SAJAN FF... A NIGHT TO REMEMBER... PART 8_Upd - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone... Thanks for all the likes and comments... I really appreciate them... So, here is the next part... Hope you enjoy...

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PART - 4: ME AND YOU

COLLEGE CAMPUS:

Samrat's red bike was hitting the speed on the empty roads in the midnight... Gunjan's scream didn't help her much to make Samrat slow down... All she could do was to clutch onto his shoulder tightly; almost hugging him, enough reason for Samrat to accelerate the bike to eighty kilometres an hour... But at the same time he didn't want to reach the campus early, hence taking a long route and stopping by a roadside ice-cream parlour to spend some more time seemed a good idea... Gunjan had never experienced such an adventurous ride with someone whom she had known for only couple of hours... But it happens; you can completely trust someone you have met for the first time and sometimes years of acquaintance and friendship turns into vain... Gunjan's friendship with Samrat surely comes under the first category, or that is what she thought until her phone vibrate when she was standing in front of the girls' hostel...

All her memories of the beautiful night, the party, the ride, the chit chats at the ice-cream parlour, the night winds messing with her hairs and dupatta and that one smiling face and a pair of hazel brown eyes she will never forget took a back seat... Reality hits her back when she received the call from the private number...

Voice: How was the party??

Gunjan: Good, everything went pretty well...

Voice: Now listen carefully, Sheena and Ranvijay will be reaching the campus tomorrow... Sheena will be staying at room no. 309 with Annie, just opposite to your room...

Gunjan: But why did you made the arrangements like this?? It would have been better and easier me and Sheena staying in one room...

Voice: It's not my arrangement; it is the rule set by Indira Shergill, freshers are not allowed to stay together... With you and Sheena joining Excel this year makes both of you same as fresher...

Gunjan: Fine...

Voice: You know the rules... Follow them strictly...

And with this the call ended leaving Gunjan alone in the dark... Slowly she headed towards her room burried in deep thoughts... The hostel corridoors were dimly lighted by the pale green night lamps within few distances... It was lightening the pitch blackness of the corridoor, but the darkness of her mind she could not even lit up in the broad daylight, forget about night... And now another thought was eating up her peace of mind... Thoughts about Samrat... Samrat definitely knew nothing about her; he doesn't have any idea about the fact that she is not someone she is pretending to be... All of a sudden Samrat's notion about her seems to be the utmost importance to her forgetting everything else; but the reasons behind this she doesn't know... Samrat is just a friend who has been nice to her like Nupur, like Mayank... But then what was it about Samrat that made her feel him to be different and special!!...

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EXCEL COLLEGE:

Gunjan entered the college building... Dia was probably upset with her; her friendly intimacy with Samrat to be precise... She had gone to bed the last night before Gunjan's arrival and had left the room early with Annie in the morning without informing her... Today was the first day of the session and there was only one class that too after the lunch hours... Well, she was least bothered about the class; she was becoming hyper about the information of Ranvijay and Sheena's arrival... They will be joining the college too from that very day but the time of their arrival was not informed to her for obvious reasons... She was getting impatient; this wait was killing her... But this is not what should happen; she will have to calm down and compose herself while meeting them...

Gunjan was lost in her own thoughts when someone patted her shoulder from back making her jerk a little and turn around hurriedly, breaking her chain of thoughts... Samrat stood there all smiling... "What happened Chashmish?? Did I scare you??" he asked sensing a nervous expression on her face... Gunjan could not answer to that question; yes, she was nervous... For one moment she thought it was Sheena, stupid thought; she knew it but still couldn't help... All these secret activities and tensions were not helping her to think properly... But right now standing before this one boy who had invaded her dreams the last whole night, every worries of her seems to fade away... What was there in that smile and in those eyes that makes her forget everything, she wondered... Chashmish!! Samrat called her once again, this time in a much softer tone seeing her puzzled looks... He had started to address Gunjan by this name since their way back after the last night party...

'Huh' was the only word that managed to escape her lips making Samrat break out into a grin... "Are you lost somewhere??" He asked, but Gunjan could not answer that either to Samrat's wonder... "Not fare Chashmish, I know that I am handsome and girls drool over me, but that doesn't mean you will forget everything else", Samrat teased her to which Gunjan present him the sweetest smile ever... "I was not drooling over you", she said softly with a gentle smile..."I was just looking for Dia, she is upset with me I guess", Gunjan tried to hide her anxiety and all those weird feelings she was having since the last night about Samrat by changing the topic and casting the spotlight on Dia... It worked... Samrat was equally aware of the same as Dia was avoiding him as well since morning... But right now he wanted to wave off any thoughts about Dia; she needs to understand they are just friends... But all thanks to Indira Shergill, Dia could not let go off her thoughts about she and Samrat being a couple... "Don't worry about her Chashmish, she will be fine... I will talk to her later", Samrat tried to reasoned with her not wanting to waste this valuable time which he wanted to spend only with this doe eyed girl...

"Right now you are coming with me", Samrat announced... Coming with him!!! What??? Where??? Why??? She has been trying hard all these time to keep a straight face and forcing herself not to stare at him like there is no tomorrow, but spending some more time with him would definitely make things worse... What is wrong with you Gunjan, he is just a friend... How much she tried to compose herself but all in vain... "Stop touching your specs Chashmish and come with me", Samrat's words made her withdraw her hand that keeps on adjusting her specs every now and then... Where?? She asked...

The next one hour she first spent with Samrat, Benji and Uday in the canteen over coffee for fifteen minutes and the next forty five minutes in the Music Room with Samrat which according to him is one of the best places in the whole college, the other being the Basketball court... Gunjan too loved the Music Room... It was painted in sky blue with patches of white musical notes drawn on them... Guitars, Mandolin, Piano, Saxophone, Trumpet, Drum set and many other musical instruments were arranged in the room for students... And on one side of the room several CD racks were neatly arranged according to alphabetical order... Samrat is the one student who frequently visits this place, or better to say Music room and Basketball court are the two places he spent his maximum time...

Gunjan was trying to comfort up with a guitar; she always had a keen wish to play guitar, but sometimes what you want doesn't always happen... A faint tune of the song Naa tum jaano naa hum played in her mind... A face all brighten up; standing by the window playing the string of the guitar and singing-

Kyun chalti hai pawan, kyun jhoome hai gagan...

Kyun machalta hai mann, naa tum jaano naa hum...

Kyun ata hai bahar, kyun loot ta hai karar...

Kyun hota hai pyaar, naa tum jaano naa hum...

A ten year old Gunjan would sit on the table and listen to him while munching chocolate and swinging her legs... She loved the music; she loved his singings but she was too little then to understand the feelings... The feelings of being in love...

Samrat snapped his fingers before her which brought back Gunjan from her thoughts... "You are lost again Chashmish", Samrat took a seat beside her...

"It's nothing", Gunjan tried to change the topic once again but this time something betrayed her...

Samrat wiped away a lone drop of tears that was rolling down her cheeks... "I can see it's something"...

A calm silence prevailed between them; the only tinkling sound of the wind chimes in the room emphasized the raw silence even more... They just sat there having no clue what to say and what to not... Sharing your pain helps to lighten the pain, but is it always possible to share your sorrow; especially with someone you hardly know, probably not... Samrat too feels the same; he had never shared any of his pains with anyone except Nupur... Then how could he expect Gunjan to share her thoughts with him... She will if she thinks him to be appropriate person to hold her secrets or her feelings... Samrat waited patiently watching her while Gunjan was busy composing herself... Everything about her was so gentle and soothing; her words so soft, her every feature; her smile, her lips, her eyes, and even the red salwar suit she was wearing was mysteriously calm and delicate... Her open hairs left an urge in him to touch them... Sometimes only one meeting with a person is enough to leave a deep impact on you, Gunjan has been that someone for him since the last night party...

Samrat gently put a palm on her shoulder; he wanted to say something... Anything that may make her feel better, that may help her open up to him and share her secret sorrows with him... Would she do that; Samrat wondered, will she trust him if he says her so... What it could be; something about her family, studies, financial problems... She was lost after holding the guitar, does that signifies anything, may be... Samrat desperately wished to know the reasons behind her tears that were definitely not matching to her cute angelic face... "Chashmish, if you are shedding this valuable tears because you can't play a guitar, then please don't, Samrat is always here to help you... I can teach you how to play a guitar"... Samrat tried to lighten the gloomy atmosphere of the room...

"How do you know I was crying actually because I want to learn guitar", Gunjan's cute honest reply left him speechless...

"Chashmish, I was just kidding... But seriously you were actually crying for this", Samrat exclaimed...

"It was my dream Samrat to play guitar like him... He had promised me to teach but never kept his promise", Gunjan replied dreamily...

"Who was he Chashmish??" Samrat asked, a tint of jealousy waved in his tone at her mention of the word He...

"No one"... Gunjan replied hastily leaving a startled Samrat... No one!! What was that suppose to mean?? He was about to ask her about this No one but just then the speaker adjacent to the music room roared...

Special announcement from Tamanna Mam, asking each and every students of second and third year to gather in the Assembly Hall within fifteen minutes...

"I guess it is about the Talent Parade and the Fresher's Party", Samrat said to Gunjan hearing the announcement... "And yes Chashmish, two other students will be joining our department this year apart from you... Sheena and Ranvijay"...

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Plz do let me know how was it... Looking forward for your feedback...

Edited by blue_jay - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
One word that came into my mind after reading this update was 'WoW'
Sajan scenes were very cute and beautifully written.
I love them very much n m curious to learn that what gunjan is upto and also about Sheena and Ranvijay???? But i liked the thing that samrat and gunjan have feelings for each other...
😃 😃
Superb work 👏 👏
Plzzz continue soon... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
hey the suspense is awesome! plz pm me wenever u update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome updt!Sajan bike ride scene ws beautiful..awww Sajan r falling 4 each other<3 poor Gunjan!shez so confused abt her feelings.. Wow!Na tum jano na hum is 1 of my fav songs,loved Sajan here..aww Samrat jealous..cho cuteee;)
gr8 job,do cont soon n thnx 4 Pm:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Luv_monaya

Awesome updt!Sajan bike ride scene ws beautiful..awww Sajan r falling 4 each other<3 poor Gunjan!shez so confused abt her feelings.. Wow!Na tum jano na hum is 1 of my fav songs,loved Sajan here..aww Samrat jealous..cho cuteee;)
gr8 job,do cont soon n thnx 4 Pm:)

Na tum jaano na hum is even one of my fav songs, thats why thought of putting it here 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved the update. Gunjan developing feelings for Samrat and yet having to control them as she is on some sort of a mission. And now Sheena and Ranvijay, the two trouble makers, are they trouble makers here too?? I would love to know. Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part-3
Their first meeting was so wonderful~~I loved the way Gunjan supported him by continuing the game
Part-4😳
OMG~~~They feel something for each other😳~pakka !!!
pls continue soon !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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y don't u update yaar???It's amazing~~~I m sure HE is Samrat only for whom Gunjan is crying😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chulbuli94

y don't u update yaar???It's amazing~~~I m sure HE is Samrat only for whom Gunjan is crying😛

Will update very soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello everyone... Thank you for all the likes and comments, I really appreciate them... So, here is the next part... Hope you enjoy...
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PART - 5: TANGLED
ASSEMBLY HALL:

Gunjan and Samrat entered the assembly hall to find Benji and Uday having a verbal fight over the seats... Uday wants the first seat of the front row since Tamanna Mam would be coming and he has a huge crush over his Tammy Mam... But the first seat in the front row was already occupied by Benji and he was simply refusing to leave the seat and move back to a back row; hence the fight... The rest of the front row was equally occupied by the other students and no one agreed to leave the place... Uday and Benji's childish fight is very famous in the college and every time Samrat is the one to resolve them... This time was no exceptional...

"Dude, I thought you would want to sit with me and Gunjan and three of us will enjoy", Samrat started his most precious art with Benji; emotional blackmailing... "But its ok, I understand you don't want my friendship now... Fine I'm ok with it... Come Chashmish" Samrat held her hand and took her to the third row where few sits were empty... "Very funny" Benji joined them within a second leaving the first row for Uday... Gunjan could not help smile brightly witnessing their friendship and Samrat's childish nature and idea to solve the problem...

"You know Chashmish, you have got a very beautiful smile" Samrat said turning towards her seeing her lively smile... But his words and all of a sudden remark about her smile quieten her; she stopped all of a sudden as having the same sensuous feelings once again... She knows that she had a pretty smile; she has heard that before several times from several people, then what was it about Samrat that makes those words have a different meaning... The same words but just because they are from him makes them special... "Chashmish, what do you keep thinking" Samrat this time emphasized on his words sensing her lost again in some thoughts...

"Nothing, it's really nothing" Gunjan tried hard not to spill out her thoughts before him... It's the third time on that day when she was lost in her thoughts and every time Samrat had to push her to bring her back from her thoughts... This is definitely not good, it was the very first day of the college and she was acting all weird in front of Samrat... If this continues then how she is going to spend the whole year, she wondered...

"What nothing??" Samrat asked wondering what was bothering her since morning... She was all lively, friendly and cheerful last night... Then what was bothering her since morning, it can't be Dia... She was crying in the music room holding the guitar and she was saying something about some He who was supposed to teach her guitar... Is she upset about that some He!! No one, she said He was No one... The word echoed in his mind, why would someone cry for some No one??

Gunjan was sitting between Samrat and Benji... Benji was sitting grumpily so long after losing the first seat to Uday because of Samrat... But how long could he maintain the silent treatment with his best friend when Samrat himself was busy talking to Gunjan ignoring him... Samrat was about to ask Gunjan again regarding what had happened in the music room but before he could do that Benji spoke out...

"Gunjan, you know the meeting is all about Talent Parade and Freshers Party" Benji addressed Gunjan ignoring Samrat...

"I know Benji, Samrat has mentioned that to me" Gunjan answered softly in her usual manner...

"Oh really, that's nice... So, what will you perform in the Talent Parade??" He continued with Gunjan purposely ignoring Samrat once again...

"Dude, you can talk about that later... I need to speak to Chashmish now" Samrat replied before Gunjan could speak...

"Gunjan, I'm talking to you not someone else" Benji replied grumpily mentioning Samrat...

"Shut up Benji" Samrat said making Gunjan laugh once again seeing the childlike fight between the two best friends...

"Benji, I haven't thought of performing anything yet" Gunjan replied to Benji's question... "And now can you both stop this fight" she asked to both...

"Don't worry about this Chashmish, it's our regular stuff" saying this Samrat and Benji high-fived with each other...

But Chashmish, I want to ask you something about what had happened earlier '

"Hello students" Tamanna Mam entered the Assembly Hall followed by Nupur, Mayank and Dia... Samrat was cut off in between once more as Tamanna Mam entered and all the students stood up to greet her... After the little greetings and settling down, a round of announcement followed by Tamanna Mam depicting the details about the Talent Parade and Freshers Party...

"So students, as you are aware of the Talent Parade, I would like to let you know that all the talented students should enrol you name to either Mayank Sharma; the president of the student council, Nupur Shergill; general secretary or Dia Maalik; cultural secretary... So, like every year there will be solo and duet rounds... Auditions for the first year students will start from tomorrow and I want all the senior students to encourage the freshers... There will be the best performance awards which will be given to the best performers from every year... And for the students of second year competition is going to be really tough because three new students will be joining the English Dept. and two of them are very talented dancers... So, first of all let's welcome all the three new students- Gunjan, Sheena and Ranvijay"...

Gunjan with Samrat's company had so long forgotten these two names that would be arriving the day... But now once again her presence; her motive in the college became very clear at the mention of these two names...

As Gunjan stood up and walked towards Tamanna Mam, her eyes fell on the door... A girl with red sleeveless top and black checkers shorts with wavy hairs and large ear rings peeping through them entered the room, along with her entered a boy clad in half sleeve denim clothes... Her heart pounced in excitement staring at them... She had been waiting for them since the phone call last night and now they are here... Partners in crime...

The whole Assembly Hall was filled by the sound of deep sigh as the new girl walked in shoving all the pair of eyes that were ogling her... Meanwhile the girls were also too busy drooling over the new hunk... Some gossips-mongers started murmuring about the presumption of the new boy being a tough fight for the already existing one and some were assuming a possible love story to brew up between the hot new girl and the champ of the college... But the one who has always been in these discussions; Samrat who has been all excited earlier about Sheena was now too occupied to notice her... Had it been a day before then Samrat might have chocked out his entire plan by then to win over the hot new girl... But now another girl with all her simplicity, cuteness and genuineness and added to it her mysteriousness had robbed him off his thoughts about Sheena... Samrat spend only five seconds in total observing the two new students; two seconds for Ranvijay over the fact that he is going to be the new room partner of him and Mayank... And the rest three seconds over Sheena when the idea strikes him that she might be another miniature version of Indira Shergill in her earlier days; well groomed outside but hollow inside...

Gunjan, Sheena and Ranvijay reached the stage at a time... She gave a light smile to them which was returned by both of them... "Welcome to Excel" Tamanna Mam said to three of them... "And I hope the three of you will definitely prove yourselves assets of the Excel like all the other brilliant and talented students" she concluded with a smile...

"Sure Mam, we will definitely try our best" Gunjan replied with a sweet smile and took a step towards the two others... Both Sheena and Ranvijay too agreed to what Gunjan said and with that promise Gunjan shook hands with both Sheena and Ranvijay...

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Do let me know how was it... Looking forward for your feedback...

Edited by blue_jay - 12 years ago

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