mai koi mamuli insaan nahi!- a poem on taani's POV

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hi guys! how you all are? i know because of the current track all taarey and taani fans are frustrated! guys as you all know i am very fond of writing poems so for me the best way to bring out my frustration is through a poem!

you guys won't believe i was so frustrated that i tore about 20 pages writing a poem! but after that i thought of writing this! i was never so much frustrated!

you know what guys i am very much frustrated with swayam's behaviour towards taani! guys you know that i am having two works on taayam and one of them is very much loved by you people! taayam ss raksha bandhan: rishta bhai-behen ka!

i am feeling like a fool, like a jerk to create those works on them! i mean maine wo likha hi kyun? maine taayam ke beech wo deep love and care dikhane ki koshish ki jo in dono me dikh hi nahi raha tha and i thought it is because they are showing the couples, friends and dance more but i was proved wrong!

it is just the opposite! mujhe unke baare me baat hi nahi karna other wise i have to stop my these two works especially raksha bandhan temporarily! guys sorry but until this track gets over i don't think i will be able to update these two works!

but i will try n ya i will update my other twopending ss! sorry guys the taarey ss is not have been updated from three months but i will update it soon! n triya ss will also be continued!

ok so guys this poem is in hinglish(hindi+english) mai kya karoon guys mai itni frustrated thi ki ek language pe concentrate nahi kar payi n jo man mer aaya likh diya n this will be easier for the people to understand! ok so this is taani's P.O.V! so here you go-

MAI KOI MAMULI INSAAN NAHI!


sab yaha par keh rahe hain

mai GS post ke kaabil nahi

agar maine ye post sambhali

NDC cup ka koi haasil nahi


mana hoon mai ek non-dancer

dance accha kar sakti nahi

par sab mujhe for granted le

iska ye matlab to nahi


doston ne saath chod diya

bhai bhi ab saath nahi

aur to aur rey bhi

mujhe samajh paaye nahi


mai bhi dikha doongi sabko

bas ab aur nahi

mai iss college ki GS hoon

koi mamuli insaan nahi

so guys how was it? if it is bad then i am sorry! mai itni frustrated thi ki kuch accha likh nahi paayi! good ho ya bad par comment karna aur agar galti se bhi accha laga ho to please like kar dena!

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adi.cutiepie thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mon_tr

Its awesome adi...luvly..

thanks dear!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natasha.

Its beautiful cutie :-)

thanks yaar! glad that you liked the poem!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg adi its a amazing...hats off to you dialog ko bhi poem bana dali...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its beautiful di... It shws taani's as well as our frustration too!! Teen din se d3 nahi dekha mene.. Can understand ur annoyance.. *sigh*

And ap bohot graceful poems likhti ho... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naikravina

Omg adi its a amazing...hats off to you dialog ko bhi poem bana dali...

thanks ravina!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: toshi_ta

Its beautiful di... It shws taani's as well as our frustration too!! Teen din se d3 nahi dekha mene.. Can understand ur annoyance.. *sigh*

And ap bohot graceful poems likhti ho... 😊

thanks dear! waise idhar to har taani fan ki ek jaisi haalat hai! *sigh* but anyways glad that you liked the poem!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow di sachi mein aaj u won my heart di you write it sachi mein aapne sahi likh hai di it was beautiful poem describing taani condition so well and di aapko pta meine teen din se d3 nai dekha becoz of all this going seriously the worst track ever yaar !!! but di loved your poem and thanx for potraying taani feelings so well it went straight through my heart yaar love u and waanaa hug for this di!!!!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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beautiful humesha ki tarah
you depicted her emotions so well
it was sweet n simple
sweet isiliye kyunki taani ke point of view se itni cute poem likhi hai
n simple issiliye because tune sirf ek word ko repeat kar ke bhi isse ek simplicity ka touch diya hai jaisi taani hai
i am also frustrated about this trck
kisne kaha yeh poem sirf frustration se likhi gayi hai ?no way its very cute
n ya don't worry about raksha bandhan waala ss i understand jisko apan inspiration maane aur woh hi for the time being buranikle like taayam track to bahut gussa aata hai
take your time
thanks 4 d pm!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rakhiankita

wow di sachi mein aaj u won my heart di you write it sachi mein aapne sahi likh hai di it was beautiful poem describing taani condition so well and di aapko pta meine teen din se d3 nai dekha becoz of all this going seriously the worst track ever yaar !!! but di loved your poem and thanx for potraying taani feelings so well it went straight through my heart yaar love u and waanaa hug for this di!!!!🤗

thanks sissy! glad that you liked it! love you too! *hugs received*😊

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