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Posted: 12 years ago
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very muture 1 ... go on ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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First, I have a question : Why didn't you submit this for the contest ?

It's a very well written story, and I loved the whole private celebration of a day that has changed their lives in so many ways.
The emotions were described to perfection, and I loved the fact that you wrote this from Khushi's perspective.

The most innovative part was the 'I love you, dammit!"

Great job, you should definitely write more often!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Titaliya_AP

Hey! Firstly I'll thank you for reading and liking my works and I feel honored to have been the tiniest part in pushing you to write and post this :)


Now to the one shot!


I'm on my phone and so I was able to see the title of the OS for moments before the rest should up and well reading the title just made me so happy! Hehe.


Then as I begun reading I was instantly transported back to when I saw that mandir scene for the first time. The impact of it still hits me! And how you added Khushi perspective made it better!


Then when Anjali shook Khushi awake I was confused, meaning has everything been solved between ArHi or is this day going to be it?


Well soon enough I figured that everyone was normal :)


I liked how you showed Khushi's conflicting feelings, her need to just be with Arnav on this day! Poor thing!


Haha, Arnav went to NK for help?! Haha :) And then he hid behind the curtain?! Lol.


When NK sent Khushi up I was like yay! Surprise time! Hehe.


And what a beautiful surprise it was! I could visualize the scene in my mind! Her misty eyes, him shaking his head and wiping them away, the cake cutting, everything!


The end was just right! Although I wanted more, you ended it just right :)


Thank you for this...yes you have been an inspiration!!! I'm glad the storyline was easy to follow and made sense...and i think i love your analysis of the story more than the story! 😉

Thank you again
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS

First, I have a question : Why didn't you submit this for the contest ?


It's a very well written story, and I loved the whole private celebration of a day that has changed their lives in so many ways.
The emotions were described to perfection, and I loved the fact that you wrote this from Khushi's perspective.

The most innovative part was the 'I love you, dammit!"

Great job, you should definitely write more often!


Thank you...You guys are seriously inspiring!!!

I'm kicking myself now for not submitting it!!! anyways there's always next time!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This was very well written!
Especially the comparison and how despite everything that day was still a painful memory. He finally replaced it with a much better one, the sindhoor and his words later were very very touching.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow this was amazing and outstanding, beautifully written. Its a shame you did not submit it in the valentines contest, its a brilliant one shot and i would have definitley voted for this as my favourite.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was SO beautiful! Loved it to bits!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautiful piece of work, so well put together. Love isn't just giddiness, giggles and dhak dhak. Thank you for portraying that perfectly. I wish you had entered this in the competition .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: libranangel


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Thank you for this...yes you have been an inspiration!!! I'm glad the storyline was easy to follow and made sense...and i think i love your analysis of the story more than the story!😉

Thank you again



Hey dear :)

Well you've just written such a wonderful piece how could I not comment so graciously?! ;)

Hope to see many more stories from your side!

Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed my comment ;)

Love you! Take care! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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u took me back to my old IPKKND days..!
Beautifully written...!
Simply awsum...
Loved it...
Thank u 4 taking me down d memory lane to those wonderful momnts again...! 😊
nd 👍🏼 4 u 4 writing dis OS so dam amazingly...!

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