HUMARA PYAAR! PART 8 deserted love!

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@nimmo4kunal

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Posted: 18 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: swaticerd
please continue

thanks! but i will not continue until i get more than just one comment! because i have a felling you'll don't like my ff! so i need more comments!

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Ria

@~Angel~

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Posted: 18 years ago

#22

awwwwwwww tat was greatttttttt story
:P brought a tear in my eye ..
cont sooooon
clap clappppppppp 😛

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#23

just got caught up!! great parts now u better continue sooonn

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kaira11

@kaira11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#24

plz continue soon its a gr8 ff 😊

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swaticerd

@swaticerd

Beginner

Posted: 18 years ago

#25

its a gr8 ff
pls continue soon
wanna know what will happen next

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#26

hey sonia gr888888888888888888888 ff poor kannu well hope nims will luv him soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon itz grr8888888 story 😊 😛 😉

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sonia

@nimmo4kunal

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#27

PART 8

Kunal: (entered the room) nimmo!

Nimmo: (wiped her tears) huh?

Kunal: woh....(sat next to her) are you okay?

Nimmo: yeah kunal! ab chalo so jaate hai! (got up)

Kunal: (held her hand) shiv ko miss kar rahi o na!

Nimmo: (sat down) nahin woh..bus kuch yaad agaya tha!

Kunal: shiv?

Nimmo: nahin! woh pal jo shiv ke saath bitaaye the yaad agaye!

Kunal: mein jaanta hoon i tum mujhe apna dost nahin maanti ho lekin shiv ki dost maanke meri baat sunlo! shiv ko bhool jao...mujhe dard hota hai jub mein tumhe aisi haalat mein dekhta hoon!

Nimmo: (shocked) yeh tum keh rahe ho ki mein shiv ko bhool jaoon! aur mein sochti thi ki tum shiv ke dost ho!

Kunal: nahin aisi baat...

nimmo: kyun kehe rahe ho tum yeh! kya shiv ko bhool gaya ya tumhari neeyat..

Kunal: BUS! NIMMO MEIN SIRF TUMHARI KHUSHI KI PARWA KARKE YEH KEHE RAHA THA!

Nimmo: KYUN?

Kunal: KYUNKI MEIN TUMSE PYAAR KARTA HOON!

Nimmo: (those words shattered nimmo's world, she couldn't believe what she heared. was it a illusion or reality, she didn't want to know) KYA?

Kunal: ha mein tumse pyaar karta hoon!

Nimmo: tumhe sharam nahin aati yeh kehete huye! yeh yaad rakhna kunal ki ek widwa kisi aur ladke se pyaar nahin kar sakti! Haan kunal ek widwa, kyunki mein tumhari patni nahin shiv ki widwa hoon. aur yeh hamesha yaad rakhna!

Kunal: nimmo...

Nimmo: (stormed out of the room)

Kunal: (fell to his knee) yeh meine kya kar diya, nimmo mein ek dost bhi aaj kho diya!

WILL KUNAL GET HIS LOVE?