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Posted: 13 years ago


hi!!!...
i finally finished the latest update!!...
do u really know, how much i like ur writing?...im in love with it n its increasing with every update!!!...


"This can't be true", she said, her eyes trained on the topmost navy blue button on his shirt. "Is this true, Arnav?" she looked into his eyes and could see the turmoil brewing in them.

these lines show me her innocence...they show her vulnerability...her need for assurance and amidst all these, i see her trust on him...waiting for the final word from him...


there was an emotional leap from both the sides...both of them are webbed by their own feelings bt, own common emotion was to stay close to each other...

khushi-needing comfort n assurance or atleast a support

She rested her head on his chest, her hands still fisting his shirt and her body pressed close to his. She wanted to hold on to him.

These words were a lot more than mere assurances for Khushi. She felt a strange sense of protection and warmth engulf her being

When she was with him, Khushi Kumari Gupta felt at home. She did not have one until today. Not until today had she heard such words. No one had ever promised to take care of her. No one had ever taken her responsibility. No one had loved her. - finally, a sense of security...a "home"!!...

She snuggled closer into him and his right arm went across her shoulder to accommodate her body. It felt as if she was in her cocoon. There would be no need for her to face anything tonight. She was safe. And she will go out a butterfly.

arnav- need to remove the pain n give her the comfort someway!!

He needed to reassure her that he would be there with her at every step of the way

"Everything's going to be fine Khushi," he whispered against her ear, "I'll make sure of that. I promised you, didn't I? Always remember that, okay?"

he was telling this to himself. "I promised you."

Did he just feel his heart soar? Yes, that must be it. "But it's so cold out here," he said, reason didn't take long to take over Arnav, "you'll fall sick." - his concern!!...oh my..my crazy brain there again goes off to admire how adorable arnav is!!...😉

they were cocooned in a world of their own...

where they both knew their peace could be obtained from each other...

such beautiful lines...i loved each one of these lines...

p.s. : khushi forgot about "shrey"!!>>...yaaayyy!!...there goes my dancing party!!😆...she doesnt remember him when in need!!...🥳🥳



"no one could beat him when he was decided on something. He had protested at once when she had suggested staying up there all night and true to his protest, he had taken care of her, yet again."

yup!!...n that same man has decided (sub consciously) to be with you forever!! n has given u his heart n soul!!




"You don't owe anything to anybody, Khushi..."...sneha is such a true friend!!...she is around to knock proper sense into khushi's confused being...


"and there's really no need to worry about me, you know. I will be okay."- how will u not be??...when a tall, handsome, hot , adorable , walking n talking angel in disguise is there to look after u??!!😉



"Arnav," she addressed him, "please come with me." - arnav has just broken down a barrier around her heart!!...

he had become "arnav" from "sir"...

she had allowed him to stay close...she had opened up to him...


His sentence was left hanging in mid air with a simultaneous shout of a 'no' from both Arnav and Khushi's other friend. What surprised him more was the fact that they were both silenced with a single look from her as she assented to talk to him.

even at this serious point, this is really hilarious!!🤣

think abt the mighty asr mellowed down by a single look n the spontaneous "no"!!...


"Just as Khushi had underestimated the power of a simple 'sorry', Arnav had little idea of what a small curve on her face could do to him, until now."

n what this line did to me?!!...awww!!...

realisations!!...i love them!!...n i adore them when u write it!!



"Who is Payal, Khushi?" he could no longer abstain from asking this question. - me too!!...thnk u for the question arnav!!😉


"Yes. She was taken away from here when I was eight years old. She was eleven then," she said. "I need to find her Arnav, I need to know that she's okay." - *phew*...cant wait to meet her!!...as i think of this,where is akash?>...are we having new characters?...


"He was itching to be alone with her for some time. "🤣🤣...dnt worry!!...we are nt complaining!!


He closed the distance between them, they were merely inches apart. She started to protest at the way they were standing, but was effectively shut in an instant when he leaned in. He pressed his lips firmly on her forehead and felt her shudder. Snaking an arm across her waist, he pulled her towards him... 😃😃 😃😃


"Do you remember me?"

now, just when i was telling u hw much i loved it!!...this is soo sooo not fair!!...*with tantrums n shouting*...u cant stop here!!...😡😉


i loved it!!...(grudging coz of the end)😉

all the best for ur exams dear!! (sorry for being late..*pout*)

n excitedly waiting for more!!>...


Edited by sansu - 13 years ago
guggu thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Remember me? :D

My stupid and ghatiya exams are finally out of my way and now it's party time! 😃 I missed all of you and writing so much all these days. And actually, I feel very weird as I write this because I don't know what to say further.

So I'll just cut it and say that I will be posting the next chapter in 2-3 days max, when people stop hogging my time and space. 😆

😃

P.S. Thanks for bearing with me. 😊
riafna thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Who are you? No idea... Lol kidding welcome back ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good to see you back..😃 I hope your exams went well...😊
Turkiye thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
Happy to hear youre back.😆
I am waiting eagerly for your update.
guggu thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago

choryyy😛 I am late...

wel I know how anxious u were abt d reaction for this update... but wel its worth it guggu... such a moment in d story...!!! my jaw almost dropped when I knew they were connected by past.. u know when u realize he loved her a long time before he even knew its meaning.. she was always special to her... its kinda dreaamyy
"You made people happy, you made them smile."

for a person who thought she was a curse...comin from a person she values a lot...it 'd ve been so much of solace.. as u say she felt assured of his words... which had honesty n loots of love...one of d defining n happiest moments of their relationship...❤️

but d scene which is like my favvv has to be d scene where she finds her parents pic... imagining a scenario where u r seein ur parents for d first time in life is such a painful yet happy moment... pain for not for seein all these years spent in yearnin to imagine them... happy to finally fillin colurs to al those imaginations... n tht was a great job done guggu! just wonderfully portrayed...beautifully written...
finally she got a closure from al d pain she had buried in her...to a state of thankfulness...this update is very imp in terms of d transition of d characters...n its al perfect choti... d way it shud be..also finally their bond undeniable... bound by past n pain...it wil be very interestin to see their relationship build from here... n I cant wait too much...i am just very happy wid this update😃😃
superb update guggu :-*
Ur cheapo sis😃

Edited by ak_maggi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all welcome back...loved today's update...so Arnav is always was with her in the past in her present and hopefully in future too...and at last she found the connection to her past .her house and her parents' photo all because one man who wanted to help because he love her ...I think
Edited by ranogill - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Edited..

Loved this chapter.
The emotions were beautifully described.

That twist where Arnav is part of her past, was beautifully done.
Khushi's assurance that he will be part of her future was so poignant..

love how Arnav recounted the past..

Beautiful done..
Please update soon.

Waiting!
Thanks for the PM

Edited by --BumbleBee-- - 13 years ago
Nimie207 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is so beautiful and emotional..everything is unfolded now...wat nxt???

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