NDC (TR N swaron ff)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 1: Below

PART 2: Pg 3

PART 3: Pg 5

PART 4: Pg 7

PART 5: pg 9

PART 6: pg 12

PART 7: pg 14

M really upset abt the way NDC has been shown so heres an ff.. d tracks the same except taayam MUs n swyms dads entry.. It's a swaron n TR ff but sry that ill focus on TR.. Pls Read!!

In Tayam home

Swayams sitin on the couch thinking about NDC n sharey MUs. Tani isnt at home.

*Knock at the door

S opened d door n it was Tani. Tani looked upto swym she was crying badly. T immediately hugged him n cried even more.

S: Kya hua??

T was too upset. She had to tell s1. Probably her bro was the best option.

T: Bhai aaj vo hua jo..(she didnt kno wich words to use) mera aur rey (even using the name made her think that it wasn't her rite to do so)ka (she closed her eyes) breakup

Saying the words made her knees week she moved away and kneeled on the floor.Tears were constantly flowing from her eyes. Swayam was taken aback.So much had happened, were there problems big enough for a breakup?So many questions but he kept them aside. Right now he had to console his sis.

S: Tani sab thik ho jayega, tumhare or rey ke beech ki differences thik ho jayengi.. Rey aajkal zada tensed hai shayad..

T: Bhai rey ne kuh nai kiya. Maine Rey se breakup kiya.

Saying the words and admitting what she had done broke her apart,

S: Agar ye breakup tumhe ita pain deta hai toh kyun??

T knew it wasn't fair to tell him. But she needed him for all selfish reasons so that all this could work.

T: because I love him. Bhai hamari relationship Rey ki weakness ban rhi thi.. jo mein bilkul nhi chahti thi. Right now unka focus sirf dance hona chahiye. Mein jaanti huki dance unke liye kita important hai..Jis din unh one mere liye captaincy drop kar di mein samaj gayi ki mere rehte vo dance par pura focus kar payenge.. isliye meine decide kiya ki'

S: Tani I don't think ki vo is sab ke baad kisi bhi cheez par focus kar payega

T: Mein janti hun ki kria ke baad ye breakup unkeliye bohot difficult hoga.. isliye bhai mein chahti hun ki aap aur Sharon is breakup se deal karne mein unki help kare.. I kno ki mein bohot selfish..

Swym cut her : Ye bilkul bhi selfish nhi hai.. I will do it. Idk if it will work..

He went and sat bside T. He was very proud that Tani was his sis. He knew how sensitive she was and how difficult this was for her.

S: Tani but till wen will you deny ur love??

T: I love him so much that I can stay away forever if its better for him..

Swayum put his arm around Tani while she cried the whole night.

Tani knew it was wrong that he had to see all her pain but she feared to be alone with her thots and tears. Being with Swym she felt safe.. A thot once came to her mind will rey ever sit with her with his arm around her?? She shrieked at the thought. She was surprised that this thot would bring so much fear. The shriek scared Swym more than the tears.

At Reys Place

Rey was sitting on the couch with his head in his hands. Had this really happened?? Was it so easy for her?? The same scene played again n again in his mind

*Flashback*

Fire escape

Tani was facing the wall n Rey was behind him

T: Shayad hamari relationship yahin tak thi.. shayad yhi end hai.

R wanted to hve a look at her.

R: Kyun??

T: Its not important..

Bfore rey could come out from the trance she ran away

Guys I kno its sad so all shoes n tamatars r welcome.. But it will have a happy ending..

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rabba,pehle hi break up...Bt nice gng,cntinue sn dr...
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Amazing concept plz update soon n pm me :)
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nice concept, aww feel soo sorry for taarey though, please update soon n pm if possible
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TR breakup... plz continue soon...
i l wait fr the happy ending...
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Nice concept
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hmm...dis is interesting
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Gosh! Please update soon.. Please! And do pm me! This will be real interesting! Please do pm me!
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Taani is so sweet
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AMAZING PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
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