Asya os...part5 page 10 updated on 13/7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys mei pehli bar os lokhne jaa rahi hon so pls koi galti hui toh maaf kar dena...
Intro:-asad n zoya are couple now unki shadi ko ek saal ho gaya n zoya pregnent hain 1 month...ayan aur humaira ka bhi nikah ho gaya aur woh dono asad ke saath rehte hain...
Tanveer asya ki shadi hone ke bad chali jati hai par uss ki sachayi asad ko pata nahi...aur ek saal baad woh phir se asad ke ghar aati hai n now jeoulose wife zoya reaction after watching billo rani...
Hey gus agar apko accha laga toh mein conti karongi!!...
Part 1...
(In asya bedroom)...
Zoya:mr khan apko kya zaroorat thi uss tanveer ko vapas yaha lane ki...
Asad:ohhh koi jal raha hai...
Zoya:yeh dekhiye mr khan aap topic change mat kijeye!meine apse poocha ki aap usse yaha kyu leker aaye?
Asad:woh meri dost hai usse meri zarrorat hai isss liye...
Zoya:meine apse kitni baar kaha hai ki woh ladki mujhe thik nahi lagti usski harkate bohot wierd hai mr khan aap usse yaha se jane ke liye kahiye...
Asad:yeh dekho zoya tum pehle bhi iss tarah ki baate muje bata chuki ho mujhe tannu par pura vishvas hai woh aisa nahi kar sakti so tum chup baitho aur rahi bath tuhmari toh tum jeoulouse ho issi liye...
Zoya:allah miyan whats wrong wth mr khan aap toh itna bharosa apne abu par bhi nahi karte jitnaki uss tannu par...
Asad: zoya pls ab uss topic par mat zao ...
Najma enters in room...
Najma:bhai jaan apko aur bhabhijaan ko ammi ne khane par bulaya hai...
N she goes...
Asad;ab tumhari baat khatam hui ho toh chale...
Zo:aap jaye mujhe bhook nahi hai jakar apki tannu ko khilayiye...
Asad:bas zoya aur ek lafz nahi abhi chalo...
Zo: nahi mr khan...
Asad:i said chalo yeisi halat mein itna gussa thik nahi...
Zo:no(making chilish face)...
Asad:agar tum ayi toh mein tumhe sham ko pizza dunga...
Zo:sure na...
Asad: ya sure ab toh chale
(dono chale jate hai)

hey guys abhi bas itna baki ka baaad mein,,,,,
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please do continue! Itna achha tha, kaise continue nahi karungi? I am going to love seeing a pregnant Zoya jealous! Looking forward to the next part! Alsp, pm me when you update! 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey, its really nice, plz do continue and do pm me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice wanna know what happens next
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Ooh Pizza bribe to preggers Zoe... Awww, please continue, wanna se a jealous biwi :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it! And Asad should have more trust in his wife than stupid Tannu -.- ! loll Anyways please pm me for next update!! :))
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2...
(Dinning table)
ayan; bhaijan kaha the aap bohot der kar di ane mein...
Asad han woh kuch kam tha...
Ayan:kahi bhabhijan ke sath toh nahi...(teasing mood)
asad:ayan yeh majak karne ka waqt nahi hai...mein office ja raha hun tu ayegakya...
Ayan:hain bhaijan abhi ata hoon...
Asad:zoya shyam ko milte hain...
Zoya:promise yaad hai na mr khan...
Asad:hain yaad hai...
Ayan:chale bhaijan ...
(dono chale jate hain)
in the evening
zoya,tanveer n najma in thhe hall
tanveer:mein jemmy ke liye aaj jam aur toast banaungi woh bhi homemade...
Zoya:woh tanveer asad ne jam aur toast khana chod diya hain woh ab pizza khate hain...
Tanv:kab se?
Zoya:jab se hamara nikah hua hain tab se...
Tanver:ab mein ayi hun na ab sab pehle jaisa kar dungi...(in thought)
zoya:mein bhi dekhti hun ki tum mere mr khan ko kaisa apna banati hun kyu ab woh mere sirf mere shohar hain na tumko yaha se bhagaya hain toh mera naam mrs zoya ahmad khan nahi...(in thought)
asad n ayan enter in the house
ayan;good eve ladies...are humaira kaha hain?
Najma:hain woh bhaijan apki begam apne khar gayi hain abhi aa jayegi...
Ayan:ohhh mujhe yaad hi nahi...
Zoya:kya robert aap apni biwi ko bhul gaye...sach main ap bilkul apne bhaijaan par gaye hain...
Ayan;nahi mona aisi baat nahin hain woh mein kam ki wajah se...
Tanv;aap log baithiye mein aap ke liye kuch khane ke liye lati hun jami meine tuhmare liye kuch special banaya hain...
Ayan;sirf jammy ke liye hamare liye kuch nahi...
Tanveer:aap logo ke liye bhi...
Zoya asad ko gusse se dekhti hain...
Asad: han par kya banaya hai tannu...
Tan;jamn bread...
Asad:par ab mein jam aur bread nahi khata...
Tannu;par kyu jammy..
Asad:kyukiii ayan beech mein..
Ayan:rehne do tanveer mein khata hun...
N ayan eats all the toast...
Asad:thank god aaj bach gaya pata nahi zoya kya karti...in mind
scene shifted asyas bedroom
zoya: toh kaha hain mera pizza...
Asad:shoack konsa pizza...
Zoya:wats wrong with u mr khan aap phir se bhool gaye aap ne promise kiya tha ki aap mere liye pizza lekar ayenge aap itni jaldi bhool gaye...
Asad:ohhh m sorry zoya actully aate waqt sare shop band ho gaye...in mind pata nahi aaj mein kaise bool gaya yeh saab uss ayan ki wajah se pata nahi aaj mera kya hoga...
Zoya:itna ghatiya bahana mila apko dukan band kya bhopal mein sari shop 6 baje hi band hoti hain...in angry mood...
Asad:woh kya hain na...
Zoya:bas mr khan apko apni preg biwi ki koi fikar nahi hain aap akdam ke kya kehtye hain woh bevkuf insan hain...
Asad; zoya try to understand baby...
Zoya;kuch nahi sunna mujhe aaj aap mera sath nahi soyenge aap jake guest room mein soyie...
Asad:kya mein tuhmare bina kaise...
Zoya:kaise bhi aur hain mein apse baat bilkul nahi karongi jayinye yaha se mr khan...n throws acuision on him...
Asad:toh aaj mein gr nahi aaj mein ayan ke kamre jake sota haun kal tak thick hogi zoya...n he goes...
In pre.;asad n ayan zoya ko manane ki koshish...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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🥳 🥳 🥳 Yaaay im first to comment 🥳 🥳.

Oh wow!! This was really cute!!

Please continue!!

i loved how jealous and controlling zoya has become hahaha its cute And how asad listens to zoya and not tanu lmao thst scene was funny!

and i love aaayan here he sounds so calm and dopey haha cant wait for more asya and hamyan scenes!!

Please pm future updates xxx 😳 😳 Red4VerdanaBold
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Edited by lovesick - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovesick

🥳 🥳 🥳 Yaaay im first to comment 🥳 🥳.

Oh wow!! This was really cute!!

Please continue!!

i loved how jealous and controlling zoya has become hahaha its cute And how asad listens to zoya and not tanu lmao thst scene was funny!

and i love aaayan here he sounds so calm and dopey haha cant wait for more asya and hamyan scenes!!

Please pm future updates xxx 😳 😳 Red<font size="4">4</font>VerdanaBold

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omg m glad u like it tanx...
Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey revi I loved it dear

He sweet ..

I liked it

Olz continue soon

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