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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 1:

Hi, just came across your fic loved the proluge! Why does Dadaji only talk to Khushi?

"That family killed your Dadi, Aarav. That family killed my Ma." Wow I can't believe he said that to a little kid. Yikes!

I want to be a better person and say that children shouldn't be taught to hate but there's a good chance that Arnav's Nanaji(his moms father) will be just as big of a bas*ard when they get to the house.

Chapter 2:

Awesome their first encounter resulted in sexual assault. Well it can only get better form here. And I hope Khushi gets him back good and proper!

I couldn't help but roll my eye when Khushi reamed out Arnav. He was talking about protection not raping women. There's nothing wrong with consensual se*, I wish people would stop turning it into some dirty thing.

Chapter 3:

I liked the connections and parallels that Arnav drew connecting her home and that of the Guptas.

I knew saying that in front of Aarav was a bad idea. It's the Nanaji that's hateful towards the Raizadas not the rest of the family.

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Posted: 12 years ago
awsome update... luv arnav's brother, it seems like they have all gone through so much pain... it so sweet, how he is trying to accpet khushi, make her understand her feelings and then also how he is trying to protect aranv from any other pain! khushi is so confused and overwhelmed with everything that is going around her and poor arnav can't do anything without khushi! awsome update..thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
all the parts were awesome...
superb...

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