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another os by me lolzz
this os is the way i wanted dekha ek khwaab
to end this is an os which is futher divided
into four parts and all parts will
be updated today itself
happy reading😆
NADANIYA
PART 1:DIL KARE NADANIYA
I was at college I used to spend my summers vacation in Shimla, at my dadisabh 's place.I would leave Kolkata early in May and return late in July after spending quality vacation with my dadisabh .My dadisabh and I had always been the bestest of friends she knew me in and out .She was the one and only family member i had after my parents along with my baby sister died in a car accident magically i was saved ,according to Dadisabh I had always been a magical child since birth i rarely cried and loved new people then even in school I was a bright student i still remember the day when my parents passed away a small boy of 8 hugging the dead body of my mom she was the one to hug me and consoul me but all those were bad memories , now normally i had no problem in my journey it was just I had to go to Siliguri-Darjeeling-Shimla but due to some unknown reason nature was not in my favour that year ,I was running in my 23 a student of MBBA ,the journey was swift till Darjeeling it was only reaching Darjeeling I got the news that there was a strike of whole two days ,I made a mental list the first thing I am to do was talk to Dadisabh and ensure her that I was safe and then look for a hotel for my overnight stay I thanked my stars that there was enough money in my pocket to spend my vacation here. I took out my battery that ensured me that my battery was almost dead however I managed to call
DADISABH:uday veer beta where are you? are you fine?
UDAY VEER;dadisabh I am fine I am in Kolkata hearing about the strike I did not come yet I will start my journey day after ok now do not worry my battery is almost dead I will talk to you later
DADISABH:OK beta take care and do not forget to call me
the phone got disconnected I felt a feeling of guilt arising in me but I could not help it I did not want to trouble her with worries ,now the hardest part during strike I was supposed to search for a hotel it was almost impossible as all the hotels were closed due to strike and even at a double rate they disagreed to give me room ,the political situation was much heated up and I searched each and every corner of the town but did not a hotel finally dragging my american tourister into one of the darkest corner of the town a hotel came into my view the building was shabby with algee on its wall the board almost fell as i read
THE LUCKY ONE
I though that how could a name be so weird but when i got inside the hotel things were weirder I saw womens all around ,some in sari ,some in jeans and some in well you can say nothing at all it did not take me time to realize that it was a hotel for call girls my luck could not get any worsen I hated them, they were the reason for polluting India 's rich culture and society but alas my god had left me no choice so I finally went to the receptionist a short ,fat ,bearded guy sat there munching something as i finally spoke
UDAY VEER: I need a room for two night and three days
GUY;sure so what room you want super deluxe ,deluxe,single bed
UDAY VEER;single bed will do
I was staying all alone and in such political condition I cannot be a fool to risk all my more
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PART 2:ZUBAAN KARE NADANIYA
UDAY VEER:ok but is there any restro nearby
GUY:there are many but all are closed due to strikes but do not worry sir we also provide food but the order is taken only till 9 in eveni
ng as you know sir our girls have some other important work after 9
he said with one of the utter most disguisting evil grin I rolled my eyes
UDAY VEER:can i get the keys to my room please
GUY:sure sir in the ground floor to your right the third one
he handed me my keys as i headed towards my room all the womens were drooling upon me how badly i wished i could rip there eyes off me asap i reached my room i slammed the door and took a deep breath ,i looked around the room and the first thought that came to my mind was this had to be the worse day of my life the room was a furnished room which could almost be called of beggarly description ,wall all badly in need of bed,and bed on the urge of breaking pushing away all my thoughts I headed towards the washroom a quick shower gave me a lot of relief ,after that all I wanted desperately was a sleep ,it was a tiring journey and a sleep was very much needed I rested my head on the pillow but could not sleep as because the people of other room left no stones unturned to make me realize that they were indulge in a really hard love making session hours and hours went by but the sensual sound seems no end I was frustated and irritated being the hot tempered guy I always had been I erupted I flung open my door and rushed to the room in front of mine I flung it open and saw a girl nearly of 17 sitting on the bed in white cotton kurti with pink patialla pant ,she had plain skin, set off by dark shiny hair and dark troubled eyes ,and those searching and eloquent eyes meet mine. but soon my anger over powered her beauty as I screamed at the top of my lungs
UDAY VEER:YOU BLOODY SHULT CAN'T YOU KEEP YOUR FREAKING MOUTH SHUT WHAT IS SO PAINFUL ABOUT LOVE MAKING IT IS NOT THE FIRST TIME YOU ARE DOING IT HUH I AM TRYING TO SLEEP HERE OK TELL ME HOW MUCH MONEY YOU NEED TO KEEP YOU MOUTH START AND DO YOUR WORK
There was fire in my eyes and my pitch was too high and rough to bring tears in her eyes ,she was shivering as she gattered her courage and spoke
GIRL;but i was not doing anything
"manyata who is it" came a voice i turned back to see it was an middle age girl with a sarii very undecently covering her i looked down
LADY;it was me sir i was screaming i am so sorry if i disturbed your valuable sleep because my body parts were getting ripped off for some 150 bugs and do not blame my daughter she was just nursing her mother while i was getting internal bleeding
she said in such sacasiam that it pierced my heart like an arrow ,then she caught that girl sorry manyata 's hand and took her away for the first time I felt guilty as I was lost in my own thoughts the receptionist came to that room
GUY:sir do you need something or someone
I clearly understood his double meaning word but I had another puzzle going inside my head as I asked
UDAY VEER;Who were they?
GUY:who just left well she was Kartika our top call girl every one from a 15 year old boy to a 95 year old chap lust for her and the girl with her was her 17 year old daughter manyata
UDAY VEER:what there 's story?
GUY:kartika was born in poverty and after marriage her life was no better her husband always came drunk and it was hard to make both end meet finally after a year of there marriage her husband sold her after that he never came to see her ,manyata was a new born i still remember how every night manyata used to cry in seemaji 's embrace longing for her mother and her mother who was so determined to sell her innocence for her daughter maybe kartika is shult but she has high aspects for ehr daughter inspite of her going through enternal bleeding she gives herself 24*7 for collecting the money needed for her daughter to sit for boards examination we all trust manyata we are sure she will fly with colours
UDAY VEER:this manyata does she works here too i mean she was here
GUY:no sir she does not work here actually she is not into this dirty buiseness ok sir i have to leave
saying this the guy left as my heart felt a sudden ache i should not have done that ,i should not have told that ,afterall even they have a rights to live ,they do not pollute our culture or society its there needs that leed them to such situation i need to appolozise what i did have no justification

Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Nice starting... Thanx fr pm
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Nice update anni... Bichara uday... So sad for manyata... Btw cntinue son i think nxt part uday n manyata meeting...
Edited by Karkit - 12 years ago
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loved the chapter di
bichare Uday ko aise Hotel mein rukna pada😔
waiting for Manyata,s entry

pls update soon

waiting for the next part..
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PART 3: NADAAN KHWAHISHEIN
The dusk had crept in and the pink rays were scattered all over the hills ,it was a beautiful sight to look at but I was busy with something else ,my mind kept battling my brain ,my mind said what I did was wrong and I need to say sorry but my brain kept fighting for my ego finally my brain gave up as my heart won yes a sorry was urgently needed I raced myself to the reception and gattered all my courage
UDAY VEER;where do they live?
the guy was back with his smirk
GUY;have patience my boy she will be coming in an hour or two and do not worry you can have your turn first ok
UDAY VEER:please do not take it in wrong sence I just want to talk to them I have something important to say
GUY:ok its a ten minute walk down the hill ok
UDAY VEER:yes thank you
I started to walk down the hill he was exactly right it was just a ten minute walk I finally reached there home ,it was very poorly kept ,it was like a small broken hut and on the urge of collapsing ,I headed inside as I saw her yea Manyata by now a strange attraction pulled me towards her ,she was no doubt beautiful but was also so innocent she was sitting near the windows and going through her lessons ,I coughed to make her feel my presence as she looked up her eyes met mine and we shared the most beautiful eye lock ever shared by anyone her mother gave me a frosty look and said ina shrill voice
KARTIKA;what is that you want from us now?
UDAY VEER;look I need to talk to manyata the reception guy
KARTIKA;he gave the wrong news manyata is not into this so now you can leave
UDAY VEER;no maam I do not have such intension instead I came here to seek your forgiveness please forgive me for whatever I did earlier I am really sorry
i tried my best to look innocent and really sorry but due to some unknown reason a evil smirked tried to over come my look but I was successful to look innocent and kartika looked convinved
KARTIKA;Its ok beta I cannot blame you the whole world looks at us with that kind of view come sit I am sorry for offering you such beggarly place but this is all that I have
UDAY VEER:no aunty please do not say sorry it is  perfectly fine
KARTIKA;manyata go get him some water
I saw her keeping her book apart and rushing with her tiny feet inside the smaller room and then she came out with a glass of water she stood with it I took it from her hands as sparks ran inside my body and I knew she fell the same as her hands shivered ,thanks to my star kritika got up and announced
KRITIKA:manyata beta I have to leave but make sure this boy eats dinner and go ok bye than la I forgot to ask your name
UDAY VEER:my name is uday veer singh aunty
KRITIKA:OK beta then bye
saying this she went out of the house as manyata closed the door behind and sat down revising her lesson again , I sat there drinking her beauty she was so young and pure I had never longed for anyone this desperately ,I went and stood in front of her she was going through a chapter in physics as she looked down at her book and mummered
MANYATA;loundness in the characteristic that differ a sound of same quality and pitch but played by different instrument
i gave a smirk god this poor little thing was troubling her so much as i had a chance to show my talents and i said
UDAY VEER;loudness is the virtue of sound that distinguish between two sound wave having similar pitch and loudness but played by different instrument
she looked at me then looked back at the book after sometime she looked at me making a puppy face and said in a sweet voice
MANYATA:Can you please teach me ?😳
UDAY VEER:i will but you need to do a favour to me😉
MANYATA:what?????😲
UDAY VEER:you have to take me out tomorrow and show me around😆
MANYATA:OK sure😊
then started my tutions I taught her all the chapters and she was a fast learner after that we chatted over in dinner she was really impressed by my teaching skill
MANYATA:You teach really well btw why are you here I mean in Darjeeling
UDAY VEER;actually I was going to Shimla but due to strike I had to stop here you know manyata at first I cursed this strike but now I do not think its a bad thing
MANYATA:and why don't you think so?
UDAY VEER:because if there was no strike  I would not be able to meet you
i said with a signature smirk and tried to impress her my arrow hit its target as my arrow hit its target i saw her blushing we chated a little more and promised to meet each other the next day I went back to hotel I was never happier than this as i rested my head on the pillow and all that came to my mind was
MANYATA



Edited by annesha18 - 12 years ago
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Nice update !
Continue soon ...
Thanks for the PM !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsssmmm aneshaaa the all 3 partsss are perfect cant wait 4 forth part update soon
Edited by huma12. - 12 years ago
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Res fr 3rd part ---------------
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Both parts were awesome Annesha 👏
Thank you for PM 😛

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