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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

hey you should have known he as in nk was upto something
hello the signs were all there
but thats okay you were too flustered to notice right
well he at least made things right this day
when he ruined them all this day only
but he has made up for that
and will be making up for it for the rest of his life

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tina

@cpervaiz

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

really nice considering its ur first time, it's really good.
Good Job:)
thanx for the pm:)

Edited by cpervaiz - 12 years ago

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LibranAngel

@libranangel

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

thank you everyone for all your kind words and praises... don't know if I'll write again but surely if something sparks my imagination, I'll try!!!

cheers!!!! 😃

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

This definitely didn't seem like your 1st piece of writing. You wrote quite well... And this was a perfect closure to those unfortunate events that happened in Khushi's life last year...

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

R

Firstly, you should have submitted this story. It so deserved a chance.

Now i loved the contrast you created between the past and the present.

This time last year there was anything but love (at least on the surface) and now there is an abundance of it.

Though she has forgiven him she still hadn't forgotten about how she was married. And it was quite perceptive of Arnav to address that.

Btw why don't the family members realise that it is Arnav's and Khushi's wedding anniversary too?

Lastly thanks to EXPELLIARMUS for recommending this story

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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simran

@crazymg.04

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

wow...this was beautiful👏

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-Shalu-

@-Shalu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Hey, I just stumbled upon this OS. This is really very good, beautifully written! For a first attempt, you did a lovely job. You should have submitted this for the contest, I'm sure you had a high chance of winning if you participated. I hope you write more, could I request for a pm if you do write any other stories. Thanks in advance! :)

Edited by -Shalu- - 12 years ago

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LibranAngel

@libranangel

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp
R

Firstly, you should have submitted this story. It so deserved a chance.

Now i loved the contrast you created between the past and the present.

This time last year there was anything but love (at least on the surface) and now there is an abundance of it.

Though she has forgiven him she still hadn't forgotten about how she was married. And it was quite perceptive of Arnav to address that.

Btw why don't the family members realise that it is Arnav's and Khushi's wedding anniversary too?

Lastly thanks to EXPELLIARMUS for recommending this story

another brilliant writer commenting on the story...thank you so much and thank you EXPELLIARMUS for recommending it.

honestly, i always found the Raizada family quite clueless when it came to Arnav and Khushi. and in my story, they all assume the re-marriage to be the actual wedding between the two, so hence no one mentions it.