HUMARA PYAAR! PART 8 deserted love!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey guys this is my new ff please reply!



SANJEEDA as NIMMO


IQBAL KHAN as SHIV




EIJAZ KHAN as KUNAL


(we see a girl sitting down angry in a lonely park)

G: aane do use dhika doongi!

(we see a guy running to the girl)

B: I'm sorry Nimmo I'm late!

(the girls face is revealed and it's none other than our nimmo)

Nimmo: saying sorry is very easy Shiv!

(the guy is shown and it's our very own shiv)

Shiv: sorry bola na! Woh nimmo actually i was going to reach on time but my car tire got puntured and..

Nimmo: and then you went to the mechanic but he took some time because he wasn't qualified and bla bla bla! right!

Shiv: Oh! I guess aaj yeh buhaana nahin chalega!

Nimmo: no!

Shiv: can i make it up with a lunch!

Nimmo: you always do this

Shiv: yeah! but the more I'm late the more you love me right!

Nimmo: uff! you know what shiv people should learn how to flatter someone from you!

Shiv: I know! (smiles) anyways chalo lunch karke hum ghoom bhi lenge!

Nimmo: yeah!

NOW GUYS THAT'S ENOUGH FOR NOW! TELL ME IF I SHOULD CONTINUE AND YES JUST TO LET YOU KNOW KUNAL PLAYS A VERY VITAL ROLE IN THIS FF AND IF YOU WANT ME TO CONTINUE PLEASE REPLY BECAUSE THERE IS GOING TO BE A BIG SHOCK IN THE FUTURE OF THIS FF!
Edited by nimmo4kunal - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ur ff is amazing really superb so plz continue 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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shiv and nimmo.. wow!! lolzz

continue sooooooooonnn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PROMO

Narrator: LOVE is POWER!

(they show nimmo smiling over a candellight dinner with shiv)

NARRATOR: LOVE is PASSION

(they show nimmo hugging shiv)

NARRATOR: but is LOVE EVERLASTING

(nimmo's eyes are shown she's crying)

NIMMO: (screams) SHIIIIIIV!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey i am going to post the next part very soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 2

RESTAURANT

Nimmo: (sipping her coffee) waise Shiv! hum yaha ek ghante se bhete hue hai! tum kiske liye ruk rahe ho!

Shiv: (surprised) tumhe kaise puta mein kisike liye ruk raha hoon?

Nimmo: mein tumhe achi tarha jaanti hoon! itni der to tum coffee peene ke liye nahi lete!

Shiv: (smiles) woh to hai!

(they keep staring into each others eyes) (while this is going on in the restaurant we see a guy coming out of the airport, first he puts on his jacket and then takes his luggage and leaves the airport)

BACK IN THE RESTAURANT

Shiv: uff! yeh kaha hai!

guy: hey shiv!

(Shiv and nimmo look back!)

(they show his face and it's kunal)

Kunal: kya hua?

Shiv: hey man! (goes and hugs him)

Kunal: (looks at nimmo) hello! and who's this pretty lady!

Nimmo: (blushes) hi!

Shiv: are meri girlfriend se flirt karna bund kar!

Kunal: (laughs) tujhe itni achi ladki kaha se mili?

Shiv: excuse me! but i am very attractive!

Kunal: (laughs) ha! ha! isliye college mein saari ladkiyan mere peeche bhaagti thi!

Shiv: anyways! tere zindagi mein koi ladki aai!

Kunal: nahin yaar! time hi nahin mila!

Shiv: tu bhi na! mujhe dekh juldi mein aur nimmo shaadi karne waale hai!

Kunal: ?nimmo? yeh aapka asli naam hai?(confused)

Nimmo:(laughs) ji nahin! actually this is my nickname! Hi! I am Namrita!

Kunal: oh! well that's a pretty name!

Nimmo:(smiles)

shiv: ok! anyways! tum kunal mere saath rehene waale ho! so chalo mein nimmo ko drop karta hoon phir hum ghar bhi pohonch jayege!

Kunal: great!

(they drop nimmo and they are in the car to shiv's house)

Shiv: toh bol! america kaise tha!

Kunal: pretty good! but just wanted to come back to meet everyone!

shiv:(smiles) ha!

Kunal: acha ab tu bol! teri shaadi kub hai!

shiv: are engagement kul hai aur shaadi ek hufte baad!

Kunal: wow man! mutlub jaldi fus gaya!

Shiv: aisa nahin hai! nimmo bohot hi achi ladki hai1

Kunal: yeh to har ladka shaadi ke pehele bolta hai!

(they both laugh)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hahaha.. my family members(dad, uncles) say the same.. lolzz..(just as jkz)

hahaha!!

by yr promo i think shiv gets an acciedent!.. poor shiv
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: brainychild92

hahaha.. my family members(dad, uncles) say the same.. lolzz..(just as jkz)

hahaha!!

by yr promo i think shiv gets an acciedent!.. poor shiv



umm! i don't get what you mean by this! hahaha.. my family members(dad, uncles) say the same.. lolzz.. what do they say!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 3

MORNING

Shiv: (cheerful) good morning everyone!

Kunal: (sitting and eating breakfast) ab ise kya hua?

Shiv's mom! (SM) (laughs) are beta aaj iski engagement hai na!

Kunal: wow! you're coming very close to barbaadi!

Shiv: chup kunal! yeh na ho tere waje se kahi meri shaadi hi na ho!

Kunal: (laughs) kya puta?

Shiv: uff!

NIMMO'S HOUSE
EVENING

WE HAVE A NEW CHARACTER! IT'S KAYA PLAYED BY NEHA BAMB

Nimmo: (is in her room getting ready)

Kaya: (enters) wah! bohot achi lag rahi ho!

Nimmo: (blushes) thank you!

Kaya: waise especially shiv ke liye tyaar ho rahi ho na!

Nimmo: chup kaya ki bachi! hamesha dekho mujhe satati reheti ho! waise tu bhi na ab shaadi karle!

Kaya: sorry! mein apni freedom ke bare mein bohot strict hoon!

Nimmo: tera mutlab hai shaadi ke baad freedom chali jaati hai!

Kaya: ofcourse!

Nimmo: tu bhi na!

Nimmo's mom(NM) nimmo! jaldi tyaar ho jao! shiv aa gay hai!

Nimmo: (smiles) ji mom!

ENGAGEMENT TIME!

Nimmo comes down wearing this!




Shiv: (keeps staring at her)

Kunal: (snaps his finger) kya hua shiv? hosh ur gaye!

Shiv: chup yaar!

Nimmo: (comes near shiv)

Nim's mom: chalo beta rings pehenalo ek doosre ko!
THIS IS NIMMO'S RING

THIS IS SHIV'S RING!


(THEY PUT THE RINGS ON EACH OTHER)

(everyone cheers)

Kunal: (whispers to shiv) chal ab teri burbaadi shuru!(chuckels)

Nimmo: (suspicious) KYa?

Kunal: ummm! kuch nahin!

(there is a lot of dancing after that! kunal dances on ek kuwaara phir gaya maara from MASTI!) (and Kaya and nimmo dance on SAY NA SAY NA from BLUFFMASTER)

EVERYONE IS ENJOYING DANCING!

Edited by nimmo4kunal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART4


A week passes! and nimmo's and shiv's life is near to be complete their wedding was in the evening and both were so happy! (i know this ff is moving in fast pace)

Nimmo: (sitting and people are getting her dressed)

Kaya: kya hua nimmo? shiv ke baare mein soch rahi ho?

Nimmo: (smiles) mujhe abhi bhi yaad hai jub shiv aur mein college jaate the aur ek doosre se itni nufrat karte the kyunki woh hur ladki ke peeche jyaata tha lekin dekho aaj kaha hoon mein!

Kaya: ha! (puts on her jewelery on her)

IT LOOKED LIKE THIS!

Kaya: nimmo! you look wonderful!
THIS IS WHAT NIMMO WAS WEARING!


Nimmo:(blushed) ab sirf shiv aane ki der hai! phir hum hamesha ke liye ek ho jayenge!

ON THE ROAD

Kunal and shiv are driving to the wedding

Shiv: (impatient) uf! kunal mujhe apni shaadi mein jaldi pohunchna hai! jaldi karo!

Kunal: shiv! relax pohunch jayenge!

Shiv: great! (annoyed)

Kunal: waise shiv! aaj bhi nimmo ko dekhke bihosh mut hojaa na! kyunki sagaai ke waqt....

Shiv: shut up kunal! tum jaante ho that i love nimmo and woh mujhe kisi bhi roop mein sundar legegi..except when she cries! it's just not nimmo to cry! i fell in love with her smile!

Kunal: mutlab ek baar ro gayi to tum chor doge use!(laughs)

Shiv: kunal! (laughs)

Shiv: (suddenly shiv's eyes grew wider and everything went blur) Kunal!

Kunal: (still laughing) kya hai? (notices a truck approaching them)

Shiv: Kunal!

Kunal: (starts steering away but it was too late the truck hit them and shiv rolled out of the car because his door was unlocked)

Kunal: shiv! (runs out and gets him) shiv! aankhen kholo! shiv! (a tear escaped kunal's eyes this was the first time he had cried) shiv!

HOSPITAL

Kunal: (rushed shiv to the hospital) doctor!doctor! jaldi inhe...

(the doctors rushed shiv in before kunal even finished)


(kunal was standing outside the ICU when the whole family ran in)

Nimmo: shiv! (went towards kunal) shiv kaha hai?

Kunal: woh ICU....

Nimmo: what? (she tried to hold her tears in but couldn't. her heart told her everything would be fine but her mind didn't agree)

Doctor: (came out)

Nimmo: doctor! shiv...

Doctor: hum poori koshish karr rahe hai!

Nimmo: koshish kaafi nahin hai! (she ran into the the ICU even after the doctor said no)

Nimmo: shiv! (she saw shiv on the bed soaked in blood, this was one sight she would have never dreamed of, she went close to shiv and sat down) shiv aankhen kholo dekho mein nimmo!

Shiv: (after a long time shiv slightly opened his eyes) nimmo! (in a slight whisper)

Nimmo: (a faint smile came over her lips) shiv! (starts to cry)

Shiv: tum rote hui achi nahn lagti! tum jaanti ho mein tumse aur tumhare smile se bohot pyaar karta hoon, ab ro rahi ho to mein chordoon tumhe!

Nimmo: (gives him a slight slap) aise phir mut kehena. tumhe kuch nahin hoga!

Shiv: sub bhagwaan ke haath hai!

Kunal: (slowly steps into shiv's room) shiv?

Shiv: uf! tu bhi na! undar aa!

Kunal: (goes close to shiv) i'm so...

Shiv: teri galti nahin hai! sub kismat mein likha hota hai! aur agar teri galti hai to mein kismat se hi moon mor loonga!

Kunal: (cries)

Shiv: tu ro raha hai? peheli baar dekha hai!

Nimmo: (was sitting in a corner crying)

Shiv: (looked towards nimmo: 0tune kaha tha na kunal ki mein nimmo ko dekh ke bihosh na hoon dekh aaj to shayad kuch aur hi hop jayega....

Nimmo: (couldn't take it anymore and ran out of the room crying)

Kunal: shiv tune...

Shiv: mujhse waada kar ki tu nimmo se shaadi karega...

Kuna: (shocked, thunderstruck his was he couldn't believe what shiv said) shiv...

Shiv: ha! mein jaanta hoon that i won't make it, and you are the only one who can take care of nimmo, i know she loves me too much and won't be able to live without me but you have to give her another life!

Kunal: no shiv she's in love with you...

Shiv: she has to agree to this marriage and you will make her! if you care about me you will! say yes kunal please!

Kunal: but...

Shiv: kunal!

Kunal: yes! (in a faint voice)

Shiv: thanks man!

Kunal: (hugs shiv) mein jaanta hoon shiv ki tum bilkul theek hojayoge (let's go of shiv) i know you wil....(kunal's world came crashing down shiv had left him from this day and never did return) SHIVVVVVVVV! (cried)

Nimmo: (ran in hearing kunal) KUnal.....(noticed shiv) shiv! (walked slowly to shiv and fell to the ground) shiv! shiv utho! utho! dekho kunal waise hi ro raha hai! mein jaanti hoon ki tum theek ho!

Kunal: (noticed nimmo's insanity, she couldn't believe reality that shiv died) nimmo! shiv humare saath...

Nimmo: (slaps kunal) chup! shiv zinda hai!
Edited by nimmo4kunal - 18 years ago

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