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@guggu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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anupama

@ak_maggi

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Posted: 13 years ago

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u know wat this update must be called guggu ? Finding home ❤️

From d moment she entered Arnavs home n d way she was cared n embraced... Khushi is discovering her home for me😃 ..

As beautiful as Khushi payal s flashback.. is Khushi Nani scene..

Nani ful of elegance as ever.. n d way u always want an elder to be... they make home a better home...

the peace Khushi felt with her...so many years of vacuum fillin in...I was wonderin how a person al alone al her life wud feel listenin to...

you're back home with us...

its 'd be like reachin heaven!

n d way Khushi said...

"Is this how a mother's hug feels like Nani?" wat an emotional moment tht was !!! well written choti👏

the way Khushi keeps mumbling why did I come up her.. it was just a date.. swear u wud be soo goofy when u wud be in love choti😆 I can almost imagine it lol😆

Khushi looking at the piece of jalebi with longing 🤣 ( I just cudnt help imagining u 😛)

ahem ahem now coming to the romantic part... ( which I am always very curious to read esp when u write...) was awesome... not too much mush but was believable.. real.. n I cud just feel it...The way they wanted to be with each other.. eager to hold.. feel... each makin their own small world together... the feeling of never wanting to let go... just wanting to freeze tht moment forever...Oh I can go on n on😛

al I want to say is I WANT MORE...😳

waiting...😉

Ur Cheapo sis😃

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 13 years ago

#773

Reswa
Unres
M very happy for khushi 😊
Now she got a family who loves her a lottt 😊
Loved d convo between khushi and nani 😊
And d arshi moment was
Oops their siblings camee 😳
Waiting for the next part 😉

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#774

"We are not defined by the family into which we are born, but the one we choose and create. We are not born, we become."

Khushi was lucky to be born into a family of people who loved her and now fate has been kind enough to her that it has chosen such wonderful people to be her new family.

Hoping Khushi finds her khushi with them and the fill in the gaps of her life and complete her.

Hahaha Arnav can't resist her but i think he has made his mark.

She can't seem to let go either.

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AA1407

@AA1407

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#775

Nice update!! You described the scene so well that I could almost taste the jalebi in Arnav's hand! 😆I am now the Khushi who wants to eat that jalebi! 😭

And a cliffhanger again?! 😭 In your pre cap this time but still... a cliffhanger is a cliffhanger.. so now this update is gonna make me stop my work for 5 mins and wonder whats gonna happen next 😳

Anyway waiting for the next update!! start writing quickly! 😃

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#776

Chapter 26-

Sorry for the delay, but the few stories that I am reading are taking up so much time...anyway I am back and will catch up soon...

So he is on a mission to woo her, both being a bit stubborn , I loved the connection to the show and the dialogues, you did a brilliant job with that...so 'Sir' it is now?

Loved his concern for her and his offer to drop her home, loved the way she is speaking to herself about him and he comes in and disarms her...she thanks him...and apologises...

Off to read the next!