MG OS~ SAMARPAN-pyar ka... teaser for spl.part

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hey hiii alll
m prachi
once again wid a os
this os i wrote for
GEET 3RD ANNIVERSARY





hope u will like this also



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(thanks for two beautiful banner to sonia dii (jazz) n riya dii(suamiya riya)






Pyar jaesa v ho par who aatma me basa hota

Pyar jine ki wajah ban jata hai

Pyar ek samarpan h''

Pyar do logo ke beech ki sabse badi dor hai'

Pyar kabhi jindagi deta h '

Pyar kabhi jindagi le v leta h

Pyar toh bas ek ehssas h jimse duniya basti h

Pyar samarpar h khud ka..ek durse ke lie'.

Ek samarpan pyar ke naam '..

Samarpan pyar ka

He was soo happy today..as today is his wedding day..after operating lots of big companies.Getting awards for BISNUESS MAN OF THE YEAR setting into life nothng more left to conquer him.Except having someone to walk wid him now..to share his pain ,happiness'...he was searching for a ri8 gal n today he is gonna to get married to her

Aapne aap ko samarpan karne ke lie taiyar h ..uske pyar me

All the rituals were done...now all were ready for gng in barat in his barat MAAN SINGH KHURANA's barat ..today india's most ellibigle bechalor is gonna to married..with her princess..he sat in her lavishly decorated car n barat started ..People were dancing enjoying ever bit of MSK barat...he was lost in his princess ...he remb. The 1st day when he saw her

She was smiling laughing n making all types of baby face to convince her jiju n diii...

N at last she succeed how can anyone deny to a beautiful princess...'when her jiju said yes to her she was dancing lyk manic forgetting everything her surrounding n all'...n while dancing she came near me n hugged me then only she realised what she did..even she didn't heard me just said sorry to me n ran to her room..gosh how soft she was

I was at her home for dinner as her jiju RAJVEER SINGH SEKHAWAT is my best frnd ..n .After her gng we started talking casually about business life n all ...at that tym NAINA came ..

Raj's wife n my frnd too she came to say dinner is ready ..we both joined dinning space n here came toofan my princess'...

Raj-hey maan meet my lil toofan express..hey toofan he is my best frnd MSK

Maan-hello toofan

Gal-hawww jiju ur best frnd is calling me toofan n started pouting

Maan- ur name is toofan na

N that tym I was feeling lyk did I cracked joke that all started laughing then raj said

Raj-maan her name is GEET handa meri sweet si shalli h yeh

Maan-oo then y u called her toofan

Naina- aesa h maan she is not less than toofan'...bigar rakha h veer ne use

Raj-hmm u r saying lyk u don't love my toofan

Geet-dii u don't love n winked to raj

Naina- stop teasing me u both

Maan- by the way naina u started cooking soo nicely .. m loving ur pasta

Naina-hmm thanks between geetu cooked it she is best cook

Maan-ooh awesome toofan .( to get a big glare from geet ) no I mean geet

It was soo beautiful day for me full of her blabbering n we were enjoying..she is leaving with rajveer n naina only as 4 years back naina n geet lost there family..n then rajveer decided to take care of geet as naina loved her soo much n she is soo innocent that anyone can use her from their profit '...from 4 years she is leving wid them n now got admission in INTERIOR DESIGNING in delhi biggest collage NID best for desgining'soo today she is soo happy

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After that day don't know how i was all falling for her per second ..i started visting rajveer house frequenty to see her, talk her n after 1year one fine day raj at last questioned me

Raj-what

Maan-what

Raj- maan don't try to fool ur best frnd I have seen u stealing glances over geet 'what did u liked her ..whats the matter

Maan-raj who ummm mai teri toofan se pyar karne laga hu

Maan- don't be angry yar but I tried to console my heart ..but my heart always denied to listed ..i cant doo anything now I actually started loving her smile her non stop blabbering n her each n every gestures

Raj was hearing everything silently I thought he was angry but his words made me on top of the world

Raj-hmm soo u love my toofan ..i don't have prob. Lolz I will be the happiesst person if she is with u ..u know after dead of her parents I always loved her pampered her n cared her as father..but maan before saying anything I need to ask naina n geet becoz her happiness n ans matters a lot for me

Maan-sure rajveer ask her 1st as her ans really matter'..

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Maan's teres was broken when addi came near his car window n knock

Addi-sir we arrived..said with big smile

Rajveer n naina came to receive him... naina did aarti n tilak n some rituals n he entered in hall

All were enjoying teasing maan n his eyes were stuck on the stairs when her princess will descend from heaven in her beautiful bridal dress selected by him

********************Music started *******************************

link- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vfQ7U4XSKDU

Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah

Shehnaaiyon Ki Sada Keh Rahi Hai

Khushi Ki Mubaarak Ghadi Aa Gayi Hai

Saji Surkh Jodi Mein Chaand Si Dulhan

Zameen Pe Falak Se Pari Aa Gayi Hai

Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah - 2

Aah Aah Aah, Aah, Aah Aah Aah Aah Aah - 2

Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah Aah, Aah Aah Aah

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Her in one of the beautiful room geet was seating near mirror n staring herself as there is sometym for garland exchange..her frnds have left to entertain barrati's

She was rembemering how her jiju came one day to her n asked about maan 1stly she was shocked but did all types of tantrums but at end said yes

Geet-haan kaese nahi karti jis insaan se bina mile pyar karti this uska rishta mere pass aa ya toh mana karne ka sawal hi nahi hota tha ..n have slyl smile on her face she remb. 1st tym when she saw him she was total flat to know he is his jiju best frnd n started enjoying when he used to visit there home'

She remb. How he proposed her on their engagement'aww how cutely he said

Maan- i love u ur smile sweety

I love ur pouting cutey

I love ur eyes cutipie

I love u jaan

I m surrendering(samarpit) my life

Will u surrender ur love for me??

Will u be mine princess forever?

how can anybody say no to his sweet proposal

Geet haan manjoor hai hume aapke pyar me khud ka samarpan karna iss pyar ke lie

Ek samarpan-pyar ka

But maan hum shaddi meri padhai puri hone ke bad karege na? geet asked innocently

Maan-yes princess after ur study

N today I have complete my studies working for my maan in his compant as head designer n getting married to my prince my maan..today I will be maan ki geet

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She came out of her dream land when naina came to take her downstairs

Naina- geet chale ur prince is waiting for her princess

(Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai -2

Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai

Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Palbhar Mein Kaise Badalte Hain Rishte-2

Ab To Har Apna Begaana Lagta Hai

(Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai

Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai)-2

Geet smile n hugged naina then both came down'...all were staring at the beautiful angel descending form stairs in red n golden lehnga n il heavy jewellery'... wid eyes down casted she came n seat beside maan .. n maan was losing himself each moment'...lyk same when her got to know she got agreed for marriage...

Rajveer voice made me back to reality

Both exchanged garland with lots of teasing n masti'..nd all proceeed towards dinning area maaneet to had there food but ate with eachother hands with lots of teasing n geet was all red for top to bottom...

(Saat Pheron Se Bandha Janmon Ka Yeh Bandhan

Pyaar Se Joda Hai Rab Ne Preet Ka Daaman) -2

Hain Nayi Rasmein, Nayi Kasmein, Nayi Uljhan

Honth Hai Khaamosh, Lekin Keh Rahi Dhadkan

Dhadkan Dhadkan, Dhadkan Dhadkan -2

Dhadkan Meri Dhadkan, Dhadkan Teri Dhadkan -2

Dhadkan, Dhadkan, Dhadkan, Dhadkan - 2

Dhadkan, Meri Dhadkan, Meri Dhadkan

Mushkil Ashkon Ko Chhupaana Lagta Hai - 2

Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Palbhar Mein Kaise Badalte Hain Rishte

Ab To Har Apna Begaana Lagta Hai

(Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai

Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai) - 2

Pandit g called for shaddi now to both the couples this tym geet was brought by rajveer ..he made her sit in beautiful mandap

n he too took the seat as naina n rajveer is everything to geet so they are doing her kanyadaan..as pandit g instructed raj gave geet hand in maan hand then pour some milk n water n rose petals

geet was silently crying as she was rembering her parents..then some drops of tear pured from her eyes n naina understand why she is crying she came to geet n say

Naina-geet mumma papa aaj jaha v hoge bht khush hoge unki pari ki shaddi hote dekh ke..tu janti h aaj sach me bht aacha din hai mere or rajveer ke lie humari toofan ki shaddi hum kar rahe h with that a tear escaped from her eyes too n both sisters hugged each other...n rajveer too joined her two beautiful angels..then pandit g say naina too do gathbandhan

n then maaneet started there pheras...both started there pheras n maan cluthes geet hand in his to assure her he will be always with her..

they took there pheres then followed by filling vermillion in her partion n then put black bedded beautiful mangalsutra in her neck n geet was feeling all this new feelings by eyes closing

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Do Zindagi Ek Hogaye Sindoor Se

Khilne Lage Sapne Naye Sindoor Se

Maang Mein Jo Bhar Jaye

Zindagi Sanvar Jaye

Chahat Ke Sindoor Se

Do Zindagi Ek Hogaye Sindoor Se

Khilne Lage Sapne Naye Sindoor Se

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Main Teri Baahon Ke Jhule Mein Pali Babul

Jaa Rahi Hoon Chhodke Teri Gali Babul

Main Teri Baahon Ke Jhule Mein Pali Babul - 3

Jaa Rahi Hoon Chhodke Teri Gali Babul

Khoobsurat Yeh Zamaane Yaad Aayeenge

Chaahke Bhi Hum Tumhe Na Bhool Paayenge

Muskhil

Mushkil, Mushkil Daaman Ko Churaana Lagta Hai

Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Mushkil Daaman Ko Churaana Lagta Hai

Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai

Palbhar Mein Kaise Badalte Hain Rishte

Ab To Har Apna Begaana Lagta Hai

(Dulhe Ka Sehra Suhaana Lagta Hai

Dulhan Ka To Dil Deewana Lagta Hai) - 6

Dhadkan Dhadkan, Dhadkan Dhadkan - 4

They both took ashirwad of all big members of family dadi n geet took ashirwad of rajveer n naina too were maan hugged both...now this was tym of bidai ..geet was crying uncontorable she was hugging naina n was not leaving her ..in hugging way only naina bring her to their parents pics to took bleshing from them both maan n geet folded there hand to take bleshing were geet was shedding her pearls ..rajveer came near her n hugged her to console her he know how fragile geet is she has lost her parents in her teenage n after that she love her dii n jiju lyk her parents always obeyed them..n today she is leaving them but he is happy that she will be always happy wid maan.. in his love...one of geet's aunt came with a big thaal full of rice n told her to throw backward where naina was standing to collect

them..geet throwd them 5 tymes n hugged naina n cried a lot..but then maan came n cluth her shoulder to console her...n finally rajveer made her seat in her doli n they went to decorated KM which was waiting for her new bride...

>>>>>>>>>>song ended>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

Dadi maa was waiting for both maaneet..she welcomed geet warmly ..then did some rituals lyk tilak n arrti followed by rice pot n colour water thaal where geet gave her foot prints in KM..then they played ring game where geet won n elders gave her blessings n gifts for her muhdikhai...n finally tym came to send them to their room which was decorated beautifully but there is one more ritual of khurana's where groom carry bride in her godh to their room to start their new life together with lots of happiness soo maan scooped her in his arm

Nd took her to their room nd placed her in room n went to close the door ..where geet moved to mirror..from where she can see maan reflection n her image too..while creassing her mangalsutra she was hell nervous so she was clutching her mangalsutra tighty

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Samarpan ki bela aayi re, aayi sajni
Ye darpan hai ya tera mann hai
Yaha bhi sajan hai
Waha bhi sajan hai
Mann jisse waara hai
Tann usse waar de

Aaj k raat k saare adhikaar de
Na ab wo paraya
Na ab tu parayi sajni

Hooo samarpan ki bela aayi re aayi sajni

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Maan with baby steps started going towards geet..n geet was feeling unkown feeling n shiver ran to her spine when maan came n clutch her shoulder n make her face him..n from his index finger make her chin lil up that she can see him in his eyes..his dark chocolate eyes when she looked up she was all lost in her ocean like eyes then she felt something in her hand n saw downward there was a file..she looked him confuse ..when maan said

Maan- geet yeh tumhare lie h ur wedding gift from ur n oly urs husband

Geet opened the file n read some starting lines then looked at maan confusingly for explaintion when maan continued

Maan-geet mere sare properties ..buisness home sab pe ab tumhara haq hai soo I transferred my all properties on ur name...geet maine apne jindagi bhar ki poonji tumhe SAMARPAN kar dia h n in return I only want ur love ur truth use jada mujhe ab kuch nahi cahie geet jindagi bhar mai akela raha hu bas dadi maa thi mere pass ab mai apni puri jindagi tumhare sath tumhare aachal ki chawo me ..tumhare pyar me bitana cahta hu

From today mai apni puri jindagi tumhare PYAR KE NAAM PE SAMARPIT karta hu

Geet was all teary n wid a smile hearing his confession then said

Geet- maan mujhe v yeh sab nahi cahie maan hume toh bas aapka sath cahie who sathi jo jindagi bhar mere sath rahe..maine toh ussi din khud ko aapne naam kar dia tha jab aapka yeh ring meri ungalio(finger) me daala tha..mai toh aapki hi hu maan ...MAAN KI GEET or yeh wadda(promise) hai mera maan aapki geet aapka sath kabhi nahi choragi har rah me aap mujhe aapne pass khara paoge...

samarpan kia maine aapni jindagi

samarpan kia maine apna pyar

samarpan ki apni chahat

samarpan kia yeh surname

samarpan kia khud ko aapke pyar me

ek samarpan-pyar ka

both hugged each other tightly then maan asked in low voice in her ear MAY I geet's check was turned into crimson red colour n she just simply nodded her head in his embrace he slowly started removing his duppata from her head n all pins from hair n made it open still hugging her then went to one of her heavy earing n removed it slowly while kissing her earlobe where geet's eyes were closed n feeling his hubby warmth...while he did same with other one too then broking the hug lil he went to her back n now geet was leaning on his back while his hand where removing the heavy necklace n kissing her nape giving her sweet torture ...his hand slowly went toward the dori of her blouse...n pulled it to open where

geet ran from there..in balcony which is connected to their room she was standing there holding rallings maan came there n bore his head in her hairs n getting the scent of her then made her turn to face him n took her left hand in his hand n started searching something in that...geet understands that he is searching his name .she gave a naughty smile to maan who was busy in searching his name ...where geet hide her ri8 hand backside then only maan saw tha naughtiness in her hand n tired to take her ri8 hand which she denied then he tried to capture it n both tugged each other fingers in each other hand but still the hand was backward n geet was struggling to come out of his grip then she saw him looking something

With soo passion n followed her eye way then found ..him looking at her lips with lots of passion she instantly down casted his eyes ,,,,,,but maan made her look at him as asking for permission...she closed her eyes to give permission n slowly maan started nibbling her lower lip then followed by upper..they were full lost in each other then maan pressed her waist lil to make her moan n open her mouth ..n he entered inside her mouth n tasting her sweet honey of her mouth...they were standing in balcony for hours kissing each other

passionately maan left her when he felt her loss of breath ..geet was all red like a tomato ...man scooped her in his arm n bring her toh the soft n cozy bed which was beautifully decorated with lots of roses n made her seat in his lap n started kissing her madly n then slowly he opened her blouse last dory on which her full blouse was depended..she instantly hugged him n slowly whispered lights off'...maan smile lil n stretched his hand n off the lights of their room now only some candles lights n moon light was coming to their room..Which was complimenting too their romance'...maan placed her hand near her sherwani buttons n geet opened it with lots of shyness..then aage ka maan ne khud kia ;-)😉

now in swift moment she was lying under him they were now only in inners n geet was looking cherry red due to her blushing..maan was kissing her forehead eyes nose to make her giggle then lips followed by neck n leaving his marks ..kissed her blossoms from above the thin material making her his in pain n pleasure..then slowly both got rid of their inners also n both were loving each other passionately n maan was also teasing her wid his sweet torture n geet was moaning uncontroable ..n maan was sealing his lips to make her maon in his mouth only,...'after hours of teasing he entered inside her. With his manly asscet to make her moan louder n cry in pain n pleasure at that tym geet confessed the 3 magical words 1st tym .. they were engaged from 3 yrs but they never said this 3 magical words first tym she said MAAN I LOVE U ..I LOVE U SOO MUCH..after hearing this words maan entered more harder his full length inside her...after hours of love making n teasing when they got exhausted her laid beside her n make her sleep on his chest...then said her

Maan- are u ok na geet?'

Geet-aaj se jada kabi nahi thi maan

Maan- I LOVE U GEET

she smile ear to ear hearing this words from him..n kissed his chest n maan kissed her head n they again started their love making another round n lost in each other love n their new world

samarpan kia unhone ek dusre ko aapna pyar

samarpan kia unhone khud ko

samarpan kia aapni virginity ek durse ko ek dusre ke lie

samarpan kia aapne sapne ...ek dusre ke sath nayi sapno ki duniya me jaane ke lie

ek

samarpan-pyar ka kia ..ek durse ke lie

soo here is my os HAPPY GEET'S 3RD ANNIVERSARY TO EVERYONE


hope aap sab ko pasand aae i wrote it with shaky hands 1st tym writing something lyk this..enjoy

n plzz leave ur review n likes plzz


Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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wowww wowwew wowwwee its mindblowing sweetbsimple yet awesome u describe emotion very well ... write os is so difficult as you cant go in the detail but here you show all necessery scenes I like this little toofan and rajveer and naina is so sweet so man is coming daily geet home naughty boy and not to forget confession poem is so good and name os also suit os very well over all mast tha sweety maza aa gayq
Edited by BULBUL.A - 12 years ago
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wow lovely banner dear
continue soon
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awesome update
loved the cute little toofan...
maan fida over toofan😆
hayee maaneet marriage..
its beautiful...
passionate maaneet moments
loved it...
Edited by goldenmoon - 12 years ago
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hi congrats on the new os, update soon n do pm
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it an os na...den where's d story dear...only prologue...
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Originally posted by: love2_soma

it an os na...den where's d story dear...only prologue...



yaa soma dear its os but will come after 5th april as this is for geet's anniversary sooo
wait tilll tomm. u will get a big os .. n till now i havent given anything
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lovleyyy awesome superb ...lovely passionate and hot one
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lovely banner
nice os
very well written
hmmm
best line...''iske aage maan ne khud kiya''
hehehehehe

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