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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
interesting story
please dont make Arnav handicapped!😭
update soon and please PM me 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
wow u really captured me here with this one...
the child khuhs n all this coincidences that he resembles khushi does this mean somethg or is it just a connection...
his desperation to return lead him to somethg else waitg for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys update coming in a bit.
Edited by V323 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update karo jaldi! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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What happened to the kid and Arnav?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AA gaya samay update ka! :D

*EDITED*

Gah. You did not bring back the nightmare with Freddy. I remember when I'd seen the movie...I'd refused to go to sleep at night freaking out about what Freddy may do.😆

Anyway...I liked the way you infused it all into this chapter here. Lovely writing.
And it didn't answer my questions. Ek part mein...accha ending hi hoga na? :P

Is there a kid in Arnav Khushi's life? Is that why Arnav met a kid named Khush? Aah..okay I'll stop speculating now.😆

Remember...a happy ending Vee! :P
Looking forward to the next part. :)
Edited by ..SankiMedhz.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
You are sure that this is not going to end badly, aren't you?
I'll never forgive you otherwise.

I did like this update, and loved the whole nightmarish scenario you had going on.
But I am left with more questions now, and I will wait for part three for the answers.

Very-well written, Vee.




PS: I'm not very good at writing comments, sorry!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
just got my 2500 posts...
nk that was really scary man...
the news reached her finally waiting for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
Freddy Krueger. My favorite 😉
Coming to the update, I am mesmerized how you smoothly turned the horror to a twisting reality,. Freddy or no Freddy, the panic and the pain, the fear and fortitudo, all were there.

Last part left.. Oh boy.

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