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iram1415

@iram1415

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

interesting story

please dont make Arnav handicapped!😭

update soon and please PM me 😊

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

wow u really captured me here with this one...

the child khuhs n all this coincidences that he resembles khushi does this mean somethg or is it just a connection...

his desperation to return lead him to somethg else waitg for next update

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

guys update coming in a bit.

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Update karo jaldi! :D

Edited by ..SankiMedhz.. - 12 years ago

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

What happened to the kid and Arnav?

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

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..SankiMedhz..

@..SankiMedhz..

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

AA gaya samay update ka! :D

*EDITED*

Gah. You did not bring back the nightmare with Freddy. I remember when I'd seen the movie...I'd refused to go to sleep at night freaking out about what Freddy may do.😆

Anyway...I liked the way you infused it all into this chapter here. Lovely writing.

And it didn't answer my questions. Ek part mein...accha ending hi hoga na? :P

Is there a kid in Arnav Khushi's life? Is that why Arnav met a kid named Khush? Aah..okay I'll stop speculating now.😆

Remember...a happy ending Vee! :P

Looking forward to the next part. :)

Edited by ..SankiMedhz.. - 12 years ago

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

You are sure that this is not going to end badly, aren't you?

I'll never forgive you otherwise.

I did like this update, and loved the whole nightmarish scenario you had going on.

But I am left with more questions now, and I will wait for part three for the answers.

Very-well written, Vee.

PS: I'm not very good at writing comments, sorry!

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

just got my 2500 posts...

nk that was really scary man...

the news reached her finally waiting for next

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masam

@masam

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Freddy Krueger. My favorite 😉
Coming to the update, I am mesmerized how you smoothly turned the horror to a twisting reality,. Freddy or no Freddy, the panic and the pain, the fear and fortitudo, all were there.

Last part left.. Oh boy.