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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guys =) ... im really bored rite now nd i cant stop thinking bout Shiv nd Gauri ( dats normal rite!?! ) so i decided to write a story for one episode of kaa [ no no, im not becomin ekta kapoor lol ) .....

ok so the scenario is as follows: theres no crap bout the ashram in this episode... assume the ashram is not in the picture yt ..... it starts with gauri feeling fine now as shiv has taken very good care of her =) ...... he has melt down a little but not enough to call it "love" ..... he doesnt behave aggressively wit gauri now but still is not the typical - loving husband ..... they are invited to a party where only married couples are allowed ..... anupam nd ipshita are still there wit shiv nd gauri

shiv-gauri's hotel room:

anupam: he walks in nd asks shiv "arrey shiv, you guys arent ready yt"? shiv nd gauri look at each others face

shiv: ready for wat?

anupam: shiv, you forgot already! well lemme remind you,, theres a party tonite for the married couples so take gauri along she'll feel better

gauri wants to go but she doesnt want to say that to shiv because she knows shiv doesnt like to be with her much .... so she stays quiet... nd thn anupam asks gauri the same thing..

anupam: kyun gauri, wat do u say ? you guys shud go

gauri: she gives one look at shiv who is also lookin at her, nd says "jaisa shiv theek samjhe

shiv gives her a little smile ...... anupam again forces them to go nd shiv agrees makin gauri feel on top of the world... anupam leaves the room nd tells them to enjoy their nite out ....

as he leaves shiv turns to gauri

shiv: wo.. woh... tum ready ho jao ... we'll leave as soon as we're done getting ready

gauri: she gives him a cute little smile and tells him " ji, theek hain" like a typical wife obeying her husbands order =)

shivs ready already nd hes waiting impatienty for gauri to get done but you know as they say "grls take forever to get ready" is chanting in his head rite now... nd he tells gauri whos in the Bathroom that u take ur time nd im going to the lounge downstairs nd when ur ready, juss come down.... shes says ok..

then finally gauri comes out wearing a nice salwaar kameez,,, wen ipshita comes in nd asks her " gauri, what kind of clothes are u wearing?"

gauri says " kyun? arent they nice" ipshita says " yes, but not good for a party!" she tells gauri to wait for a moment as she goes out of the room nd comes bak wit a red chiffon see through saree with a deep back and a dori... ipshita says "gauri, tum yeh pehno,, achi lago gi" gauri is shocked to see such kind of revealing saree nd tells her "ipshi, tum pagal ho gayi ho kya? you know i dont wear such kinds of clothes?" but ipshita forces her to wear it nd gauri has no choice but to agree to her.. she tell ipshi " ok baba, main yehi pehan loongi, happy? " ipshita smiles at her nd leaves the room.

gauri goes to change nd comes out wearing that hot nd sexy red revealing saree ... she looks at herself in the mirror nd feels a little uncomfortable ... but she has no choice than go to the party in that saree ... she puts matching red dangling earning nd bangles nd leaves her hair down ..... she says to herself " omg i took forever to get ready, shiv must me waiting for me downstairs" nd leaves the room to go down to the lobby where shiv is sitting ...

shiv is reading a magazine wen suddenly his eyes fall on the beautiful lady who is walking down the stairs wearing a hot-sexy revealing saree ... yes, he sees that lady is none other than gauri .... his eyes are wide open just like his jaw nd he looks at her form top to bottom ..... he has never seen her like this before nd his heart skips a beat when she flickers her hair behind her ear... gauri is unaware of the fact that shiv is looking rather staring at her ..... in the background as shiv is lookin at gauri nd thinkin how sexy shes lookin the music plays

inti pyaari nahin lagi aaj tak haye re

dekhon usse dil mere dhadka jaaye re <33

she comes down nd notices shiv ,, shiv's still lookin at her beauty nd how gorgeous she looking .... she says " chale" he doesnt respond as hes lost in his world she thn asks him again " shiv, chalein" nd he suddenly comes bak to reality nd says " han .... haan chalo"

as they reach the party hall they are stopped by a party organizer person who tells them that they cant walk in with so much distance between them nd asks them to move closer to each other... shiv nd gauri look at each other nd slowly come close nd then a little more close nd then so close that their sholders are touching each other's shoulders....

the person tells shiv " bhabiji, is lookin very pretty" ... shiv looks at her again nd he gives a little smile to the person while gauri is feeling really shy nd embaressed as shes wearing a revealing saree with a deep dori back nd a bare waist .... the person tells shiv that they have to walk in the hall like a romantic couple.. nd shiv- gauri look at each other nd shiv says " but whats the need of that?" the person says it a party for all newly married couples so it has to be romantic ... shiv - gauri look at one another again nd shiv slowly moves his arm nd places his hand slowly on gauri bare waist all while hes looking at her ..... gauri feels shock waves in her entire body just by that touch of his on her waist ... shiv realizes gauri felt something the same way he did wen he kept his hand on her bare waist .... they are lookin in each others eyes wen the person tells them " will u guys keep staring at each other or go inside to the party" both feel emabarassed nd walk to the party hall wit shiv holding gauris waist ....

thn they go nd eat nd later the DJ requests all the couples to come to the dance floor... they have to go as all the other people are going .... the DJ plays the song " bahoon ke darmiyan do pyar mil rahein hain,, bole man dole badan, dhadkan bani zubaan " as shiv takes his hand out nd asks for gauris hand .... she slowly gives her hand to shiv and keeps the other hand on his shoulder while he keeps the other hand on her waist ..... they keep lookin at each other while dancin ..... a big staring session starts where none of them want to look anywhere else except each other ....

suddenly gauri realizes her blouse dori has opened .... nd shiv realizes it too .... nd he lets her free as she has to tie it .... she strugles wit it while shiv is juss lookin at her sexy back .... he comes closer to her from behind nd wispers in her ears " main kar deta hoon" makin gauri feel even more uncomfortable as his lips almost touched her ears .... she doesnt say anything nd allows him to tighten it .... juss wen he put his hands on her bak to tie the dori, she lets out a slight jerk nd shiv notices this nd enjoys her uncomfortableness .... he has a naughty smile on his face nd asks her " kya hua?' again wipsersing in her ear from behind .... nd gauri can feel his breaths nd gets even more uncomfortable shiv notices all this nd the episode ends on shiv wen he gives a naughty smile to her....

woah thats was mad longgggggggggg lol but i enjoyed writng it ..... hope i didnt bore u guys,, nd very sorry if i did ... do tell me if u guys liked it or not ... =)

jasssy <33

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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMGGGGGGGGG i loved it and i could totally imagine the WHOLE episode...it was amazingggggggggggg!...i wish that could really happen!..but im already so depressing knowing iqbal khan is leaving the show soon! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow, i m the first one to reply...and let me just say....Damn, good...Well, I hope they have cute scenes like that...Awesome Job Jassy...You should write more...Will wait for your work... 👏 Definately made me 😳 Blush.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was really cute and enjoy reading it.not boring at all. 😉


kaash aisa hota sach mein..we do get this epi in real.. 😊

well written but i think u should put in the thread "create romantic scenes for shiv/gauri"..there are so many cute scenes like yours there and its very popular as we all love reading it..if you can copy and paste it in the thread that will be great..hope you dont mind me suggesting it to you coz its very beautiful .. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey 3 angels =)
awww no i dont mindd at all .... infact thankx a lot for telling me bout the section .... i will surely paste it there =) nd yes thankxx a ton for reading it =)

jassy <33
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Posted: 19 years ago
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swit2sweet,, thank you so muchh for liking it im like a big fan of shiv-gauri thus such scenes often pop up in my head lol but thankx a lott for liking nd readin it

jassy <33
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was good jassy .... wish this happens in the show .. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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its really nice, want to read full i mean continue with the story
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG tht was mindblowing 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was toooooooo good 😉
Wow..really it was really nice and cute and very well written.. 👏
Really nice 😉

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