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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Nice liked this zo who is possessive
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Its just awsm dear

Loved it

Continue soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
awesome yaar please pm me and continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
plz pm me your updates i love your way of writing...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
continue soon...it was lovely...and pm me when you update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
jst read all the parts cursing myself tht y didn't read it before ?
GOSHHH... u wright so well !!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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read all in one go.plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA

<font color="#ff0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">jst read all the parts cursing myself tht y didn't read it before ?</font>

<font color="#ff0000" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">GOSHHH... u wright so well !!!!😊</font>


thankyou so much waise main bhi bhool gayi thi ki maine kya likha hai i willtry to wite it k buzzy in studies thats y but i complete tomoro pls chk karna pm bhejeneka time nahii hai mere pass sham tak post kar dungi thanx once again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 5
in raziya house..
Humaira:ami kaha hai aap yeh dekhiye main aapke liye kya layi hoon...
Raziya:beta tum aagayi aayan ne tuhme bhejh hi diya pata tha mujhe...
Humai:aami yeh dekhiye apke liye main kya layi hoo...
Raziya:tum mere liye kachori layi ho kya samose ke sath..
Hum:ammi aap bhi na main apke liye ek nurse yani ek kamwali layi hoo joh apki help kare...
Razi:kon hai woh...
Hum:yeh dekhiye tanveer...
Razi:billo rani tum...
Tanu:aap khala...
Hum:aap ekdo ko jante ho ekdusreko...
Razi:nahi toh...
Tanu:haan main bhi na...
Hum:acha toh ammi yeh apki madad karegi kuch din yeh apke sath rahegi tannu agar koi zaroorat padi toh mujhe call kar dena ha ...yeh dekho aayan ka caal aagaya mujhe main jati hoo ab...nhumaira goes...
Tan:khala aap yaha...
Razi:wahi toh tum mere ghar main kyu aayi ho...
Tanu:mujhe koi shok nahhi tha yaha aane ka woh humaira mujhe yaha leke aagayi warna main toh yaha nahi aane wai thi...
Raxi:main tuhmne aachi tarah se janti hoo bbillo rani...mujhse chalaki karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...


Scene shifted to khan mansion...
Asya bedroom...
Asad:ab toh mujhese baat karo zoya tannu bhi ab nahi hai...
Zoya:aap na yeh nautanki mat kijiye mr khan main achi tarah se janti hho ap uss tanveer ko waha nahi jane dena chahte the...
Asad:zoya tum plz m soory zoya...
Zoya:main kuch nahi sunna chahti mr khan...
N she goes n sleep...
Asad:yeh ladkiya aisi hoti kyu hai...ayyan kaha ho tum
n asad call ayyan
ayyan:haan booliye bhaijaan kya hua...
Asad:kaha ho tum...
Ayan:woh main movie dekhne aaya hun humaira ke sathh...
Asadd:aur mera kya...
Ayyan:kya apke liye hain na waha apki miss faruki...
Asad:majak mat karo aayan yaha main itna tense hoo kuch soch mere bhai main kya karo...
Ayaan:waise na bhabhijaan sahi haai aap uss tannu ko jyada hii bhav dete hai...
Asad:tu bhi..

Ayyan:k main ghar aane ke baad apki help karta hoo ab mujhe movie dekhne de dijiye k...aur jake mere kamre main si jayiiye pata hai bhabhi ne apko nahi liya hoga kamre main good night bhaijaan...
Asad:tu ruk aane ke baad batata hun main tujhe...

So this enuf for the day pls guys sorry cant able to pm u...

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