ASYA OS - TUM MILE...

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TUM MILE...
There she laid besides him naked...after their Hot Suhaagraat...she blushed at the thought...how wild she had been yesterday...
She was looking as to how innocent he looked while he was sleeping...she smiled to her herself as she remembered their love story...
5 years back...
Zoya Farooqui a bookworm, studious and the ranker of her batch...She was beautiful but never realised it...She had a huge crush on the dude of the college ASAD AHMED KHAN during her school times...He was her first and probably the last one because it had gradually turned into a deeper feeling than she had thought...During her school times she had tried and had been succesful in blocking her feelings towards him...only she knew how she controlled herself...coz she knew she can never be his since she hated his casanova nature and at the same time hated herself for falling such a guy...
But to her utter bad luck he had taken admission in the same college as hers and now it was becoming impossible for her to control her feelings...moreover she was very reserved, introvert and had only one friend witn whom.she used to.share her likes, dislikes, her emotions, feelings her DIARY...she never talked with him...but she knew his family very well as her mother and his mother were best friends...
There she goes again with her head bowed bowed in the books like an obiedient child...He had been noticing her since his school days...They were in the same batch, he also knew tht she was a topper...he always had a liking towards her though he was with other girls he was never serious with them...but seeing her he always used to be in his dreamland...
After passing his tenth std only he knew how he had tried his level best to get her details and in which college was she going to take admission...and hence he enrolled himself in the same.college...
In college too he.had maintained his casanova image...he had noticed her seeing him sometimes but only a disgusting one...and therefore he never approached her coz she was the first girl ZOYA FAROOQUI who was making ASAD AHMED KHAN go bonkers...but he had always realized that she was beautiful not only in her appearance but also her inner beauty...
After finishing their graduation she had disappeared suddenly...
He felt as if someone had taken away his life...coz during their honor party he had decided to tell her his feelings...only.he knew how nervous he was...but all his dreams were shattered when he came to know abt her disappearance...
2 years later...
ASAD AHMED KHAN the most successful business tycoon of India had achieved everything in his.life but failed to get the love of his life...
Uski har ek dua mein sirf ek hi naam tha ZOYA...
His mom was forcing him to.get married to her best friend's daughter...but he as usual was avoiding the topic...but this time he couldn't escape as he had made a promise to her tht atleast he would come to.meet tht grl with her...but he had made up his mind tht he would tell the grl tht he could not marry her...
Now he was sitting here in the living room probably waiting for the girl to serve.him tea...
His mom was busy chatting away with her friend...as though she had not seen.her from ages...and his dad was busy
talking about the business...
A gush of cold wind passed through him and he looked up the direction and he was shocked would be an understatement...
There she.came dressed in a beautiful anarkali of red colour...
They both were equally shocked looking at each other...he was mesmerized looking at her she has grown more beautiful than his imagination ...aakhir mein Asad miya ki dua QUBOOL ho gayi...she came with the tray in her hand...she served all of them tea...when she reached to Asad they had an eyelock which was disturbed by Najma's giggling...
Asad looked away embarassed and Zoya cheeks turned into crimson red...
Zoya quickly went inside her room there were no endigs to her raging heartbeats...which said only one thing
ZOYA TUMHARI DUA QUBOOL HO GAYI WOHI TUMHARE HONE WAALE SHAUHAR HAI...
And seeing this the elders knew tht they had taken a right decision and therefore
the wedding arrangements were made soon...
Soon the wedding day arrived and the two souls were binded into a never ending relation...

She heard the sound of the door open...there she was sitting in her face covered with veil...her heart was raging faster the more he approached her...
He sat besides her on the bed and slowly uncovered her veil...only one word escaped his lips BEAUTIFUL...he started tracing her face with his fingers and when he reached her lips a soft moan escaped her lips...Asad lost his control and pulled her into a soft kiss...she also responded him with equal passion...
He broke the kiss when he saw her getting breathless...
He confessed all his feelings for her which he had burrried in his heart for past 5 years...she was shocked and had got tears in her eyes aftr hearing his confession...she also poured her heart out about her feelings...
Asad - I love u Zoya...
Zoya - I love u too Asad...
And then started their passionate, hot suhaagraat where two souls were united.
PRESENT...
Asad stirred in his sleep when the rays of light fell on him...Zoya immediately drew the curtains and laid besides him to continued her observance...The thing she didnt notice was tht Asad was pretending to sleep and was seeing her...
He opened his eyes shocking Zoya...
Zoya - aap..aap...u were awake...
She turned into crimson red...well u c if u will continue ur sweet activity of observing me then no would b able to save u...with tht he pulled her into another round of their lovemaking...
And they lived happily ever aftr...

So how was it
I was not feeling sleepy so had typed it yesterday and posting it today...
Plz read and comment
All rotten eggs and chappals are allowed
Loads of love
Nazia...


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risingsea101 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice OS hun
Beautifully written
<3 Farhana
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its so beautifully written
i just loved the role reversal in your os
nice job
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😆 Simple, cute and an easy read. Very straight to the point and no fluffiness. With a happy ending.
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hy nazia nicely written...

its beautiful...
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Cute and sweet os
like it very much
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Cute os :-) beautifully written
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It was beautiful

Loved it

They finally got each other

Sweet romantic ...
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awes this was really nice...very well written loved it!!!
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nyc...u should rite more...thanks 4 pm.

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