ASYA SS:REGRETS AND REPARATION (PT6-PG25) (NO PMS) - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Just read all 3 parts at once...Wowww that was amazing 😃 The last part was sad though...Please update 😳
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I'm happy that Zoya confessed but Asad should have not treated her that way !! I hope Asad realises his mistake soon !!
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waiting for the next..part..and thanxxx...for the..pm
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Amazing please update soon and thanks for the PM. :)
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plzzz update sooon! waitng 4 d nxt part
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Zoya's confession was simple and cute 😊 Waiting for the next part 😊
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Loved it! Can't wait for next part!! :))
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awesome waiting for the next part
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well written update..continue soon..😊
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PART 4:


Days passed by after that incident. Zoya started behaving normal with her constant chatter and laughter. It was as if the confession dint happen at all. Dilshad and Najma were unaware of the recent happenings in the household. Asad also was normal but he stopped scolding or even talking to Zoya as he knew if he made any type of contact with her all his resolve will break. Tanveer took full advantage of the situation and was trying to get close to Asad.

One day Tanveer got a pregnancy test and saw it was positive. She got tensed.

Tanveer (ST): oh god I am pregnant what do I do now?? I have to somehow trap and marry Asad before he realizes his love for Zoya and they get together. And also anyone before discovers about my pregnancy.

When Tanveer was thinking to herself with the pregnancy kit in her hand Zoya barged in to ask Zoya something.

She looked at the pregnancy kit in Tanveer's hand and saw it was positive

Zoya: oh my god Tanveer how did this happen?? Who is the reason for this condition??

Tanveer was shocked and dint know what to say. She started giving her fake story

Tanveer: please don't tell about this to anyone Zoya. I loved one guy and he promised to marry me so I gave myself to him. But after that he ran away without letting me know his whereabouts. That's the reason I have come to Bhopal. I heard he might be here so came in search of him. But I want you to keep it as a secret. You know how shameful it is for me.

Saying so she started shedding her fake tears.

Zoya melted hearing this and felt bad for Tanveer

Zoya: don't worry Tanveer I will not tell anyone. You will find him don't worry. If I get my hands on him I will skin that man alive

Tanveer: please don't say anything bad about him. I still love him she said in a fake sad tone still sniffing.

Zoya: you are too good Tanveer you take rest and don't do any work. If you have any problem or if you need me for anything please call me I will come

Tanveer: ok. Thanks

Zoya: anytime bye

Zoya left from that place.

Tanveer (ST): now Zoya got to know about my pregnancy. I have to do something really fast before she goes and blabbers about this to anyone.

Tanveer got an idea and went into Asad's room with a plan in her mind

She knocked the door and went in

Asad: what's the matter Tannu? Is everything alright?

Tanveer: yes Jammy I wanted to discuss something important.

Asad: what is it? Are you ok?

Tanveer: ya I am fine it's about Zoya

Asad: what happened to her? Is she fine? (getting tensed)

Tanveer: ya. But I saw this pregnancy kit in her room when I went to her room to give her ironed clothes. It is positive. When I asked her she asked me not to tell anyone. I dint want to break her trust but you are my best friend and I wanted you to know what is happening inside this family. Because later I don't want the family to get any bad name because of this. That's why I thought I would let you alone know.

Asad's mind was busy processing what Tanveer was saying. He couldn't believe a word but he had the pregnancy kit and according to him there was no reason Tanveer would lie to him in this reason. Moreover someone else being intimate with Zoya made his blood boil and anger clouded his judgment and he rushed to Zoya's room Tanveer trailing behind.

Asad: Zoya Zoya (shouting her name)

Zoya: what happened why are you shouting??

Asad throwing the pregnancy kit

Asad: what the hell is this Ms. Farooqui?

Zoya: it's not mine

Asad: then are you telling me that from somewhere it got landed into your room?

Zoya: how can it be in my room?? You are mistaken

Asad: I am not mistaken. I can't believe you can stoop this low. I am ashamed to even look at you. I thought you have no manners or tradition but I just came to know you don't even have a character. Maybe that's why your father left you. You should have died with your mother instead of living a low life like this.

Zoya: please Mr. Khan listen to me. You have no right to talk about me like this without knowing the truth.

Asad: I don't want to know about anything. I already have learned enough about you. Is that why you proposed to me? You wanted a father for your illegitimate child? Nice plan. But you forgot that I am Asad Ahmed Khan and I don't fall into these silly traps. Thank god Ammi and Najma are not there to see all this. They have gone out. I don't want them to feel bad for trusting you. I don't even want your shadow to fall on my family. Maintain distance and get lost once your work is done.

Saying that he stormed out when Zoya called him out

Zoya: one minute Mr. Khan. One day you will realize how wrong you were but that day it will be too late

Asad left the room without paying heed to her words.

Tanveer smirked to herself mentally patting herself for her success.

Zoya fell on her knees and cried her heart out.

Zoya (ST): I hate you Mr. Khan. How can you think so low of me??? I hate myself for loving a person like you. How can he think I will be intimate with someone else? And he thinks I proposed to trap him. I can't believe that I fell for a person like him.

She cried herself to sleep thinking of her ill fated life.



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Edited by Srivi01 - 12 years ago

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