Virman FF - Kaise imtihai leti hai yeh zindagi - Page 12

Originally posted by: Churri

eeekk!! waiting for more...you are soo good. Nice updates...thanks for the PM as well.

u welcome sweety

superb update

Originally posted by: jia123sagar

superb update

thanks for pm me

plz continue soon

yh sure i will as soon as i get time to right

Ths story is aussum jst luvng it
Sry for late cmnt i didn't cme on if

continue part 9

okay I knw the spelling and grammar is awful but I really didn't hav time so that's the best I cn do for nw as I didn't hav time to proof read it sorry

manvi then remembers something she remember virat sayiing good morning sweetheart but then she think and says to her self virat never said good morning sweetheart to me then why do these words feel formiluer.

(virat used to sat good morning sweetheart to her after he told her he loves her)

then virats phone ringsvirat answer the call

manvi: who is it

virat: dadji

Manvi: put it on speeker

he puts it on speaker

dadji:how r u beta and how is ur wife

manvi and virat get shocked from the word wife

manvi: dadji who is virats wife confused

dadji and everyone in family get shocked

dadji: ummm... manvi beta...i said it by mistake i was ment to ask virat how is manvi

everyone gets releafed

manvi: okay and dadji i am fine

dadji: virat when is manvi allowed to come home

virat:doctor said she is allowed today and if u come now we will just get the discharge papers and take her home

dadji:okay then we are coming bye take care

viratmanvi: bye

viren: should we leave

dadji: okay me jev and viren goto get them rest of u get ready to greet them

everyone:okay

they r aboutt to leave when swamini comes there everone gets angry

swamini:when is manvi and virat going to come

no one answers her and they all leave

swamini say to her self i know everyones upset with me but i will make u all forgive me

they all reach the hospital and they done the discharge papers

doctor comes in the room

doctor: mr virat i need to tell everyone somthing manvi isn' allowed to travel far and she needs bed rest for 1 day okay

virat: okay doctor iwill make sure

doctor leaves

manvi whispers to her di: di why di the doctor say that stuff to wirat he could of said it to u or me

jevika:i don't know

they all get in the car and go home when they get home they r at the door they r about to step in when someone stops them

the person who stoped them was virats mother

virats mon: wait u can't come in we have to take ur arthi first

manvi: okay

manvi was standing next to jevika and jevika moves manvi next to virat and manvi says

manvi:di why did u move me next to virat

jevika didn't know what to say so virats mom notice this and she changes the topic

virat mom:manvi beta r u fine

manvi:yes i am fine

virats mom takes the arthi of both virat and manvi

manvi gets confused

the arthi is done

virats mom:u come in now

they go in and sit down

manvi: aunt...

everyone gets shocked because manvi is calling virats mom aunt when she used to call her mom

manvi:aunt why did u take the arthi of me and virat together

see I told u the spelling and grammar is awful, plz comment if u r gonna read it and I didn't pm anyone cuz I knew most of it isn't gunna mak sence

Sia yaar it's nt even as bad as ur sayin
It's absolutely fine
Brilliant update everyones so used to their bahu manvi that they keep doin all these things aaww
I wonder war SB gonna do for forgiveness lets see nw

I'm sure there will more parts right?? Thanks for the update...

nice i liked it plzzz update next prt quickly

heya if u wnt me to update it will bt i jst want to tell u that i havnt got much screen directions and my spelling and grammer wont be gud enough as i dnt hav time to change it nw bt i have the update for u if u really want it.

Originally posted by: Churri

I'm sure there will more parts right?? Thanks for the update...

yh sure the nxt update will be soon