Hi, just came across your fic loved the proluge! Why does Dadaji only talk to Khushi?
"That family killed your Dadi, Aarav. That family killed my Ma." Wow I can't believe he said that to a little kid. Yikes!
I want to be a better person and say that children shouldn't be taught to hate but there's a good chance that Arnav's Nanaji(his moms father) will be just as big of a bas*ard when they get to the house.
Chapter 2:
Awesome their first encounter resulted in sexual assault. Well it can only get better form here. And I hope Khushi gets him back good and proper!
I couldn't help but roll my eye when Khushi reamed out Arnav. He was talking about protection not raping women. There's nothing wrong with consensual se*, I wish people would stop turning it into some dirty thing.
Chapter 3:
I liked the connections and parallels that Arnav drew connecting her home and that of the Guptas.
I knew saying that in front of Aarav was a bad idea. It's the Nanaji that's hateful towards the Raizadas not the rest of the family.
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