forbidden volcano buried inside her.

Maan saw her amusingly. He cant get why she had so much hatred towards love.'Geet calm down and pls forgive me. I dont want to hurt you. Pls tell me why you have so much hatred towrds the most beautiful feeling?',his voice is calm and face is contend. Geet glance in his intence eyes,which have a magical efect on her. She lowered down immediately and felt guilt for behaving like this to him.

'i m sorry mujhe apse aise baat nai karni chahiye thi,',she apologize for her rude talk.

Maan not satisfied with her apology coz he want ans for her behavior. He asked again but Geet turn silent again. Her all pain tirn green and she went of off the bed and locked herself in washroom. Maan too felt guilty. He knocked and apologize .

'ok Geet relax.i m sorry i nevr asked anything from u.pls come out.',he get worried for her as there is no respond he got from her side.the only sound he hear is of shower which shower water non stop conti.for almost 2 hours. Now he realy panicked. First he hesitated but now it become necessary. He broke the door of washroom and entered inside. Geet was sitting under shower almost naked, like a statue,having no single moment at all. Maan turned numb seeing her worst condition. He itched his arm and toche her bare shoulder to awake her sences. Though her eyes are open,but they aint flicking which scared him. Her body was frozen. Maan immediately turn off te tap and wrapped her under the towel. He scooped her and brought in room again. He increased the temperature of room to make her warm and ripped off the remaining wet clothes from her body. He dried her with towel and make her wear new fresh and warm clothes. Maan immediately summoned the doc and until he came,Maan snuggled her inside his warm embrace and covered both under soft duvet. He conti. rubbed her hands to make them warm. Her eyes were stoned. She can able to saw everything but not react. She froze badly,cant even able to move herself. Meanwhile Doc came and examine her. He gave her injection and prescribed some medi.

'good Mr. Khurana that you called me ontime,otherwise anything can happened.',Doc told tensly.

'doc is there anything serious?i mean if u suggest we must shift her to hospital. I dont wanna a take a chance.',his fluffred voice and wet eyes enough to told how much he cares about her.

'i can understand ur worry,but now she is out of danger. Just take good care of her. She will b alright soon. Still if anything happen called me,i 'll b there.',doc assured him about her.He lefts the room and Maan again snuggled her to warm up her.

'i m sorry Geet.if i had any idea that my words dragg u towrds that worst,trust me i never opend my mouth. Pls Geet forgive me. I promise i never asked anything from you. Do whatever you and live in your style,i promise i never complaints,but pls dont hurt yourself like that. Get well soon dear.',he kissed on her forehead gently and rubbed her cold arms,to sooth her. Soon she slept due to the effect of injection. Next day when she wake up,she found herself in his embrace. She slept for almost 8hrs and Maan not leave her side for a single sec. He slept in a same sitting posture to gave relief to her. With her he also wake up. Maan touched her forehead,then stood up and brought thermometer to count the temp.of her body. She is much better then last night,but now she catch fever. Maan ordered some fruits and light food for her. She doent want but he convince her sweetly. She eat less,and Maan not forced her. He gave her medi and made her laid again. Maan's whole body is aching but he doesn't show on his face. Geet felt guity coz she know Maan was in bad condition too. She nver thought of hurting him,but as well said marriage means sharing everything,rather its pain or happiness. Now both going through pain.

Geet asked him to take some medi.for his body pain. She requested politely that he cnt denied. He also take medi. Maan decided to stay here until she get well as he dont want to make Dadima a part of thier painful relationship.

Maan is alone to take care of her. There is no day and night for him. His care and selfless behavior made place in her closed heart. He succeed in gaining trust of hers. after that incident she wont able to trust any1,but in past few days, suddenly something had happned between them. An untold bound is roses. His care and patience forced her to open up in front of him.

She is now recovering. Doc came and check her. She is fine. As soon he leave Geet clenched his wrist and confessed in front of him.

'he used me',she said having tears in her almond eyes. Maan was expecting something weird had hidden in her past which made her like that but being an human being he got biggest shock. He felt as there is no ground underneath his feet. His legs shaken for a moment and blood boiled instantly. He glance her face. She is looking in his eyes to read his mind. Maan instantly overpowered his emotions,because he knew if she found anything else except trust in his eyes she wont open up again. Maan sat near her and asked contently.

'Geet mujhe batao kya hua tha? Sab kuchh.',his words pulled courage in her and she told him about her past why she behaved like that. Why she dont have any trust on love.

She looked pale and broken. Maan nodded and waiting for her to reveal the truth. She collect her all courage and the flashed of past occurred in her mind.

'Yash Malhotra,stud of our collage. Almost every girl likes him,but not i. His attitude always irritates me. Although we never came across each other but one day we messed over an small issue. Our prof.came and settle down the issue. I was thought its over but not for him. Next day he came to me apologize for his behavior. I felt amused but trusted him. That was my biggest mistake. Trust which i can do easily on anyone. His polite tone and well behaved manner changer my thoughts for him. Slowly slowly he become my friend. We start spending time together. As by time passess our friendship taking a new shape. He proposed me and i accept deliberately. Thats what he is actually waiting for. All the time he is only playing with me and my emotions. I was only a mere bet for him. He wants to show to his gang that he made me fall for him even after knowing about him. Then the final day of his plan is come. He take me out for a date,where we...',she stopped at sudden and many tear drops falls from her eyes. She found no words to complete her sentence. Flashes of that night shattered her again. Maan got the meaning of her unsaid words and he crushed the sheet underneath his fists. Geet again collect her courage coz what she is going to reveal now is more worst. Maan is about utter when she again started. 'its not end here. The worst part is waiting for me. Next day he not only ditched me but making mock of my love in front of whole collage. He showed that how desperate i m for him and easily given up. But he was right all fault is mine. I supposed not to cross my limits that night.',she clenched her eyes and her nody turn stiff.

'Geet...',Maan too broked. Dont found the words to console her.

'Maan tell me,how can u slept on me?',Geet asked stiffly.

Maan hurted with her cold words. His jaws clenched hard and he grasped her. 'Geet look at me.' he held her chin and lifts up.'Geet i kno the pain you going through,but it doesn't meant you count all men with the same eye. Geet he did wrong with you,iska ye matlab nai hai ki sab waise hi hai. Chhota bachha jab chalna seekht hai to kai baar girta hai,use chot b lagti hai par iska ye matlab to nai ki wo chalna chhod deta hai. Geet usne agar dhokha diya iska ye matlab nai ki tum sabko shak ki nigah se dekho. Maanta hu its not easy for you,but i know you are strong enough. Geet tume apne aap se ladna hai. Zindagi bahe pasare tumhara intezar kar rai hai now its up to u ki tume kya chahiye? Wahi andhera ya usse over come kar k aage badna hai.',his words filled courage in her. Maan made her laid again and cover her.'i am not in hurry. I will wait for you for my whole life. I know one day you must b able to trust on me. Trust on love again.',Maan trun off the light and left her to retrieve her thoughts.

Next few days passed casually. She felt lightened as she share her truth with him. Her restlessness is settled than before. Now her health is also improving. Maan took her back to KM. Dadima welcomed both warmly. Geet felt good in her embrace. She felt save. Dadima too felt good as her only life,her kids came back. Geet spend most of the time with dadima coz Maan again came back in action. He is MSK in his office and business world. All scared of his name. Although their relation have to go long way but there is some hope of ray is rising for him. Geet start talking with him normally and start taking interest in life again. With his and dadima's care and love she again start smile,though not fully but she started it. Vast change is came in her behaviour when Maan's cousin Dev cae with his wife Meera and small kid Aaryan. They came to stay in KM for a week. With three of them sply Aaryan's naughty acts troubles Geet but instead of grumping she start enjoying. In that one week Maan was not able to spend time with Geet coz he was very busy in his new project which is unknown for everyone. Dev came actually on the summon call of Maan. He needs him and Dev do all what Maan wants. Meera and Aaryan spend time with Geet and Dadima. All 4 enjoyed and again Geet felt to live her life. She start waiting for Maan to tell him about her wole day experience,but lack of time not allowed her. Good thing for Geet is their stay stretched from 1 week to 1 whole month. Geet's heart again start rejoicing the moments. Whole day Aaryan get involved her with him. Slowly slowly she start forgetting her past in this new atmosphere. Finally a day came when Maan was at home. He took all for a day out on his farmhouse. All enjoying in a pool except Geet as she dont know how to swim. Aaryan again come in his mischievous form. He pushed her inside the pool and she scared but Maan was inside the pool and he scooped her up. She is patting her legs and hands badly.

She closed her eyes out of fear and dont even realize that she is safe now as Maan pulled her up out of water.

'Geet... Geet relax u r safe see',Maan called loud to grab her attention. Geet open her eyes slowly2 and look around. She was safe in his strong arms. He was standing in a pool carring her. Both boured in each other eyes for a moment. Her hands roamed on his bare chest and broad shoulders. her soft curves pressed against his rock hard chest as he snuggled her tightly in his hard frame. Standing in cold water,still both felt a heat ran through their bodies. This heat of desire, which is felt by both is all set to burned both. They forgot everything around them. Unknowingly Geet's soft palm stroked up to his nape. He can felt the pressure made by her on his nape. He too float with the moment and leaned over her soft lips. Their lips just half an inch away when Aaryan's clap sound broke their trance. Both trun their gaze to him. He was standing on the edge of pool and clapped cont. Maan walked off towards the pool edge. He made her sit their. She is shivering now. Meera immediately wrapped her in towel and was about to slap Aaryan when Geet stopped her.

'nai Meera pls usko kuch mat kaho',she request.

'nai Geet ye bahut batameez ho gaya hai.abi tume kuchh ho jata to.',she said angrily.

'its ok Meera,bachha hai.or waise b mere hote hue koi b takleef Geet ko chhu b nai skti.'last line Maan said glancing Geet intensely. His dark intense eyes made her shivred and she felt shy. His proximity,his care,his touch all made her insane. She start craving for his attention. She start trusting on him but yet to be realized. Maan came out of the pool. He was in his shorts. Geet's eyes shamelessly roamed on his perfect wet chiseled body. She wants to take off but not able to. Her eyes struck on his wet hot form and breath turn halted. Meanwhile Dev came and gave phone to him. Maan ans the call and Geet got more time to drool on him. As soon he get rid of his phone he slanted his neck to see her and she is still gazing him. Seeing his effect on her he chuckled. He sat near her and said huskily.

'if u get enough can i wear my clothes?',he asked shamelessly and her cheeks turn red,feeling embarrassed. But before she go on a guilty trip Maan kissed her red cheery cheeks and changed her mind again. She turn numb and her eyes widened with his advancement. Maan winked and went inside to change. She still feeling the sensation created by his lips on her cheek. All enjoyed this family day out.

One month is come to an end. Dev and Meera all set to leave,when Dev came in their room.

'bro ye file. Apka sara kaam ho gaya hai.ab apna plan execute kar skte ho.',he said with a mischievous smile.

Maan too smile cruely. Both hugged each other.'thanx Dev itne short notice pe ye sab karne k liye.'

'anything for u bro',he winked and leave.

Geet dont get what they are talking about. She felt sad as they leave. Now again loneliness bound her. Dadima suggest her to join KC. She agreed quickly. Maan take her to their office and introduced her there. She start working and felt strange. The Maan she knew is not exist there. Here she met with a new Maan who is ruthless and scary. Sorry word is not found in his dictionary . One mistake and you will pay hardly. 3 more months passed and Geet start coming more closer to him. She start loving him unknowingly. Maan helped her on every step and showed his love too time to time. He kissed her when both sharing close moments and made her habitual of it.

Geet was in her cabin when she hear some noise outside. She came to saw what's going on. A bay is shouting to meet Maan,but his guards not allowed him.

Geet become curious to know who is there who made unwanted noise. Maan call his guard and he allowed him in. Geet stunned seeing the face. He was none other than Yash Malhotra. Geet's step back automatically. Hatred ran through her body. She rushed to his cabin and opned the door slightly. She hear their conflicting convo her feet rooted on her place. Yash is blaming Maan for ruining his company.

'Maan u cant do it to me.',Yash yelled.

'dont tell me ki MSK kya kar skta hai or kya nahi. Or tumhari ab ini haisiyat nai hai ki to MSK k office me aake hungama khada kar sko.',Maan glared him.

'how dare you overtake my all assets and company?',Yash blamed him.

'i think itna pade likhe to tum ho hi. You mortgage all thing for money and now when two months time period is getting over,i have a right on all assets legally.now dont waste my time. I dont talk to beggars.',Maan called the guards and ordered them to threw him out. They came and dragged him out. Yash and Geet come face to face. Today like her he bcom fun of everyone. Every staff member making mock of him. Every eyes piercing him. Yash saw her fire smiting eyes and lowers his.

'so mr Yash Malahotra how you feel now?',she taunts.

'Maan ne dhokhe se sab kuchh chhena hai mujhse',he cribbed furiously.

'dusro ko dhokha dene wala morality ki baat kare achha nai lagta. Today i m very happy coz you got what you deserve. Ab tume pata chalega jab vishwas tootta hai to kitna dard hota hai.',she snap angrily.

'you...',before he completes Geet slap him tight and shut his mouth.

'yahi thappad mujhe tume us dinn marna chahiye tha. Tumhari wajhse maine khud ko blame kiya.par ab or nahi galti meri nai tumhari thi or aaj bhagwan ne tume uski saza b di hai tumhe barbad kar k. Aaj k baad ab tum kisi ladki ki zindagi khrab nai kar sakoge.',she glared him and guards pulled him from there. They threw him out of the building. Geet rushed to Maan's cabin. He was talking on his phone. Geet run towards him and hugged him from back side. Her curves rubbed against his back make him shudder with pleasure. Her soft palm roaming on his chest and he lost the rythem of his convo. He cuts the call and pulled her in front of him. She is crying. Maan scared watching tears in her eyes. He cupped her face and asked worriedly.

'Geet are u ok?',he asked an she nodded with a smile.'then why are u crying?',he asked for the reason. Instead of answering him she pulled towards him and hugged him tightly.. Maan dont know the reason of his behavior but he liked it very much. His arms clenched her tight in his hard frame. He asked again but she glued to him silently. After a while he parted little bit and lift her face up.

'wo yash...apne usko saza di na mere liye?',she asked while sobbing.

'use k sath wahi kiya hai jo wo deserve karta hai. I ruined him. Ab wo kabi kisi k sath kuchh bura nai kar payega.',Maan gritted in anger.

'par apne ye sab kaise..?'Geet asked.

'tumne jab bataya usi dinn maine than liya tha ki Yash ko uske kiye ki saza milegi. Isiliye main Dev ko yaha bulaya. Usne mere kehne pe ek fake co.ka office khola or proposal rakha Yash k samne. Mujhe pata tha Malhotra's bahut greedy hai to wo zada chhan been nai karenge. Dev ne badi asani se use impress kar liya or Yash investment k liye maan gaya. Malhotra Industries.k 49%shares to main pehle hi khareed chuka tha. Ab zarurat thi sirf hold pane ki. Main janta tha itni badi investment k liye use loan uthana hi padega or wai hua. Then i will make sure that he wont b able to grab money from anywhere in the market. Taki use mere paas aana hi pada. My plan is working and he come to me. I granted him money he desired and in return he mortage his all assets to me. Dev k throug mera paisa mere pas wapis aa gaya or Malhotra's barbaad kyunki fake co.dissolved ho gai. He brought him on footpath. Now he understand the meaning of Pain. Geet tume takleef dene se pehle har koi so bar sochega. Kyunki agar kisi ne soch b to main uska aisa hi anjaam karunga.',Maan hold her tight to him.

Her eyes filled with love, gratitude and happiness. Today she can know that he is the one whom she can trust blindly,to whom she love with no bounds.'I love you Maan.'she confesses in outburst of her emotions and hugged him again. Maan couldn't able believe on his ears. That 3 words which he always wants to hear from her,she said as easily. Many time he feels that may she is going to confess but everytime words came and struck in her throat,coz she dont able to trust on him. But today no boundaries bound her feelings for soo long. He proved himself a true life partner. Who love her beyond her imagination. Who can go to any extend in order to make her happy. She found a trust-able man,a caring and true Lover in Maan. Pure love of her life. Maan kissed on her eyes,forehead,her nose and cheeks. Geet raise her lips to him and gave a peck on his lips. This was a green signal for him that now she doesn't have any doubt on him.

He slammed his hungry lips on her supple one. He brushed his lips gently and start licking her lips. She gasped and parted to deepen the kiss. Maan 's tongue who is seeking for the entrance got a chance to devour every ounce of hers. Both devour and taste each other slowly slowly,taking their time. Both having no hurry. They exploring each other mouth and relish the moment blissfully,founding true love of their life...

They finished their meal and went for a sight seeing. It almost take several hours. Wind start oozing madly and soon rain started,while thunder tore the sky apart and flashes of lightning lit up the ever- deepening gloom. Both sat in their car and Maan drove carefully. In spite of the noise of the strom raging outside the flickering firelight had a soothing and the tension gradually began to ease. The day she confessed her love to him,bring them closer. Still they have to go long way. 1 week is passed to that day. But they bcom more comfortable then before. Suddnly their car struck mid way. Maan try harder but nothing had happened. Maan opened her side door and took her along with him. Both running in a dark night.

'Maan where are we going?',she asked confusingly.

'Geet car khrab ho gai hai.but dont worry paas me hi humara farm house hai. Hum waha jayenge.',he told her and both ran for next 10mins to reached to their farmhouse.

Maan was equally wet,his hairs plastered to his head,rain drops running down his face,his clothes clinging to his chiseled frame. She rounded on him and through teeth that had started to chatter,'Maan i felt cold.'

Maan took her inside and ran to his room. He opened one of the linen cupboards and took out a big white towel.'Geet dried yourself.'

'Maan main change kaise karu?',he glanced her wet form, she shivering badly. He raised an eyebrow. Handing her a folded robe he suggested.'Geet right now to yahi hai hai. If you want to strip off by the stove where it's warmer,i'll use the washroom.'

she nodded and he took a towel,one of the robes and departed. As soon as the door had closed behind him,Geet peeled off her wet clothes and dried herself thoroughly before donning the toweling robe and belting it securely. It was man's robe and much too big for her but it was blessedly warm and once she had tired up the sleeves it was comfortable to wear.

She removed the pins from what remained of her knot, toweled her long hairs,combed out the tangles and left it loose around her shoulders to finish drying. She sat near the fire place. Maan reappeared wearing a matching robe and asked softly,'feeling warmer now?'

She nodded and sat silent. There was so much between them that had been left unsaid. With mingled feelings of trepidation and inevitability,Geet waited for him to speak,to bring up from the past. But the silence stretched between them,and try as she might she could think of nothing to say or any way to defuse the situation.

He fetched a towel to rub his hairs and dry his face before resuming his seat by the fire and leaning back at his ease,his eyes half closed. With his slightly rumpled hairs,his lips a little parted and a dark dense stubble adorning his chin,he looked incredibly sexy.

Inspite of all her efforts to stay unmoved,Geet's breathing grew labored and her pulse rate quickened as she imagined those beautiful,sculptured lips touching hers...

Flustered by the intent way he was studying her face,she found herself blushing furiously.'sorry,' he apologized.'I didn't mean to stare. But u look so...' He broke off.

'i think i look an absolute fright',she said seeing him quite.

He shook his head.'i wouldn't say that.'

'then what would u say?'she asked,without really thinking.

Smiling,he told her.'that u look utterly enchanting,seductive,sweet ans sensuous,like one who's longing to be made love to...'

'i feel tired now,so i think it would be better if i went to bed after all...'she said jerkly but after realizing that she was babbling,she broke off abruptly.

He rose too. His face straight,his eyes devilishly amused. He inquired,'Alone?' he took a step forward,his voice low and intense. He murmured,'you delighted me,enchant me and i have thought of little else but taking you in my arms and making love with you...'

gently he placed his hand on her cheek and with a little murmur she turned her mouth into his palm. His other hand came upto cup her face and then his mouth was moving against hers. He kissed her with all passion and marking his possession over her. When he finally drew back,she was flushed and euphoric and glance at his face showed that everything she was feeling,he was feeling too. Every nerve ending in her body came to life and her skin waited,longing for his touch,the blood running hot beneath it.

'Maan make me urs. I want you. Mark ur possession on me. I promised today i dont disappoint you.',she swayed towards him.

His hands were inside her robe,following the elegant line of her spine,the dip of her narrow waist and the flair of her hips,before they moved upwards to caress her bosoms. She sighed and her head fell back,surrendering the long elegant line of her throat to his lips. While kissing he unfastened her robe and slipped it off her shoulders, letting it fall to the floor. Swinging her up in his arms he laid her gently on the bed.

She was the loveliest thing he had ever seen,with beautifully shaped bosoms,a small waist,rounded hips and long slender limbs. Her skin was flawless,smooth as satin and tempting to touch.

The fire glow turned her slender figure to the purest gold. Sitting on the edge,he ran his hands over her body as though it was rare and precious,something he would never get tired of exploring. Her obvious enjoyment fueling his,he began to use his lips,mouth and tongue to fine new ways to heighten her pleasure. His skilled fingers teasing one dusky pink nipple,he took the other into his mouth and stroked the sensitive tip with his tongue before starting to suckle sweetly. She gave a throaty gasp as a shock of unaccustomed delight ran through her. Her bosoms blossomed at his touch,his free hand traveled to the smooth skin of her inner thighs. His long fingers now began to explore the warmth of her feminine part.she moaned in her throat. Her fingers untied his robe. She too wants him to feel as he do. Maan stand on his knees and removed his roe. Standing before her,tall,straight and naked,he inquired,'better?'

her mouth gone dry and she could only gaze at him speechlessly. He was well toned fit and handsome.

Starting where he had left off,he proceed to pleasure her,whispering how sweet and innocent lovely she was,how desirable,how much he wanted her.

Maan parted her legs and adjust him between her legs. His fingers alredy made her wet enough. With a little murmur she drew him to her. Her body welcoming his smoothly, ecstatically,as though it had been waiting a lifetime for just this moment.

For a while after that first,slow thrust,he simply lay enjoying the feeling of her slender body beneath his. Filled with him,and eager for more,she moved her hips in an invitation. But when he finally moved there was no urgency,the pace was leisurely,luxurious,and they made love in silence which only served to increase all the delicious sensations she was experiencing.

Even when the momentum increased,,it still seemed tantalizingly slow and erotic,until finally and together they reached the dazzling heights of physical pleasure before drifting back to earth. Their pace breathing was proof pof their passionate experience. Maan cuddled her inside his hard frame and kissed on her tired face all over lovingly. She caressed her palm on his sweat beads occurred on his forehead,to his cheeks and then on his lips. Maan kissed her finger tips one by one gently.

'did i remember to tell you how beautiful you are?'his words,and the tenderness of gestures,sent her floating up to a cloud nine. But she kept her feet on ground and objected.

'i m merely an average and no one look beautiful sply in this state.'

'wrong on both counts. When first i look you in your home,your beauty took my breath away. And this time it still does.'

her cheeks turn pink and she lowered her gaze shyly. He leaned over her lips and took one last time before they go to sleep.'i love you sweetheart',he murmured in her mouth. Both parted after sharing a sou searing kiss.

He smiled at her and clenched her more possessively. Returning his smile a little shyly she too confessed.'love you too.'

'thats what i wanted to hear,'he murmured and kissed her again.

Today both closer in all senses not only on physical level but on mental and emotional level. Their souls become one,finding their world of love in each other. He filled her life with his immense love and happiness. She never see back after this and start their new life blissfully.

pls do and read and comment and encourage Richa Kapoor to write more on Maaneet

Thanks

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 12 years ago
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awesoem os richu
everything was so perfect with thsi os
the pain geet went through the support that maan gave to geet and liek a true humsafar he was tehre with geet in every path and hwo carefull he removed all teh thrones from her life


lovely update once again richa
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HAPPY GHSP ANNIVERSARY TO ALL YOU!!👏

IRREVOCABLE LOVE:

At 10 Am in Chopra constructions.

It is a general meeting about the current project; all are involved in their discussion about the project, but the two souls present over there are starring at each other without a blink.

The PAST came in front of their eyes wetting their eyes, both are equally hurt, shattered by their ONE MISTAKE. They are talking through their eyes, complaining through their eyes, questioning each other.

It's the whole 2 years after that incident, and MAAN left her alone, she waited for him day and night, he didn't come. Now he is in front of her and she is in heaven seeing him.

He is here that means he is ready to forgive her mistakes or what? She is confused, happy; her heart is jumping seeing him after so many days. He did told her he will accept her after coming back, But her Guilt didn't make her to accept the truth. She questioned herself, will he accept her? Will he accept her after all her mistakes??

They are still starring at each other and both drifted to their past


PAST...

GEET: 20years, She is bubbly, free going girl doing her architect course. She is star in their college...Hatke types, and too much arrogant, not bending to anyone especially guys, she is daughter of Mohinder Handa and Rano Handa, somewhat spoilt by the pampering she is getting from her father and brothers, her brothers are Tej and Brij , they are successive business men's currently working with their father in Handa constructions.

She is in her 2nd year of her course, and she is a member of women association in her city, solves their problem. A strong girl thinks that all men's are same, may be from seeing hundreds of harassment cases in her women's association made her to think like that, she has strong dislike for men's except her family members. She hates MENS.

MAAN: 26 years successful business man, MD of khurana constructions, suffered a lot in his childhood when his father died in an accident and his mother was everything to him, she guided him to the good. And he always wanted to do something for his mother, so when he joined his architect course he started to look up their company which is on the verge of closure, he studied the condition of their company and in 2 years he successfully brought his company back in successful company lists. In those days he also took help of mohinder handa who is a friend of his father vikranth singh khurana.and he always respects mohinder handa for his guidance, they are only professional friends.

After finishing his studies, he went to London for establishing his company and for the higher studies too. He is also monitoring his company which is in INDIA. (He went to London at the age of 22)

Now he is back to INDIA, her mother ordered him to come back as she wants to marry him to GEET HANDA, Its mohinder handa who asked for the alliance and maan's mother PRIYA SINGH KHURANA is more than happy to get the sweet girl as her bahu, Yes geet is a sweet girl for everyone, but her arrogance will always comes out in front of men's.

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GEET came to know about the news of her marriage, she is in so much angry, how could her parents thought of her marriage to someone who she don't know, her father and mother told that he is one of their Friend .

She was cribbing that she has seen him in childhood,"now I don't even know how he looks " and her brother told her that HE IS IN LOVE WITH HER FROM CHILDHOOD and HE ADMIRED HER.

She assumed that it's his plan and he has trapped her parents for this marriage, and she decided to not to leave him, and to make his life hell, she was arguing the same. And her mother told her to visit MAAN's home once.

Now she is in front of maan's home, she has made her mind to teach him a lesson, MAAN's mother opened the door for her, geet gave a sweet smile and took blessings from her, she don't know how to ask about maan . She was talking all nonsense from the time she entered maan's home without knowing what to do.

She was going through the frames hanging on the walls, there was a photo were boy (5years) was holding a small baby (may be 1 year). The boy and the baby girl were looking so cute, geet was looking at the photo and smiling, when Priya came with some cool drinks for geet she found her starring at the photo, Priya smiled and handed the drink to geet. Priya knows geet has not recognized the babies in the photo so she told that it's MAAN and HER's (GEET) photo...

Geet was all embarrassed, she is blushing. Priya went to kitchen to prepare food for geet and her SON (MAAN) who will come to home as Priya's request.

GEET is starring at the photo, and she mentally slapped her head for blushing and shying like a typical girl. She came out from her starring session with the sound at the door.

MAAN is back to home from his office for the lunch; his mother informed him that geet is coming to their home for lunch, so he agreed to postpone his meetings to meet his GEET.

GEET saw someone at the door walking casually, she just screamed and blasted on him thinking him as a thief (hayee chor aaj kal suit pehenke aatha hey)

she don't know him and he is all the way starring at her and coming close to her, so to gain the attention of priya who is in kitchen , she just started to scream again, started to hit him with her fists. But he is fast enough to hold her to stop her from hitting him. priya came from kitchen hearing the sounds, before she asks for anything, geet started her blabbering about the thief, but stopped seeing priya laughing at her. Geet is confused thinking about at what priya is laughing at her. MAAN left her seeing his mom. Geet asked priya whether she knows this person. She once again laughs at her and told her that he is Maan who you were starring at the photo few minutes back.

Geet is embarrassed not knowing what to do she just ran from there. And MAAN and PRIYA laughed at her. Priya called her for lunch but she was already gone.

Geet came to her home, before anyone asking her anything she was all laughing for her stupid act and dashed to her room. Her parents thought she is happy with this alliance and thought of getting them married soon before their laadli daughter changes her mind.

MAAN's mother and geet's parents selected a date for their marriage and decided to not to go for engagement. So now the marriage day is fixed.

Geet many times argued telling that she doesn't want this marriage, but no one listened to her, they thought that it's the usual cribbing all the girls do during their marriage.

OK now geet decided to go with the marriage, she knows if not Maan her parents will tie her to someone. So she didn't tried to argue further, but now she is holding so much rage towards Maan.

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Finally the marriage is over and it's their wedding night. She is sitting alone in the decorated bed waiting for her husband. Maan comes to his/their room with some shyness. He is nervous, seeing her at the bed his heart fluttered and he is smiling like a fool. He came to her side and sat on the bed, and when he was going to touch her hand all of the sudden she stood up and was staring at him with rage.

He was confused not knowing why this reaction is for. Before he ask her anything she started to blast on him for trying to touch her, she blabbered all the things which came to her mind shattering his all dreams, he was more than happy to give her time, but she was nowhere to listen , she just took the pillow and moved to the couch.

maan is just starring at her back . And he decided to give her some time to adjust to the new environment and the new found relations. They both slept.

It's the 1st morning after their wedding after finishing all the rituals , She just went to their room without giving any time to maan or his mother to talk with her, and they didn't felt bad , they knows she wants some time..So they left her alone.

Its 2 weeks of their marriage and geet maam is in the same mood from the day one. It's the early morning maan went to bath and thought of teasing his stubborn wifey, so left his towel on the bed. After sometime he is shouting from the Bathroom for towel, and priya sent geet from kitchen not listening to geet's any refusal.

Geet came to their room to ask his problem, he asked her for the towel and when she went to gave him that, he just pulled her inside and blocked her way, she was looking at him without blinking, this is the 1st time he is behaving like this and she don't know what to do, she can't scream now as it will be odd. She is wriggling in his arms and he is starring at her with the pure love. He didn't went too far with his teasing knowing her state of mind, he just left her after sometime and she went from their in confused state. From then onwards he always tortured her with his sweet teasing... every time he came close to her, she got goose bumps and also amazed with her own reaction for his touches.

She also resumed her college to complete her studies, and she was happy with that fact. Priya noticed the differences between them and she decided to leave this two love birds for some time and decided to go to her sister's home. But geet was scared to live alone with him, and asked priya to not leave her, Priya just laughed and gave some excuses then left to her sister's home after informing to maan.

Now it's Diwali for maan, he has all the time and space to torture his sweet stubborn wifey, and this went for some days and nowadays she was getting scared when he is around. She felt like her tongue tied when he comes in front of her.

It's another day when geet was thinking about maan and her girly reactions to his teasing, she was blushing remembering his gestures. In her classes she will be always lost in his thoughts and her friends teased her saying that she is in love with her hubby, after some days passing like this she concluded that she is in love with HER MAAN.

She just thought how to tell this to Maan, she was so excited from her new found feelings she was busy all the day planning to give him surprise. she made all his favorite foods with the help of servants, and decorated their room, she got ready and was waiting for him.

It's some client party where Maan was talking about the project with his client, his client offered him for drinks but he just sweetly refused, but after some requests from his client he took the drink without creating the scene. He took 4-5 glasses without thinking that it will take his senses...

He was all drunk at the end of the party, he saw at the couples who are dancing and remembered GEET, she didn't even once allowed him to touch her except his teasing touches, it is paining him now and he just left from their with the determination that he will ask her today that what's her actual problem, whether she loves him or not.

The door was open as geet is waiting for her husband to give him the surprise, the surprise of her ACCEPTENCE,

But she got shock to see the drunken Maan at the door, she just started getting some trust for her husband, now seeing him all drunk her heart broke, but she tried to touch him, support him from falling, but he just held her shoulder and started to accuse her and complain about her behavior towards him.

Geet knows it's useless to talk now, so she tried to go away from him, it angered him more and hold her harshly and then after what happened was not expected by both .HE JUST FORCED HER THAT NIGHT.

Her heart broke; she was frightened with the thought that her husband forced her. She was broken with his Devil act.

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It was morning he was still sleeping not knowing that his geet has gone leaving him alone because of his brutal act. He slowly opened his eyes adjusting to the morning light, and shocked to see the scattered cloths. He suddenly woke up and recalled his acts. He was so ashamed of himself, he tried to call geet, but didn't get any answer, he searched for her in every corner, but she was nowhere present.

He saw the decorated table and the foods which is untouched, and he came to their room to see room is all decorated but some things are scattered from his acts... Realization dawned in him, she did this for him and he just ruined everything.

But he didn't sulked in his guilt, he want his geet back, once she is back he will do anything to ask her forgiveness

He freshened up and went to her parent's home to get back his geet.

She was in her room with her parents surrounded her, Geet had informed her parents about his brutal act. Her mother tried to make her understand. But Geet's father stopped rano and pampered his daughter's anger; her brothers also scolded Maan and were thinking to kill him for misbehaving with their Laadli. But rano stopped them and tried to argue with them saying that its husband-wife's matter they should talk and clear that. But mohinder blasted on her and consoled his daughter.

Maan came to geet's home and rano was happy seeing him. Rano knows him very well he was not the person who will misbehave with his wife, there may be some misunderstanding and she thought they will clear by talking.

As soon as maan entered, geet's father and brother blasted on him, and accused him with their harsh words, he just listened to everything and asked them to allow him to talk with his wife, but they refused. He is also stubborn, he demanded to meet geet, listening to all tamasha outside, geet came in front of him. Before he ask her forgiveness, she gave a verdict that she is nothing to him and stop calling her his wife, he asked her to cool down and give a chance to him to explain but that is geet who never forgives anyone. He pleaded her that it's our issue don't bring your parents in the middle, come to our home, and then you can give any punishment to him.

But she is adamant; she didn't listen to any of his pleadings. Geet's father and her brothers threatened him to get out from their home. He just went thinking that her anger will cool down soon.

Its two months from that incident but she never agreed to meet him even after getting scolding from her mom. Her father and brothers pampered her anger a lot in these days; They filled rage, hatred in her heart and she failed to think by heart.

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One fine day she came to know that she is PREGNENT, and she was shocked to the core, she was not expecting this, but accepted the child. She informed her parents about the good news. But the business men's present in her house were thinking in other way, they didn't wanted MAAN's child, and her father questioned her that how can she keep that DEVIL's child, and now that made HER to go back to that incident were Maan forced her, and then they decided to abort the child. Rano can't tell her view in front of her husband, so she informed maan about their child, first he was happy with the news, and he thought she will forgive him now for the baby, but he was frightened when rano told about the abortion news. He just went to handa's home and argued with geet for taking that decision.

She told that it's her child she can do anything. He warned her to don't go with her father's decision as he very well knows it's not her soul decision, but she didn't changed her decision, then maan asked her to at least give birth to child and then after that he will not give any problem to her and he will go far away from her with the CHILD.

Before she gives any answer her father and brothers agreed for this condition as their geet will be freed from him after giving child to him. MAAN was shattered he wanted his wife; he wanted to love his wife and child but she is blinded with hatred. He doesn't know what to do. He just hoped she will come back to him in the coming days...

But that didn't happened; she has become more arrogant these days, arguing with everyone in her home for every small things, her sister in laws and her mother tried to make her understand, but she was adamant not listening to anyone, sometimes her sister in laws talked to her rudely thinking that she will change her mind and will go to her sasural, but she has become hard not caring for anyone.

7 months later

She was in the delivery room screaming, her parents were present outside the room waiting for the doctor, Rano had already informed MAAN about geet's condition and he is on the way to hospital.

He came after several minutes but no one talked with him, Maan was never good in explaining himself, once he begged in front of his wife leaving his all ego, instead of his reserved nature he pleaded everyone but no one was ready to give him a second chance, he was angry on geet for bringing their personal matter in front of her parent's, and not giving him rights to love her, love their child.

The doctor came and informed them that it's a GIRL. Geet's father asked maan to get lost from here with his child; he was not expecting this, he came here to take geet with his child. rano was not ready to give the child bcoz she knows the further consequences but mohinder was adamant and forced maan to leave from here before geet wakes up.

Geet after gaining consciousness, asked for her child, no one told about MAAN, all were silent, when she shouted on them, mohinder lied to her, told her that maan forcefully took the child from them, and A MOTHER's heart pained to hear that , she was ready to go to maan's home to bring her child back but she was so week so her father didn't allowed her to go.

After few hours geet was again screaming holding her breasts, she wants to feed her child; she is getting so much pain. Doctor came to see her and shouted on them for their negligence and asked them to bring child. GEET requested rano to bring her child.

Maan came to his home all shattered with his child, Priya was shocked to see him with child, she argued him to return the child to geet, because it's a new born baby and needs her mother's warmth. But maan told her that no one in geet's home will accept this child. Baby started to cry, he don't know what to do, Priya brought milk but baby is too small , they didn't succeeded in feeding the child.

Rano went to maan's home and requested Priya and maan for the child and she also promised that she will make geet understand and will bring back to his home.

Seeing rano's constant plead maan half heartedly gave their child to rano.

Rano happily went to hospital and handed the child to geet, GEET just showered all her love to the little one, not finding her child for few hours she was frightened. She fed the baby. Geet discharged from the hospital after two days.

They took her to handa's house geet's sister in laws welcomed them with the little angel. Geet was shocked to see maan there, Every time she sees maan it reminds her of that brutal act and her father's words, she thinks that he is devil.

Seeing maan there she was scared, she thought he has come to take the child back. She was starring at her father like asking why he is here. As understanding their silence maan asked her to come back to him with their child, he pleaded her to not to separate him from their child.

His pleadings pampered her ego more, she just thought this will be a good punishment for his act and she refused to go with him, and ordered him to not disturb her anymore in the future, she told that her father n brother will take care OF HER CHILD, rano tried to talk in the middle but no one listened to her talks.

Maan was angry on geet for all the happenings, he can't force her to come back to him when she is not at all ready, if she showed any 1% emotion, he would have made her accept forcefully . But now she has concealed herself; she was not ready to listen anything. And he doesn't want to force her as one time forcing her lead to this separation. He left immediately from their thinking about his FATE...

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Geet's father and brothers were not happy with geet's decision of keeping the child with them , so now a days they started showing less interest to her and her baby, she didn't even came to know that it's their ego towards maan which made them to hate Maan, and also to spoiled her brain.

It's 5 months for their child and her anger has not cooled down she is drowned in giving all the happiness to her child that she forgot to think about maan's pain and his longing.

He was waiting for her to accept him, drowned in his pain and is angry towards geet for her acts.

One night her baby was having fever and its 8 PM, she never asked anything from her mom because of her constant nagging about Maan, so she went to her father to take their child to hospital, Mohinder assured her telling that it's a mild fever we will go in the morning.

Geet half heartedly went to her room and tried to feed her baby, but baby refused to have her feed, she finally after some time made baby to sleep.

Its 12PM and baby was crying out loud, she woke up abruptly and took her baby in her arms, baby was having high fever, she rushed to her parents room placing baby in the crib, Again her father assured her that it's too late and the hospital is far from their home, her father thought it's a usual mild fever, so he again convinced geet to go back to her room, and rano was a mute spectator not knowing what to do.

But geet's heart was paining to see her baby crying, she went to brij's room asking him to come with her to hospital, he also refused saying that it's too late, and same with tej.

Without knowing what to do she went to her room, her mother was standing there with tears seeing both geet and baby in so much pain, she scolded her for trusting her father and brothers who are the most egoist persons, and separating the baby from MAAN.

Geet didn't argued with her mother as she realized her mother's words, she asked her mother to be with the baby and she went to doctor's home to bring doctor.

She went to doctor's home but the doctor refused to come at that hour, she tried 2-3 doctors but none came to her help.

Finally she made her mind and went to MAAN's home at that hour, he was shocked to see her in that state, she explained about the baby's fever and asked him to help her, he was frightened to know that baby has fever from the evening and no one took his baby to hospital, but he didn't wasted time in arguing with her and made a call to the doctor and told him the address and he went with geet to her parent's home ,both entered geet's room to find a crying rano and their baby which is covered with white spread and her so called father and brothers were standing at the corner.

Earth just slipped to Maan seeing the baby. He always accepted the fact that their baby his at least getting her mother's love, so he never crossed her path knowing her anger towards him. But this is too much everyone is responsible for his baby's death, he was shattered seeing the lifeless soul sleeping in front of him never to open her eyes, he just took the baby in his hands and started to leave from there but geet didn't allowed him to do that she just fell on his legs and cried to forgive her for this big MISTAKE, her father tried to come to her seeing her breaking down but she didn't allowed him.

Maan was pained too see a strong geet like that, but now he is a father who lost his child because of her Zidd. He just left from there with the baby and did the funeral rites of the baby with his mother.

He was broken beyond limits, for his one mistake SHE made their baby to suffer, He thought he is at fault; he cursed himself for giving her the responsibilities of the baby.

In geet's home her father and brothers tried to console her but she just blasted on them

"Stay away from me, you all were sleeping ignoring my baby's cries and now you all are shedding crocodile tears, stay away from me"

She went to her mom and hugged her crying her heart out and slept there.

Next morning again her dad tried to come close to her to console her seeing geet's broken state but she didn't allowed him

She accused him for spoiling her mind against Maan,

"You could have scolded me instead of spoiling my mind, why you did this, I just crushed my love with my own hands by listening to your craps, you are blinded with your ego and I was blinded in my rage "

I don't need anyone now; you all are the reason for my baby's death,

She was crying bitterly thinking about maan's pain, her ignorance to his constant plead.

"Maa I am going to my home" told geet

Her mother happily agreed for that, geet's father didn't argue with her as he realized his mistakes. It's his blind ego and arrogance which made him to behave like that.

She made her mind that she will fall at maan's feet and will ask his forgiveness for her foolish acts, for her mistakes.

She is broken by baby's death but now she is not going to lose her LOVE. She will beg him to forgive her.

She hurriedly went to Maan's home /their home and found Priya sitting in the couch with a paper in her hand,

"Maa please forgive me, I am not worth to Maan and to this home but please give me one chance to rectify my mistake" geet told

She didn't get any answer,

"Maa why you are not talking, where is Maan"

"I want to talk to him"

Priya just handed her the letter

Maa,

I was too strong till know thinking that my two angels are living happily somewhere, I tried to accept that fact. But now I am broken beyond limits , I want some space so I am going far away, and don't worry I will come back as I can't stay away from YOU, and I have informed to badi maa to come and take care of you, Please take care of yourself

Maan

He didn't complain anything about geet in the letter and it's his greatness, geet was crying bitterly after reading the letter. Seeing geet broken state, priya consoled her took her in her arms.

Geet made the decision to stay here in her Maan's home, their home, she knows he is not a devil like her and will forgive her one day.

From then 2 years passed and she is living with Priya taking care of her, craving for maan's one glimpse and his forgiveness.

They did know he is living in London and tried to contact him but he didn't talk with geet, he informed to his mother that, when he comes to INDIA on that day he will accept his geet.

And geet was happy with that news and waited for him.


Present.

The meeting got over, all left from the conference room leaving the two wounded soul.

Maan just left from there without talking to her, she come back to her senses and followed him screaming his name, but he was not there.

"babaji kya Maan sach mey yaha aaye tey ya mere sapna tha"

"No he is back, I saw his eyes, I will inform to Maa, this time I will not leave him"

"agar wo nahi maane tho bhi mey nahi chodungi"

"I love you Maan "

She went to their home hurriedly and informed priya about maan's arrival, and she was talking breathlessly without giving any chance to priya to tell anything.

Finally after few minutes Priya stopped her from talking.

"I know geet" priya told

Geet was shocked "Maa...?"

"I know that, he is back...."

"matlab aaapko patha hey Maan kaha hey , Maa tell me where is Maan, Maa please"

Priya just signaled her to turn back; there he was standing, starring at her with so much love in his eyes,

It's also difficult for him to stay away from his love, and it is more difficult to him to FORGET ABOUT THEIR BABY, So he just went to London after that incident and immersed himself in work and work,

But geet and their baby always haunted him, and after a whole 2 years he came back not wanting to hurt her more with this separation.

He did tried to change his mind and run back to her arms but his pain hurt and baby's thoughts stopped him from doing that.

And he knows she is living in his home, so just came there to get his love back...

She was happy to see him in their home BACK; she ran to him and hugged him murmuring her sweet sorry.

Priya left from their leaving the couple to sort out their Misunderstanding.

He just made her quite

"CHUP BILKUL CHUP"

"I am sorry"

He glared at her to not to ask sorry.

She just smiled at him

"aap mujhe maaf karoge"

"I never was Mad at you" Maan said

She was shocked by his words and was just staring at him

"I was angry at myself for becoming week in front of you, I was angry at myself for leaving you alone there, I was angry at myself for not making you understand enough"

"No, you tried, you tried so many times, but I was blinded with my ego and hatred"

"Geet kya hum past bhool nahi sakthe"

She just nodded her head with immense love; he just hugged her crushing her, showing his longing

"I LOVE YOU" geet said

Maan just smiled he knew a long ago that she loved him, but seeing her voicing her feelings for the first time he is happy.

"I LOVE YOU TOO"...

"I AM SOR...... Before she ask for another sorry he just crushed his lips with hers, promising to not leave her alone.


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PS: the story line is taken from a movie, sorry for that

Edited by maaneetmaahi - 12 years ago
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maanpoor geet but win atlast



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sach mein ishq kamina hota hay😆😆

awee geet ki behen nd bf ne geet ke sath acha nahi kia
maan come to geet nd 😳😳
ye geet bhi bohut behsharam ahy 😆😆
chalo all agree with maaneet love nd finally shadi😳😳
lol poor pari behen ke sath asia karogay na aisa hi hoga👏👏
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YOURS VALENTINE:

They were 5 friends- Yash, Vicky, Ved, Salil nd Maan! For the world they were just 5 individuals who are friends but for them they were 5 fingers of a hand which were inseparable ns can join together to become a fist to fight against any odd circumstances. "Panch Shakti" that's the name given to their group by their favourite professor nd Principal Mr. Singh who considers them as a five elements of nature i.e. Water, Air, Soil, Sky nd Fire. And it was indeed correct as like the nature is incomplete without any one of its element in the same way they are incomplete without each other. Well we are not here to discuss about their friendship or to know about their Friendship tales. We are here to know about the love story of that one person who is the muse of this story nd around whom this story revolves. Maan, Maan Singh Khurana! That's his name.

Amongst all the 5 friends Maan was the only one who comes from the poor background nd a small town name Hoshiarpur. His father was a small grade clerk in Ved's father office who was a collector of the town. His income was really low with which he use to somehow take care of his small family that includes he, his wife nd his only son Maan yet his dream was big nd that dream was to see Maan being an IAS officer. His relatives use to laugh at him, mock him by saying that he's dreaming too big but Mr. Khurana had full faith on his son nd he knows that his son will definitely make him proud one day hence he use to work hard day nd night to give his son proper education.

Maan as per his name was really the pride of his parents. He had never given any chance to let down his parents. Since childhood he had only one goal nd that was to fulfill the dream that his father has seen for him. He was excel in all fields since childhood be it sports or studies or any other activities nd that's the reason he had completed his basic studies through scholarship. It was a big day both for him nd his father when Maan got admission in one of the best college in Delhi for his higher studies. Due to his excellent records his fees was also minimal but living in a big city like Delhi was not a joke especially for a person like Maan who was not born with a silver spoon in his mouth nd has gone through many hardships, many taunts to reach at this stage.

For a moment Maan was hesitant to pursue his higher education from Delhi knowing their financial condition nd it was then Ved nd his father came as a guiding light nd after much pesteration they finally make him agree to go to Delhi saying that Mr. Khurana had already maintained some funds for his higher education nd hence he don't have to worry. Ved was already in Delhi after his father had got promotion nd co-incidentally got admission in the same college as Maan's hence Mr. Khurana had no worry regarding Maan being alone in the big city like Delhi for he knows that being studying together for most of the years together Mana nd Ved were more like Brothers. Ved's father has seen the spark in Maan's eyes, A Passion, A Fire to become something in lyf hence he don't want any kind of hurdle in his way therefore he himself has arranged for the best hostel; for Maan owned by his brother where his nephew nd Ved were also accommodated nd that's how Maan met Salil, Ved's cousin along with Yash nd Vicky who were Salil's childhood friends nd now all 5 of them are Bestest friends along with being roomies nd classmates.

It didn't took Maan long to adjust with Delhi lyf nd he was actually enjoying it but still he didn't forget for what he is here. As the tym passes Maan made a mark in his college to with his excellence, intelligence nd breathtaking looks nd he became favourite of all the professors especially of Mr. Singh nd a heartthrob among girls but he never paid any attention to anyone of them because his one nd only goal is to fulfill his Father's dream nd he don't want any distraction in that. if any girl use to propose him for friendship or relationship by being over smart or shy then he just use to smile nd very calmly refuse to them making sure not to hurt their feelings saying that he respects their feelings nd will always be there if they need his genuine help but apart from that he can't do any commitment as he had already committed to his dreams. At tymes his friends use to tease him also calling him 'Gay' but he never took it on heart because he knows that his destination is far different from all this nd he just can't get distracted in any way. Nd with this high spirit he had not only successfully completed his first two year in the college but also has topped in the whole college getting a subject of praises nd appreciation from everyone nd at that very moment Maan visualized his destination loud nd clear without any hurdle.

It was one fine day when all the seniors were enjoying ragging the juniors after the college reopened after vacations but Maan even after being a senior also was sitting aside in cafeteria with his group. He never believed in this ragging thing for he knows how these seniors use to humiliate you in the name of ragging nd he definitely don't want to be a part of it hence he was just enjoying his tym with his friends while all are busy in the ragging fiasco. It was just Salil who was over excited to witness this Ragging scenes or in other words to woo any junior girl by saving her from being ragged becoming her knight in shining armor hence he heads towards the crowd on the pretext of going to library to get some random book issued while the remaining 4 of them just shaked their heads on his useless excuse knowing very well which book he has to get issued nd continued with their conversation.

At the same tym a black SUV stopped in the college premises drawing everyone's attention including the seniors who looked at that black SUV curiously. Not that it was a first tym when any expensive car was stopped in the college premises but what caught their attention was the sight of 4 girls getting down from the car. All were beautiful in their own way especially the one who got down from the driver's seat wearing a skinny jeans nd halter neck top with attitude nd self-confidence oozing out from her personality as she moved inside the college with her friends while rotating the key ring on her index finger. Her milky white skin exposing from top make every guy crazy as she walked pass them swaying away her long hairs. Her pear shaped face was complimented perfectly with her deep big hazels, soft chubby cheeks, cute button nose, full luscious lips as delicate as rose petals nd soft flawless skin reflecting her innocence. She looked at her side nd smirked as she found almost all the boys ogling at her curvaceous figure, something of which she's use to now nd that's what make her proud of herself as she made her way through the corridors with her friends.

"Wow! 4 freshers nd that too girls. It's going to be fun." Rahul, one of the senior spoke over smartly as he eyed them especially that particular girl who had drawn everyone's attention.

"Geet, I am scared" Kakul, one of the amongst 4 gals spoke with nervousness while all the other rolled their eyes listening to the same sentence umpteenth tym.

"Uffo Kakul! Why are you so scared? Geet had said Na that nothing is gonna happen so now stop being a nervous wreck. Look at Geet, how confidently she's walking." Meera, another girl said making Kakul pout nd Geet smile while shaking her head.

"I don't understand why are you guys are making such an issue of this ragging thing. I mean it's so much fun being ragged especially by any handsome guy." Pari, the fourth one said dreamily making Kakul to whack her arm hard to bring her out from her dreamland as all of them headed towards the office to get their schedule while conversing with each other.

"Excuse me, you freshers come here." Rahul called out as he saw four of them walking pass him nd others making all of them to halt in their steps.

Geet turned around swiftly waving back her soft silky hairs with a jerk in the process nd walked confidently towards Rahul nd his group followed by her friends. And it was then when Maan saw her first glimpse making him to forget even a blink for a while. He has been literally dragged by Salil towards the main hall area to witness the new sight of the college that was creating a buzz in whole college followed by his friends.

"Don't you gals have manners about how to greet your seniors instead of walking past them" Rahul spoke making a hard face in order to scare them but he didn't knew that it was Geet Handa, he's been dealing with who can turn down any situation.

"Now what are you looking behind me? No one is going to help you baby." Rahul said as he furrowed his brows when he saw Geet searching something behind him.

"Searching for some sort of Long tail at your back that could differentiate you from being human nd called out your title of "senior" loud nd clear. You know like Langoors are differentiated from Monkeys." Every single student in the hall burst out in the laughter as they heard Geet's words including Maan who just looked other side smiling. Well it was much needed for the dumb headed person like Rahul who was standing all embarrassed due to Geet's remark, Maan thought as he looked forward to witness the whole scene.

"Nd as for your second remark then let me tell you that Geet Handa is not a damsel in distress that she needs some knight in shining armor to save her. I am capable enough of taking care of myself." Geet said as she looked directly into Rahul's eyes with her each nd every word oozing her confidence.

"Don't you have manners of how to talk to your seniors?" One of the girls from Rahul's gang spoke with an attitude making Geet to smirk before looking at her.

"You know what this is the problem of you species called "seniors". You guys consider yourself as Gods but unfortunately you are not. And in order to hide your own loopholes you guys show your fake power to other so that no one can witness your loopholes." Geet's words made everyone confused as they tried to understand the meaning of her words.

"Excuse me Miss! Will you tell me what kind of loopholes you are exactly talking about?" Rahul said as he couldn't understand what she's trying to say.

"Tch Tch Tch! You don't know about your own loopholes nd you are trying to take advantage of my loopholes so that I become a subject of laugh nd you can feel proud of your fake power."

"Will you just tell me what kind of loopholes I am actually having instead of talking in riddles?" Rahul said highly irritated with the turn of events.

"Who am I to tell you that? Go nd introspect yourself first nd you'll know that. And anyways the nervousness on your face is saying that you already knew. So if you don't want me to insult you more in front if the whole college by talking about it then just move your butt off from front of me nd next tym talk to me only when you have enough balls to confess your loop holes." Geet's words made everyone speechless as they just stood gaping at her while she turned nd made her way towards the office walking past Maan who was looking at her admiringly due to her courage nd her taking stand for herself with a soft smile playing on his M-shaped lips.

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This small incident has become the talk of the college as everyone seems to discuss the same thing including the professors too. At one side where they were laughing at Rahul's dumbness at the same tym they were admiring Geet's self-confidence. Maan's friends were no exception either as whole day they had talked about her only even after the college got over but the topic of Geet didn't. Where Ved, Yash nd Vicky were praising for her guts Salil was going ga ga over her beauty nd Maan well he haven't said anything instead was just thinking to how to reach the city library before it gets closed when Ved offered him lift as he too was going towards that area only nd Mana just nodded in agreement as he knew that he'll be late if he'll opt for Auto or cab. Hence he stood over there waiting for Yash nd Ved who had gone to take their bikes.

"Excuse me!" Maan heard a soft yet angry voice of a girl from behind as soon as Ved nd Yash left nd turned around only to meet a pair of deep hazels looking at him angrily.

"Yes, any problem." Maan said softly as he recognized her as the same girl who is the talk of whole college.

"Are you a senior in this college?" Geet asked with her hazels spitting fire that could burn the person in front of her.

"Ya, I just completed my first two years nd promoted to 3rd year nd……." Maan said not understanding why she ask so only to be interrupted by Geet.

"I am not interested in knowing about your educational qualifications. I just want to know with whose permission you had punctured the tyre of my car." Geet asked as she pointed towards the flat tyre of the car of which Maan had no idea as he looked at Geet confused but then he noticed Rahul nd his gang standing at a distance away from them smirking at the scene in front his sharp senses instantly grasped what could have happened.

It was Rahul's way to take revenge on both him nd Geet as he had refused to help Rahul in the plan that he had made to teach Geet a lesson infact he had supported Geet's guts of taking a stand for herself instead of doing those humiliating acts nd this was what had irked Maan nd hence he wanted Maan to be humiliated by Geet in the same way like she had humiliated him this morning.

"Listen Miss, I don't know who told about my involvement in all this but I seriously have no idea about all this. Someone has used my name to poison your mind. I guess it's the work of those seniors only whom you had humiliated this morning." Maan said calmly as he tried to clear the misunderstanding she's having for him

"And as far as I know you are also a senior right? Just because I had insulted your fellow friends who had no respect anyways either nd made a mockery of you seniors, you guys will do such a cheap thing. What a shameless nd spineless creature you are?" Geet said arrogantly as she refused to believe his words. Just then Ved nd Yash too came there nd they tried to intervene but Maan gestured them to be quiet.

"Listen miss, you are crossing your limit now. I am not the one who could do such a cheap tricks to take revenge on anyone. you can ask about me from the whole college nd anyways I don't even have enough tym too for planning revenge on a dumb headed girl like you." Maan was on the verge of losing his patience. He was not the one to talk this rudely with a girl but then this girl is hell bent in making him irritated.

"Excuse me! How dare you say that?" Geet said as she looked at Maan angrily on his audacity of talking to her like this. No one has ever talk to her in this tone nd here this mere guy is talking to her so meanly.

"You heard me right. You called me a spineless creature but in reality you are one such a brainless, arrogant nd snob girl who keeps the world over her head, who thinks that she's the queen of this whole world nd people will dance on her tunes. Well if you think of something of this sort then I suggest you to have a reality check as you really need that." Maan's each word were just adding fuel to Geet's anger nd next she just raised her hand to slap him hard but it was stopped by Maan in the mid.

"Don't! Don't even think of doing this. I am not your servant or your pet who'll bear your tantrums. I am a fire that can burn your entire being if you'll try to play with it." Maan's each nd every word reflected his dominance nd anger while his hold on Geet's wrist gets tightened by every passing second as she tries to free her hand from his grip but it was too strong for her. Kakul, Meera nd Pari came forward to help Geet but they were blocked by Salil, Ved, Yash nd Vicky who stood in front of them like a shield.

"Nd now since you had blamed me of something which I have not done then why not I commit it now to prove you right." Maan said as he smirked before signaling his friends nd next what the whole college has witnessed was all the remaining 3 tyres getting punctured as well by Maan's friends. Poor stepny was couldn't able to be escaped by the devils as it became the victim of their anger.

"This was your answer. From now onwards always remember this moment before falsely accusing anyone as not always everyone is a spineless creature to bear your tantrums." Maan whispered dangerously as he jerked her hand away harshly making her to look at him angrily feeling humiliated.

"What's happening over here?" Everyone heard a familiar voice nd as they turned to look at the direction they found their Principal Mr. Singh looking at them suspiciously.

"Uncle, this guy has misbehaved with me nd he nd his friends had punctured all the tyres of my car too." Geet complained as soon as Mr. Singh approached towards them making everyone shock with the revelation of her calling their principal as Uncle.

"Geet, how many tymes should I tell you that I am your principal in college so call me Sir." Mr. Singh said in a hush voice as he looked around only to find all students staring at him.

"And secondly, I think there's some sort of Misunderstanding as Maan is a brought student nd he never do anything of this sort neither he misbehaves with anyone. There must be a reason for it. Masan beta, you tell what's the matter?" Mr. Singh said as he patted Maan's shoulder encouraging him to speak nd Maan narrated the whole incidence to him.

"Oho! All the 4 tyres are sleeping peacefully." Mr. Singh joked as he glanced all the flat tyres.

"Nd 5th one inside the trunk of the car." Someone from the crowd remarked to which no one had paid attention.

"Uncle… I mean Sir, he had held my wrist so harshly that I got hurt… see…" Geet whined as she showed her wrist to Mr. Singh that had the imprint of Maan's fingers.

"Oh! Such deep marks. Afterall he's an inter-collegiate Boxing champion. Poor guy must have forgotten that there's a difference between a Girl's wrist nd punching bag. Maan, next tym hold it gently ok." Mr. Singh's words made Maan nd Geet to look at him in astonishment as if he had grown two heads.

"Sir" Both said at the same tym.

"O c'mon beta. These things happen in college. If now you guys won't play pranks then will it be after coming to my age. Now c'mon forget everything nd patch up. you guys have to spend your next coming days in the same college."

Maan nd Geet though hated the very fact of becoming friends but one thing that was common between them was their respect for Mr. Singh nd hence for their sake they both shaked their hands while introducing themselves to each other. Kakul, Pari nd Meera too introduced themselves half-heartedly to Maan nd his friends who were grinning ear to ear while introducing themselves. Later Mr. Singh offered the girls to drop back home nd asked his driver to take care of Geet's car nd get it back home. Having no other option Geet got agreed nd headed towards Mr. Singh's car but not before giving an angry glare to Maan who reciprocated in the same manner before she got inside the car.

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That evening instead of Mr. Singh's driver it was Maan who had got fixed Geet's car nd took it back home much to His friends' surprise who questioned him too for his this act to which Maan just said that it was them who did mistake by puncturing all the remaining tyres though whatever the reason is yet they need to act rational instead of behaving so immaturely nd hence he was just fulfilling his moral duty as he think it to be right. Everyone gaped at him as if he was an alien. No doubt they had respected Maan for his generosity but this was too much as they were afraid of someone taking the advantage of the simplicity of their best friend. Salil had even teased also that Maan had fallen in Love with Geet to which Maan just shrugged it off that he's just using his Good for nothing Brain unnecessarily nd it was nothing like that. He was just doing it as due to him Geet nd her friends can be in trouble if Mr. Singh was not there to drop them as Delhi was not safe for girls nd hence he was just fixing his mistake. None of his friends got convinced with his reasoning especially Ved who knows his friend too well but then decided to keep quiet for the tym being nd let Maan being open up to him himself.

After a whole hour of Drive they reached to Geet's house nd their eyes widen in surprise when they read the name plate saying "Mohinder Handa, Commissioner of Police." But Maan was all the tym calm as he knew that he hasn't done anything wrong. He told the guard about their provision of coming there who let them in after recognizing Geet's car nd confirming with Mohinder. Mohinder Handa was a commissioner of Delhi Police nd a very respectful person of the society but at the same tym he was very kind nd noble from heart unlike his only Daughter Geet. He has been already told by Mr. Singh about what happened in the college hence he instantly recognized Maan as soon as he made his way inside the hall. Geet was not at home at that tym nd it was indeed good as Maan was not interested for any kind of one on one fight yet again. Mohinder had an instant liking for this young boy who was so honest in confessing his mistake nd apologizing him for his nd his friends mistake though he was not actually in fault. He had already heard a lot about him from Mr. Singh nd no wonder he was so ga ga over his this Fav student but what touched Mohinder's heart was his simplicity nd his gesture of touching his feet to seek his blessing that reflects his good morals nd upbringing.

Mohinder just shrugged off the matter when Maan apologized for his nd his friends behaviour with Geet saying that such things happen between youngsters nd he knows his daughter a little too well hence he knew that she had definitely rubbed his wrong side that lead to this shocking Maan's friends who were not expecting such generosity from him. Mohinder wanted them to stay for dinner but Maan politely refused saying that they need to reach hostel soon but then he couldn't refused to his continuous insistence of their driver dropping them back to hostel nd hence he just agreed though reluctantly just to make the man before him happy who was so kind to him nd his friends. Mohinder keeps on looking at the retreating figure of Maan until he disappears from his eyes nd he knew that this guy has something in him which will make him to reach at the peak of success nd probably can tame his wild nd shrewd daughter too.

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Days went by nd so did months nd everyone's lyf gets back to normal. Maan, Geet nd their friends, all got involved in their studies. There were many occasions after that incident when Maan nd Geet came face to face but didn't speak to each other except the formal Hi-Hello. Geet came to know from her Dad that it was Maan who brought her car back after getting it fixed but her Ego was too big to thank him for his generosity for she feels that he had just fixed his mistake but still on her father's insistence she said a cold thanks to him next day in the college to which he replied in the same manner nd since that day it was just normal Hi-Hello between them whenever they came across each other. Same was the case between Maan's nd Geet's friends who doesn't feel it necessary either to mingle with each other.

It was one such day when Geet nd her friends came back home from college for group study for the preparation of their upcoming semesters. But a expression of Shock nd surprise covered their faces as soon as they opened their respective books nd all the four looked at each other before looking back at the object of attention in their books. The page was covered with fresh rose petals whose aroma was so mesmerizing that anyone can drown in the world of ecstasy but what caught their attention was a piece of coloured paper stuck with a Red Rose. All their eyes widens in shock as they read the contents of that letter that reads…. "I Love you….Yours Valentine" in the most beautiful handwriting they had ever seen. All four of them were dazed for some moment as they read the content of the letter again nd again before Pari nd Meera broke the moment of daze by sharing their concern about who can be this 'Valentine Guy' nd how come they have not noticed when he kept this letter in their books of which Geet nd Kakul were equally clueless. First they thought that it can be some sort of prank by someone but then Geet's heart was not ready to take it as a prank by someone nd she herself was unaware abt the reason.

"What I think is that this letter is for Geet?" Kakul spoke making all 3 confused with her statement nd especially Geet.

"Nd why you exactly think so Kakul? I mean these letters are found in all of us books so it can be for any one of us Na?"

"See Geet, we all know that amongst all of us you are the most beautiful girl nd have the looks to die for. Moreover these books were issued by you only from library so may be someone has kept it in these books thinking it to be yours." Kakul said as a matter of fact nd Geet just rolled over her eyes seeing no head nd tail on her reasoning.

"That makes no sense Kakul nd moreover when I had issued these books then there was nothing of this sort until I gave it to you all nd since this letter is in all our books so it can be for any of us Na." Geet reasoned while Pari nd Meera gave their consent but still the reason for their worry is same who is this guy nd most importantly how would they know that whose Valentine will he be.

"I have got an Idea. See this letter was found in all of us books na then we all will search for him by our own ways nd who'll find him first he'll be that person's Valentine." Geet said chirpily while leaning on the cushions at the back.

"Geet I don't think that this idea is nice. I mean what if I first nd that letter was actually for anyone else from you 3 then? Just be logical Yaar." Kakul reasoned making Meera nd Pari thoughtful but Geet was stuck on her ground

"Baby this he should have thought before writing this letter without writing the name of the girl whim this letter belongs. Now since he haven't written any name then this is the only way. So now it's fixed that whoever will find his first, he'll be that person's valentine nd now I don't want any discussions on it." Geet said with a tone of finality nd Kakul just gave up knowing very well that she can't win in any argument from her.

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Next day when Geet opened her text book in the class to tick down the important notes said by professor, she once again found a letter in the mid of her book in the same way like she has found a day before i.e. covered with fresh Rose petals along with a Red Rose stuck to it. she instantly close the book feeling butterflies running in the pit of her stomach as she clutched the edge of her desk tight to control her erratic heartbeats nd ragged breathings in the anticipation of what would be written in the letter this tym. She couldn't able to concentrate on a single word said by professor for her mind was at the thing inside the book. To her luck at that very tym the bell rang nd professor went out of the class. Geet too rushed outside after informing Kakul, Pari nd Meera to come with her towards the garden area.

All 3 girls were surprised to see yet another letter after reaching to Garden Area nd that too just in Geet's book nd not in any one of them this tym. Meera probe her to read the letter nd with shivering hands nd thudding heart Geet opened the letter only to find it addressed to her this tym with the same beautiful handwriting.

"Geet,

My Love is not a commodity or your favourite chocolate that you can share it among your friends. This is something that I have for you, just for you nd will always be. I thought you would understand it by urself. I thought that you'll know it by urself but never mind. But just want to say that please don't insult my pure Love by making it a thing to be shared between your friends.

Yours Valentine."

One by one all 3 of them read the letter nd then looked at Geet who was still sitting dazed with his words. Someone loves her nd that too so much that he knows what she's thinking or going to do while she was unaware of this till now. Unwillingly her heart missed million beats as she felt a strange feeling creeping her heart which is still alien to her. Unknown to herself, a red hue crept on her cheek while she felt her stomach churning with some unknown sensation that she never felt before as she registered his words in the letter. But who is he? Nd he's not coming before her, she thought as she looked around herself to see if she can spot anyone stalking her but to her dismay she found none. It was when Meera shrugged her shoulders her reverie was broken nd she just moved back to her class without saying anything to anyone leaving all the 3 behind confused.

And since that day it was a tale of everyday. Everyday Geet use to found a letter in her text book in the same way that depicts the depth his love for her, making her feel so special with his words, with his poems. She felt like a princess nd probably she indeed was Princess of his heart whose identity is still a mystery for her. He hasn't disclosed his name to her yet nd she just use to see "Yours Valentine" at the bottom of the letter. She tried really hard to search him, any clue, any sign, anything that could lead her to him but Everytym when she think that she's close to reach him all that she gets was disappointment as she failed terribly at the last moment. It was as if he's a thin air that always revolves around her but wenever she tries to reach him she found him nowhere in the sight. This happen for whole 3 months nd everyday Geet found a new letter nd now her patience gave up as she feel this dire need to know who is this guy who loves her so much but still the question is How? And then one day……

"What the hell are you saying? How can that be possible?" Kakul panicked as she said after getting the biggest shock from Geet this morning

"What can I do yaar? Papa has decided all this. I was as shocked as you are. He said that, that guy is some IAS officer nd is coming to see me after 2 days nd I guess everything else has been already fixed between our families nd it's just a formality. I too don't want all this so early but I have no solid excuse to refuse this proposal." Geet said as she sat on bed helplessly.

"You have Geet. You can say to Uncle that you love someone else." Meera suggested as she sat beside her nd Pari too consented with her.

"Nd when he'll ask me his name then what should I say. I can't even tell the name of anyone of you 3 as I am a girl nd unfortunately you all 3 too." Geet said as she held her head between her hands feeling so confused.

"But still how can you say yes to Uncle? You know it every well that how much that Valentine guy loves you nd I can see that in your eyes too. Then Why?" Kakul said as she shrugged Geet's shoulders while Meera nd Pari were shocked to see her outburst

"Then you tell me what should I say to Dad, that Dad I am sorry I can't marry anyone because some "Yours Valentine" named guy loves me a lot who didn't even have courage to even write his true name then forget about coming before me. If he's behaving like a coward then what is my fault in all this. If he have the slightest of courage then why can't he come in front of me nd say that he loves me, if he loves me this much then why he's always a mystery to me, why he always vanishes in thin air whenever I try to reach him or is that just like his name his Love is also fake nd he's just playing along thinking me to be as a summer fling. Teel me do you have any answer?" Geet yelled back nd Kakul just looked down having no answer of her questions.

"Anyways, he just have 2 days with him. if he didn't come before me nd confess his love then I have to marry the guy that Dad has chosen for me even if I don't want to. Let's see if his true Love as he use to claim has more power or his cowardness." Geet said as she wiped away her tears harshly before slumping back into the bed feeling frustrated nd irritated with everything.

That evening when Geet came back home from college all grumpy nd irritated she once again found a letter in one of her book nd she instantly opened it to read its contents with a thudding heart.

"Geet,

Neither I am coward nor my Love is fake. I don't have any proof but trust me on this that I never tried to flirt with you. My Love for you is as pure as your heart. I was not coming before you till now because I want our meeting, our confession to be special on a special day i.e. Valentine's Day but now I can't wait for that day anymore as what is the use of waiting to make my confession special on that special day if my Geet won't be with me for she thinks me as a coward nd my love to be fake. I can't lose you due to this perception of yours especially after knowing that someone is going to take you away from me. You are mine Geet, only mine nd I can't let you go away from me ever. You want to meet me Na then I promise that I'll meet you tomorrow itself in the Garden of our college near the fountain holding a Red rose, waiting for you just for you.

Yours Valentine"

Geet read the whole letter again nd again nd a deep sigh escaped her lips as she clutched the letter close to her heart. Finally her wait is going to end nd she's going to meet him tomorrow. Who is he? How does he look? Can it be possible that she knows him but couldn't able to recognize him as her valentine, she thought as she just laid on her bed all excited still holding his letter. O god! She's feeling so jittery nd nervous all at the same tym due to anticipation of what will happen after meeting him. She just can't wait till next day now.

"I am dyeing to meet that person who loves me so irrecoverably." She thought as she smiled shyly before keeping that letter safe with his other letter in the side drawer waiting for next day to arrive soon.

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Whole of the college stood shocked as the loud sound of slap echoed in the air drawing everyone's attention towards the two persons standing near the fountain, one with the immense anger in her eyes while the other shattered with his head hung low seeing his most beautiful nd cherished dream breaking into million pieces like this. Geet's friends were equally shocked first with the revelation of the person nd then what followed after that. Most shocked one was Kakul who was witnessing everything with teary eyes.

"That's what you deserve Mr. Maan Singh Khurana for this act of yours. How dare you? How dare you to even think of me let alone sending those letters to me? What have you thought that I'll run in your arms once I'll meet you? Well, if you think of anything of this sort then it I your biggest mistake to think of any such thing like that as I am Geet, Geet Handa nd Geet Handa choose everything as per her class nd status nd you thought that I'll choose you. Atleast you should have seen that where you stand in lyf, where you belong, what is your status before even dreaming about me. You think that I'll fall in Love with you…. I won't even appoint People like you as my servant nd you think I'll choose you as my mate. Atleast you should have realize the difference between you nd me before having such thoughts. Apni Aukat Bhool Gaye ho shayad Isiliye tumne Geet Handa ke baare me aise Sapne Dekhne ki Himmat Kari." Geet's voice throwed venom with utmost hatred while Maan said nothing but just stood over there dumbfounded watching the scattered pieces of his broken heart.

"Bas Kar Geet. It's enough now. Do you even realizing what you are saying." Kakul said agonized as she turned Geet towards her to make her look at her

"Why? Are you feeling bad Kakul? But why? As far as I know that you are my friend then why are you feeling bad for him? Or is it that you are feeling bad because all your hard work of all these months went in vain." Geet said as she looked straight into her eyes while looked at her shocked with the revelation

"What? You thought that I wouldn't be able to know that it's you whom he had appointed for conveying his letters. I knew it on the second day itself as I had seen you keeping the ;letter in my book but I decided to play along so that i can bring him in front of me nd that's the reason I lied about that IAS guy so that you can convey that to him nd he can come in front." Kakul was still under shock due to revelation nd so were Meera nd Pari who are double shocked with so much happening at once.

"And you Mr. Maan Singh Khurana get this thing straight in your head that I was, is nd will never be in Love with a man like you. Till now whatever you get to know about my feelings nd behaviour for you or should I say that 'Yours Valentine' guy from Kakul was all a facade as I was just playing along so that I can know about the actual person behind this mystery man. The story that you had started or has thought to be started, I am finishing that right over here nd now don't even cross my path in future." These were the words that Maan had heard before Geet leaves from there. Kakul looked at Maan tear-eyed nd rushed away from there not able to see him so motionless. One by one everyone left leaving him alone but he just stood over there all numb as Geet's words replayed again nd again in his mind. Even heavens pour out from him crying for the mockery of his love that was made as he still stood over there drenching in rain. It was then Ved nd his other friends came to the spot who came to know about all the happenings by some student as they all were in their class nd took their dear friend away from there who was still quiet nd blank.

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"How can you do that Geet especially to that person who loves you so much? How can you make the mockery of his love like this?" Kakul asked Geet as she stopped Geet in the deserted corridor.

"Because that's what he deserves. Nd by the way why you are questioning me because of him? Why was he so important to you that you were ready to deceive your own best friend? Tell me Kakul, who is he to you? Why you are so concerned for him?" Geet asked the same questions that were buzzing in her mind since the tym she came to know About Kakul's involvement.

"Because I Love him!! I Love him a lot!!" Kakul said it aloud as she fell on her knees feeling dejected shocking everyone.

"It's true! I had fallen in love with him the day I saw him but couldn't able to say it to him except just looking at him stealing his glances without his knowledge nd then one day I muster enough courage nd told him about my feelings. For the first few minutes he was shocked nd numb nd then he told me that he had never seen me in that way nd that he loves someone else. I was jealous nd broken initially as I was losing my first nd only Love but then when he told me that it's you for whom he had fallen in first sight itself but always masked his love for you with his cold behaviour, then I don't know whether I should be happy for you being so lucky or sad at my loss. But then Love taught us to be happy in your Lover's happiness nd Maan's happiness was in you Geet nd that's the reason I decided to help him because he would never be able to tell it himself to you because this is for the first tym when he has fallen for anyone otherwise Everytym it was just reverse nd hence he feared for the rejection (Kakul said nd then looked back at Geet who was standing all dazed). Now you tell me Geet, what wrong I did if I want my best friend to get best in her lyf? What wrong I did if I want the person whom I love get his Love? What wrong I did by becoming a medium of communication between you two? Geet, Maan loves you a lot nd trust me you won't get anyone better than him. Girls use to run after him crazily but that crazy Guy is crazy about you. Please don't do this to him. Forget all your ego nd accept his Love. Please Geet." Kakul pleaded as she cupped her face making her understand while Meera nd Pari too consented with teary eyes.

"I know what I have to do now." Geet said all expressionless while others couldn't guess what's running in her mind.

And then next day a team of police officers came into the college nd instantly arrested Maan after enquiring about him on the fake charges of supplying drugs to college students. His friends nd Mr. Singh tried a lot to stop the arrest stating that Maan is not at all like that but the policemen were firm on their ground saying that they had proofs nd had got orders from higher officials nd eventually taken Maan with them. It was a shocking moment for whole of the college as none had thought of Maan to be like that while Mr. Singh was all broken due to not able to help his favourite student nd Maan's friends were trying their best to release Maan on bail. Geet's friends looked at her who seems to otherwise calm nd they instantly knew that it's all because of her nd their anger knew no bound then especially of Kakul's who just dragged Geet aside nd slapped her hard for the very first tym in her lyf while Geet looked at her stunned.

"Galti Maan se bhi hui thi aur Mujhse bhi. We both had forgotten that you are Geet Handa who is nothing but an arrogant nd snob girl who can never care about anyone's feelings, a rich spoil brat. The person who loves you more than his lyf today you got him arrested on fake charges just because he has committed a big mistake of loving you. Wasn't all that had you said to him or did to him was enough that you have to stoop this low to punish him. But you know what he deserves this punishment for loving an insensitive nd immature gal like you. But Geet Maan's parents have not done any mistake then why are you punishing them for no fault of theirs. His father has worked hard day nd night just to see his son to reach at the peak of success, his mother use to pray every moment for her son's safety nd when they'll come to know what their son is going through just because he had fallen in love with a wrong gal then they'll die Geet, they won't be able to survive. And the reason for their death will be you only you Geet. And mark my words Geet that if anything will happen to Maan nd his family then I swear I'll forget that you are my best friend." Kakul said nd left from there without giving a second glance to Geet followed by Pari nd Meera who were equally angry from Geet leaving her behind alone to realize the extent of her mistake.


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That night when Geet asked her Dad to release Maan then he out rightly refused stating that law is not his personal property that he can play with it according to him whenever he wants. He was not in the favour of getting Maan arrested too owing to his principles nd morals if Geet hadn't attempted to kill herself nd Mohinder can't see his only daughter taking away her lyf no matter if her demand is irrational but he had to agree with a heavy heart but then today again her daughter's mood has changed nd she's asking him to release Maan nd he just can't misuse his power of being a commissioner due to her daughter's mood swings. But then after lots nd pestering nd Geet admitting that she loves Maan sue to her Dad's only condition to release Maan, Mohinder called the officers to release Maan without any trouble or interrogation. Geet though had admitted that she loves Maan unwillingly due to the condition put forward by Mohinder but then she couldn't help with the blush that formed on her cheeks while her toes curled in shyness while doing so but then she shrugged it off thinking that it is due to admitting something like this before her Dad nd anyways right now the feeling of relief is too much to feel anything else. May be she had acted very much irrational in her anger nd ego. Probably it was her anger of knowing Maan to be that guy out of all people for she was expecting anyone but him had made her behave so insensitively nd hence She had decided that when Maan will come to college next day then she'll apologize to him for all the trouble he had went through due to her nd ask him to move forward in his lyf nd with this thought she just closed her eyes slipping into deep slumber waiting for the next day to arrive.

But thing didn't go as per planned by her as when she reached college that day the first thing she saw was her friends but as soon as they saw her they just moved ahead without even glancing at her. Next she met with Maan's friends nd her eyes instantly searched for Maan but before she could ask them about him they too moved away from there but not before giving her a look of hatred. She though felt odd but then she knows that she deserves it as she did commit a mistake no matter for whatsoever reason nd she was sure that once Maan will come then everything will be fine. But then why he didn't came yet. He never gets late but then she thought maybe he needs some rest after all the trauma he had went through last day. She was walking lost in her thoughts when she bumped into Mr. Singh who was going through corridors.

"Congratulations Beta nd Thanks a lot." Mr. Singh said with a smile after getting greeted by her nd Geet that it may be because he came to know of Maan's release but his next set of words had thrown her in the deep pool guilt nd regret.

"For ruining the career nd lyf of an honest, innocent nd excellent Boy like Maan. I had always complaint God that why I don't have a daughter like you but now I thank him for not giving me a daughter like you." Mr. Singh said nd moved towards his office hiding away his tears leaving Geet behind all numb nd motionless. She couldn't stayed over there for a minute more nd just ran back to her home.

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"But how's that possible? Maan has been released last nite only." Mohinder said as soon as Geet told him about Maan's absence nd everyone's behaviour.

"But then why he didn't came to college today nd why everyone is saying that I ruined his lyf." Geet asked as tears brimmed in her hazels due to everyone's indifference

"You still haven't understood Beta. Maan was an honest nd self-esteemed man who may be not rich like you but his character, his honesty meant everything to him nd you had tainted his character by imposing false accusations just because of your ego. Now do you still think that he'll be able to face this world after such humiliation knowing that now everyone will look at him disgusted? So what if he had not committed any crime but this world will see him as a criminal only. You had committed a big sin beta nd the worst part is that somewhere I too has been involved in this sin of yours. I just wish that I haven't pampered you this much after Rano's demise then you haven't ruin the career nd lyf of an innocent" Mohinder said before leaving for him room leaving Geet behind all broken nd to fall deep into the pit of guilt nd regret.


(P.S. Pls Listen to this Song... I am so in love with it😳)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A2S8b-SHKqc

Aajaaa….. teriyaan duavaan lagiyaan
Rab to main aj vi ladiyaannn…..
Aajaaa… teriyaan duavaan lagiyaan
Rab to main aj vi ladiyaannn…..

Music…..

That night she couldn't able to sleep at all as wenever she closes her eyes, Maan's broken nd numb face use to come in front of her eyes making her restless. She just couldn't understand what's happening to her as she felt this dire need to see him nd asking him if he's ok. She had hurted many people before too nd she never felt regretted for it except for her friends nd Dad but then she was regretting a big tym for Maan nd she herself is unaware for it. She don't know why but she want him to be here with her nd tell him that she was a big tym fool to behave this insensitively but as much as she wished she knows that her wish couldn't come true as she was sure that Maan would never wish to even see her face now nd the mere thought had slit her heart into thousand pieces as she moved towards kitchen to have some water to calm herself for she can feel her eyes burning with those unshed tears.

Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye
Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye..
Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye
Tenu hoo..kah maarda firaan

She was about to touch the rim of the glass to her lips when she felt a hand snaking around her waist making her breath to hitch nd she just closed her eyes when she found him tucking her close to his hard form such that her exposed back from her nighty was touching his taut chest. Somewhere she knew that it's him only nd for that she doesn't have to look back. Don't know why but she could sense his aroma nd recognize his touch nd her thoughts come true when she found him twirling her around with a jerk still keeping her close to him looking at her with deep intense eyes before twirling her sideways nd again bringing her back making her back to touch his taut chest as he nuzzled in her neck giving her butterfly kisses making her feel ticklish.

Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye
Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye..
Saadi gali aaja sanu chaahan waliye
Tenu hoo..kah maarda firaan

She moaned in pleasure as Maan moved up his fingers over her bare arm before caressing he exposed part of her cleavage while his lips were kissing her nape while Geet just leaned her head back on his shoulders closing her eyes giving him more access before he puts all her weight on his hand nd twirled her around nd then gently puts her down eliciting a throaty moan from her as she felt his hot breath on her neck while he was dropping her down making her to feel thousand butterflies dancing in her stomach nd strangely she was liking this proximity between dem as if they were meant to be like this forever as Maan twirled nd swirled her passionately.

Ikk waari aaja door jaan waliye
Ekk waari aaja door jaan waliye
Tenu hookah maarda firaan
Tenu hookah maarda firaan
Ho.. tenu hooo..kaaah maarda firaan……

Next she found herself lying on the kitchen counter nd his hands moving up her body from toe to her face over the flimsy material of her nighty making her to close her eyes in pleasure as he placed open mouthed kisses over her neck nd exposed part of her shoulders making her to arch her back but before she could hold him in her arms a loud sound of shattering of glass made her to open her eyes nd she saw herself standing at the same place while Glass has just slipped from her hands due to her being lost in such erotic dreams with Maan. She clutched her heart tight as she breathed heavily when realized what she was hallucinating but why nd why only him? She doesn't have any feelings for him right then why? Is she falling for him?

Music…..

It's been a month now nd Maan haven't showed up in the college yet. no one knows where he is not even his friends as they all were searching him every place possible when they come to know that he haven't returned back to Hoshiarpur but they couldn't found any trace of him. It was one such day when Geet went to cafeteria nd saw hers nd Maan's friends sitting together nd talking. They all had become quiet close after that incident. She goes to them to spend sometym as everyone has avoided her in this one month nd especially to know if there's any news of Maan's whereabouts. But as soon as she greeted everyone left from there on the pretext of this thing or other making her realize that no one wants to talk to her after what she did nd due to her one mistake she was left all alone, she thought nd ran towards a deserted corridor crying bitterly.

Lagdi tu kyun door da khwaaab..
Lagdi tu kyun door da khwaaab


Just then she was crying bitterly while resting her back to one of the wall she found someone wiping away her tears nd as she opened her eyes she found Maan wiping away her tears gently while nodding his head in no gesturing "Don't cry" with a soft smile playing on his M-shaped lips while she just looked at him in awe.

Akkhiyaan cho wag bayaan
Dil main lagana tere naaal
Dil main lagana tere naaa
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And before she could understand anything she found him kissing her both eyes one by one sucking away the tears after placing a oft kiss on her forehead comforting her with the warmth of his Love letting her know that she's not alone for he's always there with her before moving towards her full luscious lips. Geet felt his hot breath burning the softness of her lips nd she parted them on her own accord in the anticipation of what coming next.

Rooh nu vasaaja seene laaann waaliye
Ikk waari aaja door jaan waliye
Tenu hookah maarda firaan
Tenu hookah maarda firaan
Ho.. tenu hooo..kaaah maarda firaan…

But then nothing happened as she instantly opened her eyes when she felt his warmth missing only to find her all alone in the deserted corridor with no Maan around nd she just ran away from there crazily trying to search Maan everywhere ignoring the weird looks everyone is giving her nd at last she sat near the same fountain where she had once insulted him all dejected nd failed. She could see her image of slapping him nd making mockery of his Love making her to disgust herself even more nd as a result she hits her hand hard on the wall of the fountain with which she had slapped him making it to bleed, punishing it for its sin by giving it pain but that pain was nothing in front of the pain that she was feeling in her heart due to her guilt of ruining his lyf nd regret of losing the person who loves her so much just due to her baseless ego which could do nothing to heal her pain now.

Music

O… o… o…

She sat between the pool of letters in her balcony that she had treasured till now. His letters, her most priceless possession that she has been reading daily in this past 8 months making her to fall for him more nd more. A smile formed on her lips as she remembered their first meet where they had fought like a fourth graders nd then the series of these letters that were the best thing happened to her nd she had ruined everything with her own hands

Chitthiyaan to mitthi teri yaad aayi
Aaya ni sajna mera..
Kattiyaan jo rattaan tene bhul paayi
Dil vich basna tera..


She clutched one of the letter close to her heart as a lone tear escaped her eyes realizing what she has lost. She had lost the number of counts when she had read these letters nd missed him wishing him to be close to her. Yes she had came into the terms that she's deeply in Love with him probably she was always but it was just she who was blinded by her ego nd anger to not able to see through it, she thought as she looked at the roses nd the petals in one the box which were dried by now but her Love for him haven't as it just increased by every passing second with the only wish to see him again. She knows that he's not here with her yet she could feel him around her just like she use to feel him in these past 8 months for he's present in her heart beating with every heartbeats of hers

Rab tenu baniya khair chaahan waliye
Ikk waari aaja door jaan waliye
Tenu hookah maarda firaan

She closed her eyes when she felt his thumb wiping away that lone tear before placing a soft yet deep kiss on the soft flesh of her palm making her to smile as she looked at him while caressing his hairs while he laid keeping his head in her lap looking at her with his deep intense nd passionate eyes that had love for her just for her.

Tenu hookah maarda firaan
Ho.. tenu hooo..kaaah maarda firaan……

Music…

Saadi gali aaja sanu…

Saadi gali aaja sanu…

Saadi gali aaja……

And next she found him scooping her in his arms nd before she could know anything she felt the soft mattress beneath her making her realize that she's on her bed nd she just smiled seeing him laying beside her after tucking them with duvet before kissing her forehead nd then both her eyes making them close before moving towards her jaw line trailing soft yet sensuous kisses moving towards the sensitive spot beneath her ear licking it with his tongue.

"I Love you Maan." Geet whispered as he gently bites the soft flesh of her neck before licking it to sooth the pain.

"I Love you too Geet. I Love you too." She heard his hoarse whisper nd felt him keeping his rough lips on her soft ones with her closed eyes. He didn't kissed neither moved but just placed them above hers giving her the warmth of his Love nd making her drown in the world of blissful dreams of being them together happily yet again.

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"I don't want to meet anyone." Geet said as she looked other side avoiding the questioning gaze of her father who had brought yet another alliance for her.

"This is the umpteenth tym I am listening to same sentence nd you can't get excused Everytym. It's final now, you are meeting that guy." Mohinder said with a tone of finality. After that incident of 1 yrs before he had become a bit strict regarding Geet nd hence she now don't have enough courage to make her father to make her agree on her terms like before yet she can never think of someone taking Maan's place in her heart nd lyf. She knew that he'll be back once he'll punish her enough for her sin. More than her love she had trust on his love nd hence she keeps on rejecting every proposal.

"I don't want to marry anyone as I wanted to complete my studies first."

"I am not asking you to marry him tomorrow itself. I just want you to meet that guy, that's it. And anyways you are already in your third year nd he has to go for his IAS training so if everything will get fine then you both of you engaged today itself nd once he'll finish his training nd you your studies then you both will get married." Mohinder said as a matter of fact while Geet just looked at him shocked, he had already fixed everything nd didn't even cared to ask her.

"But Dad….."

"I don't want any more argument on this Geet as it won't change my decision. Now go back to your room nd get ready. I had invited them for lunch today nd it's already 11 am. I have asked Kakul, Meera nd Pari to come nd help you. Though they don't want to come but after my insistence they agreed. They can be here any moment. Now Go." Mohinder said in a stern voice while Geet just nodded meekly before going back to her room.

Tears that were threatening to fall out from her eyes finally made their ways out as soon as Geet came to her room. No she can't meet anyone, can't marry anyone because she belongs only to the person whom she had lost due to her own stupidity yet can't think of anyone but him nd can wait for him forever but she can't let anyone else claim her. She would die before she has to be called anyone else' than Maan.

"You are mine Geet, only mine nd I can't let you go away from me ever."

His words from his last letter rang in her mind as she closed her eyes nd fresh tears spilled out from her eyes feeling so helpless. She tried really hard to search him in these 18 months but Everytym all she got is disappointment. Infact Salil has even shut the door hard on her face when she had gone to his hostel to ask him if he knew anything about Maan. Suddenly everything started to feel so empty nd meaningless without him. She had lost her Love, she had lost her friends nd she had lost the sense of pride that her father use to have on her nd all this due to that stupid ego of hers that lead her to nowhere. Every second without him in these 18 months was not less than a punishment for her nd she knows that she deserves it for making the mocker of his pure Love while falling deeply nd deeply in love with her. What an irony, when he was in front of her then he couldn't understand his feelings nd now he has gone far away from her then she had realized what she has lost but Alas! It was too late.

Kakul, Meera nd Pari came to her place after a while nd their heart cried seeing her in pain thus washing away all the anger of these 18 months nd as a result they instantly hugged her to comfort her. Geet cried hugging Kakul begging her to bring Maan or to take her to him nd Kakul just closed her eyes in helplessness as she could do nothing to sooth the pain of her best friend. They reached downstairs with a heavy heart after composing themselves nd helping Geet to get ready. Geet saw a middle-aged couple conversing with her father as she greeted them. They seemed to be very nice nd kind from heart as they talked to her once she sat near them. Later she was told by her Dad that the guy who had came to see her is waiting in the Garden area for her nd hence she has to meet him there only. he gestured Geet's friends to take her to him who just nodded their head nd took Geet towards the garden area nd then left after asking her to be strong nd tell him clearly.

Geet scanned throughout the Garden area to see the guy who came to see her but to her surprise she found him nowhere. Her brows furrowed in confusion as she couldn't understand where that guy could vanish when her Dad has told her that he has been waiting for her over here. She was looking for him around her when something on the Tea-table caught her attention nd she moved forward only to see a piece of coloured paper peeping through the pages of Diary. She immediately picked up the diary to open it nd her eyes widened in shock as she found a letter in the same way Maan use to send to her i.e. stuck with a Red Rose nd covered with fresh Rose Petals. For few moments she couldn't fathom whether it's a dream or reality but then the feel of paper in her hand made her realize that it's a reality nd she immediately opened the letter with her trembling fingers nd thudding heart as soon as the realization dawn upon her.

"I could never get my mind off you,

I wonder if you'd mind if I'd make you my own,

And never let you go,

Hug you tight,

Treat you right,

Act all polite,

Take you on a date,

Making sure I am never late

Kiss you on your lips,

Talk about our kids,

Make you feel like a princess,

Living in a castle,

By just only loving you I am so blessed,

Hope by claiming you for forever I can be the best,

My only desire is to hold you tight,

Feeling the thudding of your heart against mine,

Now tell me my Princess,

Will you be mine?

Holding my hand in this journey of lyf my Love,

Will you be my Valentine???

Yours Valentine"

"Maan" she muttered in astonishment as she read the letter again nd again with her wide eyes not able to believe whether she was dreaming or this letter was actually here. How come that be possible after o many months getting this letter again in the same manner nd most importantly how did it reached over here, million thought raced her mind as she felt her heart thudding loud in her rib cage while her hands held the letter tight as if she was fearing it as her mere hallucination yet again.

"You haven't given your answer yet, Geet." she heard a familiar voice touching her ear drums breaking the trail of her thoughts. She could never forget this husky nd baritone voice of his no matter how many months or years passed by not seeing him or hearing him.

Tears welled up her eyes as she raise her head to look at the source of voice nd there he stood in front of her in flesh nd bones looking at her ever so lovingly, same Love which he have for her before nd which she failed to realize then but to her surprise it was still there without even faltering a bit even after such a grave mistake of her ruining his lyf. And next she found herself running in his embrace hugging him tightly as if he'll vanish once again in thin air nd him wrapping his arms tight around her petite form cocooning her in his embrace close to his heart. She cried in his embrace as she muttered "I am Sorry" countless tymes but this tym out of sheer happiness of him coming back to her while he just keeps on rubbing her back to calm her down hiding his face in the crook of her neck inhaling her sweet aroma.

They pulled out from hug after what seems like an eternity with Maan still keeping her in his embrace close to him as she caress his face lovingly while smiling amidst her tears trying to make herself believe of his presence, Maan's hand instantly reached to cradle her face nd wiping the trail of those salty water before placing a soft yet deep kiss on his forehead making her believe on the fact that he's indeed there with her nd it's not just her dream before pulling her back into his embrace.

"You haven't given me my answer yet Geet? Will you be my Valentine for whole of my lyf?" Maan asked after a while making Geet to pull out from his embrace nd looked at him awed. How can he still love her in the same way like he did before probably even more than before even after her doing so wrong with him?

"How can you still love me so much Maan?" Geet asked as fresh tears brimmed in her eyes finding nothing but only Love for her just for her in his deep honeyed eyes. She had expected to see hatred, disgust in them for her like she had seen in the eyes of everyone but his orbs only reflected nothing but his pure Love for her.

"Because I do. I just can't stop loving you even if I want to. I tried to not think about you but couldn't get my mind off you even for a second. I tried to hate you as much as I can but at the end I eventually end up falling more nd more in Love with you. Geet, do you think of me worthy enough to let me hold your hand nd walk in this journey of lyf together crossing each hurdle, each difficulty with our Love? Do you think of me worthy enough for you to let me love you, pamper you nd treat you like a princess of my heart? Do you think of me worthy enough to let me grow old with you? Do you think………"

His next set of words remain unsaid as Geet instantly sealed his lips with hers stopping him to say further. How dare he think that he's not worthy enough for her? If someone is unworthy then It's she who probably doesn't deserve a gem like you owing to the mistake she had committed nd here he's asking if he's worthy enough or her. How can his Love be still so selfless nd unconditional, she thought as she sucked his upper lip pouring out all the love she has for him.

It took sometym to Maan to realize what actually is happening. His princess is kissing him, O God! It's their first kiss nd as soon as he realized this fact he just wrapped his arm around her waist pulling her closer as he reciprocated the kiss in the same fervour. His other hand angled her face as he deepened the kiss before nipping her lips gently gaining an entry into the sweet crevices of her mouth pouring out his endless love for her. They kissed each other like there is no tomorrow forgetting the world around them as their virgin lips moved against each other in a perfect sync sucking, nibbling nd kissing each other passionately. They finally broke out after what seems like an eternity when they felt the dire need to take breath before touching their foreheads together. In order to calm down their ragged breathing.

"Don't ever say that you are not worthy enough for me or else I'll kill you. Your place in my heart is much above than my God Maan. If someone is unworthy then it's me. Will you make me worthy enough for you by making me a part of your lyf Maan?" Geet looked at Maan with her expected hazels to which he just simply pecked her lips softly giving her his answer.

"Got your answer? You are much more worthy for me nd my Love Geet than I can ever ask for? Now never say that again. Whatever happened was our past nd what will come will be our future nd I don't want to spoil the blissful moment of our future by mulling over our past. So right now from this moment I want us to forget everything nd start a fresh. You'll do that na Geet, for me?" Maan's answer made Geet speechless as she looked at him with all the love she's having for him seeing the depth of his love that had so easily freed her from every guilt. Kakul was indeed right she was the lucky one to have him in her lyf, she thought as she nodded her head in acceptance.

"I Love you Geet. I Love you a lot" Maan hoarsely whispered in his baritone voice as he looked deep into her hazels who were already looking at him with so much Love.

"I Love you too Maan. I Love you too much." She replied as she submitted herself in his embrace while he just held her close to him feeling the happiest man of this earth.

A loud sound of clapping nd hooting broke the moment of blissful confession of these 2 love birds nd as they looked at the direction they found their family nd their friends nd Mr. Singh standing with smiling faces adoring this lovely couple but what made Geet embarrass was the fact that they probably must have witnessed their kissing minute especially the elders nd all she want at that moment is mother earth to swallow her for being seen in such position by their elders. But then something stuck Geet's brain nd she instantly looks at Maan nd then back to her Dad who was smiling widely. Nd as she puts two nd two together she understood everything that Maan is the guy who came to see her nd what kind of Drama is her Dad doing till now.

"I know what's running in your mind Geet. Well I'll cut the long story in short. I found Maan after whole 2 months since that incident only to find him working as a mechanic in a small village nearby. Since Ved had already told me that Maan haven't been back to Hoshiarpur nd I know that he wouldn't either for he can't let down his parents nd that made my work easier. It took me lots of tym to convince him to come back with me nd finally he did just to fulfill his Father's dream but I could see how broken d shattered he was for his eyes reflected his pain clearly hence I ask Mr. Singh to keep him at his home nd with the help of some of my contacts I arranged everything by which Maan could complete his education nd everything that could lead him to fulfill his dream. Here I had seen true remorse in your eyes too but I want you to realize the depth of your feelings nd extent of the damage you had done so that you won't repeat the same mistake again. And finally Maan's determination nd hard work showed its result nd he had topped in his IAS examinations nd rest you can comprehend yourself. Nd ya one more thing Maan's name is all cleared from every criminal record hence there's no need to worry about it. Nd ya in all this there's someone apart from Mr. Singh who helped me a lot nd that is "Panch Shakti" means Maan's own friends who stood by him like his strength giving him support at his toughest tym." Mohinder's last sentence made all the girls to look at the guys surprised nd anger was visible in everyone's face for hiding such fact from them even after being quiet close ro them especially of Kakul's ho haven't expected Ved to hide this from her as she looked at him angrily while he just mouthed a sorry nervously.

"Umm…. Guys what could we do? Mohinder Uncle has emotionally blackmailed us to be quiet. Ab who can refuse the order of Commissioner of Police. Abey bolo na tum log." Ved said as he nudged his friends to speak in defense while smiling nervously who supported his statement nd finally after lots of Roothna manana girls let go the matter as the moment of happiness was too much to think of any other thing.

"Waise Geet, along with Maan we all are waiting for your answer. Ab Bol bhi Do Warna my niece is all ready to marry him right now nd here. If you have any dilemma then I can ask her." Mr. Singh teased making everyone giggle nd Geet to look at him pouting with cute anger. But then everything went silent as they saw Maan bending on his knees before taking Geet's hand in his making her to look at him dazed.

"Ms. Geet Handa, I Maan Singh Khurana in the presence of all these people proposing you to marry me nd make me a part of your lyf. Will you give me this Privilege to own you nd make you my Valentine officially for rest of my lyf? Will you be mine?" Maan's words stirred new emotions in Geet's heart making her to fall for him even more as her lips broke into the widest smile while she nodded her head in yes.

"Forever I'll be yours nd only yours. But I have one condition." Geet's words made Maan nd others confused as they looked at her furrowing their brows.

"You have to promise me that you'll always be just my Valentine?" Maan's lips curved into smile as he let out the breath that he has been holding till now.

"Today, tomorrow, Forever nd in every birth I promise that I'll be only 'Yours Valentine'." Maan said as he slipped the ring into her finger marking her as his possession before filling her in his embrace amidst the huge round of clapping nd whistling leaving everyone to witness the re-union of these two souls.

*******************************************************

So this was the story of Maan nd his only Love Geet who finally got together after a long period of separation. They both got married after maan finished his training nd Geet her studies nd then with each passing day their Love for each other just more nd more while their nights were filled with passion nd madness for each other. Maan had finally convince their parents to stay with them in Delhi nd Geet was so delighted to get the love of two fathers nd one mother. Those bitter memories that were once the part of their lives seems to be vanish somewhere long back for it has been replaced by all the loving nd blissful memories created by Maan nd Geet. Nd then an year later an Angel came into their lives nd Maaneet named them as 'Seher' who honored them to cherish the beautiful feeling of becoming parents nd then after 4 years of Seher's birth Geet gave birth to another Boy nd they gladly named him as 'Garv' nd their family got complete.

Ved nd Kakul too got married 2 years later after Maaneet's marriage. Probably Kakul had finally found her match in Ved nd both are just perfect for each other nd now is a Proud parent of one boy. After lots of hook ups nd break ups Yash nd Meera too got married nd guess what they were still fighting after having 3 kids nd soon Pari nd Vicky got married though that's a different thing that Pari still use to have crush on other guys.

And Salil…. Wo Bechara is still searching for his Ms. Perfect in every gal but still no luck. Even after being an owner of such a big nd successful advertising agency he haven't got his soul-mate yet but still he never stops trying approaching every gal. Everyone has mark their names in their respective fields nd are successful in their own ways. Some less nd some more but still that couldn't come in the way of the Bond they shared with each other nd they were sure that it won't change even in the future too..

Maan nd Geet are celebrating their 12th Marriage anniversary nd they are still madly in Love with each other just like they were before. It's not that haven't faced any difficulties or differences or ups nd downs, they did but they crossed everything with their Love nd understanding nd are leading a blissful lyf. Maan still use to express his Love by writing Letters nd Geet just use to fall more nd more for him with his way to express his Love especially his way of still addressing himself at the end of Letter as "Yours Valentine."




Finally i was able to Edit my Post... My Net has literally made me cried Last day as even after getting everything ready i couldnt post it... But finally i was able to... So This was my syurprise for GHSP Anniversary... Hope you all gonna lyk it... If not then i Am Sorry for Disappointing you all nd if Yes Then Thanx a ton... Looking forward to see lots of likes nd comment from you All😃😃


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O ya! before i forgot Amrutha (maneetmaahi) had made a thread for the discussion of my FF's... so please leave your views, questions, suggestions or even criticisms for my works on this thread... will be waiting for your feedback😃... here's the Link

FF Discussion Thread


P.S.S Also i had created a new page for the notification of my updates of all FFs as i was having some problems while accessing the Group... Kindly like it to get the quick notification of my update... here's the Link


Aakriti's Magical Maaneet World


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Luv you all

Aakriti😊


Edited by aakritisri1111 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
HAPPIEEE 3RD ANVERSARY OF ghsp...
AWESOME OS HARIKAA...
hot passionate.. uff..
bold geet..😉😉
love it..

AAKRITI LOVE UR OS too...
"yours valentine".. beautifull emotional sad... love maan's character hiz selfless love 4 geet... n love it.. how geet harted chnge into guilt dam love...

Edited by zaidi98 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
soo emotional 1😭😭😭
maaneet lost their baby.😭😭.how can do anything like this.geet bro nd papa want to separate baby from maan.is mein kya hua baby is no more😭😭.maan chala gaya geet ko chor ke😭😭.

chalo finally maan back 😛😛.now both r togather👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
painful os
hated geet fsather and her brothers they killd a child in their ego😭

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