Virman FF - Kaise imtihai leti hai yeh zindagi - Page 14

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

very nice update i really.liked plzzz update next prt soon waiting

i knw u liked it so i am postign the new one nw plz read and comment n email me aswell as soon as u have read it
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Huma0301

Ur gettin a very good response sia so plz definitely continue yaar
N im nt sayin thanx jus for the update bt also for updating before I go
So at least I get to read ur update before flying off
Really nice n sweet.update keep goin

thanks for commenting n hav a safe journey and the last week was awsome nice to knw theat i hav made a new friend on IF, i will miss tlking to u. sad u wont be able to read the nxt update
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthi13

hey i jst read all da parts in one go!!!! its awesome!!!!

plz plz plz cont soon nd do pm me😊

i will pm u as soon as i submit it plz comment and tell me hw it is
Posted: 12 years ago

continue part 10

her thoughts break when jevika calls her and then she had a smile on her face

Jeevika - mannu!

As soon as Jeevika says manvi's name virat hears it as he was passing by.

Jeevika - mannu where r u lost?

manvi doesn't reply

Jeevika with a smile - manu why r u smiling

virat smiles knowing the was something in there bonding that made manvi stop right there

manvi:ummm...di i was thinking about vir..(she relizes she was going to say virat)

jevika:virat(she is suprised)

virat gets really happy that manvi is thinking about him

manvi - no di i was think about vir...viren jiju

even tho she was trying to hide the fact that she was gonna say virats name he nws is all about him

Virat go close to the sisters

Virat: is anyone talking about me

Jeevika and manu get shocked

Jeevika: yes jija ji (in a funny way bt then realizes this joke was not give at the right time in the right place)

manvi: what! i never heard what u said (nwing wat she had heard btstill wanna be sure)

Jeevika :i said yes dever ji (trying to hide the truth)

virat:(relieved)okay then who was talking about me

jevika: it was mannu

virat give manvi a smirky smile

manvi: no i wasn't (blushing)

jev: yes u did

manvi: lets go di

manvi jevika walk toward guest room

virat gets upset because every time virat gets close to manvi manvi goes away he went in his room and he was really upset

jevika and manvi go in the guest room

jevika: manu u rest i am going down stair

manvi:okay di

jevika was going out when manvi called jeevike

manu: di if u see virat please tell him to come to me i want to talk to him

jevika:okay manu

jevika goes downstairs and asks the family where is virat

vanshika :he went to his room he was very upset and angry

jevika :i wil go to see virat

viren :i will go as well (tellin the rest of the family members )

everyone: okay

virats room

virat is in his room he is very upset and talking to him self

virat: why manvi why do u always go away from me when i am trying to come close to u and if i don't come close to u how will u get ur memory back

viren and jev listened to everything he said and they r outside the room they knock on the door and go in the room

virat: come in bhai bhabi

viren: r u ok

virat:yes bhai but i don't understand why manvi is staying away from me

jev: it is all my fault

viren and virat r shocked

virat and viren: what do u mean

jevika:i am sorry virat...i told...manvi to...stay away from u... but that was the past I so hav to change that nw I never knew my words would still be in her head especially in this way

virat gets more upset and falls on the bed

virat: now manvi won't even let me come close to here bhai bhabi i don't want to lose manvi please help me

viren: don't worry virat u are not going to lose her (consoling him )

jev: i am sorry virat for what i did but now i will correct my mistake i will tell manvi that she doesn't have to stay away from u

virat:thanks bhabhi ( net knw her step bt he knew as she has said it she will do something

jevika: it okay and virat by the way i just remembered manvi was calling u

virat: what! i will go by her right nw

he runs to her room and stands in front of the door

so wat say will he go in or jst return back plez give me ur views n click like if u like it and it nt plz tell me y

n was it long enough or should i make updates longer

Edited by Sia12345 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update i liked update next prt soon waiting...
Posted: 12 years ago
thanks alot for commenting
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Posted: 12 years ago
sia again the second was awesome ...👏
want to know wats goin on in manvi's head ...
she was blushing ...😃

plzz make the updates abit more long ...cant have enuf of them ...
update soon 😃
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

nice update i liked update next prt soon waiting...

i am tring to update nw if it lets me
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kulsum_virman

sia again the second was awesome ...👏
want to know wats goin on in manvi's head ...
she was blushing ...😃

plzz make the updates abit more long ...cant have enuf of them ...
update soon 😃

i dnt knw about long updates bt i am trying to update tho bt i dnt knw why my computer doesnt let me submit it
Posted: 12 years ago
sorry friends i took forever to update bt i didnt knw what to do next so i hav jst done wat cam to mind i dont knw if u r gonna like it bt if u dont i understand. in addition if there are spelling and grammer mistakes sorry i really didnt understand hw to rephase it as its really late nw n i am updating before going to sleep

Part 11

As soon as he reach in front of Manvi's room he stops as if he didn't hav the courage to walk he doesn't knw hw he will manage to control his emotions but still knocks on the door asking for permission to come in.

Manvi - come in( knwin who it is like she could sense him from miles away)

Virat - how r u manvi and did u call me ( trying to act normal)

Manvi - i am fine and chep why u calling me manvi u normally call me sweetheart (she was askin him as if she remembers everything she never knew where that was coming from bt it didn't seem normal from him)

Meanwhile virat was also shocked at her reaction, for a minute he thought he got his manvi him wife back but then he comes back to reality when manvi says

Manvi - virat I knew u wont be asleep n im so bored so we can sit n chat like always

virat ' (he gets happy for a second bt then remembers how they used to sit a tlk together until they fell asleep) ok

virat goes and sits next to manvi they were talking while virat noticed a red mark on her hand he got awfully worried.

Virat- manvi were did this read mark come (he asks in a worried an strict tone)

manvi : i think i hurt it while i was playing (trying to avoid the topic as she had no idea why he is getting too harsh)

after avoid that topic they tlk to nearly the entire night until manvi falls asleep . as he notices that manvi has fallen asleep the best thing to do is jst live from there so he lives but as he was about to go he feels a force pulling him toward it. As he turns around he saw manvi holding his hand so he decides to stay there.

As the night goes on suddenly manvi starts sleep tlking.

Manvi - virat please dont leave me i love u alot i can not live with out u

virat gave a big smile hearing what she said even tho she was not in sense bt at least her heart still remembers virat and his special moments so he whisper if she does not wake up he say i love u a lot i would not ever leave u and then he kissed her on forhead and then on both cheek and then he went to sleep with her he lyed down with her right next to her then while they were sleeping manvi hugs virat and puts her forhead on his chest and virat smiled and again gave a kiss on hr forhead her forehead

in the morning virat gets up first and when he opens his eyes the first thing he see is manvis face and he smiles and gives a sweet kiss to manvi.

virat is trying to get out of the bed wit out waking manvi but he couldn't so he decide to stay there until manvi wakes up.

then manvi wakes up and she is sleeping on virat chest and she is on top of him and then she sees virats face and first she gives a smile and virat smiles back then suddenly manvi comes back to her see's and she screems everyone in family her the noice and go towards manvis room

meanwhile

virat is shocked by manvis sudden reaction and he quick turns her around and now manvi is beneath virat and virat on top of manvi and his hand is on manvis mouth

manvi and virat have a eye lock and stay there for 2 3 min and virat takes his hand of manvis mouth

then manvi comes to here sence

manvi:(loud) what r u doing her

virat:puts his hand on manvi mouth and say dont shout speak carmly

manvi:(normal tone of voice) what u doing her in my room and on the same bed

virat:erm...u told me to

manvi:when

virat:at night u called me to ur room and said stay her with u until u go to sleep...

manvi interrupted

manvi:i said stay until i go to sleep not whole night don't u no it is bad manners to be in a stranger women room at night

virat:i didn't stay here purposely i just fell asleep by accident sorry and by the way manvi u r not a stranger to me u r my wi...

manvi:ur what

there is a knock on the door

jeevika vansika dadji - manvi r u okay

manvi and virat r shocked they look at each other then they look towards the door and the at each other and then they realize that virat is on top of manvi

manv :get of me

virat gets up

virat- :sorry

manvi:it is okay but what r we going to know if anyone finds out we were in the sam room all night what will everyone think about us(worried)

virat:don't worrie u go and open the door and i will go and hide u send everyone away then i will come out okay so go now and open the door.

manvi opens the door

jevika runs to manvi

jev:r u okay mannu what was that noise

virat is pecking out of bathroom and looking whats happening

manvi:erm...di i saw a spider so i got scard and i started screaming i am sorry but don't worry its gone nw.

jev:okay u rest know and if u need anything call me

eveyone goes and manvi closes the door and then virat comes out of the bathroom

virat:r u okay

manvi yes and now u better go or else someone will come again

virat: okay but i will come back after i freshed up okay

manvi:okay but for now please go

virat: okay bye

virat sneaked out of manvis room and goes to his own room to get freshed up and when he has freshed up he is in his room and there is a knock on the door

virat: come in

viren: hi virat

virat: bhai u want to say something

viren:(make fun of virat) virat i wanted to ask u something

(viren knows that virat was in manvis room when everyone came there and he know that becoz he went to manvis room at night an d virman were sleeping together and then he also saw virat pecking out of the bathroom)

virat:what bhai

viren:virrt where were you when everyone went to manvis room and where were u at night i went to ur room but u wasn't there

virat:(unknowingly said)i was in manvis room

virat was shocked he didn't expect himself to say that and reveal the truth in this way bt wat to do it jst slipped out

viren:what in manvi's room(predending as if he didn't hav a clue wat he jst heard

virat confused what will he say now

virat:yes in her room i think bhai u forgot me and manvi r husband a wife

viren:that correct as well u r allowed in her room

virat and viren started laughing then suddenly virat stopped laughing

okay so wats up with virat nw wats the new mistory . plz give ur views and hope that was long enoughplez comment like and tell me if i should continue

add me to ur buddy list n i will begin to pm u from next update if i think its gud enough

this has nothing to do with the story bt jst created a vm and would like u to watch and comment plz take a few minutes and comment for me thank u http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cNQnDTTHyyY
Edited by Sia12345 - 12 years ago

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